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Home»Fan Fiction»ADHE ADHOORE(YHM,PMHMD,IPKKND,KKB)-Part 1
Fan Fiction Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon Ek Jashn Kumkum Bhagya Pardes Mein Hai Mera Dil Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

ADHE ADHOORE(YHM,PMHMD,IPKKND,KKB)-Part 1

shaluBy shaluDecember 17, 201637 Comments8 Mins Read
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Episode1:

Hii guys this is Shalu………and Destination Goa is postponed for some time……..v ll see that later now let’s see this one……….
I hope u all ll like this one……….and ll support this ff of mine……….
And I promise u ppl to give romance in this one for sure………I mean my level best……….

Hey and wat a surprise……tmrw is my bday………and I am about to start a new ff……….so sweet to bantha hain naa(so sweet is required right)……..here u go with the sweets????……..and sry for the imaginary ones………can’t help it……….and so let’s begin my ff……..!!!!!

Hope u all won’t be confused……..if so pls tell me………I would clear it to u ppl……….mostly it won’t be confusing cause my brain won’t work that much………???

2016 Australia……..

Oxford university…………

At the men’s personal hostel……….a boy was sleeping……….

Suddenly his mobile rings………and in sleep he takes the mobile………

Boy:Hey dhi cant u pls remember that I am in London………and I don’t like ppl waking me up in midnight………

Girl:Stupid its not midnight its 9 in the morning………wake up………

Boy:It may be 9 there in India but here its midnight only got it……..

Girl:Hey sleepy bag…….see the clock in front of ur face its 9 over there only………

With that the boy wakes and looks at the clock……..

Boy:Shoot Prags dhi can’t u wake me up early……..its my last day in clg and ur doing this with me……….

The girl is Pragya Singh Raizadha…….

Pragya:Now atleast u remember………that its ur last day of clg Mr.Arnav Singh Raizadha……….pls wake up and get ready………..

The boy is Arnav Singh Raizadha………

Arnav:Okay I have to go and get ready………so bye……….

Pragya:Don’t forget after farewell u have to come home……..u have a flight to catch…….

Arnav:That’s y I am very eager to go to clg……..if u keep the phone only ll I be able to get ready…….

Pragya:Okay fine I won’t disturb u go and have fun at the farewell……

With that Pragya keeps the phone down………

Arnav then gets up from the bed and goes into the bathroom to have a bath and gets fully dressed for his last day of clg……….

He goes to his clg……….

Arnav:I am very much excited to go back to India………and meet my family……….

Girl2:So u totally forgot about me………and want to see ur family………

Arnav:Khushi how could I forget u………and don’t forget if I go back only can I tell my family about u and us………..!!!!!!

The girl is Khushi Bhalla………..

Khushi:Stop buttering me and come to the point……….

Arnav:Should u really have to go to US……..after farewell……….

Khushi:Arnav then only I can talk with my family right……about us…….

Arnav:Okay fine……..but promise u ll text me every night……..

Khushi:Its a promise okay……..now as soon u tell ur family about me……….I ll come straight right there to India got that……….

Arnav:Okay my dear sweetheart………!!!!!

With that both go to their class……….all the students have a grt time as its their last day of clg………..

All r taking pics……..some r making plans to spend their summer and some packing their things to go to their family……….

Now its the time for graduation, all r seated in their places and one by one each one is called to take away their certificates and prizes and medals………..

All r happy with wat they got………

At night 10………..Arnav and Khushi at the airport………

Arnav:Khushi should v really have to do this……..I mean by getting separate

Khushi:Don’t wry, I am always there with u………..I ll be in touch……….just v both have to convince our family………u talk with ur father…….

With that Arnav’s blood rages with anger

Khushi:Okay I am sry………u talk with ur sisters and I with my family……….everything ll be perfectly alright………!!!!!

Arnav:Pls try coming back to India soon somehow……..!!!!

Khushi:I ll try………..but my bro won’t allow me to leave him………!!!!!

With that Arnav’s face becomes dull……..

Khushi:Hey hey……….pls don’t make this sad face……..like v r leaving forever………u know I can’t see u like this

Arnav:Then don’t ever say that v r leaving forever……….u ll back to me got that………!!!!

Khushi:Okay fine………I won’t do that………and don’t ever plan to go behind some lame girls got that

Arnav:On second thoughts……..that idea is not bad……..it would be grt like u ll not he around there to hit my back……..so I can…….

Khushi:So u can……..!!!!

With that Arnav sees that Khushi was very much angry with him

Arnav:Cool sweetheart cool…….I don’t have any such plans

Khushi:Don’t even think like that in ur dream also Mr.Arnav Singh Raizadha……….I ll come right down to India to hit u on ur face

Arnav:If this makes u to come to India……..then I ll surely do it………but don’t wry………in my heart there is no place for anyone

Khushi then only smiles………a little…….

Arnav:Now come on give me a good bye kiss………!!!!

Khushi:Arnav………kya kar rahe ho……..(wat r u doing)………everyone r seeing us……..

Arnav:Okay fine I won’t ask…….now bye I am gng as my flight is calling

With that he moves to go from there………but Khushi runs behind him and hugs him from the back………..

Arnav as a smiles on his face

Arnav:Now everyone r not seeing right……..!!!!

Khushi:Let them see I don’t care………I am sry……..

Arnav:Okay I really have to go my flight is waiting……..

With that he releases Khushi from the hug and moves from there

Arnav and Khushi wave each other goodbye and both board their planes to reach their own destinations………!!!!!

In the flight……..

Arnav was thinking about meeting his sisters whom he didn’t see for three long years because of his studies……..

Khushi on the other side is thinking about how to make her family agree for this…………and only one person could help her in this one……….

Khushi(to herself):I better call him……..and tell him maybe he ll help me………and moreover he is my closest buddy……..

With that she takes her phone when the voice comes…….

“Kindly switch off ur mobile phones”……….. On hearing this Khushi gives out a very big sigh and switches off her mobile………

At India………

The next day……….a girl is sleeping in her bed………

Lady:Naina uth jaa beta……..kaam keliye late ho raha hain(Naina get up dear………..its getting late for work)

The girl is Naina Batra(From Pardes main hain mera dil)

She then gets up from the bed……….and runs to have her bath

She then gets ready and goes to the breakfast table………

Naina:Maa mujhe late ho rahi hain…….baad main kha lungi…….bye maa(Maa its getting late for me………I ll eat later………bye Maa)

With that she hugs her mom from behind and gives her a kiss in the cheek…….

Maa:Have this roti at least………!!!

With that her mom gives her a chapatti with jam spread on it…….

Naina with a smile takes it and runs to her job……….

At US…….

The next day…………

Khushi as reached the airport………..

She then at once calls someone………

Khushi:Hello……….Raghav r u there………?????

The boy is Raghav Mehra(From Pardes main hain mera dil)……..!!!!

Raghav:Hey Khushi watsup buddy…….y calling me so early

Khushi:Raghav I want to talk with u………so can u come home today

Raghav:No probs buddy………but pls don’t tell this to anyone I want to surprise them…….

Khushi:U ll never change

Raghav:Y should I change………I am the one who keeps the family smiling……..

Khushi:Fine I think the driver as arrived…..I ll talk with u latter…….but pls do come home yah………

With that Raghav and Khushi cut the call……..

Khushi gets into a lumosine……and reaches her house Bhalla Mansion

At India………..

Arnav who as reached the airport phones someone

Arnav:Is the car here………okay fine I am cmg……!!!

With that Arnav drags his luggage and goes to the exit where he finds his car waiting for him……….a blue BMW………

When he is about to get into it………a hand suddenly pulls him inside

He then sees that its Pragya who is pulling him

Arnav:Prags dhi………kya kar rage ho…….(wat r u dng)

Pragya:I came to pick u up…….stupid now stop the chit chat and sit down………cause two ppl r very angry at u…….

Arnav:Oh no…….don’t tell me that they r still angry with me………????

Pragya:Yes they r and I came here to warn u about them……..

Arnav:Thx for coming……..and pls do help in this one……

He makes the puppy dog face

Pragya: Oh no……..don’t show me such faces……..I am not gng to come in btwn the three of u got that……..

Pragya then turns to the window so that he won’t do any more faces

On seeing her turn…….Arnav makes pout faces and thinks wat to do now…….

They both the arrive at Raizadha House……….

Precap:No idea

……..sry guys……….!!!!!!

I hope u all liked this first episode as much as I did typing it down………hoping to see more response as in comments………and not pressuring u for a comment……..thank u all for reading it………!!!!

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    37 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on December 17, 2016 1:00 pm

      Pragya as a strict protective sister to cute Arnav.loved their bonding.So arshi were studying abroad n after graduation they r going back home.loved khushi hugging arnav in d last moment.beautiful scene.nice introduction of Naina.loved Raghav Khushi bonding too.I loved Arjun Sanaya bonding in MJHT too.in real life too they bond well.waiting 4 Raghav Naina meeting.waiting to meet the other characters.thanku 4 including raina in ur ff.bcz i was craving 2 read a ff on them.but the ff which got started stopped after 1st part

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 3:11 pm

        Thx Jasmine………happy that u liked the characters………..

    2. Winnie on December 17, 2016 1:12 pm

      Awesome like every time and di read my ff authors note at the last, i wrote something related to u r ff……pls read.once again superb as usual

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 3:12 pm

        Thx Winnie………and sure would I read it and ll comment there……..

    3. Abiya on December 17, 2016 1:55 pm

      Nice intro dr I am waiting for the next

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 3:13 pm

        Thx Abiya……….

    4. rithu on December 17, 2016 2:30 pm

      Very nice

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 4:50 pm

        Thx Rithu……….

    5. Veronica on December 17, 2016 2:52 pm

      Nice intro.. Waiting for the next part

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 4:52 pm

        Thx yaar Vero………

    6. Ishan on December 17, 2016 3:00 pm

      nice one…..don’t take much time to update next one…

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 4:52 pm

        Thx Ishan…………

    7. Jyoti on December 17, 2016 3:41 pm

      happy birthday to u
      Amazing update pragya and arnav are sister and brother arshi loves eachother waiting for ishra introduction pls update soon

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thx Jyoti……….and thx for ur wishes also………

    8. Nivedha on December 17, 2016 3:58 pm

      Wow nice intro Shalu n Advance happy birthday

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 4:57 pm

        Thx Nivi……….and thx for ur wishes also………..

    9. Reshma_Pradeep on December 17, 2016 5:55 pm

      Interestingggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! & ADVANCE HAPPY BIRTHDAY WISHES DEARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR???

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 10:02 pm

        Thx Reshma………..and thx for the wishes too dr………

    10. khushali shah on December 17, 2016 6:14 pm

      superb intro…. advance happy birthday shalu nd we have bday close to eachother can u pls tell me ur bday year…

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 10:04 pm

        Thx Khushali………….and thx dr for the wishes………..and my bday year is 1997……….and so when is ur bday yaar……….pls tell me I am so eager to know it………!!!!!

      • Khushali on December 17, 2016 10:24 pm

        Mine is on 20/12/1999

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 8:09 am

        Grt……….cause my bro is 1999……….am I elder to all in TU……….its so bad……….but okay I get more sissies like u all………..!!!!!

    11. Ankitha on December 17, 2016 9:42 pm

      Love u dhi and a happy happy happy happy birthday to you and an amazing start plz continue with all your josh and fill our adhura yhm page filled with ur ff

      • shalu on December 17, 2016 10:08 pm

        Thx Ankitha……….and I am die hard fan of YHM……..so ur statement of “fill our adhura YHM page with ur ff”………..made me short of words and that too before my bday……..god u really made my day darling……….and thx for the wishes dr………..

      • Ankitha on December 18, 2016 2:21 pm

        Your welcome dhi . I am really happy that I made you happy on ur birthday. May you be happy all ur life and write many ffs like this

    12. Minu on December 18, 2016 12:20 am

      Happy birthday shalu ma may God bless you Have a great day
      Awesome start…… loved all the characters eagerly waiting for the next episode

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 8:07 am

        Thx Minu………thank u so much for the wishes dr………

    13. sowmy on December 18, 2016 12:39 am

      excellent i liked the characters and u have an amazing start i hipe u continue with same spirit dear. and many many happy returns of the day. may god gives u a wonderful and prosperous life…………….

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 8:10 am

        Thx Sowmy……….and don’t wry I ll not stop it………..and thx for the wishes dr………

    14. kumud on December 18, 2016 4:43 am

      Really good love it

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 8:11 am

        Thx Kumud……….

    15. priyanka on December 18, 2016 8:08 am

      Wish you many more happy return of the day dear….??
      Have a great day….
      Awesome start yaar…keep going…

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 10:52 am

        Thx Priyanka………and thx for the wishes dr???

    16. Elinor on December 18, 2016 1:04 pm

      HAPPY BIRTHDAY DI LOVE THIS FF AND MY FAV JODIS ABHIGYA ISHRA AND PMHMD ARE THERE SO THANK U FOR THIS FF MAY THIS BIRTHDAY BE BETTER THAN THE LAST ONE AND A LITTLE LESS BETTER THAN THE NEXT ONE AND WAITING FOR NEXT EPISODE LOVED IT DI AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 9:25 pm

        Thx Elinor………

    17. lopez on December 18, 2016 5:18 pm

      waaaaw very nice keep writing and happy bday my dear may u enjoy all the fruitful Favour’s from god and live life of joy in abundance

      • shalu on December 18, 2016 9:27 pm

        Thx Lopez……….and thx for the wishes dr……

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