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Aapke hai kaun hum? Part 13
Mohit:Why should we stand against our daughter’s love?Our daughter’s happiness is most important for us.
They all were happy.
Harish:Let us conduct Sameer and Naina’s wedding.
They all were very happy.
Preeti:Sameer..Naina..your love won.
Sameer-Naina smiled at each other.
Suddenly Neil’s mobile phone rang.
NEIL:This is from the hospital.
All were tensed.
Avantika whispered to Harish:Harish,I am very tensed.Avni’s condition is becoming worse and worse.Is the doctor calling to give us any sad news?
Harish was upset.
Neil smiled emotionally after talking to the doctor.
NEIL:God heard my prayer.Avni heard my request.A miracle has taken place.Avni is out of coma.She has regained consciousness.
All were surprised.
Harish:Really?
Avantika:It’s the best news.
Rano and Mohit embraced each other due to happiness.
Rano:God heard our prayer.
Mohit:Today its been proved that God does only good to good people.
Harish:Our Avni is back.
Avantika:Neil and Preeti stopped us from doing a big sin.If Neil and Naina were married it would have been the biggest injustice done to Avni who recovered from coma.
Harish:You are right Avantika.Thank God that we did’nt do that blunder.
Everyone smiled with relief.
Naina:Jeeji…my jeeji is coming back.I am so happy.
Sameer:Bhabhi is becoming normal.
They went to the hospital.
Neil entered Avni’s room.She was sleeping.
He caressed her head emotionally.
She opened her eyes.
Avni called Neil emotionally:Neil!
Neil was very emotional:Avni!
They embraced each other.They both wept.
Avni:What had happened to me Neil?I remember falling downstairs.
NEIL:You were in coma for more than 6-7 months.
Avni was shocked:Coma for a long time?
NEIL:You know how much we suffered when you were in coma?
Neil told her whatever which took place till that day.
Avni’s tears rolled down her cheeks.
He wiped her tears.
AVNI:Thank you so much Neil for giving Naina her love…her Sameer.I knew about them.I was going to tell you about it.But before that I lost my consciousness.
NEIL:Anyways now everything is fine.Be happy.
AVNI:Neil…I want to see Vivaan.I want to see all of them.
NEIL:All have come to see you from the wedding venue.
They all came inside with Vivaan.
Avni kissed Vivaan all over his face emotionally.
Rano:My beti…
Rano and Mohit hugged Avni and cried.
Naina hugged Avni:Jeeji…
Sameer:Bhabhi…we are so happy to see you back.
Avni smiled.
Avantika:How are you beta?
AVNI:I am fine mummiji.
Harish:We missed you so much Avni.
AVNI:Don’t worry Daddyji..I am back and I will cook good food for you.
They all laughed.
Avantika:Please forgive us Avni.We were about to do a big sin.
Mohit:Though I am your father I also became selfish.
Rano:Me too.I feel ashamed of myself.
Avni:Papa…maa..please don’t talk like this.
Avni looked at Avantika.
Avni:Don’t apologize mummiji.I can understand why you planned Neil and Naina’s wedding.
Harish:Your heart is very big Avni.That’s why you forgave us easily.
Avni:Daddiji…please…
Harish nodded emotionally.
NEIL:The doctor said that after a few more days you can be discharged.
AVNI:Ok…you all relax.I will be back to Maheshwari Mansion within a few days.Now please make arrangements for Sameer and Naina’s wedding.
Rano:Yes,we will do that Avni.
Mohit:It will be a grand wedding.
They all smiled.
After a few days Avni got discharged from the hospital and returned to the Maheshwari Mansion.
Neil and Avni were in their room.
The wind blew and her silky hair blew.Neil in romantic mood held her closer sharing a romantic eye lock with her.
He came closer to her.They got lost in each other.
They looked at each other passionately.
He leaned towards her cheek.
Suddenly they heard Vivaan’s cry.Avni ran towards Vivaan.
NEIL:I wonder how Vivaan came to know that i am romancing his mother.He is so possessive that immediately he called her to him.He is funny and cute.
Neil smiled.
Sameer-Naina had a grand engagement function.
Mehendi lady adorned Naina’s palms with mehendi.
Naina was really excited.
Sameer also did mehendi design on his palm.
He looked at the palm.
Naina showed her palms to Sameer:Sameer..look at this…
Sameer showed his palm also.
She was surprised:Sameer…you also?
Sameer:If you can write my name on your palm,can’t I also do that?
They smiled at each other.
Sangeet….
Sameer-Naina and Preeti danced together.
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Aage nikal aaye hum woh
Pichhe reh gaye
Aage nikal aaye hum woh
Pichhe reh gaye
Aa..
Aa..
Woo..
Woo..
Upar chale aaye hum woh
Nichhe reh gaye
Upar chale aaye hum woh
Nichhe reh gaye
Woh humse haarenge
Hum baaji maarenge
Hum unse kya hai kam
Naachenge aaise hum
Naachenge aaise hum
Naachenge woh kya
(kya, kya)
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
O mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Ba…bi…
Saare shehar mein
Hami hai humsa kaun hai
Saare shehar mein
Hami hai humsa kaun hai
(hey..Ha..Woooo….)
Dekho idhar hum yahi hai
Humsa kaun hai
Dekho idhar hum yahi hai
Humsa kaun hai
Dekhenge dekha hai
Jaadu kya aaisa hai
Yaaron se jalne ka
Kaaton pe chalne ka
Kaaton pe chalne ka
Kya hai faayda
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya..(Rocky).
Mohit-Rano ,Harish-Avantika,Neil-Avni danced.
Kya khoob lagti ho, badi sundar dikhti ho – 2
Phir se kaho, kehte raho, achchha lagta hai
Jeevan ka har sapna ab sachcha lagta hai
Kya khoob lagti ho, badi sundar dikhti ho – 2
Taareef karoge kab tak, bolo kab tak
Mere seene mein saans rahegi jab tak
Kab tak main rahoongi mann mein, haan mann mein
Sooraj hoga jab tak neele gagan mein
Phir se kaho, kehte raho, achchha lagta hai
Jeevan ka har sapna ab sachcha lagta hai
O, kya khoob lagti ho, badi sundar dikhti ho
Tum pyaar se pyaari ho, tum jaan hamaari ho
Oh oh
Oh oh
Khush ho na mujhe tum paakar, mujhe paakar
Pyaase dil ko aaj mila hai saagar
Kya dil mein hai aur tamanna, hai tamanna
Har jeevan mein tum meri hi balma
Phir se kaho, kehti raho, achchha lagta hai
Jeevan ka har sapna ab sachcha lagta hai
O, kya khoob lagti ho, badi sundar dikhti ho
Tum pyaar se pyaare ho
Tum jaan hamaari ho
Tum pyaar se pyaare ho
Tum jaan hamaari ho(Dharmatma).
Sameer-Naina did a romantic dance.
Ham aapke hain kaun
Ham aapke hain kaun
Bechain hai meree najar, hai pyar kaa kaisa asar
Naa chup raho itna kaho, ham aapke aapke hain kaun
Khud ko sanam roka bada, aakhir mujhe kehna pada
Khwabo me tum aate ho kyon, ham aapke aapke hain kaun
Bechain hai meree najar, hai pyar kaa kaisa asar
Hain hosh gum puchho naa tum, ham aapke aapke hain kaun
Kaise kahun dil kee lagee, chehra meraa padh lo kabhee
Yeh sharm kee surkhee kahe, ham aapke aapke hain kaun(HAHK).
Everyone put haldi on Sameer-Naina.
They had a photography session.
Sameer-Naina shared a romantic eye lock.
Naina.Preeti and other girls danced.
Sameer-Naina had a grand wedding.
After a year…
Naina gave birth to a baby girl.
Sameer held the baby in his arms.
Sameer:Baby…I am your papa.
Naina:Sameer,as we planned we will name her Suman.
Sameer:Yes…Suman.
They smiled.
Suman is the darling of everyone.
Sameer-Naina had fun with their cute naughty daughter Suman.
They were enjoying the growth of Suman in the cutest way.
Neil-Avni also lived happily with their son Vivaan.
Vivaan-Suman are not just cousins,but great friends also.Suman is the pet of Neil-Avni and Vivaan is the pet of Sameer-Naina.
Naina-Sameer looked at their wall which was full of their pics with different stages of Suman’s growth.
They had a cute family hug.
They all lived happily ever after.
The end