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Home»Fan Fiction»Ada ishq Ada hai Ada ho jayega (episode 1)
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Ada ishq Ada hai Ada ho jayega (episode 1)

administratorBy administratorMarch 7, 201638 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hiii everybody.. So this is my first episode…

The episode starts wid a cute girl praying to god in gurudwara.. She is shown praying that ” babaji.. Plz babaji… Plzzz mujhe kunj ke section mein dal do babaji.. Plzz……..”
She keeps praying n d girl is revealed to b twinkle..she continues” babaji plzz..aapko tho pata hai na babaji ki mujhe kinj ke saath rehna Acha lagta hai.. Plzz babaji.. I promise ki main maa ki har baat maanungi unhe kabhi tang nahi karungi.. UV ke gaal nahi keechungi har par uske Baal bahut ache hai toh sirf uske Baal keechungi.. Kunj ke saath kabhi jagda nahi karungii… Plzzzzzz babaji… Luv u bye Babaji…”
( twinkle prays to god for putting her in kunjs section n she tells dat if he does so Dan she will mot do that do this and she applies butter to god)..
a lady from back calls ” twinkle puttar.. Chathi kar.. School nu Jana hai.. Late ho gaya si punishment milega.. Chathi kar.. Pehle din hi lateho jayegi.. puttar..”( common dear make it fast.. It’s already late to school if u bcum.more late ull have to bear punishment on the first day itself)
T- ha maa aa rahi hun..( ya mum coming)
Leela drops twinkle to school n returns..
Inschool,
The principal announces that the names of the students along with the sections they r placed in r displayed on the display board..
Every one rush to the display board.. Twinkle seems to b very eager n impatient to knw her class so she rushed saw her name in class 10B within no time she found out UV to b in d same section but she did not bother about UV at all .. She checked almost 10 times but did not find kunjs name in her class list.. Tears almost rolled down her cheeks when a guy gave her hanky.. .. He said,” don worry senorita.. Bade bade schoolo mein aisi choti chit batein hoti rahti hai senorita..” The guy is revealed as kunj.. A small curve appeared at twinkles lips.. N kunj asked her kya Hua twinkle ro kyun rahi hai?? Twinkle says list mein naam nahi hai!! Kunj says.. Kya atlab Tu fail ho gayi.. Twinkle says..very funny.. Mera naam hai but Tera nahi hai.. Kunj gets confused n says her that his name is there in the list..
T- no it isn’t der I checked it almost 10 times
K- it is der
T-no
K-yes
T-no
K-s
Dey both start arguing n den a guy comes n says “main hoo na”
T-lo aa gya problem solver.
(The guy is revealed as uv)
Tu hi dekh ke bata
UV checks n shows twinkle kunjs Name in d list of 10A. She says I checked in 10B list..

Kunj starts teasing her n says twinkle ki aankhe laraab ho gayi.. N starts faik crying..
K- UV hamari twinkle..ab pata nahi game bhi dekh payegi ki nahi?
N he waves his hands in front of her eyes to check whether she is able to see of not..
Twinkle gives a fake wide smile n leaves frm der wid lots of anger n disappointment dat she is not in kunjs class..

In the class too she keeps thinking about kunj n doesn’t listen to d class.
Seeing her unattentive the tae her call her several times but does not respond being lost in kunj..Then she comes to senses when UV who was sitting beside her shook her.. Then the teacher who was very much angry sends twinkle out of d class.. Even den she was lost in kunj.. Seeing her like dat UV comes out by doing some mischeive in the class.. He slowly asks twinkle who smiling within her self thinking about kunj” kiske bare me soch rahi hai twinkle?” Twinkle with her lost senses reples kunj..
UV smirks in a positive way n asks her do u like kunj?
T-no but I luv him…
Uv-ohooo loven all dat ha twinkle n he starts Laughing.. Twinkle comes to her senses n asks UV what happened y was he laughing n y was he standing out?
UV calms her n says her everything.. Twinkle starts blushing.. Screen freezes on her blushing face..

PRECAP some boys tease n taunt twinkle that her father isn’t wid her. Kunj comes there n sees twinkle crying.. He beats tge boys with the utmost pforce he can.. He the falls down the stairs when one of the boy pushes him.. Twinkle shouts… KUNJ by seeing him bleeding very Badly…

Plzzzz guyzzzz plzzzzzz comment wether u like or not.
If I’m boring u den plz give some suggestions so dat I can make It interesting…plzz do comment n suggest..
Thank you for reading..
Take care,
Luv u all?

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38 Comments

  1. twinkle on March 7, 2016 5:05 pm

    Please post the next part soon its awesome

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:44 pm

      Hey twinkle thanks so much n I’ll update next part today itself..

  2. Barbie on March 7, 2016 5:10 pm

    Hii lara yr ff is nice ….. Byt dont make uvi evil ……. I love yr ff…. Make kunj fall in love with twinkle…. ?????

    • lara on March 7, 2016 6:26 pm

      N dont worry uv isnt an evil instead hell b a helping hand in d twinj story…

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:46 pm

      Hi barbie.. Thanks for commenting.. uv isnt an evil character n none of the luthras are evil so dnt worry.. kunj will soon realise his love for twinkle but for that u need to keep reding my ff…

  3. sam on March 7, 2016 5:12 pm

    its nyc….. i love it plz always continue like this and yeah ur story line is totally diff. frm tashan-e-ishq…….

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:47 pm

      Ya its completely different n thank god that u all liked it..yah it will remain same but the trio will face some ups n downs…

  4. Rashi verma on March 7, 2016 5:14 pm

    No Lara u r not boring……ur ffs are good…..

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:48 pm

      Thank u so much rashi verma…

  5. muski on March 7, 2016 5:16 pm

    no its nt boring its amazing and really different …
    best of luck 4 nxt epi

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:43 pm

      Thanks mukshi

  6. Star ( Dayne Reddy ) on March 7, 2016 5:18 pm

    Nice episode Lara ! keep going…
    oopppss ! one request, cn write in eng… I mean in brackets !

    • lara on March 7, 2016 6:27 pm

      Thanks a lot star…

  7. Star ( Dayne Reddy ) on March 7, 2016 5:18 pm

    *cn u write in eng..

  8. Aruhi on March 7, 2016 5:22 pm

    Hey its amazing you should definitely keep writing..I’m in love with your story..so great and epic..lovely and marvelous..wow incredible..can you check out a new story “music sheet” it’s written by bella..it’s really good..and you are amazing..love you

    • lara on March 7, 2016 6:29 pm

      Thank u so much aruhi.. I searched for your MUSIC SHEET but I could not find it so can give the link of that… once again thank a lot…

  9. komal on March 7, 2016 5:32 pm

    Awesome lara dil jeet liya mera.. well done keep rocking..

    • lara on March 7, 2016 6:29 pm

      Thank u so much komal…

  10. Ff reader on March 7, 2016 5:34 pm

    Well ur episode is really awesome it like zara sa hatke types..please upload next episode soon….

    • lara on March 7, 2016 10:59 pm

      Thanks ff Reader

  11. chandra on March 7, 2016 5:35 pm

    oee . luv u lara

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:49 pm

      Thanks chandra n luv u all…

  12. tara on March 7, 2016 5:38 pm

    wow lara..what a start…epic!!
    plzz post the next part..

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:49 pm

      Omg… Thank u so much tara

  13. naira on March 7, 2016 5:43 pm

    Nice episode lara keep going…..

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:50 pm

      Thank you naira

  14. Aakanksha on March 7, 2016 6:21 pm

    Awesome yaar lara

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:50 pm

      Thank you akanksha…

  15. Shanaya on March 7, 2016 6:34 pm

    Its amazing!!!! I loved it!!
    Keep writing!! 🙂

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:49 pm

      Thanks shanaya…

  16. sanam on March 7, 2016 7:44 pm

    awesome lara

    • lara on March 7, 2016 8:48 pm

      Thanks sanam…

  17. prapti on March 7, 2016 9:59 pm

    school luv…that’s so sweet….keep going lyk this.. adb

    • lara on March 8, 2016 12:06 am

      Thank u prapti

  18. Meenat Abubakar on March 7, 2016 10:41 pm

    No worries lara we luv it, so cotinue. Stay happy

    • lara on March 8, 2016 12:06 am

      Thanks for ur concern n suppourt meenat…

  19. Angel on March 7, 2016 10:56 pm

    Wow lara a completely different story ? jus loving it…keep gng n upload the next episode asap

    • lara on March 7, 2016 11:01 pm

      Sure.. N thanks a lot angel

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