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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»abhi na jao chor ke ( epi- 8)
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abhi na jao chor ke ( epi- 8)

administratorBy administratorMay 28, 2016Updated:May 28, 201642 Comments3 Mins Read
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Me: Hey guys!!!
I m thank ful to all of u frm bottom of my heart…
This ff is really close to my heart bcoz it gave me so cute frns like u…
I remember the day whn i had started this ff.. i was new on this site. I dont kn any one. Bt today i hv got so many numbers of frns.. who understand me n support. Love u all a lot……….
Till now secret convo between swaria n shravan hv disturbed Suman. Swati hv told the matter of their convo bt Suman hv sm doubt….
Now,
Suman didnt get tym to discss abt that wd any one. Even she didnt gt tym to observe shravan’ s mood bcoz after two days of that convo their semester exam started n after it their vaccation was on …
Suman doubted swaria bt she thought why wll swati do bad wd her. She had blind trust over her frns..
After one month their school opened and also their coachng classes.
Suman was now less tensed abt that day. Wd tym her tension hv gone.
On the frst day when she entered the class she put her bag on d frst of the frst bnch. She noticed that shravan had also put his bag on the frst bnch of boys row bfr she had cm
( __Γ— Γ—__) lyk cross were seat of shraman.
[ this was d seat arrangemnt of class 8 in which their frndship started]
Whn Suman turned after keeping her bag she noticed shravan standing on the gate.
Shravan entered the room . No one was there except shraman. Suman smiled seeing her, bt he doesnt responded. He came n took gis bag n put it on another bnch wd a loud sound of dhammmm
Suman got frightened. She felt hurt by thus. It completemy seem like shravan hv changed his seat bcoz of Suman. Shravan suddnly went out after doung this. Suman remain stunned.
Whn teacher came……
” Suman hw was the exam? ? The resuts wll be published soon …..” teachr asked…
Suman – ya sir exam was good. Hope result will be good.
Shravan( in low voic)- ha paper easy tha sb ka acha gya h…..
Suman heard taunting him. She was shocked to see another face of shravan.
Now shravan’ s taunt over Suman was very Common.
Suman was more surprised than angry by this changed behaviour of shravan.
Suman – aree yaar swati kya ho gya h shravan ko. Wo itna strange kyu behave kr rha h.
Swati – to kya ho gya? ? Tujhe kya fark parta h ..
Suman – ni fr bhi use kuch to hua h na?? Shayad meri kisi bat ka bura laga ho??
Swati – tu hi na pareshan rhti thi ki itne rumours h. Ab dheere dheere rumours bhi khatm ho jayenge… tujhe to khush hona chahiye..
Suman ( in mind) hw shd i tell u every time whn i listen my name with shravan i felt so fortunate….
Whn ever he see me, i feel like i m in heaven. When ever he smile at me, i felt like i m over all this wrld.
Jiski ek muskuraht dekhne k liye pareshan rahte the aaj wahi meri hasi urane lga………
Suman was very tensed abt shravan’ s changed behaviour…………………

Plz guys tell me hw u like it. N if u want any improvemnt plz tell me….
sry this epi is very small

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42 Comments

  1. Ufaq on May 28, 2016 10:19 am

    Ur always awesome sorry to say BT don’t u think that shravu is a bit akro sorry
    Anyways do u have really a sis???

  2. shraman on May 28, 2016 10:46 am

    Amazing yr. Hoping for next ep. I hope shravan talks to sumo soon… Waiting to know the convo between them..

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 3:34 pm

      thnx fr liking the story…..
      keep readng

  3. Fatarajo on May 28, 2016 11:26 am

    Wow is great as usual lovely lady πŸ™‚

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 3:18 pm

      thnxxx fatarajo

  4. garvita on May 28, 2016 12:06 pm

    Nice episode I really like all ur fiction and big fan of this story
    Plz continue and keep it up

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 2:36 pm

      oo thn u were a slnt reader…..
      bt dear i wrt only this fiction….
      by the way thnx fr liking the story…
      bt plz cmmnt bcoz cmmnts r the energy boosters……….

  5. ufaq on May 28, 2016 1:47 pm

    That’s not fair why my comments r not posting

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 2:21 pm

      dont kn dear no bodys cmmnt is geetng posted.
      i hv also posted cmmnt on mil jate h jo bane … it is also not posted

  6. ufaq on May 28, 2016 2:33 pm

    The episode was awesome but sorry to say di don’t u think or shravan is a bit akro anyways awesome
    Do u HV any sister

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 3:17 pm

      thnx for liking d epi……
      bt shravan is not that much akru as u thnk……
      actualy his behavious is mysteirous…. bt he have also good shades that u wll fnd after one epi….
      i dont had any sis bt now i hv one… am i wrng ufaq ????

  7. ufaq on May 28, 2016 3:56 pm

    No I also don’t have any sister that’s y I have made u my sister my sweet di

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 4:25 pm

      ya ufaq…….
      btw i hope u r not hating shravan much….

  8. lovely lady on May 28, 2016 4:30 pm

    there is a ques for all my frns ufaq, angel, karthik bro, abhi…..
    plz answer it seriously… n honestly……..
    ..
    hv i made any mistake to wrt a real life story……

    • Abhi on May 28, 2016 4:58 pm

      No…not at all…Even i wrote my real life story as a os in this site but not on edkv…
      But why are you asking this question….??

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 5:15 pm

      nothing spcl …. aise hi pucha…
      mujhe lga ki kahi kisi ko secretly ye na lge ki ise real bta k cmmnts cllct kr rhi hu…..

    • Abhi on May 28, 2016 5:47 pm

      We trust you..we’ll not think like that….??

    • Karthik on May 31, 2016 12:13 pm

      Nai tho..bt y did u ask abt it

  9. Abhi on May 28, 2016 4:51 pm

    it was really awesome….but shravu’s changed behaviour ka reason??Waiting for knowing about it…Oh ,so you loved someone in your life..I don’t know why,iam feeling that this story is having a sad ending…Its just my feeling…Maybe i got this feeling because of the experiences which i had in my life,…
    Anyway,i hope shravu will not hurt sumo more.
    …

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 6:02 pm

      oo u had bad experience…
      i cnt shr much now to maintain the charm of the story……. i hope u dont mind

    • angel on May 28, 2016 8:08 pm

      i,m also feeling same as abhi

      but i wish it has happy ending
      if it has happy ending thn i,ll get some believe on love

      as for now i dont hv believe on it as i never saw real happy love stories

  10. Abhi on May 28, 2016 4:56 pm

    Laaa,Lovy ,lovely …pick up the name which you like from this…

    • angel on May 28, 2016 8:02 pm

      i will prefer lovy :*

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 9:50 pm

      thn abhi hw is lovy ….
      good na

  11. angel on May 28, 2016 5:58 pm

    nyc epi,,,,
    waiting for truth to be revealed πŸ™‚
    and waiting to see sweet side of sharvan as well πŸ˜‰

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 6:10 pm

      angel thnx fr liking the epi so much……..

      see abhi hv sggested some nicknames fr me…..
      plz hlp me out by suggesting one of thm….

    • angel on May 28, 2016 8:01 pm

      hmmm nick names let me see

  12. angel on May 28, 2016 6:00 pm

    nop dear not at all we trust u πŸ™‚
    @ lovely lady

  13. angel on May 28, 2016 6:00 pm

    really abhi u hv post ur story so can we get its name plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 7:38 pm

      ya abhi i too want to kn

  14. lovely lady on May 28, 2016 6:08 pm

    thnx every one fr trustng me πŸ™‚

  15. ufaq on May 28, 2016 7:58 pm

    No not at all y I will hate the hero and u hvnt done any mistake if the life story is awesome then why to write a ff even I will try someday and u just take it easy cutey di I have chose name for u cutey it is good or I should change it

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 9:45 pm

      thnxx fr giving me sch a nyc name
      plz wrt if u too hv a real life story……

    • ufaq on May 28, 2016 11:27 pm

      Yup I will when I will get time

  16. angel on May 28, 2016 8:36 pm

    hey ufaq u frm pak???
    I,m also frm pak

    • ufaq on May 28, 2016 8:55 pm

      Hey ya iam from Pak in which city u live????

    • angel on May 28, 2016 11:05 pm

      sorry yar cant mention city

  17. Abhi on May 28, 2016 9:46 pm

    So LOVY is fixed….???
    N @angel n lovy…I will give the link of my Story in this ff’s next episode…..I wrote in on swasan..hope you guys wont mind..?

    • lovely lady on May 28, 2016 10:51 pm

      thnx abhi…
      i m very mch excited to read your real life story…….
      btw nxt epi has been posted..

    • angel on May 28, 2016 11:04 pm

      no problem πŸ™‚ i,m excited

  18. Karthik on May 31, 2016 12:16 pm

    Sorry yaar late hai….bt epi was nice.

    Wht happnd to shravu achanak….itna rude behvr….

    • lovely lady on June 3, 2016 7:26 am

      Jst wait fr the twist to be revealed……..

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