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Home»Fan Fiction»Aakri Alvida Os By Ashnita
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Aakri Alvida Os By Ashnita

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 30, 201716 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam ur suspense queen. Iam again with emotional episode. I hope u like this. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads

Let’s start

Kabir propose sanchi.

Kabir -i luv u sanchi will u marry me

Sanchi – i luv u too.

They hugged eachother.

Days passed love makes life beautiful. They like to get wet in the rain and gets drenched in love.

They like to laugh together .

In church

Kabir – i will always love you until the end of time

Sanchi – Kabir i will love u forever

Everthing seems to be fine for some days but one day.

Veer – sanchi u r so beautiful

Sanchi -thank you Veer. I like u

Veer -really u like me then y u having relation with that khadoos.

Sanchi – rehna parega pyar karti hu

Veer – so u will sacrifice everything for him

Sanchi -yes

Kabir was listening everything is was teary eyed and went. Sanchi went to him

Kabir -Sanchi do u really love me or just

Sanchi -or just wat u mean Kabir

Kabir -or just time passing

Sanchi gets angry and slapped him and went with tears. Kabir knew he was wrong.

In the morning

Kabir waits for sanchi to cum. Sanchi came.

Kabir -Sanchi I’m sorry I was just angry pliz forgive me

Sanchi – Kabir i think I’m done with u .I need a break with u

Kabir was shock

Kabir -wat Sanchi i told u i love u

Sanchi went without listening. Kabir doesn’t give up.Though sanchi hurts him. And refuses to talk to him.Kabir still believes that sanchi loves him and believes one day she will talk to him.

After one week.

Kabir -Sanchi pliz talk to me

Sanchi -kabir iam said I’m done with u. Just leave me alone. If you love me pliz go away.

Kabir gets teary eyed

Kabir -u want me to leave na. I’m going sanchi forever. I luv u and always will. Aakri Alvida.

Kabir leaves sanchi. Though she loves him too. .her ego and stubbornness dnt let her speak to him.

After a month

Sanchi feels Kabir absence she misses all the joy…fun and laughter. She misses being loved. She misses Kabir very much. She realizes her mistake.

Sanchi calls Kabir

Kabir – hello

Sanchi gets teary eyed as she heard his voice a long time.

Kabir -helo sanchi i know u called wat happened r u alright.

Sanchi doesn’t talk

Kabir -kuch toh bolo Sanchi r u ok .Oh u dnt want to talk to me. OK bye. Aakri Alvida

He was going to hangup just then he heard sanchi voice his tears flows from his eyes.

Sanchi -kabir where r u

Kabir -at home wat happened r u ok y r crying

Sanchi -kabir i want to meet u pliz

Kabir gets happy

Kabir -really

Sanchi -yes will u cum

Kabir – i promise I will cum.

They gets happy and cut the call.

On that day

Kabir goes to shop he buys a rose bouquet and heart shaped balloons, chocolates a teddy written I LOVE U and ring.

Kabirs is happy and dances
Bg plays

Aaj me upar aasman niche aaj me aage zamna hai peeche.

Kabir pov -Finally I’m going to meet u. I love u Sanchi.

Sanchi waiting in Garden where Kabir proposed her. She is desperate to meet him.

Kabir cums running and closed sanchi eyes. She feels his touch.

Sanchi -kabir i know it’s u

Kabir -Sanchi thank you for talking to me

Sanchi cries – Kabir iam really really really sorry.

Kabir -for wat

Sanchi -for not understanding ur love.

Kabir -it’s ok sanchi i can’t see tears in ur eyes. If you cry again then aakri Alvida.

Sanchi – kabir I missed u so much and I love so so much

Kabir- i missed u too so so so much and I love you so so so much.

Sanchi -kabir wats this

Kabir took ring and gave to sanchi. They hugged eachother tightly and ate lots of chocolates .

Kabir -sanchi i don’t believe that I’m with you.

Sanchi – Kabir this is not a dream.

Exactly at that time sanchi phone rings. She saw Kabir missing.

Sanchi – hello wat

Sanchi runs as fast as she could. She reaches near road.

Sanchi eyes got widen tears flows from her
eyes she kneels down and cries badly.

Veer -sanchi last time pliz see ur Kabir

Sanchi -no no i can’t

Isha -sanchi aakri baar dekh lo tum aage nhi dekh paoge

Pragya – sanchi Isha is right pliz see him

They encouraged sanchi

She somehow manages to see Kabir lying in the road with pool of blood. She saw chocolate ring teddy and all things kabir bought for her lying with him. She saw her ring missing from her fingers.

Man -beta immat rakho.

Sanchi -yeh sab kese hua.

Man -beta he was very happy and crossing the road just then truck hit him and he died same time.

Sanchi was crying badly she recalled Kabir and her moments .she saw Kabir caressing her face and kissed her forehead and said Aakri Alvida.

HIS LOVE IS PURE AND EXTERNAL. HE DESPERATELY WANTEDTO MEET HER. EVEN DEATH COULDN’T STOP HIM FROM MEETING HER TO SAY AAKRI ALVIDA ON LAST TIME…
HE GAVE HIS BEST TO SAVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP BUT SHE DIDN’T CARE WHEN HE TRIED TO CONVINCE HER. ..
…BY THE TIME SHE UNDERSTOOD THE VALUE OF HIS LOVE. …
…HE IS GONE FOREVER.

THERE IS NO LOVE WITHOUT FORGIVENESS.
AND. ..LIFE IS FULL OF UNCERTAINTIES. ..
TRY NOT TO HURT OR LOVED ONES ,
….BECAUSE….A MOMENT OF ANGER COULD BE LIFETIME PUNISHMENT. ….

THE END

I HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT
DO COMMENT
BYE TAKE CARE
LOTS OF HUGGS AND KISSES TO U GUYS AND LUV U LOADS

Regards
Ashnita

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    16 Comments

    1. Priyanshi on September 30, 2017 5:26 pm

      This was amazing. But u left me crying. Pls don’t write these sad os. ???take care

    2. swetha on September 30, 2017 5:52 pm

      a moment of anger could be lifetime punishment
      well said dear
      loved it
      awesomeee

    3. Sajnana900 on September 30, 2017 5:56 pm

      This was superb
      But u mad me cry seriosly tears made their way from my eyes
      But the os was heart touching

    4. Sanjukta on September 30, 2017 6:05 pm

      Just awsm…it ws so emotional… almost cried…nd ur last dialouges were vry touchy and mindblowing…

    5. Niyati on September 30, 2017 6:13 pm

      So emotional OS my suspence queen. I agree at you every point dear. Though i am a fun loving girl but i like sad stories from bottom of my heart .You had done great job .Lots of love to u dear.Happy Dussehra to u dear.

      Niyu.

    6. riyarocks on September 30, 2017 6:28 pm

      Ashu dear, I literally started crying……..& what u said in the end is absolutely correct……bcz sometimes we may not know the true value of a moment until it becomes a memory………….thanku sweety for this heart touching story……..luv u a lot dear……….

    7. Aafiya on September 30, 2017 7:34 pm

      It was Superb….You gave a beautiful message through this.. so hats off to you…. Take care.

    8. Alia on September 30, 2017 7:47 pm

      It’s amazing dear superbb

    9. Amnaa on September 30, 2017 8:02 pm

      It made me cry…… Loved it very much

    10. Anonymousaa on September 30, 2017 8:20 pm

      U again made me cry.Why these tragical OS dear???
      Plz plz plz give a happy ending though through a sequel.

    11. Abhilasha on September 30, 2017 8:23 pm

      Wowww so awesome…….but really heart touching ………ashi love uh ………and really ur msg is conveyed beautifully !!

    12. niyaaa on September 30, 2017 8:34 pm

      Hey ashi awsome but rondu os yaar itns hearttouching serieously nd u r ri8 ego nd anger r humans most powerfull enemy making decision when u angry nd based on ego always spoil ur life nd gave a life time punishment.. u loss ur precious most valuble thing i.e realtionship or loved one… Nd plz itna mat rulao ki baadh aa jaye plzz post nxt happy sappy os nd yaar aisi egoistic lill bit agar sanchi show me hoti to dono boys ki jaan bach jati..hehehe post nxt one tc

    13. Dhruti on September 30, 2017 9:10 pm

      awwwwwww yes it was so emotional os……
      come back with another & keep writing dear…

    14. Miss-golgappa on September 30, 2017 11:22 pm

      You made me cry dear….?…it was very heart touching one

    15. Divya on October 1, 2017 9:54 am

      Hey u made me cry dear super

    16. Anuradha123 on October 1, 2017 11:03 pm

      Ashi dear… Rula diya yaar…. Yeh baat toh sach hai ” kisi ki ahmiyat uske milne se pehle aur uske khone k baad hoti hai “….bohot hi khubsurat kahani thi… Love u yaar… Tumhare tarif k liye alfaz kam par rahe hai…. Kamaal ho, lajawab ho tum…..

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