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Home»Fan Fiction»About love!!! 2S by ‘Anonymousaa’ *Last part*
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About love!!! 2S by ‘Anonymousaa’ *Last part*

AnonymousaaBy AnonymousaaNovember 21, 201724 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello frenz.It’s me Anonymousaa back with the last part of my 2S.
Let’s begin it, then bakbak at end of the shot.

Tring….Tring…Tring…Tring….
The phone rang as Sanchi was resting at her home.Ishagya and Veer had been discussing what to do when Sanchi answered the phone.
Let the caller be C and Sanchi be S (I remembered x and y in Mathematics.??)
S-Hello
C-Sanchi Mishra tumhe mein help kar sakta hoon.

S-Jee koun?
C-Your wellwisher.Agar Dr.Malhotra ke khilaaf saboot chaiye toh abc godown, xyz chowk right now.I will be waiting for u.
S-Hello,Who r u, tell clearly.

The phone beeped, she found it had already been hung up.

Sanchi’s POV- Who can that be?Why will that person want to help me?Do I know him?But I have no time.My pappa’s dreams should get fulfilled at any cost.I should go to meet him come what may.

She stood up.Trio asked-Sanchi where??

Sanchi-No guys I can’t tell u now.I need to go right now.It is urgent.We will talk later.
She rushed outside.Veer followed her.

Veer-Wait Sanchi,I will drop u.
Sanchi-No Veer.I can go at my own.

Veer-I know u r trying to be cold.But I won’t force my decisions upon u.After all my dad did u might not want to even see my face but ur friendship is being consolation for me.Can we remain friends forever?

Sanchi-Hmm….Now I have to go.

She hurried outside.
She got into an auto and directed the driver.She got down the place and looked around for abc godown.
There it is- she exclaimed and entered the godown.

She entered the hall to see a man facing backwards.

Let M be the man now.
M-Welcome Sanchi Mishra.Toh finally tum aagayi.Tumhe kuch nhi karna bas ek video banwani hai.Mein Dr.Malhotra se sach ugalwalunga aur tum video banalo.Police ko bhi phone karlena.Jaroorat padegi.

Sanchi-But risk…….
M-Where do u have no risk?Everyday we drive cars ride bikes with risk.Accidents happen but that doesn’t mean we need to avoid vehicles.

He turned towards her.Tall body,strong physique, but with a mask on face.No idea about handsome or ugly.
He removed the mask to reveal beard and moustache.
M-I have my own safety measures too.This mini camera on my jacket.U can stay here and from the window take video.Our goal is same so we can support each other.

Sanchi-All the best friend!
He felt touched.
M-Take care Mishri!!!
Sanchi-Hmm..

The man went outside and saw Anand present there already.

M-Welcome Dr.Malhotra.I suppose now u r ready to sign the deal about the smuggling of drugs.
Anand-As long as I get a fat profit,I can support u.
M-But how can I believe u?Have u done something of that sort???
Anand-Haha I am the mastermind behind Dr Sunil Mishra’s death,Jaya’s accident,Savitri going to coma, even I handle the smuggling business there and I had cut Sanchi Mishra’s name purposedly.
Now do u think it Is not enough to develop a film?

The man looked puzzled.

Anand-What about that camera on ur jacket.

Anand pulled the camera out crushed it between the fingers and smirked.

Sanchi was making the video still When she thought of something,something that carried no significance earlier but now……
The man had said-Take care Mishri..!!!
MISHRI!!!!The words that only a pair of lips could utter.She was startled.So fearing for that man’s life,she got down and ran to the door.

She reached the door to just hear a gunshot.Dhiskyaoon….and the man fell down through air.She looked up to see Anand having fired the pistol at his chest.
She at once shouted Dr.Kabiiiiiiiir!!!

Anand-Ab Kabir marjayega.My reign will remain intact.Tum dekhti rehjaogi.

Sanchi reached Kabir.She fell down..she put Kabir’s head on her lap and started crying.
Sanchi-Aapko kuch nhi hoga Dr.Kabir.
Anand-Agar mein naa hone doon toh na ..??
Sanchi-Ab aap kuch nhi karpayenge shivaay regret aur prayashchit.

U r under arrest-Police came to Anand.
Anand-U can’t arrest me without proofs.
Sanchi-Inspector!!!

She handed her mobile having recorded complete confession.

Inspector-It is a solid proof.Now no one can save u from laws Mr. Malhotra…… Constable! handcuff him.

They arrested Anand while Sanchi cried inconsolably seeing Kabir smiling at her and closing his eyes.
Ambulance came and took Kabir away.

AFTER 6 hrs in OT

Sanchi-Doctor,how is he?
Doc-I am s…..orry.We have perhaps lost the best surgeon in India.
Sanchi-Wh.. aaaa…tttt d….ooo uuuuu mm….ean?
Doc-We have removed bullet from his body but his heart isn’t responding.As per medical sciences we should declare him de…. Hope u understand.

Doc moved away.

Sanchi was dumbstruck.Her Kabir who had given away his life for her couldn’t leave her,he shouldn’t.

Sanchi-No….Dr.Kabir!

She entered the OT to see her beloved lying unconscious.He showed no movements.She came and sat beside him.

Sanchi-Do u think u can leave me like this Dr.Kabir?You can’t.I won’t let u go.U can’t leave me alone at this point of life.Samajhgaye…..!!!!!(She started crying hysterically when still Kabir showed no movements)Tum mujhe chhod ke nhi jaa sakte Kabir kyunki mein tumse pyaar karti hoon.Humein saath mein jeena hai Kabir.Plz Kabir wapas aao….??? I LOVE YOU KABIIIIIR !!!!

Temple bells started ringing.???

She felt a movement.She looked to see Kabir moving his fingers.I won’t write she felt happy coz her happiness won’t be content in words so u may understand.

Kabir moaned-Sanchii, kya tum ho?Mujhe chhod ke jaana mat.Mein tumhare bagair jee nhi sakta.

Sanchi kissed his forehead.The magic worked.Kabir opened his eyes.?

Sanchi-Ab kese ho tum Kabir?
Kabir-Isse pehle ka toh pata nhi per ab tumhe yese baat karte sun bhut achchha lagrha hai.Yese lagraha hai jese ek dost milgayi.

Sanchi(Folding her arms)-Dost!!! Friendzoned!!!!????
Kabir-Nhi Sanchi achchha bolo kya banna hai, behen??????
Sanchi-Phirse hospital admit hone ka iraada hai?
Kabir:Sorry Sanchi.
Sanchi-Toh apni Mishri ko propose nhi karoge?
Kabir-Mishri ne friendzoned kardiya.
Sanchi-Ab nhi karegi.
Kabir-Matlab???
Sanchi-Matlab…..
She came closer and gave a peck on his cheeks.
Kabir was like ???

Sanchi-I love u Kabir sooooooo much!!!Khudse bhi zyaada!!
Kabir(Happiness no bounds)-Love u too Sanchi.
Then they had a passionate liplock.

Kabir-Ab Dr.Malhotra gaye jail toh aage ka kya plan hai??

Sanchi-Mujhe toh do bachche chaiye beta ka naam Sabir beti ka naam Kanchi.

Kabir-???☺☺?

THE END!!!

Finally the end.
My bakbak:
I did it finally.Trying to write these ffs during college days is too difficult.The schedule is too hectic that u never know.
Hope I could meet ur expectation.If u felt the incidents cliched then I am sorry but tellyworld mein chalta hai yeh sab.

Thanks to everyone who commented, liked, disliked my previous shot and the silent readers too.I have just been through the comments.I will try to reply asap.
So frenz like/dislike and if possible plz comment.Plz give ur views.Criticisms r always welcome.DO give ur opinion!!Sorry for the typo errors.
So bye…tc…luv uh alll a much more than a lot.

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Anonymousaa

    A bubbly girl full of bakbak capacity The credit goes to my #vikramsakhalkararmy A diehard fan of Vikram Sakhalkar Instagram: @vikramsakhalkar_obsessed

    24 Comments

    1. Amnaa on November 21, 2017 11:24 am

      Amazing dear…… So sweet…… Loved it

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:12 pm

        Thank u sooo much Amnaa.Glad that u liked it.

    2. swethaa on November 21, 2017 11:42 am

      awesome dear
      and especially last two parts are awesome
      friendzone behen hahahaa
      and beta ka nam sabir and beti kanchi
      loved it dear

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thank u Sweetie!!

    3. Priyanshipp on November 21, 2017 12:37 pm

      Gajab bibu. Yaar tune to kamal kar diya. Or ending kya mast tha. Mujhe itna acha laga ki maine ise 2 baar padha. Luv u sweetie. Ab jldi se dusra likhna start kar de wrna tera jaan kha jayegi ye naagin ?? . Luv u meri bibu ☺??

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:16 pm

        I am literally on cloud nine reading ur comment.Thank u meri pyaari naagin.
        Ab yeh toh mushqil se complete kar payi hoon dusra ka toh sochna padega.
        Nyway love uh tooo a lot Priyu!!!❤❤❤

    4. Dhruti on November 21, 2017 1:06 pm

      superb, emotional and funny(specially last wala part) ff………………..i’m just enjoyed it………………..kash esa hi kuch show me bhi ho………….he he he………….love you a lot and come back asap and post next one story asap………………tc………………….

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:17 pm

        Thank u Dhruti!!!
        I will think about next post though I can’t guarantee.
        Love uh too a lot and tc.

    5. Anu88 on November 21, 2017 1:44 pm

      So so beautiful and amazing story yaar……….sanchi ka last dialogue is rock?????and kabir is shocked?????????…………

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:19 pm

        Awww…ur sense of humour is soo gud dear.Thanx a lot Anu.

    6. Niyati on November 21, 2017 2:33 pm

      Amazing dear …beautifully written & last dialogue ? ? ….u just nailed it ….lots of love ?

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:20 pm

        Thanx a lotttt Niyu!!!
        Luv uh a lot!!!

    7. Anee on November 21, 2017 3:31 pm

      amazinggggggggg..loved it…and luv u….good work.

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:21 pm

        Thank u very very much Anee❤❤❤

    8. Ziyarasheed on November 21, 2017 5:45 pm

      Nice one dear. All my anger towards kabir in the previous episode melted away after reading this. Keep writing….?

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:23 pm

        Aww…thank u Ziya.Kabir shouldn’t be portrayed bad anywhere I think???.Being a Kanchi fan even more not.
        I will try to write more.Luv uh soo much!

    9. niyaaa on November 21, 2017 8:08 pm

      Amaz Bibu ky kiya tune meri hasi rukne ka naam nahi le rahi..kitna achcha ho agar show m aisa kuch dikhte to..last part hilarious tha ab tak nhi bhul paa rahi..too gud..loved it.. kamaal kar dita tune vampire…zombie khush hua..haha..ppsy something new..wo bhi fatafat..???

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:25 pm

        Aww…ur comment made my night dear?.Glad that u liked it.Arey wah Zombie khush hui ab party milegi???

    10. Divya on November 22, 2017 6:04 am

      Awesome super fabulous fantastic

      • Anonymousaa on November 22, 2017 10:19 pm

        Thank uh Divya!!

    11. Abhilasha on November 24, 2017 6:21 pm

      Ana………kya khu……bolti band h yr………it was damn good and proposal was ????????……means romance in comedy !!!!!!! Loved it yr!!!! Luv uh!!!¡

      • Anonymousaa on December 1, 2017 1:47 pm

        Kuch mat kaho.Tumhari aankhon pe sab dikhti hai….seems filmy na.?
        Glad that u liked it.???
        Luv uh tooooo a lot Abhi!❤❤❤❤

    12. riyarocks on November 28, 2017 6:42 pm

      Bibu………bachhe, tune iss brahmrakshas ka dil jeet liya………ab kya kahoon, thoda laalchi hoon, isliye chahti hoon, ki tu aise aur updates, os ho ya ff likhti reh, but jab time mile………luv u meri vampu……..

      • Anonymousaa on December 1, 2017 1:50 pm

        Dil jeet li toh treat toh banti hai na.Kab bularahi hai dairy milk silk party pe?
        Arey comment reply karneko toh bas ab time mili hai.Articles likhna toh dooooor ki baat hai.Phir bhi try karungi.
        Nyway very happy that u liked this.Luv uh toooo a lot meri brahmrakshasu.

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