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Home»Fan Fiction»Aadhe adhure – the incomplete desire (episode 1)
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Aadhe adhure – the incomplete desire (episode 1)

niluBy niluSeptember 23, 2016Updated:September 23, 201627 Comments5 Mins Read
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This is my first story hope u guys like me ..

Characters of story ..

Sanskar- a hard-working man … He is 21 year old… ., loves her wife . his world started and end on her wife. He always wanted her wife to be happy ..

Swara – sanskar’s wife.. She is very confused personality. Loves her hubby .age -20

Sahil – SANSKAR’S best friend . He has a crush on swara . he frequently used to meet swasan ..

Lucky – SANSKAR’S brother.

Ragini- lakshaya wife .she doesn’t like swara.

Plot..

Sanskar’s POV

So finally after 5 weeks I’m returning to my home , to my shona. It’s very hard to pass these 5 weeks without her. I’m badly missing her and I know her condition would be same. But this work is also important na. I didn’t inform. Her about my arrival.. I want to give her a surprise. She always wanted a sweet home.. And I didn’t tell her that I had saved money for ours house.. The Construction work also started. I’ll give her surprise.. When our dream land completed

I still remember the first day I saw in school. I just pass out 10th she was new in school .. Most beautiful girl I have seen. Every boy wanted her to be his girlfriend. I was little bit shy. But thanks to my chemistry teacher who made us partner in project. He started spending time with her… We started falling for each other.. But I got shocked when I found out that sahil , also like her. On our farewell party , sahil mixed alchol in her drink . thank to him because it she kissed me in front of whole school ..

Situation became worse after that , when our parents got to know about it. I saw her after a week in the hospital, like me she was badly beaten by her parents.. He swallowed . Cheeks , marks of belt on her hands.. I couldn’t able to tolerate it. And we decided to eloped . after that we get married.. My bro helped me a lot .. But ragini don’t know Y she was against our marriage.. Leave her

Finally I reached , it was raining outside.. I was fully drenched.. I knocked the door.. It was more than 5 minutes. I was getting panicked ..” Is she alright. ” I called her she was not attending my calls. I cried out ” swara.. Jaan “.. Finally she opened the gate ..

I immediately huged her ” jaan r u OK .. ”

” I’m perfectly alright hubs.” She smiles..

“Where were u, I was very much scared “. I enquired .

” hubs woh I.. ”

” jaan u are fully drenched . r u were in the terrace ”

” ya hubs.. ” she placed her head on my chest ” I was badly missing u ”

” me too jaan . ” I looked towards her Rosy lips.. My wife looking damm hot in wet sari. I touched her cheeks.. And place my other hand on her waist.she closed her eyes I was about to kiss him

” hello guys .. ” sahil came towards us . with a smiling face.

” what r u doing in my house , at this time.. ” I noticed he was coming from terrace . he was also fully wet.

” hubs. He came here to meet u ” she explained

” ya sanky . it’s too late meet u tomorrow ” he left ..

After dinner .. We went to our room. She wear a nighty .. She was standing before mirror .. Combing her hair.. I back hugged her .. Slightly removed her hair . ” u r looking too hot ”

” thanks for the compliment hubs ” she smiled ..

I started kissing in her neck.. She is also loosing her control .. But she immediately stopped me

” what happened jaan, it’s so many days.. We were far from each other.. Today I want to make love with u ”

” not now hubs. I’m very much tired .. ” she said and then laid down to her side..

This was the first time she denied me. But I find something fishy when I saw sahil ,in my house his smile was saying to her that he was also in the terrace.. ,, no no sanskar how can u think this about swara .. U know for u she left her family .. I looked towards her.. She is looking like an angel.. I couldn’t bear this sahil any more. Only tolerating him because he is the owner of our house.. Moreover he helped me in my hard time.. But I can’t deny the fact that he had a crush on my wife. . Although he said now he is move on but I can’t believe him. As our dream house would be completed I’ll take my jaan with me.

I kissed her cheeks ” good night jaan ”

I slept hugging her …

Guys this is my first attempt.. Please encourage me.. If u like this. . only then I’ll continue it.. Your lovely friend nilu ..?

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    27 Comments

    1. NDSG on September 23, 2016 11:13 pm

      Hehehehehe u made mistake in the beginning.. * her. .. It’s must be his but anyways it’s nice

    2. Maryam on September 23, 2016 11:52 pm

      NYC…pretty interesting dear…

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 7:57 am

        Thanks dear

    3. s on September 23, 2016 11:55 pm

      so swara and sahil are cheating on sanskar..nice..

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 7:57 am

        May be

    4. Seema on September 24, 2016 8:02 am

      Don’t sepetate them

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 7:58 am

        Okie

    5. tani on September 24, 2016 9:05 am

      Interesting… Continue

    6. Afra96 on September 24, 2016 11:10 am

      Nice

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 8:02 am

        ?

    7. niya on September 24, 2016 12:17 pm

      nice..

    8. AnuAnn on September 24, 2016 12:56 pm

      Interesting dear

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 8:02 am

        Thank u

    9. Shagun on September 24, 2016 1:57 pm

      Is swara cheating on sanskar
      Plz don’t separate swasan
      It’s a small very small Walla request plz accept it
      Awesome chappy

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 8:01 am

        Wait for sometime u will get to know everything

    10. mica on September 24, 2016 2:11 pm

      huhuhu.. i smelt something fishy too.. omg..

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 7:59 am

        Haha? something is fishy

    11. seebu on September 24, 2016 2:21 pm

      Interesting..swara cheating sanky???

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 8:00 am

        May be or may be not seebu ?

    12. vyshu10 on September 24, 2016 2:56 pm

      interesting

      • nilu on September 25, 2016 8:00 am

        ?

    13. siya on September 24, 2016 8:06 pm

      nice..

    14. Mahjabeen on September 25, 2016 8:12 am

      Nive…but hope swara is not cheating sanskar…something fishy

    15. Kakali on September 25, 2016 4:48 pm

      I can smell something is Fishy !!! let it be… thnk u..

      • nilu on September 26, 2016 1:46 am

        Okie ????

    16. sanjanaagrawal on September 26, 2016 4:20 pm

      Awesome

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