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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»abhi na jao chor ke (Intro Part 2)
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abhi na jao chor ke (Intro Part 2)

administratorBy administratorMay 16, 2016Updated:May 16, 201622 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys i m again here with the secnd part of my story. Hope u all r lyking the track of their school days.
I wll defenetly try to keep reality in my story.

As i hv mntnd in the frst part that suman n shravan r stdnts of class seventh, they are now promoted to class eighth aftr there annual exam. And today sumo is going to her new school which is none othr than shravan’ s school. She is excited for her frst day bt on the same tym nrvs to face the new classmates. She hd heard that the stdnts are violnt as well as misbehavd.
“Mummy i m really gettng nrvs today”suman said sadly.
Mumma – you r brave grl. N remembr one thing that wth your behaviour n study u cn easily and fastly make your place in d school. I believe in u.
Suman gave a fake smile.
Mumma cm fast i m late on the frst day. Plz cm na . Sumo shouted.
“Ya beta i m jst dn. Lets go dear.”
Mumma said.
Suman is a bit padhaku typ.
Aftr sm procedure at school offc she entered in her class room wth pumping hrt.
She hv a fatty bag, two chotees,n specs on eyes.
Teachr is already in class room. She entered. All studenys are staring her as if she is an allien.
Sir welcm her and ask her to take seat. Class room is bit small wth respect to no. of students. All the benches were full. She walked furthr in search of seat. Grl at the secnd last bnch offered her seat. She sat there.
“Oo see her hair so oily na ” ,
” ya n her bag is like that she had put her clothes too.”
Hahaha.
Suman cn hrd the whisperng sound all arnd her.
She did not see any boy face to face that day . She was although the topper of her class. Bt her cnfidnce level was vry low bcoz of increasd no. Of students.
Days passed, she got sm frnds. Bt most if thm were not reliable.

sry i m not movng d story vry fast. this track is very close to my heart so i dont want to open the twists suddenly.
in the nxt epi i would make suman n shravan intract.
as i m trying to keep the story close to reality u may not fnd fairy tch in this.
plz reply how u thnk about the story

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22 Comments

  1. lovely lady on May 16, 2016 7:18 am

    this was the lost part.
    it us between intro n epi 1

  2. shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 9:26 am

    wowwwwwwww ek dam awosome yar………….

    But as i already red meeting of sumo and shrvu haahahahhaha

    • lovely lady on May 16, 2016 10:17 am

      ya dear that twist was over.
      btw thanx a lot for liking….:)

  3. Abhi on May 16, 2016 9:35 am

    Ohh…Thats awesome…Now we got that completion..

    • lovely lady on May 16, 2016 10:21 am

      thnx dear.
      i was also disappointed by the lost part.i too feel good now:)

  4. lovely lady on May 16, 2016 12:21 pm

    is their missing somethng in my story i couldnt fnd much commnts
    plz suggest frnns if something is mising in my story

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 1:38 pm

      nop ur story is just perfect

      ther reason f less cmnts can be that thr no that much ff reader in edkv section may beee

  5. lovely lady on May 16, 2016 2:57 pm

    it may be dear.
    u pklz cntnue readng , cmmntng n supportng me

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 5:30 pm

      i will for sure 🙂

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 5:32 pm

      did u post epi 4

    • lovely lady on May 16, 2016 5:42 pm

      ya dear i hv snd it

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 5:56 pm

      okkkk

  6. lovely lady on May 16, 2016 5:45 pm

    which stream u were frm in 12 th

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 5:55 pm

      i did nt get yar???

    • lovely lady on May 16, 2016 6:05 pm

      i mean wht subjcts hv u taken

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 7:50 pm

      medical group means i,m suppose to be doc hahaha wish me luck
      and wbu?????

    • lovely lady on May 16, 2016 8:16 pm

      i m in maths grp n supposed to be engg
      all d bst dear
      wsh me too bcoz tommrw is my one entrance test.
      i cnt post tmmrw

    • shweeto/angel on May 16, 2016 8:52 pm

      ohhhhhh 🙂 wishing u all the luck of world 🙂
      will miss it tommorow

  7. NATASHA luvs NAMIK on May 17, 2016 8:20 pm

    good at last it came very nice

    • lovely lady on May 17, 2016 9:01 pm

      Sry i cnt get yiur wrds ……
      Btw thnx fr readng

  8. Karthik on May 23, 2016 4:19 pm

    And that was an awsm epiiiii…..you are juz rocking yaar..

    • lovely lady on May 23, 2016 7:48 pm

      Thanxxxx dear……

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