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Anika what are u doing???not again…aj to marwaogi tum….”asked shivaay being tensed
Are shivaay u are such a timid person…ok listen u go ahead..i’ll do it myself….”said annika while calming him
One ,two ,,three……ting ting….tong tong….
N here annika along with shivaay just ran with all possible speed…..
After reaching a safe place..
Shiv–are u mad annika….this was the 3rd tine in just one hour…u randomly rang the door bell…
Ani–shivaay this is called fun??
Shiv–n we’ll in jail due to this fun one day…we arent in india..dont forget….
Ani–okk baba..got it….lets go i m hungry…..
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(So it has been 5 yrs of shivika’s frndship..both have qualified their doctors degree with great marks n will soon start practising….they decided to have a long vacation..so they are in Paris now….As we all know,shivaay has feelings for annika…bt for annika,shivaay is just her frnd whom she never want to loose…she spend all her day with him…may be there is something going in her heart too bt she isnt ready to accept anything….so lets see ,,what has destiny planned for them)
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AT RESTAURANT
Shiv–what u want to eat annika????
Ani–order anything…
Shiv–what about Croque-monsieur(I dont know dishes name so just googled them?)
Ani–no not this…..
Shiv–so say n…what to order…
Ani–are order anything n…
Shiv–ok then i m ordering Baguette
Ani–no shivaay…something else..
Shiv–anika u r just impossible..frst u r saying order anything n then doing tantrums…i m not going to order anything now…
Ani–now dont be tadibaaaz here….u cant do a single thing without me?….give me menu i’ll order….
Anika order something…they both have it n left for their hotel…..
AT HOTEL ROOM
Shivika reach their room…they are sharing same room…..
Ani–shivaay i m going to sleep….gd night…
Shiv–gd night annika…
N suddenly there is power cut off…
N as we all know annika has phobia of dark….she starts panicking….she starts sweating profusely…
Shivaay rushes towards her n try to make her calm…
Shiva–(cupping her face)annika calm down…..see i m here..u dont need to be worried…plzz relax…
Ani–shivaay gauri…..(all past incidents are coming as flashes infront of her eyes)
Shiv–annika calm down….(while hugging her)….
N just then all lights lit up….
They come out of hug n there is just silence as both were awkward ….shivaay breaks the silence…
Shiv–(in teasing tone)…annika u are afraid of darkness this much…how will u operate dead bodies…??
Ani–it was just……now leave it n let me sleep….
N soon she went into deep slumber….
Shivaay comes near her n sit beside her…
Shiv–(caressing her face)…..annika i know u still couldnt forget that day…n its not possible to forget either…. I just want to see u happy n stand as a great wall infront of all ur prblms,stresses…. N i promise you,, I’ll be always there for you….he kisses her on forhead n goes to sleep…
NEXT MORNING
As usual annika wakes up early n was quite disturb….
Shiv–gd mrng…
Ani–mrng….
Shiv–what are u doing???
Ani–packing…
Shiv– I can see that annika bt why???
Ani–I m going back to India…
Shiv–suddenly…what happened????everything is fine n??
Ani–shivaay please…I m not a kid so dont treat me like that….U can stay here for as many days as you want…I m going today only….
Shiv–yaa annika ,I know…why are u behaving like this….n what would I do here alone..I m also coming with you..
Ani–ok…so plzz make it fast..we’ve to leave in half an hr….
N annika left from there….
Shiv–(Pov)..what has happened to her….why is she behaving like this…oh god,i hope she’s fine….
INDIA
They reached india….(delhi)
Shiv–annika we’ve to stay here as i’ve checked,we’ll get flight for mumbai at night…
Ani–shivaay…see i m not going to mumbai…i m going back to my home town kerela…n the flight is in 15 min
Shiv–what are u saying…how can u decide everything…(in anger)
Ani–shivaay its my life.. I can decide anything…..its nice to have you on my life…dont know when will we meet next…so bye..take care..
Shiv–what do u mean annika…why are u behaving like this…
Ani–shivaay…announcemnt has done..let me go..bye…
N annika moved away from shivaay towards flight…
Her eyes are filled with tears…she wanted to be strong bt her tears are not in mood to listen her…
N here shivay just break down…..tears start flowing her eyes….
#hmaariadhurikhaani plays in background#
PAAS AYE DOORIYAN PHIR BHI KM NA HUI..
EK ADHURI SI HMARI KHAANI RAHI
AASMAAN KO ZAMEEN YE ZARURI NAHI
JAA MILE JAA MILE…
ISHQ SACHA WAHI JISKO MILTI NAHI MANZEELE
**FLASHBACK***
On call
Ani’ mom–annika….ur fathers health isnt good…he wants u to get maaried infrnt of his eyes…
Ani–bt maa…how can I…i’ve to do my practices now…
AM–annika u can continue it aftr marriage also..we’ve found a perfct match for you…
Ani–ok maa…i m coming…
Anika looks at shivaay’s face n think
Ani’s POV
How will I tell this to shivaay…I know I dont love him..do I???stop thinking anika ..u dont….bt he loves me so much…he ‘lll be shattered aftr knowing all this..I cant telll him anything…(tears start rolling from her eyes)….shivaay u deseve someone much bettr than me…I dont know when will I meet you now..bt I’ll really missed you…she goes near him….caresses his face n starts doing packing….
**FB ends**
Anika’s flight take off….n shivaay is still numb here….
HAMARI ADHURI KHAANI
HMAARI ADHURI KHAANI….!!
**AFTER ONE WEEK***
Annika has changed hr nmbr….shivaay wasnt able to contact her..He tried all possible thing to meeet her…bt his all efforts went into vain….n here anika was also feeling restless…she was unable to spend a single min without thinking about him…
Bt on the same time there is a fight going b/w her heart n mind….her heart was sayibg shivaay is perfct for him bt her mind wsnt ready to accpt it…
Someone knocks on door of anika’s room
Ani–who??
Man– ur would be husband
Ani–ohh samar….plzz come in….(ankit playing samar’s character same as in IB)
Samar–tomorrow is our wedding…how are u feeling nervous,excited???
Ani–nothing…
Samar–what???
Ani–wo i meant…are leave it…u are here???
Samar–are u happy with this marriage??
Ani–which type of ques is this???my parents are happy..so am I…..
Samar–but…
Ani–samar u should leave now…we arent allowed to meet before marriage…
Samar–ok m going..byeee
Anika closes the door….
Sit on her bed….take shivay’s picture in her hand
Ani–shivaay i m really missing you..dont know why. . I know its me who has told u to not xpct anything from me more than frndship…bt why m I feeling incomplte without you .. I know i’ve hurted u a lot…I m really sorry shivaay…
“”Should I call him””….my inner voice asked…
Yes I m going to call him…
ON CALL
Ani–shivaay….
Shiv–(shocked)annika…..how are you….i mean where are you….I made so mny efforts to contact you bt couldnt….u’ve chnged ur nmbr,deleted all social media accounts….how could you….we were frnds n….how can u leave me like this…how…..(his voice is filled with anger,care,love,frustration)
Ani—sshhhshh…..itne swaaal..I m fine….I m sorry…I found this the best so I did this…
Shiv–forger all…how are you????
Ani–I m fine …n you???
Shiv–I m great right now….
Ani–shivaay…actually i m getting married tomorrow….
Shiv–no response(sits on nearby sofa with thud)
Ani–u’ll come n??
Shiv–annikaaaa
Ani–plzz shivaay….u r my only frnd …i want you to be there by my side…
Shiv–I’ll come anika for u only…ok i’ve some work ..will meet you tmrrw….
Ani–ok bye….
Both had so mny things to say….bt no one had that much courage….both were just wishing that tmrrw never come….both are laying on bed n thinking about each other….
TU SAFAR MERA,HAI TU HI MERI MANZIL
TERE BINA GUZAARA AE DIL HAI MUSHKIL
TU MERA KHUDA,TU HI DUA ME SHAAMIL
TERE BINA GUZAARA AE DIL HAI MUSHKIL
MARRIAGE DAY
All preparations are done….guests has arrived….groom is ready n waiting for bride at the mandap….
Annika is coming downstairs wearing beauriful red colour lhnga…everyone’s eyes are on annika bt her eyes are searching that KANJI AANKHEN only….
Annika move towards mandap n she feels something…something that she was waiting for…presence of someone….n she turns…
Shivaay is standing at the entrance wearing sherwaani m,having a rose bouquet in hand…..
Annika just run towards him n hugs him tightly…..everyone gets shocked so as shivaay….
Shiv–annikaa
Ani–I missed u a lot shivaay….I L____
N soon she realises where is she standing…..she comes out of hug n try to avoid contct with him n starts moving towards mandap……
Shiv–anika..this is for u(forwarding that bouquet)…..have a happy married life ahead…..(with smiling face n teary eyes)
I m leaving now….I cant stand here ….byeeee
Shivaay left that place n annika sits at her place…
All rasams get started…
Samar was still confused about what just happened….
Samar–I’ve to talk something imp with annika….
He holds annika’s hand n enters her room
Samar–annika are u happy with this marriage….
Ani–samar…wo
Samar–annika please dont destroy three lifes….plzz..for god sake say something….
By this time annika’s emotions have reached the peak level….
She breaks down,,tears start flowing from hr eyes…
Ani–samar I love him…dont know when all this happened….bt i cant imagine my life without him…He is my SOULMATE…..bt i think its too late now….he left me……(tears are continuously flowing from her eyes…pain can be clearly seen on her face)
Samar holds her n said
Samar–its not late…shivaay loves u a lot…His eyes clearly shows his love….go n talk to him….you wont find bettr guy than him….gooo
Anika stood up n just ran to stop his shivay….
Anika searches him everywhere near the hall n finds him sitiing on the chair in nearby park….
Shivayy is sitting there alone n tears are continuously flowing …
Ani–u dont look good when u cry….
Shiv–tm???yhan????or shaadi????
Ani–kya shaadi…mera SOULMATE mujhe chorke chla gya then kahe ki shaadi…
Shiv–what????u’ve met him just one week ago n he has become ur SOULMATE….wow…
Ani–koi jealous horha h…
Shiv–what are u doing here…
Ani–are i m talking about u my soulmate….
annika kneal down ,,hold shivaays hand….nsays….
shivaay I LOVE YOU….willl you be mine forever….?????
Shiv–no….?
Ani–hawww…..ok i m going …huh
She starts going back….shivaay holds her hand n pulls her ….
Shiv–dont u dare to leave me again….I love u tooo
They hug each other n everyone standing there just adore them……
“”MUKAMMAL HUI ADHOORI DAASTAN
PURE HUE HAM OR HMARA JAHAN””
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Phewww finally done…
Frstly i m reallly srry ,I’ve done a blunder in previous part…basically its a TS(two shot)…bt i forgot to mention it n mny of you thought its an ff..so srry for that?
It ends here….will try to come soon with something new…n i havent recheck it so plzz ignore typo mistakes?
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Hope u all like it ..plzz drop ur commnt n let me know….n that SHER i’ve tried for the frst time…i hope maine OMM ni kya??
Thnk u guys for ur precious commnt on frst shot…
Lots of love
Kanfi
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Wow di awesome amazing mindblouing
I don’t have words to say now
It’s superb
I loved it di
You have written very well di
I can fell their pain
It’s outstanding
I can’t tell you how much i loved it
Pls try to come with another ff OS or ts anything soooonnnn
Love you di?????
Lovee uu soo muchh somu????
Loved it
Lovee u??
Have u read frst part???
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Wonderful… amazing… awesome…
Thnk u zaveee…
Lovee u ???
Diii……………kya bolun……..i am skipping my breakfast n reading this………n mera pett sach mein bhar gaya hain!!!!!Sooooo nice to read ur stories dii…………..
Both ani n shivaay completing doctors qualification……..i hope aap bhi jaldi se complete karogi!!!
Paris!!!Nice destination dii……That bell ringing mischief was nice……2 months ago i also did it….well,i was thinking that i have missed their 5 years of friendship after seeing their awesome bonding in the start but u instead gave a sweet love wala emotion ahead!!!!
Tadibaaz????may bhi for annika…but this time he was not!!!Fear of darkness………ani remebering gauri…..it would be really tough for her…..but shivaay carressed her like a child….n that tight wala hug..wowww…uske baad coming to senses n shivay’s cute gesture of cheering her was awesome!!!N KISSING HET..AWWWW!
Dii even i was confused wid ani’s mixed feeling……but their adhuri kahani’s perfect para was pyaar…………i love that very much!!!Aur bahut sahi time pe flashback mention kiya diya!!
Phone convo…….it will be the most wonderful moment….itne dhinnon baad they r talking wid each other…but at the same time ani’s shaadi news gave shivay heartbreak!!
THE MARRIAGE DAY………….samar kitna acha hai dii…….trying to understand ani’s feeling!!!Shivay ka vahan aana…..omg….its really difficult to come there…but wahan aakar he got a lovely hug frm his ani!!!superb,emotional n mixed feelings combo…..but samar really helped out!!!!
Their confession…woww..ani proposing shivaay n that too by kneeling down……uske baad jo bhi hua na…..i was keep on smiling!!
THANKS FOR THIS COMBO “TS”!!WAS EXCELLENT!
DO COME WITH AN FF OR OS OR “TS”,NEXT TIME BE CAREFUL WITH THE SPELLING DII….it really means alott!!
LOTS OF LOVE,HUG N KISSES FOR U!!
*KISSING HER
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Awwwwee..
Such a longggg comment radhs..
U made my day…
I m really happy aftr reading ur ff…..
Loveee u soo much???
Are there many spelling mistakes????
God…let me read it..srry for inconvenience??
Apko mera comment ff laga!!!?????vaise i give such long comments coz u and ur stories both r amazing dii!!!
Arrey dii spelling i said that for “TS”!!!TS N FF mein bahut farak hai na!!!isliye kaha tha!!No inconvenience dii……i think two-three spelling mistakes were only there!!!
Love u too once again n forever!!!
@Kanfidiii
Are srry srrry..mere dimag me TS ff chal rha th us wkt????
Duch s long commnt…
Ohh it was about that….got it now???
Yaa i’ve to take care of that..??
Such a??
I got it!!kahi baar i myself had thought about it ki koi kehne wala hai that its a ff!!:joy:
H I kanfi… nice and cute story. I loved it. Best of luck for the future.
Thnk uuu sooo much katz…
Lovee u???
It is nice one dear
Thnkk uu niki???
I just loved it. Superb, mind blowing ,.
Thnk uuu dear….
Have u read frst part???
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Awesome yaar.. it was amazing fantastic fabulous n lovely part dear….
Come back soon with another ff or OS….
waiting for the next ff…
Thnk uuu soooo muchh sagi….
U always appreciate my work….
Lovees uu???
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING SUPERB???????????????
Awwwweee…thnk uuu
Lovee uuu??
Awesome
Love u???
Wow di what an ending just loved it , come with another writing soon your ,your writing aspire me a lot
I m really happy u liked it???
Lovee uu
Fab update yaar mazaaaaa hi aa gya
Loves u ????
Have u read frst part??
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Awesome episode yaar…. Plzz do come back with another dose of ur writings
Thnk u dhar..
Have u read frst part???
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oiii hoii kanfi di…you nailleddd it…
well to be frank i haven’t read the first shot so it would be great if u could provide me the link ….
maza aa gaya..pls post or come up with more such amazing works of yours
U’ve read it i guess…
All my writing work
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Who havent read frst part..
Here is link..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
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I forgot to mention it..??
It was amazinggggg again………. Such an adorable love of shivika………… Just loved it…. Actually when I was reading I was like wow…. Everything is going so nicely but when anika left shivay on airport I was like no anika you can’t do that he loves anika…. Pls don’t go…. But later on finally she realized her love for her shivay…… It was such a nice feeling to read such a lovable lovestories….. Liked the way shivay was enjoying with anika even after knowing that she doesn’t have any feelings for him… I must say it’s very difficult…. And when that song Hamari adhering Kahani played I was like…. Awww..my poor shivay… And anika tooo…. Samar’s understanding nature made him love his character too…. The way he told anika that she won’t get anyone better than shivay…. It was appreciable…. Shivika’s nokjhok wala confession was adorable….. By the way as all was scripted by you so the whole credit also goes to you kanfi dii…… You are an amazing writer… Wish I could get more of it….. Felt really sad when I came to know that it was just a two shot…. And ya even I thought it to be a ff….. So again dii m asking u to make a comeback with a khidkitoddd????????????????? story…. Will surely wait for it…… And expections are on top now… So just fulfill it as soon as soon possible…but if you have some work you can take time.. No worries as I will be waiting for next… I m not feeling to stop but what to do these studies…. You can understand… So till then Byeeee….
Shyra
Shyraaaaa….
Such an amazingg commnt yr…
I love ur ff n u r an ammazing writer n my motivator too??
Love u???
Awesome update
Thnk u dear???
Hello Knafi !!:P:P:P:D:D
u didn’t send me link yr…arey kya hota agar mein read karna bhul jata are aapke bhai ro padta aur kuch nahi.
Wow fabulous last chappy.
U just nailed it.
Samar is cool ..
Shivaay baby ro raha tha universe ki kasam achha hua roya.
Loved it.
Knafi???
Are previouslyI didnt share link with bt still u read so I thought u’ll come to know through activity area as i had posted there??
Ok i’ll inform u whenever i’ll post next…
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I m glad u like it….thnk u???
kanfi i’m very happythat u wrote atleat one more epi……….it was amazing …………i also thought it was ff but then u tell me its a os and make me sad…….but after reading it i’m feeling very good such beautiful ts …..great job…………i love this shade of shivaay very much ……..and yes u come fast with ur adipoli ff………one more thing i’m so happy that u choose kerala as anika’s native. when i read that portion i was smiling and thought if it really happened i can also go for her wedding heheheheheh……….come soon with ur new ff waiting for it dr …..love u lotttttt…..
Lovee uu sumi????
U would have gone for wedding??
Actually i thought about kerela thinking about u only… ???
Really its means a lot kanfi……so sure I’ll be in the wedding?????…….so I’m praying kanfi also there in the wedding ????
Superbbbbbb kanfiiii….just loved the way u scripted every emotions beautifully. Starting with their cool friendship…moving on to Anika's marriage with samar and at the end finally anika proposing shivaay.?? thanks a lottttttt kanfi…our mind truely gets into an amazingggg vision of true friendship and love. All ur works are truely worth the appreciation…ur such a talented girl…love u loadsssssssss yaarrrrrrrrrrr????????..!! Will be eagerly waiting for more os and ts…just keep up the great work ?
Awwwweeee….
Thnk uuuu sooo muchhhhhh???????
I’ll try to come sooon
Lovee uuuu???
Awesome episode di. Jhakaaaaaàaaaas. Btw how are you ?!!?? Kya mai yaad hu ? Aap to bhool hi gaye ho na. And plz come with a ff or os soon. Love you a lot di
Huh…tmse baat ni kr rhi mai…??
Khud hu gayb rhti ho or hmse puch rhi…huh….
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Prhne k lye thnx…iska frst part bhi h wo bhi prh lna..
Bt i m still katti?
Arre. I am sorry na. I promise I will do whatever you want ??. Sooo sorry didu. Ab chote hone ka kuch to benifit do ??. And maine 1st part part padha issi ke saath tha. And also tell me na when will you come with your next OS or FF. Ab aap ko ye to pata hi hoga ki aapke ff aur os padke mere ko baht achaaaaaaaa lagtaaaaaa hai. And agar aap ne ni kia na to mai bi aapse baat ni karunga. And aapne bi to muj se baat ni ki thi mujse ??. Vaise mai aapko yaad bi hu ???.
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Are itnaa makhan mt lgao….hm man gye???
Hn ji hm sbko yd rkhte h..bs prhai ke burden ki wjh se bt ni kr paati….
Loveee uuuu archiuuu????
When will u update ur ff????
I’ll try to come soon??
Archu u did what I did n no copyrights or credit???????????? but one point was good that come up with another one kanfi dii
Well, I dont know you ??. But still…
Copyrights go to “TU friends forever” ?.
@kanfi di.
Finally koi to hai jise mere ff ke baare mei yaad hai ??. I will post soon and it will end in 2 episodes didu. And vo makkhan nahi sach tha ?. And pata hai mere bi exams chal re hain ??. Muj jaise masoom se bache par school wale atyachaar kar rahe hain. Well, love you too didu ??. Vaise, how are you ? (Pehle puchna bhool gaye hum) ?
Archu u don’t know me ???????????? it’s just gonna be a week of my deactivation n u forgot me ????? tu chota Don nahi memory loss ki don hai.
Hey kanfi MINDBLOWING WONDERFUL EXCELLENT ending dr…. Totally luv this Ts…. U just nailed it dr…. Waiting 4 ur nxt work…
Thnk uu so much bani….
Lovee u?????
N welcome to pkj?
Thnk u kanfi…
Awesome epi kanfi !!! They bonded together so well tht they have been friends for 5 years ?… good to see the old anika is back… the one who is mischevious and all… the first scene reminded me of my childhood… good o’l days ?. Can’t believe they actually slept in one room… this shivay is so different and nice and caring. Shivika hotel scene was just awww ???… he tryin to calm her down as she was scared… and then goin and caressin her face when she was asleep, and not to forget the forehead kiss ??… never expected anika to go and talk to shivay when he was sleepin..like expressing herself to him. Shivay was heartbroken when anika left him ?? and anika was also in a similar state but she was in a turmoil as she didn’t knw her true feelings. Anika and shivay talk aftr so long. Shivay is the best friend she could ever get… even aftr being so devastated and heartbroken
… he agreed to attend her marriage just because she asked him to come ??. Anika hugged shivay as soon as he entered the marriage venue ??. As they say der aye durust aye… at the last moment anika realised she loves shivay and thanks to samar she was able to unite with shivay… who had been loving her frm the past five years and had a hope tht one day she’ll love him too. The stry was awesome… mind blowin khidkitod ts. Sad tht it wasn’t an ff but really liked the stry. Do come up with an ff soon… i wanna read anthr of ur great stories ?.
Take care ??
Maryammmm…ur commnt???????
U just analyze the whole TS here…
Lovee u soo muchhhh..
N thnk uu for appreciating my work…???
Heavy competition this time Radhu akka leave some points for this poor little soul too.
N Kanfi Di I will win whatever happens kyu mein toh bahut smart hu????
Literally I have to reading my chemistry book but I am reading your Two shots.Mom shouting so let me type it up fastttt.
So it was awesome as always.Kerala woo it would have even more good if u included some beautiful scenery there.But this was good too.
Samar he is possitive here sooo good.
The airport scenes oh god again my Bhai cried?????
N the Paris one n the hug no comments as I am very weak in commenting about romance n it’s not my age to explain it well.( I am a good girl of my mom n dad????)
Then The hotel scene Ohhh godd the food name I got to know them todayyyy.I love cooking n thanks for adding themmmmnm
N then the spotlight of the show was the hug in the Mandap.She ran n hugged oh goddddddddd.
My poor Bhai had to cry here too.
N the last one in the park hillarious??? I laughed at Anika’s dialogue.
N hazaro aadhuri kahani touch was indeed tooo good.
When u come up with new one do inform me here.
N u may think it’s just a small one but she the length now.
Copyrights only for u if u redo it i want copyright n credits.
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This was big right???
N don’t forget me ha I know who won’t but just to give an information
I will be back to trouble u all.
Rufiiiiiii
U reallly know how to give long commbts????
I couldnt add more scenery n all as it got too long n i thought khi boring na hojaye thats why…??
N ur commny k baad i m srsly laughing?????
Takkar ki comperition to radhs…
Yaa come back soon…u again deactivatdd ur account??
Do take care of urself…lovee uuuu????
OMG!!!yahan comments ka competition bhi hota hai kya???i din’t knw abt that!!!
I told why i give “long comments” diii!!!aur ek bhi reason hai but i will not say here mein pm karungi apko!!
I will certainly come back dii.N that day is coming soon.U laughed reading my comment awwwww that so good I will try my level best to make your stomach pain due to laughter reading my Comments????I will take care but DI take care of yourself too n don’t study whole night n all because u r important more than your studies. N love u too don’t worry I will be troubling u with my comment here
N boringgggg no wayssssss
Rufi yaar!!!i was feeling meine bahut saare points miss kar di!!!This was actually a short comment for me(mera wala)……….Mein soch rahi thi that ppl will think i am mad n i am repeating the ff again!!!
But i never ever knew that yahan comments ke compeition bhi hote hai???????Ofcourse ur comment was awesome rufi!!!!U knw to give a long comment!!
U had deactivated ur account na!!!!
Why rufi…..onkitta romba nalla pm panni pesanunu nenachinde irrundhan!!!N nee eppdi panitta….i knw studies nalla tha ellame….but don’t delete ur account na…..LET IT BE THERE!!
Love u bahut saara!!n miss u dear!!
I deactivated because of 2 reasons.one I have my exams starting tomorrow two I have no net connection I am commenting in 2g where there R only few chances to check your DP I can’t open activity with this net n if I don’t use what’s the need of the account being there?? N then competition my only competitor was Fenil bro but u joined in that race in middle it’s all just for fun.N comment as much u want its your wish nothing is long for us when compared to the love with which U r commmenting(I have not done philosophy so I don’t know more???? n I have not done PHD in it if u get a seat for me too I am not interested in it n make u all bore ??? see how much big pagal I am)
Awwwww I missed a beautiful chance if talking with u in om but soon it will happen I will activate my account for a week in September that time we will talk for sure.There is a reason behind that activation.
My account is just deactivated akka it’s not deleted.
N love u tooo n miss u too Akka
Hey Kanfi !
This story was amazing, loved it !
I also thought it’s an ff, but still the story was mind-blowing and I really appreciate it. You nailed it, too good.
Love you, come with more❤
Love uu jerry????
Amazing story… Superb… Excellent… Mind blowing…..
waiting for ur next work…
Thnk uu ankita. .
Lovee uu????
I waited for it a lotttttttttttt….????…Loved the whole Ending !!!…??????????????…Samar is a tru supporter…Shivika r justtt made for each other !…
Sooo backk to episode starting : ..
5 Years leap n Restaurant scene was really gooood…And i loved all scenes…
Airport scene was deeply emotional !…??…I thought i m watching a movie ❤️❤️❤️❤️…
Though ur writtings arent less then Movie !…Sooooo i musttt say u r a BRILLIANT WRITER !….????????…
Finally Ending scene was like FAIRYTALE ???????….LOVED IT !…(FLYING KISSES & WHISTLE)…
Waitingggg for ur nxt creation ….come bacckkk soon ❤️
Love n Regards…❤️
Itttttiiii taareeeeffff??????
Thnkkk uuuu soooo muchh riana….
Abhi khidkitod smile h mre face p….
Lovee uu????
Hiiiiiiiiiii Kanfi dear…. How r u??? Glad to see u back with bang entry! How was ur exams???(I know m very late…..so sorry for that dear)
First part – Excellent!! I loved it. Anika n Gauri’s…..u explained very well. Gauri pain of getting betrayal…..uff! I can able understand her pain. Betrayal pain….we can’t heal that pain!
Second part – Wonderful!! I just loved it… Excellent!! Shivika’s friendship, Shivaay’s love n Anika’s realization……perfect feelings! The way u described it was very amazing!!! Sorry dear, can’t give longggg comment.
M fine…
How are u gayu???
Yeah it was good…
Thnk u soooo muchh for ur ammmazingggg commbt ?????
It is long commnt yr??
Lovee uu
I m fine Kanfi…
HALF GF…
WOW!!AMAZING KANFU AAPI…. I must say you’re a fantastic writer.. knows to attract your readers very well….When when I was reading I…I expected Anika not be a soul atleast…. but…OMM hogayi mere thoughts ki…My cute SS CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HIS ANIKA..He kept shop opened…. ..Felt sad about Ani’s parents. …Kid Shivika scene was adorable……So Anika was dead and to keep her promise up…she come to Shivaye a Soul….Last Shivika scene was cute and sweet…Come up with more OSs.
ADHM…
And it was more Awesome sorry Wow some than your previous FF n OS. Shivika being collage friends….. So cute…Glad to know that you wanna be a doc and choose it for Shivika as well… I was thrilled to know that why Anika don’t want to befriend with anyone…and when you’ve written FB… I was ultra shocked…Didn’t expect Gauri to be her friend… both were intelligent students..but Gauri loved that silly cheater Daksh and Got betrayed…felt so sad for…Ishq ki lat boht hi buri hai…and you know what?? My classfellow is also in live…whenever I’m in class… He says to me”I’ve not seen her since much time…” I give a smile on it…Love has make him mad… And he is also studious stud. in class.But I think Gauri should’ve not ended her life….She should’ve told that Daksh…Anika knows Shiva’s bd also very well….Love it aapi….Shivika scene was KEHTE HAI was hilarious….Didn’t expect 5 years lapse….. But it was enough good…Ani ringing door reminded me of my Childhood..I also used to ring the doors’ bell…And then run away…. Anshi hotel scene so sweet…But Shivaye caring Ani when she felt of darkness was more..oops….most sweetest scene….ani packing bags was Laos unexpected…OMG!! Don’t feel Michmichi but you’ve become second GUL KHAN….Believe me aapi…Shivaye shouting on airport was loveable….in IB..its Anika who loves shiv a lot n in this TS…Shivaye has more loving nature than Ani….Shivika scene with HAK was written beautifully..-Ani father condition made Anika Togo home back…. Samar is loveable character here…..Good Ani phoned shiv to come on marriage and he also came…. Good Samar realized her feelings and got shiivika united…
MUKAMMAL HUI ADHOORI DAASTAN
PURE HUE HAM OR HMARA JAHAN
wahwah aapi..wah wah….. Lovely shayari/poetry….Come up with more OS/FFs….whenever you get time… and yah sorry for not commenting on previous part as I am really bounded to studies…Will wait for your stories…Love to read them..Keep writing…Your writings are khidkitod aapi… Mujhe to Real drama serial se kam nahi lagte….But. if you’ve shown that something bad happened to Daksh.. then I would’ve felt very happy.. but….chale ga….Waiting for ur next writings….
Shakaib…..
Hm kya rply kre….
Ur commnt ne bs speechless bna dya…
N dont be srrryy…i know tmhri studies h…
Or hn tm apni dost ki trah koi hrkt mt krna??as api bol rhe h…
N loveeeeeeeee uuuuuu sooooo muchhh????
All the best for ur studiesss
Thank u for sweetest reply aapi….. Love u too…..all the best for you also..!!/For Doctoring!!!
diiiiiiiiduuuuuu what’s this???????????? like really?? how do u write sooooooooooi good… its more than WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! its just amazing,fantastic, fantabulous,awesome,super se upar,,,,,,, well I am wroting this comment for epi 1 toooooo. I wanted to comment in part 1 too but don’t know why there is no comment option in part 1……. BTW,
it was very emotional. ur writings look so real that really I almost cried for shivaay….. when he was giving the bouquet to ani…??????………. Anyways,,,,,,
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Apki aur apki writings ki jitni tariff Karu Kam HEI …… They are just “”HISTORICAL,EPIC””””” ????
Love u Didu?????
Meher
Awwwweee…
Loveee uuuuu meher?????