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Here is the review of Friendship, love & nothing else written by a very amazing writer Anokhi .

TITLE - I really like ur title .It (See more) is different & suit ur story very well.

CONCEPT - Your concept is very simple nothing new but it's very appealing . You know how to make ur reader fall in love with the characters . An amazing thing is that all the characters are positive .The bond between them is really good.All the four leads Arnav,Shruti, Swadheenta & Sid are actually complimented each other & different in their behaviour .

DIALOGUES - Some dialogues are on point & u really write well . I suggest u to add some intense dialogues for Arnav's character as his character is deep .

WRITING - Girl, u get a great sense of humour .Every & each scene is so funny & cute .As u say , it's a romantic comedy , I must say it is indeed consist humour & romance .You are using short forms of words .Try to avoid them . I love how u sometime add comedy in serious situations in your ff .That's pretty cool.

STORY MOULDING - I love how your story moving forward .I don't say much because there are only some parts but u are really going very well.You make me fall in love with Shruti's character.Such a cute character she is .

FLAWS - I think you have to avoid short forms & please read once your article before submitting if u have time because there are few grammatical errors .Don't worry ,they are common . I am just suggesting u .You can add some heart touching dialogues for Arnav as I say .

I must say , u deserve more response but she can't get it . Please don't feel disappointed dear. Your story is very cool. Those who love romance & a lot of comedy ,Please follow her ff.

Rating - 8/10

Hope u don't feel demotivating . Whenever u update , don't forget to send me the link.I would love to comment . I can't believe that it is ur first fiction .You have a great talent .Keep writing & Take care .

Stay safe & Stay blessed

Regards

Hania
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VHM
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VHM great review @Hania and all the very best author @Anokhi21
Anokhi21
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Anokhi21 Tq so much VHM
Hania
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Hania Thanks VHM . That's really sweet of u
Anokhi21
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Anokhi21 Hania dr...This means so much to me...and i m really glad that u like my fanfiction...i'll try to correct my flaws in my upcoming parts...No,i did not get heart,but i m overwhelmed...Tq for revewing it in ur busy schedule...
Anokhi21
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Anokhi21 Sorry...its i did not get hurt...
Hania
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Hania Thank u dear for understanding dear & Wishing u a lot of sucess in future.

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