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Home»Fan Fiction Original»A COMMON LOVE STORY – XXXII
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A COMMON LOVE STORY – XXXII

administratorBy administratorJanuary 5, 20166 Comments4 Mins Read
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“Na Wo Sapna Dekho Jo Toot Jaye,
Na Wo Hath Thamo Jo Choot Jaye,
Mat Aane Do Kisiko Itna Karib Ke
Uske Dur Jane Se Insaan Khud Se Ruth Jaye.”

Kam Karo Asia ki pahchan ban jaye,
chalo aise ki Nisan ban jaye,
zindgi to her koi kat leta hai dosto,
jiyo is kadar ki misal ban jaye.

*********

That day the time flew……….

I got to know that I am not the only one who live around a selfish circle ,

Mine selfishiess were far better,

♥He♥ was breathing hard, and ♥his♥ eyes were full of tears and ♥his♥ voice sulking,

It was hard to see ♥him♥ in this condition , harder than hearing his story,

♥He♥ told that the junior guy ♥his♥ kiddo brother …………

And paused at this took a long breadth and tried to speak again,but, no words came out …….

Just a tear rolled down his cheek, I looked at him and just turned away my face , and shut my eyes tight, controlled my emotions,

Looked at ♥him♥ again , got up went to him and put my hand on his, ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

He looked at me in surprise, his eyes still overflowing with that emotion filled drop of water…..

And we just looked into each other’s eyes and he………….

While we were lost in each other my siso, and her newly befriended spy boy Mr. representative neared us and I don’t remember when , they went out and brought some ♥♥♥Ice-Creams♥♥♥ and water for us, they offered us water and then something really silly ,

They tore the Ice-Cream wrapper and ………………

And……………… 😡

My siso gave me a cold conical nose and Mr representative gave ♥him♥ a cone cap with a chill……….. 😛

Well I was mad for a minute or two and chased the duo but all sublimated in a sec., seeing a smile on his face…………..

Hm…………… so sweet so mesmerizing so…… ♥♥♥♥♥♥

He somehow stopped the funny T&J chase where I was TOM and they were Jerry & his cousin NIBBUS ……….

And then he commented on my hotheadedness and all burst into laughter and the serious moment flip flopped and I got his compliment on my new conical dripping nose, actually the Ice-Cream cone’s tip broke and the remaining came out from only outlet….. but it wasn’t annoying at all as it came from him. ♥♥♥♥♥.

I too complimented his cool , hat cool in the sense 😉 …….

Well well well bad luck……….. hmm….. sir ji why you came???

Actually sir came to check our progress and it was just a conical hat and a snowman nose,

He I mean sir ji might have seen our sad faces so didn’t scold us and asked us to hurry as we weren’t supposed to display ourselves , and chuckled ,

We hurried up an cleaned ourselves and sir took the spies with him…………..

It looked just like a minute ago we have started mending the project and we were called for the display,

We took the model extra carefully this time, we put it on our assigned place , and waited for the judges to reach us……

While waiting for them we decided our parts and as I looked at our model I couldn’t make out what was it actually ,

But we did our parts well despite the emotional turmoil we just went through,

After all the hurdles finally we did it and as the judges left our table , we let out long breadths …..

We didn’t win the competition but got the prize for the unique model, we displayed which was ….

Amm…….

Leave it……..

But we didn’t go back to the college empty-handed we had a trophy in hand , a blow to those fickle minded people……………

That day was a bit hasty, emotional but I loved the moments I shared with him,

As at the end of the project he held my hand, and …… thanked me for my help ……I also thanked him for his ……and we shared an eyelock………..

Also that funny Ice-Cream moment…….

But what was his story, why wasn’t he unable t speak , why he said that my selfish friends are far better than the actual people in this world, what had he gone trough ?? that thought still bugged me…………

***to be continued…….

*****.

Heyy frndss u might be thinking that I wrote that day he spoke out his heart and finished the day without hiss story well not the case, the night is still there, phones are there, the time after the project and between going back is still there and FB too….. so here I leave u again in susspence………

Credit to: Richa

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6 Comments

  1. Jwala on January 5, 2016 4:33 pm

    Luvd 2days epi ……. Tom jerry chase waS??.awesome………. .. ……………. ????☺☺☺☺☺☺?????????☺☺????? LOVELY EPI

  2. manha on January 5, 2016 7:51 pm

    richa u r really something dear. i loved the shayari. they were just superb. ah tooo emotional ones.
    story is going on superbly. i love my couple a lot. they r just superb. capturing small small moments n experiences. and i like the new duo tooo. her siso n his bro. today’s epi was toooo gud.
    HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR.

  3. Richa (titli) on January 5, 2016 10:32 pm

    Heyyy jwaloöö sry 4 late reply nd thank ya dr u knw 4 me funniest part was all ☺
    manha dr thanku thnku ☺ nd hapy new yr dearie ♥ gobu
    nd both of u keep readin

  4. dia on January 7, 2016 3:26 pm

    Luvvddd itt richhuuu diiiiiiiii

    nd m stopping writing my fics…just udaan nd swaragini wud b continued…nd i’ll change the track in swaragini

    • richa (titli) on January 7, 2016 10:20 pm

      heyyy yyy r u stopping??? nd swaragini there r tooo manyyy so i doont read swaraginio srry

  5. dia on January 8, 2016 1:49 am

    Koi na di….nd m stopping as no one even read them

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