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Home»Fan Fiction»It was a mistake to love you… Chapter 8
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It was a mistake to love you… Chapter 8

Pavithra1616By Pavithra1616January 20, 2018Updated:January 20, 201831 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys,this is Pavithra here. I am back with my ff’s 8th chapter. A big thanks who commented on my previous chapter. Thanks to silent readers too… Hope you guys like this one…


Recap:- Madhav insults Keerthi in front of class which makes Keerthi realizing the hatred he has towards her. She promises herself to hate him.


Next day, At school. It was evening. Keerthi was seen sad. Mishal comes to her.

Mishal: Keerthi, I know how you would have felt when madhav said so, especially because you love him.

Keerthi smiles faintly..

Mishal continues……

You should overcome it, Keerthi. I know you are very bold but you seem to be weak in front of your love.

Keerthi: Maybe you are right. I am weak in front of him. And Mishal, he will be no longer my love….

Mishal: What?

Keerthi: I had loved him for 5 years and he didn’t show back any sign of love. He used to hate me and will hate me too. Then why am I loving him? You say Mishal, why should I love him if he hates me as much as I love him?

Mishal: Sorry, Keerthi. I can’t give you a answer to this question. Maybe you are right. But may I ask you, if you have loved him truly, can you hate him or forget him so suddenly?

Keerthi was speechless. She thought the same. She thought, how can I hate him when I still love him?

Mishal saw Keerthi’s expression and said.

Every love cannot be successful….

Mishal: Keerthi, I understand. You can’t give me a answer to this. But I say, for you, it will take months or even years to forget him and hate him as I believe you loved him truly.

Mishal leaves and Keerthi was left alone.

Keerthi: Mishal is right, I can’t forget him so fast because I had loved him that much. But I will work hard to forget and hate him. It was a big mistake to love you, Madhav. What wrong did I do to suffer for you?

She reaches home… At night, She was sleeping. She had a dream that had Madhav.

****

Keerthi and her friends were sitting in the class and talking. Suddenly Madhav comes to class and asked for keerthi and Keerthi stood up.

Madhav: come with me please.

Keerthi agrees and walks to the door with him. Suddenly he takes her hand in his and says.

Madhav: come with me Keerthi…..

With that Madhav runs holding Keerthi’s hand, Keerthi running behind. He runs to the park of the school. There was a small wall. (A wall someone can sit on). Madhav sits on it and askes Keerthi to sit on it too.

She sits beside him. He moves very much close to her. Now they were sitting

She sits beside him
I want to be yours forever

very close with to each other.

****

Keerthi wakes up,she sweats…

Keerthi: What? He is even in my dreams? And I could feel him sitting closer with me still now. I woke up because of this feeling. Oh! What is this god?

At the same time, at Madhav’s house.

Madhav was sleeping. He had a dream which left him scared. It was about Keerthi.

Keerthi: Madhav, you don’t understand how much you humiliated me infront of the whole class. I didn’t except such things from you. I didn’t know that you hated me this much. Sorry to say Madhav, you have hurt me a lot yesterday and I am gonna pay back for this.

Madhav: sorry, Keerthi.. Please forgive me.. I had to…

Keerthi: I don’t want to hear anything. I hate you, Madhav. And I feel ashamed of myself now!

Madhav: Keerthi, please understand. Why are you ashamed of yourself?

Keerthi: Because……………………………. I loved you……

Madhav: You love me??? (Seems happy)

Keerthi: Yes, I loved you once. Lekin ab aur nahi, aaj me tumse naphrath karthi hu. Hear it again….. Sirph naphrath…. Sirph air sirph…..

He wakes up suddenly whispering Keerthi… He sweats very badly..

Madhav: oh my god! Why am I seeing such dreams? I know, nothing of such will happen. Keerthi will be mine..

He goes back to sleep…..


PRECAP:- teacher announces of a tour and everyone was excited. During the tour, Keerdhav have a moment together…


Hope you guys enjoyed this. Ignore the spelling or grammatical mistakes. Ignore the short forms, of any…

I remember you all again that this story doesn’t have any happy ending. I mean in this story you won’t find the leads united… To know more about this story check out intro revised..

Sorry for the earlier article.. I had submitted it unknowingly… Sorry…

I will try to update as soon as possible. Do let me know what you think of the story by dropping in a comment. Don’t forget to hit the like button. I want all your love and support… Thanks for reading…

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    31 Comments

    1. niyati on January 20, 2018 3:25 pm

      Amazing lil sis….loved it….waiting for next….lots of love & Do update soon ? ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 10:54 am

        Thanks dearest niyu di.. Luv u??too…. Will surely update soon.. Where is dastaan?? You haven’t updated it for weeks, I think… Pls update soon??

      • niyati on January 28, 2018 11:37 am

        Relax dear….I am writing only & u know there is a good news that I upload two episodes is a go as I don’t update from weeks….lots of love to u ? ?

    2. Hemi on January 20, 2018 3:45 pm

      It is awesome as usual but I want to ask that have you posted devakshi ff. And if yes then send me link plsssss…. loads of love and love

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 10:58 am

        Thanks a lot hemi… Luv u too???? I will always sent you link if I update devakshi FS…

      • Hemi on January 28, 2018 12:49 pm

        No thanks Pack! Love uuuu

      • Hemi on January 28, 2018 12:50 pm

        *Pavi

    3. qwerty123 on January 20, 2018 4:59 pm

      Awesome… both of them love each other??..
      Still so much distance… i think they dont know about each other feeling ??
      …
      I know i am the stupidies himan being…??
      Update soon and a bit longer this time..

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:00 am

        Thanks aysha di.. Thanks a lot.. You just wait and watch.. You will definelty love this ff.. Will update soon..

    4. swethaa on January 20, 2018 6:03 pm

      this story is amazing…just read all parts its wonderful dear…

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:01 am

        Thanks Swethaa.. Thanks a lot.. Thanks for reading all the parts.. Glad you liked them…

    5. Aliza111 on January 20, 2018 9:55 pm

      Hi pavi sissy,
      Ur ff is so wonderful, I loved it a lot,???.
      I am juz waiting for next episode pls send me the link if u can.
      It an untold love story , I loved keerthi ‘s part and their dreams…????

      With lots of love
      Aliza
      Ur Liz❤

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:02 am

        Thanks Liz.. Thanks a lot.. Happy to see your comment.. Will surely sent you link.. Even you should for your ff.. Sanam forever.. OK… Luv u..??

    6. riyarocks on January 21, 2018 1:42 am

      pavi dear, this is simply amazing………I really enjoy reading ur plot……….luv u sweetu……….bye……….tc

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:03 am

        Thanks Priyanka di.. Thanksalot.. Love you..??

    7. fenil on January 21, 2018 11:55 am

      Superb
      Loved it.

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:04 am

        Thanks bhai.. Glad you loved it..

    8. Shreya on January 21, 2018 1:06 pm

      Wow… awesome yaar… I loved it alot.. keerthi’s dreams were soo real.. Waiting for the next part.. Update soon…

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:04 am

        Thanks Shreya.. Thanks a lot.. Will surely update soon…

    9. Mansi on January 21, 2018 2:31 pm

      Superbbbbbbbb update????Loved it a lotttttt❤❤❤❤❤❤Keerthi’s dream???Perfect pic??Precap????Can’t wait now???Update ASAP?Add pics in every updates☺☺☺

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:05 am

        Thanks Mansi di..thanks a lot. Will update soon.. Sure??

    10. arshiya_princess on January 21, 2018 4:17 pm

      Awesome Pavithra ?
      Waiting for next part
      Update soon

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:06 am

        Thanks princess.. Thanks a lot… Will update soon..?

    11. Mehak on January 21, 2018 7:27 pm

      Awesome chapter! ?
      Forgetting someone you’ve truly loved is impossible no matter what he’s done to you.
      Love is one of the most painful emotions in the world, especially an incomplete story. ?
      I can totally relate to Keerti.
      I feel a very strong connection to this story, waiting for the next update.
      With love,
      M Di

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:07 am

        Thanks M di.. Thanks a lot.. Comment was really beautiful..

    12. anuradha on January 24, 2018 6:30 pm

      so sorry pabi I was busy… I have read your story.. it’s awesome as always… very nice… keep writing dear.. love you dear

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:08 am

        No problem anu.. Its okay.. Thanks a lot.. Love you??

    13. varshini on January 27, 2018 10:16 pm

      awesome update ? , just loved it , enjoyed reading it .first of all i would like to apologize to u . u kept sending links and i could not even open tu because of exams , wat to do , these exams just dont end ? . just now opened everything and read all the links that u sent? . all were awesome as usual , sadly the comment box disappeared in some posts , so could not comment . thank u for the links ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 28, 2018 11:10 am

        No sorry pls.. Its okay.. Thanks a lot.. Glad you loved them..will be keeping semting you links!! Again thanks…??

    14. Sunanda12345 on January 28, 2018 3:23 pm

      Amazing dear…..loved it ❤❤❤❤❤❤that dream where madhav comes close to keerthi ❤????

      • Pavithra1616 on January 29, 2018 5:15 pm

        Thanks di..thanks a lot.. Glad you loved it.. Luvu????

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