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The Abyss – Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

Aashi9By Aashi9July 11, 201741 Comments2 Mins Read
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The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

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The sound of rain drops echoed around the mansion. It was the month of July so it was a common sight in Mumbai. In the stillness of late afternoon, a heart raged as the tears collected in his deep brown eyes.
Another day ,alone. His head rested on the so-familiar table looking outside watching the raindrops as they crashed against the window-sill of his own personal gallery. His brother was out with his hate-love partner; his lips smiled as he thought about them. His younger brother & sister were having a fest at their college so were preparing for it. On usual days, he welcomed this kind of solitude but today he felt lonely; something his therapist had advised him to avoid.

His only source of motherly affection- his dadi had taken ill all of a sudden that morning & was at the hospital; he was worried, scared. He was intimidated by the fact that the fragile lady can leave them any time. He shuddered at the mere thought of it, his fear almost overwhelmed him. Hastily, dazed, he picked up the bottle of his prescribed medicine kept near the table & swallowed one, taking a huge gulp of water. He walked restlessly through the length of the room trying to calm himself. Emotionally over-whelmed , he sat huddled by the window sill as his tears rolled down
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Hello This is Aashi. I’m a new member here & this is my first fan fiction, actually my only piece of writing other than my school essays. I’d be very grateful if u read this & comment your views.
Thank You everyone,
By Aashi.

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    41 Comments

    1. nikita_jai29 on July 11, 2017 9:10 am

      It is awesome dear… Please continue

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 11:07 am

        Thank u so very much Nikita di
        Plz continue to read and comment ??

    2. fffan1234 on July 11, 2017 9:57 am

      Superb start dear. Please continue soon.

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 11:09 am

        Thanks Asmi di
        Hope u would the story
        Keep reading and commenting

    3. Aarti32 on July 11, 2017 10:44 am

      It’s abt Omkara right?? But Ishkara or gaukara or just Omkara​??

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 11:11 am

        Yes its about Om
        Read the nxt chapter to know more
        Thanx for commenting
        Keep reading & giving ur views on the story

    4. alekhika20 on July 11, 2017 11:12 am

      Nyc prologue

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 11:19 am

        Thanks di
        Keep reading ?☺?

    5. Aashi26 on July 11, 2017 11:30 am

      Aashi dear you are a incredible writer……the way you expressed your ideas and imaginations into words were just beautiful………looking forward to read more of your writings dear……

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thank u, Thank u
        Aap sab ki hi to kripa hai ?????

    6. Shraddha-DBO on July 11, 2017 12:11 pm

      Beautiful style of writing…
      Really excited for upcoming parts…..
      Waiting dear?

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 9:25 pm

        Thank u di…. Will try updating soon

    7. Zaveesha on July 11, 2017 12:12 pm

      Good start dear…
      All the best…

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thank you Zaveesha di
        Will try updating soon ???

    8. Niriha on July 11, 2017 2:21 pm

      Awesome

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 6:34 pm

        Thank you ?

    9. ishana24 on July 11, 2017 2:46 pm

      Amazing start, dear.. looking forward your upcoming chapters..

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 6:35 pm

        Thankx Ishu di?
        Will update soon ??

    10. Sagithya on July 11, 2017 4:20 pm

      Awesome yaar… Pls continue ….

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank you Sagithya di
        I’ll try not to be late
        Thanx for commenting

    11. CrazygirlS.P on July 11, 2017 5:58 pm

      Fantastic

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thank u… Di nd happy birthday again… ???

      • CrazygirlS.P on July 11, 2017 9:34 pm

        Thanks a lot Aashi, love you and I’m waiting for your story?????

    12. Yashu on July 11, 2017 6:22 pm

      I loved it….ur writing style is awsm…..loved it……eagerly waiting for nxt episode…..post it asap……

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 9:31 pm

        Thanx Yashu…. ????
        Will try updating soon… ???

    13. Shona on July 11, 2017 6:55 pm

      Superb start, Aashi. ??☺
      Intense and thoughful Om, just as I like him
      Plz update soon……

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 9:33 pm

        Thank u #di…. ???
        Hope u like d story…. I’ll try updating soon…

    14. VHM on July 11, 2017 8:02 pm

      Awesome start Aashi…sorry for posting my opinion late…but i loved the prologue and i am looking forward to read the next episodes….way to go girl…all the best !!!

      • Aashi9 on July 11, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thank u… VHM di…
        I’ll try updating soon
        Nd hope u like d story… Nd take care of urself… ???????

    15. Banita on July 11, 2017 10:27 pm

      Amazinggg prologue dr…. Waiting 4 nxt…

      • Aashi9 on July 12, 2017 12:15 am

        Thank you so very much Banita
        I’ll try updating tonight 😀

    16. shivikajkmn on July 13, 2017 12:29 am

      Nice one dear

      • Aashi9 on July 13, 2017 1:16 am

        Thank you shivika di
        I’ve updated the 1st chapter; it’s in pg. 7
        keep reading & commenting

    17. fenil on July 14, 2017 1:12 am

      Awesome
      loved it.
      Its Om.

      • Aashi9 on July 16, 2017 12:33 am

        thank you Fenil bhaiya
        nxt part is updated

    18. Samm on July 14, 2017 3:02 am

      i’m in love with your writing. please post chapter3 asap. waiting 🙂

      • Aashi9 on July 16, 2017 12:34 am

        thank you so very much Samm

    19. Ankita27 on July 14, 2017 5:41 pm

      Great start…

      • Aashi9 on July 16, 2017 12:35 am

        Thank you Ankita di

    20. Diyaa on July 18, 2017 7:02 am

      Ok found it ?You have the gift of heart-touching expression Aashi. The words you use to describe Om’s emotions and condition are so clear and vivid. Really nice!

      • Aashi9 on July 19, 2017 11:18 pm

        I’m glad you found it as I am not able to provide the link
        hope you like the upcoming chapters

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