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Home»Fan Fiction»Ae dil hai mushkil # 16 # do I snore???
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Ae dil hai mushkil # 16 # do I snore???

ManyaBy ManyaApril 3, 201755 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey all!ayushi is back!!this time very early!!i hope u all enjoy!!will post the next part very soon!!its a medium one!!!do read and comment
So 3……2……Chooo

ABC reporters go out!!
Dev:finally!!
Sona:Thankgod!!bach gye!!!(saved)
Dev:acha toh ab main Chala sone!!! (Now I am going to sleep)
Sona:sone kyun?? (Why)
Dev:for ur kind information!hum correction main raat Ko dhang se Soya nhi!!(I didn’t sleep well at night)
Sona:main bhi toh same time par Soyi thi!!!(but I also slept at the same time)
Dev:but tumhein kharato(snoring)ki awaaz nhi Aayi Na!!(but u didn’t hear the snoring no)
Sona:oh ok!!

Dev:Haan!!
And is about to go!!
Sona:ek second!!!kiske kharate!!!hum dono ke elava kaun tha!?tum toh soye hi nhi!!(one sec who was snoring!!there was no one else other than us!!and u didn’t sleep)
Dev:tumhare!!! (Urs)
Sona:mere!!mere kharate!!!!main snore nhi karti!!! (I don’t snore)
Dev:tumhe kaise pata!!!! Tumhe thodi Sunai dete hai!! (How do u know??)
Sona:toh………Mujhe pata hai main snore nhi karti!! (I know)

Sona’s PoV

Sona Tu snore karti hai!!!!!??nhi nhi yeh AD Jhoot bol raha hai!!aur agar nhi Bol raha toh!!??(Sona u snore!!!no no!!this AD is saying rubbish)
Dev:Haan!!!haan de lo apne aap Ko jhooti tasali!!!
Sona:ab tumhara zyada Ho raha hai!!!! (It’s getting over now)
Dev:abhi zyada kiya hi kaha hai!! (I have not started yet)
Sona:acha!!!
Dev:hmm……

Sona takes a stick kept nearby
Sona:ab bolo!!!main marti hoon kharate!!(now tell me!!do I snore)
Dev:tumhe Kya Lagta hai ki main iss stick ke darr se jhutt bolunga!! Nhi!!tum snore karti Ho!!karti ho!!karti ho!! (Do u think!!i will get afraid of this stick and tell lie!!u snore)
Sona:acha abhi batati hoon!!! (I will tell u)

And they start running here and there!!dev gets stuck between a wall and Sona
Sona:ab batau!!!do I snore mr attitude!!!
Dev:pehle Mera naam ache se bolo!!!

Sona:ok fine!!do I snore mr.dixit!!
Dev:Dev bolo!!
Sona:do I snore Dev??
Dev:Dixit reh gya!!
Sona:urghhhhh??do i snore mr Dev Dixit!!!(closes her eyes and when she opens it Dev is not there)
Sona:kaha gya!!

Dev:yaha!!
Sona:u!!!!!i will not leave u!!
Dev:and BTW u snore!!very loudly in fact!!!
And this Tom and Jerry chase continues!!!
Dev:thak gyi Sona(#yjhd#ranbir references#thak gye bunny)
Sona:nhi nhi main thakti nhi hoon!!(breathing heavily)

And again they start laughing!!!
Dev:ek baat bolu!!!
Sona:nhi bolungi!!toh nhi bologe??
Dev:bolunga!!
Sona:toh bolo!!
Dev:U r very pretty!!
Sona starts blushing
Dev:bas ek problem Hai!!
Sona:what ???
Dev:Tum hasti thoda kam ho!!!(#yjhd#ranbir references)
Sona:haha very funny!!!ur wish my command!!abse main extra smile karungi!!
Dev:bad girl!!

Sona:bad girl!!!kyon!?
Dev:good girl bolta toh tum Kehti be oringinal?
Sona:kuch bhi!!! Ek baat puchu??
Dev:nhi bolunga toh nhi puchogi??
Sona:ofc puchungi!!

Dev:toh pucho!!
Sona:main……..a……….b………..c………
Dev:Mujhe pata Hua ki tumhein ABCD Aati hai!!kitni baar bataogi!!
Sona:nhi yaar!!kya main Sachi mein snore karti hoon!!
Dev:nhi!!
Sona:Dekha Mujhe pata tha!!

Dev:Mujhe bhi pata tha!!
Sona:Kya??
Dev:main Jhoot bahut achi tareeke se bolta hoon?
And then he runs to his room!!and locks it!!
After some time Dev comes out in a white shirt and black tie!!
Sona’s PoV
???????????!!!omg!!!main Itni garmi se jal Na jaau Kahi?how can he look so hot!!!!
Dev:tum Mujhe Taadna band Kar Sakti Ho!!
Sona:main kaha taad rahi thi tumhein!!!
Dev:oh really!!!!(crosses his arm over his chest)
Sona:main nhi taad Rahi thi!!!
Dev:tum accept Kar Sakti Ho!!

Sona:Kya accept Kar Sakti hoon!!
Dev:Yahi ki tum Mujhe taad Rahi thi!!
Sona:nhi!!
Dev:yes!!!
Sona:no
Dev:no
Sona:yes!!

Dev:see u accepted it!!
Sona:cheater!!cheater!!pants on fire!!
Dev:woh liar liar hota hai!!and vaise bhi Maine trousers pehne hai
Sona:Apka sense of humour bachpan se hi aisa hai Ya kahi se training li thi!!
Dev:khud toh aise Bol Rahi Ho jaise sense of humour mein PHD Kar Rakhi Ho!!
Sona:apko kaise pata??
Dev:very funny!!

Sona:I know that!!ab Hogya Ho toh chalein??
Dev:kaha!!
Sona:surprise!!
Dev and Sona lock the house and go towards the car!!but then Sona blindfolds Dev
Dev:what r u doing??how will I drive!!
Sona:I will drive no!!
Dev:u know how to drive!!
Sona:koi shak!!

Dev:Haan!!
Sona:arey yaar no fear when Sona is here
Dev:that’s the only fear!!
Sona:what did u say??
Dev:kuch nhi chalo ab!!
They sit in the car and Sona starts driving!!
Dev:Jai mata Di!!!om namah Shivaay!!jai Bajrangbali!!bacha Lena aaj??
Sona listens this all and thinks to irritate him!!
Sona:Jaanu!!where is the clutch!!

Dev:r u sure u know how to drive??
Sona:Yess ofc I know how to play racing video games!!i am a master in them!!
Dev:what!!!!!!???Sonakshi get out of the car I will drive myself!!
Sona:jaanu!!wait!!it was just a prank!!
Dev:tum Mujhe marna chahti Ho Na!!i nearly had a heart attack!!
Sona???
Dev:ab chalein!!
They reach there safely

Dev:why did u stop the car!!
Sona:bcoz we are here!!
Dev:main zinda hoon Na!!
Sona:ji nhi!!
Dev:what??
Sona:kuch bhi?
Devakshi get out of the car!!
Dev:can I open my eyes now!!

Sona:yes!!
Dev is speechless to see the place!!he finds himself run out of words!!


Precap:Socho!!socho!!??

I posted early this time!!
It was long Enough!!and suspense bhi toh zaruri Hai???
Ache ache comments??
Suggestions if required
And can u guess the place???
Love
Ayushi??
Will post soon??

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    55 Comments

    1. Vaishaali on April 3, 2017 11:54 pm

      Waah waah….!!!???
      Is baari aap jaldi padhaar gyi ma’m…what a surprise..!!????
      Dev in white shirt black tie….bohot garmi bad gyi actually….? phone, laptop, pc..jo jispe beth ke padh raha hai sab garam ho gye honge..????
      SONA: KOI SHAQ..?
      DEV:HAAN…!!????????
      Dev ki birthday ke din hi sona jai mata di karne pe tuli hui hai…??
      Will be waiting for the next one…but post aaramse…??

      Love love??

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:25 am

        Thanku Thanku and tahnku??
        Haan man kiya toh Jaldi aa gyi??
        Will post soon don’t worry??

    2. ShrutiP on April 3, 2017 11:56 pm

      Mein bas telly updates page open karne ke waqt hi soch rahi thi ki kitna acha hoga agar ayushi post karde aur dekha toh tumhara ff tha…as usual mind blowing chapter…tum toh zaroor apne sense of humour mein phd karke aayi ho…jaldi post karo..I am waiting????

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:26 am

        Awww??Thanku Thanku tahnku so much??
        Will definitely post soon??

    3. Varshu on April 3, 2017 11:57 pm

      It was really such a cool episode. But
      I can’t guess the place dude. Can’t wait 4 next epiosde.

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:26 am

        Thanks a lot Varshu??
        Will post soon then u will get to know the place??

    4. Princess. on April 4, 2017 12:13 am

      Awesome episode dear desperately waiting for the next episode post the next episode soon as possible

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:27 am

        Thanks a lot nikita!!will definitely post the next part soon??

      • Princess. on April 4, 2017 12:08 pm

        I m not Nikhat.

      • Princess. on April 4, 2017 12:09 pm

        Sorry nikita

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 7:28 pm

        Oh really sorry princess??

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 10:41 pm

        Bechari ?????????
        Mera bhut chadha liya ??

    5. akshita on April 4, 2017 12:13 am

      Manya Yeh bht glt kiya yr ek to chota episode upar se precap b nhi???

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:27 am

        Awww!!!will post soon???

    6. rj12 on April 4, 2017 12:15 am

      ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Sona snores ,????????????????????
      Hehe never knew mr attitude had sense of humor ?????????????????????????????????? haha loved it Ayu

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 1:28 am

        Thanks a lot Ritika❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    7. lizaa on April 4, 2017 1:33 am

      Recently toh devakshi ne iss baath main ladae ki thi…???
      Precap???bachi badi ho rahi h… ???
      Itna achha epi dene ke bad haame soch ne ke kiye chod ke khud soo
      rahih??

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 7:50 am

        Yess!!isliye apne style mein likh diya??
        Arey it’s okay Apka Intezaar Jald hi Khatam Ho jaayega??

    8. darshana on April 4, 2017 9:19 am

      Tell me one thing how do u think of such funny dialogues ????…i really want to know..actually NATION WANTS TO KNOW

      whatever it is..the episode was amazing..from the title to the end precap
      suspense…i am trying hard but not able to guess the place
      jaise iss baar jaldi post kiya next wala bhi jaldi post karna..don’t make me wait!..
      love u?

      • darshana on April 4, 2017 9:21 am

        And ya thanks for the reminder..actually i was a little busy with my maths boards !

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 9:33 am

        Thanks a lot??
        Bas Kya Karun apne upar kabhi ghamand nhi kiya??arey like seriously dimaag mein aata hai aur bas likh deti hoon!!!
        Omg maths board??I hate maths u know?Anyways I guess u did well ?
        Will post soon

      • darshana on April 4, 2017 9:42 am

        Even i hate maths…i find it quite boring..but thank god it was good!!

    9. Riti1107 on April 4, 2017 10:23 am

      Ye kya suspense me chod dia
      Now post Soon
      The episode was awesome❤

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 11:00 am

        Thanks❤️
        Sure!!will post the next episode soon?

    10. Aarti32 on April 4, 2017 11:15 am

      Arey waah Manya!! Is baar jaldi aa gyi aur episode to ghazab tha hi..Aur tarif kru ya itta kafi h??

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 11:48 am

        Kaafi hai!!??
        Thanks a lot and where is ur ff??
        Love u

      • Aarti32 on April 4, 2017 12:28 pm

        Will post it by tomorrow.. Pakka

    11. Ritika on April 4, 2017 11:50 am

      awesome. post soon. eagerly waiting. waiting for the precap..

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 11:58 am

        Thanks a lot?
        Will post soon?

    12. aamu on April 4, 2017 12:06 pm

      Hmmm..dis was early awesome…????
      Early b tha n awesoem b so early awesome….
      Ab kya bolu..
      Har baaar…
      Har baaar tum yahi karti ho…
      Huh…
      But sorry to say i dint like it,?….
      Bcos i loved it.??????

      Seriously….again tumhare hindi dialogues maaaar daalaaaaaaaa….!.
      More dan awesome…more dan amazing..n more dan erything
      Perfect…just perfect??✌✌…
      Ab suspense rakha hai to jldinkholna pls….n yaa pls inform kardena next post karo to thoda busy hu?

      Waiting…..

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thanks thanks❤️❤️❤️❤️
        Will post soon?

    13. priya12 on April 4, 2017 12:22 pm

      Sry 4 late cmt dr..
      Mei kasam se kaha teh hai mee bahut thak gayi hun…hass teh hass teh…
      Actually , yesterday I had a stomach pain…it came again
      Idk…how ur writing..
      Yeh jawani hey deewani dialogues…it suites well dr..
      Snoring part…
      Dev will always be hot yaarr..but in ur ff..yeh zyadda hot hai..
      Sense of humour mee phd…superbbb
      Sona made dev scared by her prank…driving…awesomeee yaar
      Clutch kaha hai..just amazing
      No words 2 describe dr…
      U left in suspense….
      Pls post nxt epi asap

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 3:42 pm

        How r u now??thanks a lot❤️❤️❤️
        Will post soon?

      • priya12 on April 4, 2017 4:47 pm

        I m fine dr…I m feeling better now..

    14. fuggysona on April 4, 2017 12:35 pm

      harrywa…mass episode yaar
      it is sooo hillarious
      dev itna hillarious
      i can’t even imagine
      but it is really superb
      i loved those ranbir bani dialogues..
      wow a great treat…
      and the best dialogue is sona saying arey yaar no fear when Sona is here
      Dev:that’s the only fear!!
      hehehe…soo superb..
      post soon i am soch!!soch!!
      i will dream of how the place will be
      at now will they confess their love??

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 3:45 pm

        Thanku Thanku Thanku so muchhhh❤️❤️❤️❣❣❣❣❣
        Will pots soon and not so soon?

    15. nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 12:41 pm

      Are tumne jaldi post kiya aur mai hi late ho gai hay mere phute bhag mujhe pata tha ki tum jaldi post karogi PR itna jaldi 4 bar isko dekha toh laga ki Purana khul raha hai aur jab parne hai tab pata chala ki yeh sach hi koi Sapna Nhi hi
      Itna chita lag raha hi aag laga Di yar gr8 keep it up ??????
      Aur Badi sari originality hai is me waise is originality Ke liye Dev KO bade papad belne padhe aur koi scene toh bata do inka reham karke sona KO toh kabhi hero ki zarurat hi Nhi padhti khud gundo se lad leti hai
      Mujhe toh lagta hai Dev KO hi sonakshi Ke strong hands ki zarurat hai bhagwan kare uska pair sleep ho aur sona use bachaye well a…….b…….c……….d itna fun hi its omg ab yeah flying kis rakh lo meri taraf se kuki the kapil sharma ..
      Comedy nights sabko fail kr diya
      Luv u luv u luv u …………………………………
      Muuuuaaaaaahhhhhh????????????????????

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 12:43 pm

        Are Maine toh pura is hi likh diya
        Kya karu itna acha work kiya hai ki jitna likho pet hi Nhi bharta ?? vaise tumhare charan kha hai ashirvad chahiye

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 12:59 pm

        Awww❤️❤️❤️Love u yaar??Meri taraf se bhi rakh yeh flying kiss???
        Agli baar main tujhe inform Kar dungi?
        Main……….kuch soch Rahi hoon ?
        Wait❣
        Love u too

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 2:29 pm

        Sochna khatam an batao kya soch Rahi ho batao

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 2:30 pm

        Sorry 4 the grammatical mistakes

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 7:28 pm

        Abhi nhi Aisa suspense aver Ho jaayega!!

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 8:14 pm

        Aver ?????

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 9:10 pm

        Acha chalo!!thoda sa jealousy track?

      • Manya on April 4, 2017 9:12 pm

        Yeah and i posted an OS too?

      • nikkita0194 on April 4, 2017 10:39 pm

        Thanks for notification
        Manus tumcha abhari ahe

      • priya9876 on April 4, 2017 10:59 pm

        WHICH OS??

    16. priya9876 on April 4, 2017 10:55 pm

      Ekdum jhakaaasss wala episode tha…

      Na no guess, ek guess tha shimla bt itni jaldi wo shimla kaise ja sakte hai….

      white shirt & black tie…..huuuu!! hotty hot…

      Weldone Mnaya BACCHA..

      • Manya on April 5, 2017 12:57 am

        Thanks a lot Priya di??

      • Manya on April 5, 2017 12:59 am

        One is this one
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-oshappy-devakshihappy-family/
        And the other one will be posted

      • Manya on April 5, 2017 1:44 pm

        And the second one is this
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/osoh-ur-birthday/
        Do read?

    17. Niki645 on April 5, 2017 5:38 am

      Hilarious episode!!! Super awesome!!
      Loved it to the core!

      Amazing dialogues!! And ur OS…that was fantastic as well!!!
      Post soon!

      Love?

      • Manya on April 5, 2017 1:34 pm

        Thanks niki❤️❤️❤️
        Will post soon

    18. V.V.harshita on April 5, 2017 5:47 am

      Awesome Post soon dear

      • Manya on April 5, 2017 1:34 pm

        Thanks❤️❤️

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