Ajooni ; Now I am standing in front of your gun point. Then shoot me Rajveer…
Rajveer throws his gun and cups Ajooni’s face. He looked her intensely
Rajveer ; My hands are trembling …I can’t do it….
Ajooni : You can’t kill me because I know you loves me a lot and some how you also have started dreaming like me a lot…
Rajveer and Ajooni looked each other..
They recalled their meetings…..
Rajveer ; You collected donation from every one. But why you didn’t collected money from me ?
Ajooni : That donation is for the betterment of children staying in orphanage….And I don’t want blood stained currency notes for their upbringing….
Rajveer : I am also a human being….I too have humanity and emotions…
Ajooni : Really ? Then why you was beating that shop keeper ?
Rajveer : That’s part of my job…He was not vaccating the place even after Shera said him directly…..
Ajooni ; Who is that Shera ?
Rajveer : The whole city knows underworld Don Shera ….
Ajooni : But I don’t know and even don’t want to know about him….
Rajveer : I can understand teacher like you sees me as a bad student only…..Hein naa ?
Ajooni : Teacher!! How do you know that I am a teacher ?
Rajveer : I have seen you going to school …..I mean I am not following you…..But thing is mostly I will be here in mornings with this gang to have tea from the tea stall which is opposite to the school you are working…. Please accept the money….
Ajooni smiles
Rajveer also smiles…
Ajooni : I said I will not accept blood stained money….But I can accept money from you if it is pure….
Rajveer : What does that mean ?
Ajooni : Hard work …..When you get reward for your hardwork as your salary it will make you to feel proud…..Think about it…
She walks away….Rajveer looks her …
Rajveer joins a music studio and started playing guitar
Slowly he got more opportunities and one day he arrives at the school to meet Ajooni….He handovers the money which he gained as remuneration by playing guitar .
Ajooni ; Now it’s worthy…..Thank you…
Rajveer ; Actually I need to thank you…I have almost forgot the fact that my fingers are capable of running strings…It’s been long I wasn’t touch with it….But now for few days I became very happy by playing it and you said right…..After playing guitar for hours and when I get the money as my reward I really felt myself as proud….I felt like for the first time I have achieved something Madam…
Ajooni : Ajooni ….You can call me by my name …
Rajveer ; I am Rajveer…
That was the starting of their friendship….With Ajooni Rajveer also started visiting orphanage frequently. One day Ajooni finds Rajveer sitting alone at the corner…
Ajooni ; What happened Rajveer ?
Rajveer : I am thinking about why my parents left me alone at the street. If they can’t accept me at least they should have put me at an orphanage like this….
Ajooni : Why you are saying like these ?
Rajveer : Except Shera , guns, weapons, blood I don’t know anything….Shera said that when he got me I was just 12 days old baby only and I was crying lot…..He find me in a dustbin at the roadside and he took me to his blood shedded world….Always he says I am his loyal dog only….He is the owner of so many loyal dogs like me….You know what until I have the physical strength he will command me to beat somebody, threaten somebody …But I never used the pistol which is with me….I never got a contract for killing some one….But I am sure the day when I will get it my hands will not be able to do it…..Already I don’t know why I am doing this by destroying lives of innocent people….I tried a lot to come out but his gang will find me and put me back to the same world only…..But the last few days when I worked for four hours as guitarist I felt like I got everything Ajooni…You gave me a meaning for my life Ajooni…
Rajveer touches her shoulders and looked her emotionally
Ajooni ; Now you have find the path of peace , your passion you should make it as your profession Rajveer…..You have to play with guitar strings and have to create magic instead of playing with innocent lives and emotions…
Rajveer takes his hands back and turns to go…
Ajooni : Rajveer you can’t run away from the sins you have did ….But every mistakes are rectified when we admits it….You should surrender yourself to police and should put an end to this rowdysm….I can’t see my Rajveer as a goon….We can live a peaceful life together Rajveer ….It’s my heart’s desire ….You and me our beautiful life…
Rajveer suddenly fumes in anger and shouts at Ajooni
Rajveer : Stop it !! Do you have any idea what are you saying ? Living a life with me …..Do you know the meaning of it ? What will your family say ? What will society say ….A goon and A Teacher…You have a reputed position and don’t spoil it by dreaming unnecessary things…Ajooni ……You are soft tender like flower and I am harsh merciless weapon….Never ever we can unite…My life has no guarantee at all…Any thing can happen to me and you are saying we both can live ……Ajooni come out from this dream and see the harsh reality…It’s worst…..And in my blood stained world your tears have no space…..Forget me……
Ajooni : Forget me !!
Ajooni presses his shirt and looked him emotionally
How easily you are saying me to forget you ? Look at my eyes and say Are you able to forget me Rajveer ? Why you listened my words and started playing guitar ? Why you also liked the way I used to like children of this orphanage ? If my tears have no space in your world then why the hell you cried and share your pain with me ? Why you said you also want a normal life like others ?Why you became silent ? Just like you threaten others why you can’t threaten me ? Why you said I gave meaning for your life Rajveer ? Answer me Rajveer ….Answer me …..
Rajveer : I don’t have any answers for your questions …..But what I know is you will get a better guy and you should marry that person …..I am not that much worthy to dream about leading a life with you…..A puppet who is been used by Shera for now and when he feels to throw he will throw me to the same dust bin only……
Ajooni : Rajveer !!
Rajveer : That’s my reality…
Ajooni ; If we stand together we can bring change Rajveer…..Please don’t run away from your feelings, don’t hurt me…I can bear anything but I can’t bear your seperation…..
Rajveer helds Ajooni’s hands and kisses them
Rajveer ; Even I can’t imagine seperating from you…..I always want to hold your hands like these..And I promise very soon I will leave that blood shedded world and will hold your hand forever Ajooni…
Ajooni ; I will wait for you Rajveer…..
Rajveer walks away and while taking his jeep he looks Ajooni….She bids bye through a smile….
He smiles and starts driving…On the way he imagines Ajooni getting closer with him by sitting beside him at his jeep.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6iLNPegjN5o
Maaya gange maaya gange
Dil badal ne laga
Aashiqi ke raaste pe
Jabse chalne laga
Bekarari mein
Milke pehli baari mein
Dil kho chuka hai tera hoke
Khwaab humsafar
Dekhoon tere umre bhar
Aake bhi agar ab mujhe roke
Meanwhile Ajooni who was combing her hair imagined Rajveer combing her hair romantically
Rabb ne saath tera
Mera aasman pe likha
Oh ho oh ho
Is liye zameen pe aake
Mujhko aise tu mila
Ho oh oh oh
But fate had written something else in their lives… Few days later a bomb blast occured at the orphanage…..So many people got injured and many people died….Ajooni who was present there at that time got injured badly and she was admitted in hospital…Rajveer arrives at the hospital.
Rajveer : Ajooni …
Ajooni : Why you came here ?To check I am alive or not ….won’t you ?
Rajveer : I didn’t know anything about it…..Shera gave the assignement of bomb blast to other boys and …
Ajooni : What’s the mistake of those small kids ? Are you able to return their lives ? Imagine if I would have died in this blast then….
Rajveer :No….Please don’t say like that….I can’t imagine a life without you….I am sorry for whatever happened…
Ajooni : I will forgive you only if you confess truth to police …….The curse of people will not give you peace Rajveer….I don’t care what your gang, Shera all those guys ….But I cares for you….And if you really values me as a part of your life you should do it…..
She holds his hand and says…I trust you , never break it …Rajveer..
Rajveer : I will do it for you Ajooni…
He goes to police station and tells everything…Since Rajveer has also committed so many mistakes the police gives him a punishement of becoming a prisoner in jail for few days…..
After getting fit and fine Ajooni got discharged from hospital and she visited the police station with an Advocate…Rajveer gets released from jail….But police had manhandled him and he was feeling pain in his body…Ajooni applies medicine on the affected areas of Rajveer’s body and he was feeling magic at her touch
Dil tere liye
Sar ko jhuka ke hai khada
Hai tere lafzon mein hai
Kuch to shehad jaisa bhara
Tu hi re uthri zameen pe
Tu mere vaaste
Is liye dil leke aaye
Tere hi raaste
Ho shuru agar koyi ishq ka safar
Toh mohabbatein muskurati hai
Do parinde joh dil se ek jaise ho
Manzile unhe hi mil jaati hai
Ajooni : You are feeling so much pain …
Rajveer : No…Your hands had healed my pain….Actually initially police officers refused to believe me and they beated me …But later they got convinced…
Ajooni : I see…..But now things are sorted out ….
Rajveer ; Ajooni when are you going to your native place , your home ?
Ajooni : Why ?
Rajveer : Ajooni though it’s a rented flat and you are living alone here as part of job you and me ..I mean a girl and ….What will others say ?
Ajooni : Until you won’t get cured fully I will not allow you to go anywhere….Is that clear ? And I don’t bother what others say…..
Rajveer : Ajooni your family…
Ajooni : Rajveer I want you should also come with me this time when we go to my village for meeting my family …..I want to introduce you as a gentleman whom I admire , whom I lo…
Rajveer ; What ?
Ajooni blushes with a smile…Rajveer cupped her face and whispered in gentle voice
Rajveer ; I can’t wait anymore to hear the three beautiful words from you Ajooni ….Please say it..
Ajooni : Rajveer …..I ….I….
Suddenly they both hears a sound of a gun shot and they gets shocked to see Shera holding gun
Present time
Shera ; You both enough recalled your past story….Betraying Shera is not possible Rajveer….Police captured you not me ,..as I have informers …..And I was out of city …I changed my sim , phone and they didn’ t even traced me…
He throws the gun before Rajveer ….Better you kill your sweet heart….This girl….Else I will kill her….
Rajveer : Shera , please….don’t do it….
Suddenly the whole gang of Shera entered there and they surrounded AjVeer with deadly weapons….
Ajooni : I am not scared off you Shera….But death from a blo*dy criminal like you can never be my death…..
She takes the pistol and gives it to Rajveer.
Ajooni : Rajveer , you kill me …I will happily bear death from you Rajveer ….
Rajveer points gun again towards Ajooni
Shera : Now kill her and put an end to the so called love story..
Rajveer pointed out the gun towards upside and pressed the tigger….
A gang of police who were hiding at the upstairs came down and rounded them…
Rajveer : Shera you are cunning but not intelligent as us …You forgot if you makes a plan I can make a master plan also….
Ajooni ; Already police team was present since they wanted to catch you and your gang red handed….
Shera : You betrayed me Rajveer…
Rajveer : No…I saved my nation and also this is a repentance for my bad deeds….
The police team congratulates Rajveer and Ajooni …..They arrests Shera and his gang …
Ajooni : Today you have won my heart and has made me to feel very proud Rajveer.
Rajveer suddenly bend at his own knees and presses his ears with his hands….
Rajveer ; Sorry Ajooni ….
Ajooni touches his hands and asked : Sorry for what ?
Rajveer : Even though I surrendered myself at police , Shera and gang got arrested….I can’t forgive myself for the bad deeds which I did…..The tragic incident of orphanage….
Ajooni : Some times some incidents teaches big lesson….We can’t bear the loss…But we will surely help the remaining people there and also we will help them to built new orphanage…..
Rajveer ; A donation campaign , right ?
Ajooni : Yes….I am sure so many people will help us and we can also contribute money……
Rajveer ;You are such a good hearted person.. I am so lucky that you show me the right path of life….Else I would have remain as good for nothing….
Ajooni : Will you just praise me only or will you say that beautiful words ?
Rajveer : But you was supposed to say it first..
Rajveer proposed Ajooni with rose
Rajveer : Will you accept me with my faults like thorns are also a part of roses , I can’t be always perfect ….But with you I want to go ahead ….Will you be my better half ? Will you marry me ?
Ajooni accepted the rose and said : Life is not bed of roses..Whatever comes we face it together…..I am yours always and I can’t wait anymore to become your wife….
Rajveer and Ajooni closed their eyes and held each other closely
Ajooni ; I love you Rajveer…I will always be with you forever..
Rajveer ;I too love you Ajooni …..You made me as a real person…
They hugged each other with so much of love
RaJoon met Ajooni’s family’s later and with the blessings of family members and elders they get married
They both danced romantically at reception after marriage
They romanced each other at their wedding night
Both of them lived happily a beautiful life
AN ; This is inspired from Balu ABCDEF movie of Pawan Kalyan, Neha Oberoi and Shriya Saran where the story of Balu and Indu was tragic as Indu dies when Shera shots her with gun…I felt sad watching it so I changed that story here with my perspective featuring RaJoon. Hope you all liked it….
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Have you written any other story on ajooni before?
I was shocked to see rajveer trying to shoot ajooni.but rajveer saying that he can’t shoot her and Ajooni’s dialogues to him were emotional. Surprising that ajooni is a teacher.oh rajveer is a goon.ajooni saying that she can’t take blood stained money for orphanage was striking.i am surprised that rajveer can play guitar and by playing it he earned money to give it to her.glad to see a friendship developing between them.rajveer is right.instead of dumping him on the road his parents should have left him in the orphanage. If so he wouldn’t have been the puppet of a gangster.ajooni saying about a beautiful life together to him was surprising as it was an indirect confession from her.rajveer’s response was unexpected though he was correct as life with a goon like him is dangerous.ajooni saying that she can bear anything but not a separation from him and he also says that he can’t be separated from her was emotional. Song scenes were romantic. Shocking that ajooni got injured in a bomb blast.but I am confused.he had promised her that he will come out of it.still he planted bomb there on shera’s order?Good that he surrendered to the police and I am glad that ajooni released him from the jail.ajooni taking care of him as he was wounded was lovely.now I understood that it’s shera who wanted to kill ajooni but she preferred to die with Rajveer’s hands instead of getting killed by a criminal.surprising that rajveer outsmarted him by calling the police there.rajveer ajooni confession wedding,dance and post wedding moments were very romantic.
Thanks a lot. No I haven’t written on Ajooni and Rajveer before. The bomb blast assignement task was given to some boys of the gang only by Shera. Rajveer was not involved in it. But when he gets to know about the blast and finds an injured Ajooni in hospital he feels regret in his heart . Though he was not directly involved in that he always had a guilt in his heart for whatever mistakes he and the Shera’s gang were doing….Now regarding heroines, Shreya Sharan’s role was short she is actually daughter of Home minister and the minister is having some connections with underworld Shera,….The film starts with Balu [ Pawan Kalyan ]going behind her like a romeo and he impresses her by singing song , dancing and playing guitar. Actually that was his plan to know about the secret planning of minister with Shera only. Shriya gradually gets impressed and started sharing lots of things and Balu preteneded he likes her very much …..He wins her trust completely and he requests Shriya to collect confidential files from minister’s secret cabin and she does the same….The plan of Shera and Minister is revealed as they were planning a blast in the shopping mall also the illegal activities are revealed…Shera manages to escape from police but minister gets arrested….Shriya feels shocked and she questions Balu who is he ? She tells she has started loving him but didn’t expected her dad will be arrested like this….Balu tells he consider her as a friend only and whatever he did it’s for the sake of his love Indu only. He narrates his past where he was a goon who is been used by Shera and how Indu and he met at the road as Indu was collecting donation for helping kids and how Indu’s love changed his outlook towards life. He stops the story at the point where Indu confessing the three words and he also telling the same to her . Shriya then asks what happened later ….He couldn’t complete anymore as some one attacks him…Police reaches there and an unconsious Balu is taken to hospital…Upon getting consciousness Balu tells Shriya to take him to a place which was actually the place where he saw Indu last…..Shriya sees a headstone which is a death monument of Indu and gets shocked….Balu tells he lost Indu she breathe her last breath in his arms only …As per the promise he given to Indu he became a gentle man in society but Indu is not with him to see this. While Indu and he were confessing their love Shera shot Indu with gun and her last words were ABCDEFG which means A boy can do everything for Girl and now he is fullfiling those words…The film ends this way . It was a tragic one….
I have not watched the movie which you have mentioned.how did you choose rajveer ajooni to represent this story?
As per the cast there are 2 heroines.right?what was the role of the other heroine in the movie?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=95rBrxYipjw
This is a song of that movie which conveys the characters of Balu and Indu so well…
Thank you so much for explaining the story and sharing the song.Glad that you changed the ending in your ss.