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ACLS HERO’S POV part -16- Horror Turned Love Story

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Aankhon mei nami thee,
Aur vitamin C kee kami thee,
Wah wah!
Aankhon mei nami thee,
Aur vitamin C kee kami thee,
Jisski saari raat chatting main burai kee,
Wo is baar girlfriend hi thee…..”
DIAA for u…
Na Muskurane Ko Jee Chahta Hai,
Na Kuch Khane-Peene, Na Sone Ko Jee Chahta Hai,
Ye Garmi Ab Bardaast Nahi Hoti,
Sab Chhod Kar Ab Shimla Chale Jane Ko Jee Chahta Hai……….
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It was morning time , the sun rose high I woke up as the sun rays hit me on my eyes,
Then looking at my wall clock I realized , I was late very- very late ,
OMG!!! It’s twelve already and I …….
I sprung out of my bed and, ran outside, it was ………………
It was………….
HORRIBLE…….
The scene outside was soo horrible to look at…………..
The house was scattered…………….
The household items all either broken or scattered on the floor ,
The whole house was a mess………………
There wasn’t , even place to step……………
As I moved forward I could feel something wet under my feet, and as I looked down .
HUFF!!! Just ketchup,
And I continued my journey towards my parents room whose door was slightly open,
And again something wet , and as a looked down OMGG!!!BLOOD!!!
I was scared and then a sharp pain in my other foot,
It was just a glass piece that had cut through my flesh and my foot was bleeding…..
But there was blood near their door too…………………
I hurried there , and ……..

On ,my way I fell down and hurt myself something just came under my foot that made me fall down..
And it was……………
GULP!!!!!!
It was Dad’s A-A-ARM …
He was lying as dead man on the floor lifeless!!!!
I mean he didn’t even wakeup , then even then then e-e-even when I fell on him or stepped on his arm so I assumed him to be………….

I hastily got up and rushed towards the room, it was becoming hard to move, may be because of weakness or someone was holding me from behind…
I didn’t even gave a look back and with my all the remaining power rushed towards the door no room and……………..
And hit myself with the DARWAAZA (door)
And with teary eyes I looked at them , and almost brokedown
I shook Franky horribly and . looked at mum and kissed her forehead,
Franky , Franky just Wakeeee up………….
W…………..A……………..K……………………E…………….U…………….P
B…………….R……………..O……………..
I cried and he didn’t woke up………….
Mum hugged me and kissed me Teary eyed……………
And a gentle slap on my cheek and said Hush!!!! Don’t………….

Ok speaking fully actually after or during mine and franky’s fight that never ends he ran to save himself and banged his hear on the door’s pointed decorated part and bled badly, and thus, there was blood on the door…..
😛 😛 😛 😛
And the hard , move moving thing well it was Daddy holding me from behind asking me to stop and let them sleep…………….
He had to to sleep outside as Franky slept with mum , and I had locked my room and wasn’t waking up,
I really missed opening the latch part and more……
The broken ketchup bottle well, it broke during our brotherly fight, and as he got hurt soo no time to collect it…………
And a paining foot and forehead , and sleeplessness were the cause of tears
Oh sleeplessness , mmmm I was just staring at herrr pic I took at the resort, and we talked almost..,
And I said dad was lying like a………. not was a……………..
And MUM was teary eyed because while waking up Franky I just……. Mmm……..
It was quite and late BCOZZZ all were up late night looking after him , and dad had to sleep down bcozz the DOC. Who treated Franky also slept in our house in the guest room…..

Any point I missed to describe don’t let me know guess yourself…………..LOL LOL

Guess why didn’t Franky wake up??
…………………………….
LOL LOL nish here was a horror version 4 u 😛 😉
LOL sorry for soo manytypos in last chap keep reading and cmmnt plss , otherwise it makes me feel I m writing a booring book nd cooking u… LOL and Lakshmi dr and rubi u both disappeared where??
Nish diaa Roma tumhaare cmmnts pe main vaari vaari, yun hi chalti rahegi humari masti bhri ……yaari/swaari
Minnal n krishy GGM i.E. get good marks  and all examoholis ppl GGM , BOL i.e. best of luck….

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4 Comments

  1. dia on February 28, 2016 9:45 am

    Dii max temp. here for today is 15

    • richa on February 28, 2016 10:14 pm

      ooo nys dr here i dunno 🙁 keep readin nd cmmnting dr 🙂

  2. Natasha on February 28, 2016 12:00 pm

    richa ur ff is horror type. i must say that ur ff is different from otrhers as its a horror story. i love to read horror stories as well as to see them. i wish i could meet a ghost. i would give him a punch saying why u scare people? if u want richa u can accompany me in beating the ghosts. what say?

    richa love very much. i have noticed that u sometimes show ur cute anger to me. this makes me to love u more.

    • richa on February 28, 2016 10:18 pm

      finally finnaly miss vip uhere well i dont do thatonly on u bt all and its lov stry dr 😛 ant i gotta c tym dr i wont scatre or punch out of number and uurself asked me link in one of ue update ok ne keep readingg

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