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Home»Fan Fiction Original»ACLS HERO’S POV part -5 FAMILY….
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ACLS HERO’S POV part -5 FAMILY….

administratorBy administratorFebruary 13, 201625 Comments3 Mins Read
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If you hate someone here is what you will say
“Main chandramukhi tu surajmukhi
main tuzse dukhi tu muzse dukhi
1 kam kar building se kudkar marja
Tu bhi sukhi main b sukhi”
😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
“Log kehte hai pyar itna bhi mat karo ki
Girlfriend sar pe swaar ho jaye,
Hum kehte hain pyar itna karo ki
Girlfriend ki friend bhi
Humhare saath fraar ho jaye”
???????????
I dunno why, but I felt peace hearing that happy voice,
May be just I was talking to someone after long…………
A long phase of sadness……
That day I had a smile on my face, after long which attracted my family’s attention towards me,
They irritated me till bi spitted out the whole matter to them…….
All I said was “was just talki’n to a friend, she ……….”
That word that word I mean when I spoke the word ‘SHE’ ……..
Woot ……….. wooting sounds were heard……..
And a well synchronized OMG!!!!she woah!! A girlll……..
Geez even my parents !!! so …. It was so………….

Dunno what to do….. I went red with anger and they thought it to be a blush………….
I left the room irritated, they thought I was shy…………..
Well somehow , my step bro, I call him franky as he is……..
He is quite frank, a big freak, friendly, and likes Frankenstein…….
So somehow franky was able to trespass and that day I had to bear him all night,
Teasing, blabbing, snatching stuff, invading my cupboard, forcefully capturing my bed and what not….
Ahh!!! Please save me my lord______________
PlEaSe…………….. I WiLL go mad ……………..
Franky Please Yeah!! You stop it , or else………….i shouted
But he carried on his nuisance and asked me or else………..W………..H…………A…….T ….BRRRROOOOOOO
That too a stretched a really stretched broooooo ………,
I liked it really liked it at least someone called me brooo…. Though it was a teasing and irritating brooo
Really if it were someone else teasing me R.I.P that poor soul,
Hmmmm………………….

Somehow that bickering night passed,
That small argument with him wasn’t so bad after all I enjoyed , and laughed after a blue moon ,
Well if he can tease me I am none the less ……………………..
I teased him on his cRuSh ………….. that blushing red face, those shy gestures and murmur ,
That thing I just made a video of that , and a new baggage ready for teasing anddd……. blackmailing…..
Was that evil? Was that bad??
Nope that was brotherhood………… brothers love ………….
Though the next day I was forced to, meet questions, and extra attention,
But …………
I was there ,
Yes …….. I was there with my family ………..
“Together as a family”
And we shared sweet family moments together,
Brotherly teasing, motherly worry, fatherly strictness,
AND……………

Their these few things kept us like …..
pearls of a necklace which are bound by a single thread……………..
as one single, united family with understanding……….
just wanted to cherish those moments………
all thanx to “her”………….

~~~~~~~~~THANK YOU~~~~~~~~~~~~
(‘.’)>’\(‘,’ )

kabhi to kisi ki
dulhaniya banogi

is ( gadhe) se shadi krogi? ?
(\./)/”?——;”;
\,,/”( , ….., )\\
.…..//\\””//\\
******

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25 Comments

  1. Ruby on February 13, 2016 7:24 am

    richu aise propose karegi to sare gadhe aa jayenge shadi karne 😛 I am not joking I am serious 😛 😀

    as usual it was awesome like u.. love u sweetheart

  2. dia on February 13, 2016 8:03 am

    Nahi richa balike, m isse vivah nahi karugi, iski shadi kumari MOSMF se karva dijiye, vahi iske layak hai….adhyay bahut achha aivam bhavukta pradan karne vala tha

  3. richa on February 13, 2016 9:04 am

    Rubi g problem yeh hai ki pura gaana 1 video bhi tha but edit ho gya tu waalon k haathon 😛 (>.<) actuly gadha grop maar rha tha propose day mis ho gya na toh V D se phle just a try
    lol lov u too
    dia balikd vivaah kar lo kush rakkega gadi ka kharcha bckega sara saama uthayega aur kamega (ง'-')ง hai muscular h popular……
    Kumari MOSMF kaun h?
    Aur i m xpecting angry visitors nish ameena nd natty bhut galiyan nikali mm fan page pe 😛 anyways were r they h evn gave link and lort page link myself 😉

  4. richa on February 13, 2016 9:51 am

    Lol hope jiju’s wont kill ma sweet dnkey for proposing ma sisies lol

  5. Lakshmi on February 13, 2016 9:57 am

    Superb richa. All the best for ur future dear. Luv u ..tc… Bye..

  6. richa on February 13, 2016 10:09 am

    Thank u lakshmi dr ☺ lol tc by c u soon

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    bheno is gadhe ka dij mat todna koi toh marry him

  7. Devga on February 13, 2016 10:47 am

    Richu y such a scarryyyyy pic my creature …. Haha proved to B a creature ….. Just kidding dear …..

    Hero pov is good ….. If it was first then awesome …. Ok did u read my comment on EHT?

    Ok way was tht donkey Propose? And for who ?? Hehehe Ruby said that right sare gadhe aa jayenge …. Lol

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:27 pm

      didnt u freak out?? anywaysss i m a bit stressed sooo just put it LOL

  8. dia on February 13, 2016 11:03 am

    Miss over smart meddling freak

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:28 pm

      using my story dilog on me sarkaari karamchaari 😛

  9. Ananya on February 13, 2016 11:08 am

    Richa its gud.. Loved reading Boy’s POV…

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:29 pm

      thanxx a lotdr keep reading LOL srry 4 late reply

  10. richa on February 13, 2016 11:09 am

    Oh minnal thats to scare natty nd nish © ®™
    nd yup i read nd replied ☺
    also prop is for all my ssies lol hope jiju’s wont kill him

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 3:34 pm

      jiju nahi marega par me tujhe marungi…richu ek kam karo..tu hi accept kar lo gadhe ki proposal..vo khush ho jayega o_O 😛 😀

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:31 pm

      (-_-) jijjuu jijju dekho rubi di meli shaadi gadhe se kla rahi h?? dnt mind LOL anyways jijju killl gadha he is flirting ur sissies 😛

  11. manha on February 13, 2016 11:44 am

    richuuuuu sorry dear. I didn’t see this. when did u start writing hero’s p.o.v. No worries i will read all previous chap today. Hero is so naughty. It was too gud. I loved it. sorry again.

    Kaha kaha se shayri dhund lati ho tum. pehle wali toh mashaallah. kya thi. ke mujhe tum pasand nahi ho is liye tum marjao. hehee. Aur dusri wali toh what gf ke saath friend bhi fraar ho jaye. Oh itna saara pyaar. Uff bear nahi kar sakte. lol.

    U r awesome dear. loveeeeeee u so much.

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:39 pm

      eyyyyyyy manha daaarling no matter sweety and i never told u ok and missd u a loooot and i thot u were busyyy a bit sooo
      aso i commented miss u manhu on last chap i think 🙂
      LOL yaar shaayari shayar se chura k laati hu 😛 aur yaar yeh sab samajh nahii rahe gadha inhe prop maar rha h aur ye mera risha krwaa rahe he 😛 LOL keep reading and reveiw last chaps and tell me here hw were theyy

  12. nisha on February 13, 2016 2:18 pm

    aRE RICHA EE KAA BOLAT HO TUM

    tUMHARI KHOPADIYAA KE KEEDE KAAA TOH AREE ITNA SARA GADHA KO PROPOSE KAROGI TOH gADHA KI TOH KISMAT HI KHUL JAAYEGEE

    sAMJHEE KEE NAAHI

  13. nisha on February 13, 2016 2:24 pm

    aRE TIME MILE TOH EHT ME JAANA UHAA BHI TUMRE LIYE EK MESSAGE CHODA HAI

    ARE O MANHA RAANI

    TUM KAAHA KAAHA GUM HO JAAT HO

    TUMHE PAIR ME PAHIYE LAAGAT HAI KAA SAMAJH ME NAAHI AAWAT KABHI EHA KABHI UHAA

    HUM TOH PAGLA GAYE RE PAGLI TOHE DHOOND DHOOND KE

    KITNA FIROO GEE PAGLEE

    ARE O PAGLI RICHA KAISAT HO THEEK KE NAAHI

    LAGTA HAI KHOPADEEYA ME DARD HAI TABHI LAAGAT HAI YEH BADEE YEH BADEE BADE SEENG DEKHAT HO

    ARE KISI GADHE NE DEKH LIYA TOH PROPOSE KAR DEGA SUNAT HO ARE HUMKA TOH TOHRI TITLI PIC HI PASAND THI

    E KA KHOPADEEYA DEKHAWAT HO

    ARE HUM TUM SABSE PYAAR KARAT HAI

    ARE TUM PYAAR KARBO KE NAAHI TUM JAANO

    TERI BHAIS KO ANDA MAARU

    ACHA AB HUMKAA JAAN HOGA PHIR AAYENGE

    ARE U KAA KEHT HAI ANGREJI MAA

    HAPY BHALENTIME DAY BAAA TUM SAB KA

    BAHUT BAHUT PYAAR

    SUPRABHAAT KUMARI RICHA, DEVGA, DIA, MANHA

    LUV U ALL.

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 3:32 pm

      it is too funny. ..apko bhojpuri b ati hai 😀

    • Devga on February 13, 2016 5:12 pm

      Nishu kya hogaya hey thume??? Kahin English gholiyon ki jagah Hindi gholiyon kha gayi kya ?? Lol anyways enjoyed it ……
      Happy valentines day to u too …. Love u ….
      P.s. : Gholiyon – here it means tablets dear …

    • richa on February 13, 2016 10:41 pm

      minnal goliyan hota hai h hta do LOL nd woh bhojpuri goli kha k aayi h

  14. richa on February 13, 2016 10:45 pm

    NISHAAA KI HUA BABBUA ?? TUMNE HUMRI BHAINSIA KO ANDAA KYU MAARA ??
    BECHARIIII 100% SUDHH SHAKAAHAARI THI..
    AUR HAAN HUMRA MAATHA THANAK GYA HAI TUMRA BHI THANKAI DENGE 😛
    HUM BILKUL MAST HAI TUM SUNAAOOOOOO???
    ARRE DAAKTER BATAO DIKHWA LENGE HUM
    HUM BHI SAB SE PYAAR KARAT HAIN UM AAPAN KHYAAL RAKHNAA
    THHEK HAI FIR RAM RAM 🙂

  15. Roma on February 16, 2016 10:15 pm

    Awesome episode richa my sweeeeeet friend. . . Loved it to the core ,the brother love n teasing….lovely cute fight n bonding with the family sooooooo cuteeeee. …n your jokes n shairee is mind blowing as always. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug. ..happy Valentine’s Day. …

    • richa on February 22, 2016 10:46 pm

      Thanxx nd sames to u ROMA and thanxx LOL

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