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Home»Fan Fiction»AAJ JANY KI ZIDD NA KARO few shots (PART 5)
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AAJ JANY KI ZIDD NA KARO few shots (PART 5)

alizeyBy alizeyDecember 5, 201617 Comments6 Mins Read
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part 5

LEAP OF SEVEN MONTHS

arjun was searching radhika every where but found no sign of her.his morning start with reading his letter n end in

remembering all good time spent with her…he used to cry every night by holding her letter to his chest n drift to sleep by smelling

her scarf left in his room that night…he never felt such restlessness when sam left him…but after radhika left his life became

still,no charm, no colour, happiness what is that?,he left no stone unturned in finding her,but of no use……………………….

pale n haggard face once which was centre of attraction for every girl,unshaved beared which he even let to grow a single hair is

now grown randomly, messy hair…..he realized his feelings that he is in love just like his radhika yes just like his love

radhika…..he wants to confess it as soon as possible..but rads was no where, he had realised about sam he never felt like this,

that was just a crush or infatuation …yes temporary one…but he learned the meaning of love from radhika….that love is

unconditional….after reading her letter

LETTER

arjun sir i cant bring ur love sam in ur life but i promise i will never become a hurdle in ur love life..may one day sam realise

her mistake n come back to n u two mend ur relation n live a happy life ahead …ever n ever….but it is also a universal truth that

i love u from when a girl learns the meaning of love,nothing in this world can lessen my love for u,i compromised my dignity the

most precious asset a girl own at the cost of my love,but i dont want to become a panoti…so dont try to search me n try to patch up

ur relation with sam n make hundreds of babies…if i cant get my love…atleat u n sam can get…it…..keep me in ur good

books………bye take care sir….n dont be a khadoos infront of ur kids…..

urz panoti AAPKY RASTY KI PANOTI HATT GAYI HY SIR…….

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(most of the letter was filled with ink patches due to tears of rads)

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mehfil ma teri hum na rhy jo gham tu nhi hy gham tu nhi hy

qissy hmari nazdikiyun k kam tu nhi hn …kam tu nhi hy

kitni dafa subah ko mri try aangan ma baithy mny shaam kiya

channa merya merya channa mery ya merya bailiya ….oo piyaaaaaaa…..

try rukh sy apna rasta morr k chala…. chandan huwy apny khushboo choorrh k chala….

mann ki maya rakh k tery takiya taly ma rahi ba rahi ka sooti choula orrrh k chala…o piya…….

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on the other hand neil was taking good care of sam…one fine day neil has arrived to office…sam was still sleeping…she

suddenly woke up all sweating n trembling hands was breathing heavily she was having a night mare….in which neil was confessing his

love for sam in the middle of road he was showing one of his cutest dimpled smile…when a fast moving truck hit him …n blood

splashes every where……….she was literally trembling n shaking with fear when reality struck her that it was just a

nightmare…she thanked god for not having that in reality……that day she realised neil z importance in her love….many memories

flashed through her mind(neil has not yet confessed his love for sam)but that day she realised how much he loves her n she has also

fallen for him unconsciously…she remembered how he readily accepted her marriage perposal,his every act showed just pure love…how

fool she was ,he was showering his love n she was so engrossed in her past…how one day his friends in a party inquired about making

a family n he just told them that he cant b a father,such a selfless person he was aware that i cant give him more than this

friendship n he put all blame on himself…..her face was now glowing with newly found feeling yes it was love n eyes were shedding

happy tears…now she will not delay it further…she want to confess it asap….so she jumped from bed n searched for her cell n

dialed neil z number…………..

ON ROAD

neil was driving carelessly remembering all good times with sam suddenly a fast truck was infront of him trucks braks were

fail there was no way to escape nd thaaaaaaakkkk…………….

here neil z lifeless body with blood every where he was going through flashes of his n sam z good times n his cell phone was

ringing continously n he tried a lot to pick it up…atlast pick it up n attended call with red hand due to blood oozing…..

ON CALL

sam: oye IDIOT kaha mar gya hy …pta kitna wait kr rhi hun…chal choor mjy tujhsy aik baat krni hy….tu to kary ga nahi confess

chal aaj ma hi kar laiti hun…kaya pta essi bahany tera b mun khul jaye…….oye kuch bol tu ….tujhy pta hy tu kitna bara idiot

hy…..(she was continously blabbring with even listening to him…n there neil was listening all this struggling to speak somthing

but could not due to immense pain he was taking his last breaths)….oye abb tak tu tunny thora boht guess kar liya hoga….mjy pta

hy mera idiot bht intelligent hy….ab point py atti hun…chal aaj ma larki hokar phly confess krti ….oye idiot kahi k ma tujh py

marti hun…han han…ma tujh sy pyar krti hun….i love u idiot…mjy pta chal gya hy k tu b mujh sy kitna piyar krta hy….itny

dair sy chuppa k rakha hy aaj mainy tera bhanda phorr diya….haaahahhaaaaaaaa…very fuunny na….now come home hurry up….u must b

thiking na k what type of girl i am confessing my love on phone ….ma aisi hi hun….unique peace….mrs.idiot jo hun….(sam was

still blaberring but phone slipped from neil z hand sounds were still audible she was call her idiot oye sunnta nhi hy kiya jawab to

dy….k shok lag k mar gya haahaaaaahhhhh….neil z face was now glowing a contented smile n he closed his eyes forever……….

~~ AAB K HAM BICHARY TU SHAID KHAWABON MA MILAIN

SOOKHY HUWY PHOOL JAISY KITABOON MA MILAIN~~

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to be continued

guys m searching part four i have posted it yesterday but i cant find it under star plus telly updates….TU plz post it under

star plus telly updates….i think it is posted some where else ….so if any bdy has not yet read it plz do read it link

http://www.tellyupdates.com/aaj-jany-ki-zidd-na-karo-shots/….n next part will be last one

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    17 Comments

    1. arti viswanathan on December 5, 2016 4:22 pm

      Nice Episode dear… Will be waiting for ur full episode dear…..

    2. Aasthu on December 5, 2016 4:55 pm

      I don’t want anything to happen to Neil……say to TU to re-post it in MMZ PAGE…THEY’LL DO IT…

    3. Brin on December 5, 2016 5:06 pm

      Awesome episode, waiting for the last episode. 🙂

    4. Sulbi on December 5, 2016 5:14 pm

      OMG… Neil died… no no.. pls dnt do dat… i cant bear it… my neil buddy hw can i imagine him as a dead… waiting fr nxt part update soon..

    5. subha on December 5, 2016 5:16 pm

      really different interesting story …..awesome update .eagerly waiting next one……

    6. shindhu on December 5, 2016 5:17 pm

      amazing update

    7. Sundari on December 5, 2016 6:30 pm

      Please join adradhika and nesam yaar . But its nice.

    8. Devika on December 5, 2016 7:02 pm

      Nice yaar. Waiting for last episode. ☺

    9. Viprida Annuru on December 5, 2016 8:15 pm

      Nice episode Alizey!! Post the next one soon!!

    10. Meen on December 5, 2016 11:09 pm

      Neil died….no….don’t do that alizey…..I love him….plzzz

    11. Neha on December 5, 2016 11:33 pm

      Awesome episode….last line..Neil closed his eyes forever…. That Forever word really hurts….plzzz don’t do this….otherwise superbbb update….love you….

    12. Kavina on December 6, 2016 7:10 am

      Neil dead please tell that it is not true. Loved it

    13. moni on December 6, 2016 8:58 am

      nice one.

    14. amita on December 6, 2016 3:56 pm

      No plz don’t do that. …….Neil can’t die. ..

    15. jewel on December 7, 2016 7:48 pm

      neil died?? nooo, alizey plz don’t kill him…. and where is rads?? waiting for last chapter… post soon…

    16. Anaisha on December 9, 2016 9:18 am

      Hey!!!…Quite emotional turn to d story bt a gud one. .
      When r u updating nxt???
      Eagerly waiting fr d climax!!

    17. Roma on December 16, 2016 8:58 am

      Ohhhhh….alizey. …ye kyaa kiya meri jaan. …neil died. ..nooooo…..it’s very emotional. …I’m crying….I didn’t want this to happen. ….please bring him back…n also find rads for arjun….I love this ory..but I don’t want sad ending for this lovely story . …keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug

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