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Home»Fan Fiction»A RIANSH FANFIC~ RAVAGED SOULS (ISHQ YAA PHIR DHOKA) chapter 39
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A RIANSH FANFIC~ RAVAGED SOULS (ISHQ YAA PHIR DHOKA) chapter 39

Ruhi0501By Ruhi0501January 29, 2021Updated:February 18, 202148 Comments13 Mins Read
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CHAPTER 39: SWEET SURRENDER?

SCENE 1: Riddhima and vansh were heading back to the parking lot…

Riddhima: *mocking* Hello, mister!! how dare you tease a girl..

Vansh: Not funny riddhima, drop it!

Riddhima: Oh my god, i saw you scared for the first time! And it was fun!

Siya: What are you both talking about?

Vansh nods his head negatively towards riddhima, indicating not to tell them..

Riddhima: When we were in the shop…we saw a lady scolding a guy, for entering trial room, which had a girl in it…and when asked he said that the girl inside was his wife…but the girl denied it..

Ishani: Poor him….did that lady take any action against him then?

Riddhima: No, she warned him…

Siya: Thank god, bhai was not in that position, otherwise he would have killed that lady by giving her a heart attack, just by looking at her….

Riddhima controls her laughter…they all head back to the car…

Siya: Bhai, you and babhi go in the car, we actually need to meet a friend, so we will come by cab..

Ishani: Yes bhai, she went through a accident, so we need to meet her…

Vansh: Sure..riddhima let’s go, and you both keep your shopping bags inside the car…no need to carry it everywhere…

They leave and vansh and riddhima also get in the car…

Riddhima: Vansh, can i ask you something?

Vansh: If it’s about that lady again, then no need…

Riddhima: No it’s not about her, it’s about kabir..

Vansh: What about him?

Riddhima: Finally, the whole family is together, why can’t we join them also in our family, all he ever wanted was a father and family since the time he got to know about his identity, and we have  a good chance of giving it to him..

Vansh: Riddhima, i never hated him…i was just too angry on my father, but after we know the truth, it’s not my place to decide this, i guess mom should decide this, because she resented kabir so much! And letting him come to our family, would give him love of a brother, sister and a grandmother, but he can never get the love of a mother , which will be more worse that the current situation, if she agrees i have no problem…

Riddhima: Then..

Vansh: Don’t worry sweetheart, i will talk to mom about this…

Riddhima: Thanks! *she suddenly bends over to him and gives a small peck on his cheek and vansh suddenly realises this and his eyes widen*

Vansh: Hmm, what was that for?

Riddhima: A gesture of thanks for my husband!

Vansh: Looks, like i will be needing a lot thanks from you!! *they both chuckle* 

SCENE 2: Everyone gets ready for the ball room theme…and comes down…riddhima looks stunning in a cream color dress which they bought earlier…vansh also slays the party looking dashing in a tuxedo..

Ishani : So welcome everyone!! To make the upcoming dance fun…we are going to do something really fun, a ball is never fun without the masks…all the couples this is going to be fun for you all! Is everyone ready??

Siya: So in the first round, all the men will be blindfolded and they have to touch all the hands of the women here and pick their lady….disclaimer, remember that your wife’s might be angry if you don’t choose her! Now all men line up!

Riddhima: So what do you think? Will you be able to recognise…

Vansh: Challenging me? Not so good idea Mrs.Raisinghania!

Riddhima: I challenge that you can’t recognise me!

Vansh: So bet?

Riddhima: Fine, if you win i will do whatever you want..

Vansh: Oohhh, then remember the condition because your husband is in no mood for losing tonight!

Ishani: Another disclaimer, if you choose someone who is not your wife, then sadly you will have to dance with the women you thought was your wife, so enter at your own risk..

Everyone takes it sportively and joins in….everyone starts picking and at last only riddhima is left, so to make it confusing for vansh, siya asks 2-3 strangers to act…and vansh starts holding their hands trying to recognise riddhima….

Riddhima’s pov: Vansh will not recognise i guess, everyone was soo good and confident and they chose only their wife’s! let’s see if he also recognises me!

Vansh’s pov: Our relation is not that weak riddhima, that i won’t be able to recognise you! I will!

Finally vansh touches riddhima…

Vansh: Riddhima! This is riddhima…

A small smile crept on riddhima’s face…

Ishani: Bhai? Are you sure? I mean there are more 2 people….and you barely touched the person’s hand you are holding…

Vansh: I know it’s riddhima..

Siya: Fine, then open the blindfolds..

He opens and sees riddhima in front of his eyes…

Siya:  Now since the fun time is over, lets start dancing everyone!

Everyone starts slow dancing…

Riddhima: You recognized?! Not bad!

Vansh: I still remember the bet, if you were wondering!

Riddhima: What do you want?

Vansh: Your time…your love, an eternity with you!

Riddhima: You will always have it!

Vansh: Want to skip the party?

Riddhima: This party is technically for us! And everyone will notice if we were gone…

Vansh: Look around everyone is having fun and who would want to stop having fun and worry about us! Lets go…

They slowly slip out of the party..and they both felt like bunking a class which was important, but bunking it made them happy!

SCENE 3: Vansh and riddhima slip out of the party…

Riddhima: We are out, but where will we go and what do you want do?

Vansh: Lets start over…everything!! So *clears his throat* Hello, i am Vansh raisinghania…

Riddhima: So we are seriously doing this? Ok fine…I am Riddhima….

Vansh: I saw you somewhere…at a  work site where our company was also there….

Riddhima: Ok creepy, so you saw me at a work site and decided to come up to me?

Vansh: Not a creep, but i found you very fascinating, and like a gentleman i am, i would like to take you out on date, only with your permission…

Riddhima: Sure i would love to go on a date with a thorough gentleman like you!

Vansh: Then, please take a seat in the car…

They both sit in the car and vansh starts to drive…

Vansh: I have never been on date…so don’t mind if something goes wrong…

Riddhima: I guess, i won’t mind…

After a while they reach a place which is pretty dark…

Riddhima: Vansh i can’t see anything..

Vansh: Don’t worry, wear these blindfolds and no cheating ok?

Riddhima: But i am already not able to see anything na? *she hears him, groaning* Ok fine!!

After a while vansh opens the blindfolds, and riddhima is stunned to see a dinner set up that too under the stars… where there was also a beach

Riddhima: You were listening?

Vansh: I always pay attention to you riddhima!

FLASHBACK…

They both were talking to each other…riddhima was cuddled up in his arms…and they were playing with their fingers…

Riddhima: Vansh, i have a question for you..

Vansh: Go ahead..

Riddhima: What is your idea of perfect and ideal date?

Vansh: Never been on one, so no idea..what’s yours?

Riddhima: I want a beautiful dinner set up….in a open place…where i can see alot of stars, i love astronomy and i find stars are fascinating to watch you know…and there should be water also, so that the reflection of stars falls on them…it would be such a good one na? Are you even listening? *she turns towards him and finds him sleeping, slowly she slips into sleep*

Vansh’s pov: I will make your dream come true riddhima!

PRESENT..

Riddhima: Not bad Mr.Vansh, for a first date..you went all big huh? I am impressed…

Vansh: *pulls out a chair* Please take a seat.. *she sits and he also takes his seat, when a waiter comes in and puts their food* 

Vansh: Riddhima close your eyes i have a small gift for you!

Riddhima: Was this *shows their surroundings* not a gift?

Vansh: Why are you always soo stubborn!! Just close your damn eyes!

Riddhima: If you forgot i am your first date and already you are behaving with me like this, Mr. Vansh i wonder if our relationship will go any further if you behave like this!

Vansh: Acha baba, sorry! Please close your eyes….

Riddhima: Fine..

Vansh: Now open your eyes.. *riddhima opens her eyes* Remember you gave 3 gifts on my birthday?

Riddhima: But i never actually gave it to you right?

Vansh: I found them on table after you slept…so i never keep debt my lady! Not even in love…so here you go my 3 gifts..

Riddhima: I am excited, since it will be your first gift to me..

Vansh: Hello first gift? I gave the VR ring remember?

Riddhima: Are you planning on giving the gifts today or what?

Vansh: Oh yeah.. *he takes out post it notes*

Riddhima: Post it notes? Nice i guess..

Vansh: Wait! Remember our wedding vows? 7 vows we made to each other, i will be honest, i was not vowing the same things in my mind..

Riddhima: I vowed i will send you to jail, so hey! You were not the only one, but still not getting any idea about the post it notes?

Vansh: We are going to vow again..with full love and honesty..so..*he takes out a pen* what do we want to promise each other?

Riddhima: Love even when we hate each other

Vansh: No running away ever! Trust each other

Riddhima: take care of each other even when old senile and smelly

Vansh: AND ITS FOREVER!

They both sign on the post it note…

Riddhima: Nice gift!

Vansh: Still a long night sweetheart…second gift is this necklace…it has i love you written in 100 languages..

Riddhima: Vansh this is absolutely lovely! Oh god, you are soo romantic, wondered why i have never seen soo many shades in you..now will you do the honors by..

Vansh: Oh yeah sure..*he moves her hair to the side and slowly slides the chain into her neck*

Riddhima: It’s soo beautiful, you have increased my hopes for the 3rd one now!

Vansh: Well for the 3rd one…you must um..come with me…

They sit in the car and drive to a place..

SCENE 4: Riddhima gets down the car..

Riddhima: Isn’t the site where we first met? We came here for tender work?

Vansh: Wow, i thought you forgot…anyway close your eyes for a minute…

After few minutes..

Riddhima: Vansh? You done? More how much longer?

Vansh: Open!

Riddhima opens her eyes and finds the sooo many candles around her arranged in layout..

Riddhima: Oh my god? What is this? It looks like a layout of a construction but in candles?

Vansh: Our farm house or house…i didn’t decide yet, but yeah i am going to build my dream house here for you, with you..

Riddhima: Isn’t this government’s place?

Vansh: Well i had to pull a few strings, since this was the very place that i first saw you, first liked you..i was selfish that no one else should have it! Well? How is it?

Riddhima: *goes and hugs him tightly, where she was able to hear his heart beats also*

Vansh: Anyway would you like to continue the dinner?

Riddhima: But we have to go back right?

Vansh: Not necessary i arranged here also!

They both sit down..

Vansh: Riddhima, can i ask you something?

Riddhima: Ask..

Vansh: Why do you think i married you?

Riddhima: Because, its like a thrill of a chase for you…it irked you someone doesn’t like you, so it was just a chase maybe..?

Vansh: You and me. It is not the thrill of the chase. It’s not a game. It’s… it’s your tiny, ineffectual fists. And your hair… It smells nice. And you’re very, very bossy. It keeps me in line.I’m not gonna get down on one knee, I’m not gonna ask a question, because we are wayyy past that stage and now the only thing i can say is I love you Riddhima, and I wanna spend the rest of my life with you.

Riddhima: *she gets up and walks towards him,sits on his lap and hugs him* 

Vansh: Don’t ever say my love was a thrill of a chase…Don’t you see? Don’t you understand? You’re the love of my life. I can’t leave you.

Riddhima: *making her hug tighter* I love you!!! I will never regret us! I will never regret meeting you…i will never regret falling in love with you! I will never regret *she kisses him on the lips* This!

Vansh: *he chuckles* Don’t get me wrong: I like the kissing. I’m all for the kissing. More kissing, I say.

Riddhima: I guess we owe a dance to each other, as we skipped one, earlier, want to continue?

Vansh: I would love that…

They start slow dancing this time to the song US by James bay

Riddhima: How did you recognise me soo easily in the party?

Vansh: The idea was pretty dumb, but i guessed by your ring! The VR ring…

Riddhima: You cheated? *she hits him* 

Vansh: Ouuchh! What was that for?

Riddhima: For cheating.. *he pulls her closer*

Vansh: Sweetheart, it’s not cheating, its called intelligence..

Riddhima: I guess..*before she could finish…vansh kisses her*what was that for?

Vansh: Just adoring my first date…i think so i am in love riddhima…for the first time, i feel complete soulfully, amid the chaotic life, you are my peace…

Riddhima: I want you…right now…

Vansh: Are you sure?

Riddhima: I have never been this sure in my life about anything else…

 It was like they were craving and longing for this peace…which they found in each other…

SCENE 5: They are in their room…next morning…riddhima opens her eyes..re-living those moments from the night…

Vansh: Someone is blushing?!

Riddhima: Vansh!

Vansh: Did you enjoy the date yesterday?

Riddhima: It was like a dream come true vansh! I loved every part of it…from the beginning till end..it was like a fairy tale, just like i expected!

Ok so here you go with another update, actually next chapter is supposed to be the last chapter, with riddhima’s pregnancy track, but i was wondering do you guys want their honeymoon chapter? I can add on? If yes, then choose between MALDIVES OR BALI? Next chapter tomorrow or today maybe, i can’t be sure, but yeah the target this time is 35+ comments again! This chapter felt like a long one to edit and adding elements! Hope you guys love the chapter!

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    A writer, new to this website, but not new to writing...if you are on wattpad, you can find me there also under the name Ruhika1104

    48 Comments

    1. R.N 😇 on January 29, 2021 3:14 pm

      Awesome episode….very romantic…..☺☺☺☺☺…..yesss we want their honeymoon track..would like to choose Maldives for the same. ..waiting for next episode. ….☺☺☺☺☺

    2. Jennifer on January 29, 2021 3:18 pm

      Awesome episode….I loved it…I would like Maldives

    3. Niyati12 on January 29, 2021 3:23 pm

      It was Fabulous, fantastic and awesome one
      I want for Maldives…. Please try to update soon

    4. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 3:36 pm

      Romantic one😍 it’s best one and if u can, plz add the honeymoon in Maldives.post it soon dear

    5. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 3:38 pm

      And I’m really sad that the FF is going to end soon. I need u to extend it if u can.

    6. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 3:40 pm

      I’m writing half half comments so that target gets completed soon🤭🤭 so that u can post it today itself.keep writing dear

    7. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 3:43 pm

      Make the last one more memorable ❤️ and I know u will make it possible bcoz u have a good writing skills post it soon

    8. Samistha Choudhary on January 29, 2021 3:47 pm

      A good chapter well done

    9. Nimisha on January 29, 2021 3:50 pm

      Yesss…plz extent this ff with the honeymoon track….and maldives would be perfect…😘😘😘…And update ASAP

    10. Deepti Gupta on January 29, 2021 3:53 pm

      Yes I want their honeymoon track💗

    11. Niki😇 on January 29, 2021 3:55 pm

      It’s amazing I love it make it more interesting

    12. shweta on January 29, 2021 3:58 pm

      good

    13. Amna on January 29, 2021 3:58 pm

      It’s very nice. I want to read your FF daily it would be nice next would not be last and continue for more day. You are doing hard work. Aren’t you tired? I love your commitment. Nice dear

      • Ruhi0501 on January 29, 2021 4:18 pm

        Trust me i am tired but all your comments make the hard work worth it❤❤🥰

    14. Riansh Lover on January 29, 2021 4:03 pm

      Maldives is better😁😉💖

    15. Alolika on January 29, 2021 4:23 pm

      Yes we want the track. The story is amazing 👍👍👌 I want the Maldives.. please update soon.

    16. Aditi on January 29, 2021 4:40 pm

      Superb episode…
      😊😊

    17. Jayashree on January 29, 2021 5:11 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️. Please extend dear. Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❤️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❤️.

    18. Priyadharshini on January 29, 2021 5:12 pm

      So nice updates 😊
      Thanks for the best updates 😊.

    19. JJ on January 29, 2021 5:13 pm

      It’s really super and awesome 💖😊
      Waiting for next one 💖💕.

    20. Vkjhp on January 29, 2021 5:13 pm

      Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍
      Thanks for updates 👍
      Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.
      Please extend

    21. NA on January 29, 2021 5:13 pm

      Romantic one, loved it
      And ya plzz add honeymoon track in Maldives too.

    22. Qt on January 29, 2021 5:15 pm

      Love this ff.. Now its going to End bt we want honey moon part also

    23. NA on January 29, 2021 5:15 pm

      Post today itself if possible

    24. Kiara on January 29, 2021 5:18 pm

      It was a very beautiful and a romantic episode
      No more chaos, a simple happy life.
      And plzz add the honeymoon part too in Maldives

    25. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 5:54 pm

      Post the next update yaar 🥰

    26. Athira on January 29, 2021 5:56 pm

      I really wanted honeymoon track pls post it. Thank you for the thought of extending ff. Today’s was really amazing 🤩🤩🤩.

    27. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 6:10 pm

      8 comments more then we will reach our target 🥳🥳🥳 post the next one immediately after the target yaar 🙏

    28. Riansh dieheart fan on January 29, 2021 6:21 pm

      Good chapter please keep honey moon chapter

    29. Harshita Rastogi on January 29, 2021 6:35 pm

      Yaa honeymoon track on Maldives

    30. Ananya on January 29, 2021 6:49 pm

      Such an romantic ep ❤🤩 pls extent this ff by bringing honeymoon track and then pregnancy track and Maldives would be perfect ❤😌

    31. NA on January 29, 2021 6:50 pm

      Can’t wait anymore so am writing few more comments

    32. Ananya on January 29, 2021 6:50 pm

      Can’t wait for next chapter 😍😍

    33. NA on January 29, 2021 6:51 pm

      You’re imagination has no bounds and it’s really something very appreciative and unique
      Plzz continue writing

    34. NA on January 29, 2021 6:54 pm

      Last but not the least this ff is great.
      And am really looking forward for the pregnancy and honeymoon episodes
      Post soon and today itself plzzzz

    35. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 6:57 pm

      With this comment the target will be completed as it is 35th comment. So dear plz post it soon

    36. Akshitha 🤩 on January 29, 2021 6:58 pm

      And plz add honeymoon scenes before pregnancy track.i hope u will.plz post it immediately 😁 waiting

    37. Monika on January 29, 2021 7:04 pm

      This one was damn good episode…..i want you to continue this finfic ….maldive will be better i think…..and please try to update next episode soon as possible….eagerly waiting for the next one…….and i just want to say that you are really so good in writing…i really like this fanfiction….and i wanna to say that this is my first ever comment on any fanfic….

      • Ruhi0501 on January 29, 2021 10:08 pm

        Wow great to be the first one to receive ur comment🥰

    38. Naira_u_singh on January 29, 2021 7:14 pm

      Wow darling. you are really getting so much love from here. I’m so happy for you❤❤

      • Ruhi0501 on January 29, 2021 10:09 pm

        Ik right! Inam soo happy🥰🥰

    39. Shivangi on January 29, 2021 7:43 pm

      Awesome episode🥰😍…. Bali😍… Waiting for the next post☺…

    40. DR.MISHIKA on January 29, 2021 7:57 pm

      Wonderful… Maldives please..

    41. Ananya on January 29, 2021 9:54 pm

      Amazing episode loved it

    42. Arpan on January 30, 2021 7:54 am

      Honeymoon track in Maldives before the pregnancy etc plssss

    43. Akshitha 🤩 on January 30, 2021 8:48 am

      Yaar plz upload the next chapter immediately.plz plz.. it’s already late🙏

    44. Diha on January 30, 2021 5:06 pm

      Keep rocking dear!!!
      Excited for the upcoming events

    45. Aditi on February 1, 2021 4:55 pm

      Waiting for next episode ..
      Please post it soon Ruhi di😊

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