Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……
Please do read the Author’s note that’s present at the end of the episode !!!!
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Wedding of Shivaay was performed beyond expectations….thee who’s who of the country and from different parts of the world arrived…it was a full fat Punjabi wedding….
Tej and Jhanvi did the kanyadaan of Anika…with Om , Rudra and Sahil along with Daksh and Sid from Anika’s side…while Prinku, Mamta, Madhuri, Rajini were there to support Shivaay….
Every ritual was performed as per the rules and traditions…..Anika couldn’t ask for anything more…..
She who never believed God started believing in him , because she understood that she was destined to have this after the hardships of her life….
Shivaay was never happy more than this in his life…he had his family complete….and two new members joined his family…Anika as his wife, Sahil as his brother-in-law…naah brother
Soon after wedding ended the post marriage rituals took place….everyone were smiles….Pinky came and handed over the keys of Oberoi Mansion to her…Anika denied but everyone insisted….
Tej came and gave her the shares of Oberoi Industries as they knew Anika was the wall behind stabilising it…..
Anika had nothing to give in return so she promised everyone to keep the house united and happy ever after……
They all had a bil bole Oberoi moment…..
Anika was taken to Shivaay’s room , now her room too and the room was decorated for their special night…Pinky and Jhanvi made her to sit on bed…she was already shy and blushing…
Pinky ”Anika now i need my heir …as soon as possible…so you boths will not go to office anytimes soon…got it”
Anika blushed turning her cheeks into deeper shades of meroon……she was shying bending her head down unable to face the elders present there….
Jhanvi ”Ohho Pinky…don’t stress her for anything…let them enjoy sometime….”
Pinky ”OMM jhethani ji…i am also asking thems to enjoy”
Shivaay ”mom…we will enjoy if you leave” he murmured last few words
Jhanvi ”i heard Shivaay and we are leaving” she came near him and wished him all the best…they both left and when Shivaay was about to close the door…OmRu came in…
Om ”Ahem ahem…someone is desperate”
Shivaay ”you…you are here? i mean anything you need?”
Rudra ”bhabhi…can we take bhabhi from you…for sometime” he winked to Om
Shivaay ”no…absolutely no…today..today is my..you know what i am trying to say”
OmRu ”what..what are you trying to say..we don’t know anything..we are still kids”
Shivaay ”ohh ya…you are kids, then what’s the work for you here…go …go out…common go out” he was pushing them….
Rudra ”bhabhi…save us..bhabhi…bhabhi..”
Anika was about to say something when Shivaay said
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka i know you love them, but not today please…i have been waiting for this since long” he said closing the door….
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich…i never knew you were so desperate”
Shivaay came and sat near her and was about to touch her when she stood up and lifted her viel…Shivaay ”what the wuck? i had to lift it right”
Anika held his hand and made him jump over the window…she took him to the backdoor and ran along with him…
OmRu were waiting for her in the car…
Shivaay ”what is happening?”
Anika ”do you believe me?”
Shivaay ”yes..”
Anika ”then get into the car”
Shivaay sat and OmRu drove off to the helipad read…the chopper was ready and so was their small luggage
OmRu bid bye to both of them wishing them all the best…the chopper took them and landed in the helipad area built over the hotel in Kodaikanal
Shivaay was amazed and Anika held his hand and walked to the room they wanted to spend their special night with…she then covered herself with the viel
Shivaay ”i never expected you to do all this Ms.Surpanaka”
Anika ”i can never forget anything you wish…and so i planned this …OmRu helped me…they actually came into our room to take us …but you sent them away”
Shivaay ”what to do i thought they were teasing us”
Anika ”haaww…you think so bad about them”
Shivaay ”i know them, they don’t leave a chance to pull my legs when it is about you”
Anika ”thank you Shivaay for gifting me this awesome and beautiful family..”
Shivaay lifted her veil up and then pulled it down….Anika’s face was glowing…..
Shivaay ”thank you for handling my life from now on” he bent towards her and placed a warm kiss on her forehead….she closed her eyes…he brought his forehead and joined with hers cupping her face with his hands…
Anika ”before we proceed i want to say something”
Shivaay ”hmmm”
Anika ”I LOVE YOU Shivaay….these words i wanted to say before i share me with you completely…i really love you…our relation started with friends, best friends, then turned into unnamed and now reached to husband-wife…but we never saw and realised that LOVE was always been between us….so today before you see me raw , i wanted to say this…i love you a lot…i may or may not look beautiful to you, but our relation will always be beautiful and will be glowing with an extra element called love”
Shivaay ”you know what…you clearly differentiated today between lust and love and you also very well know…i never fell for your beauty, i fell for your character, your heart and your persona…i have no regrets whatsoever and i just want to say back I LOVE YOU TOO ANIKA..and i will always love you”
Shivaay traced his fingers on her face bringing them towards her lips…..he rubbed them to create an unknown sensation to her….her lips shivered with his touch and she brought her looks down…he lifted her chin up and looked at her….
Anika turned sideways feeling shy…he made her face him and took on her lips placing a soft kiss…Anika was also getting ready…when he pulled back himself , she made a move to hold him on kissed him deep….soon the softness of the situation faded away and it turned into a wilder one….with him biting the lower lip bringing out a little blood…when she hissed in pain he soothed it with his tongue, making her relax….
Shivaay stopped for a while…
Shivaay ”Anika…are you really ready and comfortable because i don’t want to hurry up”
Anika pulled him over her in response….
Anika ”i want this to be the most beautiful night of ours…i know if it pains you will be there to soothe it too….i don’t want you to get disappointed and the same goes with me…we have been together, but i want you and i to be completely complete…this should be love and there should only be love…we had unspoken love between us and it’s time to have the physical love..”
Shivaay smiled at her and he started his work on her body……the clothes were feeling uncomfortable to stay there, so they happily bid bye from their bodies without their knowledge….
Shivaay’s fingers travelled first followed by his face…She was being touched sensually at every nook and corner…every mountain and valley was being visited ….and if the investment was sensuality the returns was pleasure….
While the perfumes applied to themselves provided the aroma , their names taken out of the pleasure was the music to their ears….the sweat that was coming out was the warmth and soothing each other after the warmth provided them the much needed cooling…..
The seeds for the next generation were being planted by him and it was been taken more than happily by her…..
That day saw the most beautiful reunion of them and it continued till the broad daylight woke them up …….
Tired they smiled looking at themselves, they knew they have many more nights to undergo the same pleasure besides working hard for the new future….
Got up and got readied and left to the helipad area, took the chopper and reached the OM….straight away they walked to their room through the way they went out and opened it when they heard knock on the door……..
Pinky and Jhanvi came and took Anika with her to explain her everything else while Shivaay winked at her and gave her flying kiss…….she smiled and said I LOVE YOU to him by making movements of her lips while he could read her words without voice…..
The family was completed and so were Shivaay and Anika….finally Mr Ricthie Rich and Ms.Surpanaka story ended on a happy note …………
———–For the last time of this FF , i would request you all to press like button and post your opinions….every vote (like) and opinion matters….i would reply as soon as possible.. and i would request you all to read the author’s note too !!!
———————————— AUTHOR’S NOTE —————————————-
Hey Readers, thank you each and everyone of you for being there to support me by voting and posting your opinions….this story has been really special to me as this story is very close to my heart….the college scenarios were real life incidents of mine….
Many of you asked where did i get those names from….i was called Ms.Surpanaka by my friends as i really used to be angry those days and off course there was Mr.Ritchie Rich , Mr.Karchi, Mr.Spoon too …but before you assume things…there was nothing as you are thinking that happened in the story , happened in my real life…the competition , education, tuitions , golden egg, nest, eagle, quiz competition off course where i studied, all were for real…the dark past, family conditions, romance , sanjana, saving business etc etc are purely fictional….
I have tried a complete new genre for writing this ff and i hope i have been good if not better in portraying….as it’s been 10 long years i have been out of college….
MY SINCERE APOLOGIES IF I have not replied to someone…Apologies if i had been late in posting the episodes , and also my apologies if by any means i have hurt someone by any means….
Last but not the least…i hope i can see each one of you who supported me to be , by my side whenever i come back with a new write up…Right now going on a short break to revive my thinking for some new plot on some new genre…..Till then please do take care of yourselves, keep smiling….lots and lots of love and best wishes to you all from my side….
This is VHM aka Harika Signing off !!!!!
90 Comments
Yeah ,I am the first one who click the like and drop a comment it is a great episode with a tremendous vocabulary but I have a request I want that you will write an another FF like your previous one named was the trip was changed their lives I think if I forgot then apologize lovely epi god bless you and read my stories too
Hey Mitthu…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever something new idea strikes my brain…loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
I promise i will read your stories, i will soon be getting free of few responsibilities and then will read your stories and post my opinion too (if tu allows me to do so)
A happy ending to an awesome story….i love it so much that i read it both here and on wattpad. Enjoy a well deserved break and just know that we are waiting for more fabulous stories when you come back
Hey Dear…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…awee that’s so sweet of you to read in tu ans wattpad too….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever something new idea strikes my brain…loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Absolutely Amazing loved it, thank you for writing such a brilliant story… will miss the episodes everyday. Used to wait for them going up daily and will be a little lost now. All the best until the next story. Many thank
Hey Faz…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever something new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Till date I am silent reader of your masterpiece… I am sad that the book is finished but couldn’t argue more as it is beautifully written capturing each n every emotion fantastically. Keep the good work n will look forward for more ur writings.
Hey dear…first of all welcome….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever something new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Happy ending . Awesome
Miss u, bye
Hey Abi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will be missing you too….loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Finally Mr Ritchie rich and Ms Surpanaka stepped into their new life as husband – Wife..diii please come up with a new story as soon as possible…I promise u this time I won’t be a silent reader??…will be waiting for your new write-up diii….miss u…take care
Hey Sameera…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever something new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….miss you too
HI harika. Really i enjoyed this ff . Thank you
U r regularly post the ff may be Nevu busy ga unna kuda. O dont yar i really miss u daily morning i wake up waiting for u r ff after reading i woke up from my bed .kal se Nenu eami chayali but i reallly wanna praise u BEC i read so many ffs but some are irregular fast ga story ending may be there are busy thats why but these 47 days u r really awesome yar thank you very much harika and bye blessings to u r baby
Hey Anu…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…awee that’s so sweet of you to let me know that you used to wait for my episodes….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Thanks a lot for the blessings to my baby
Waited till the last to post my first comment. Just wanted to let you know that everyday I waited for your post and waited more eagerly to know how the story unfolds. You made the characters so lively that I could actually imagine it while reading. It was indeed a lovely story like all your previous ones. Keep writing! God bless your creativity.
Hey Shilpi…first of all welcome….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…that’s so nice of you to let me know that you waited for my updates….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole….loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
hugs & kisses to you Hari….luved it totally luved my shivaye and anika’s idea to run back to the hotel was owsm …beautiful …
Hey Pushpa…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…..loads of love, hugs , kisses and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hi akka… Thnks for the happy ending… Really those incidents in clg r urs… It’s really cool and awesome… I hope u enjoyed ur clg life… Before this ff u took different kind of story but I like this story than anything till all ff in this 1300+ pages telly updates… It took a special place in my heart… Take ur time and come back with ur khidkithod ff as soon as possible… I will be waiting fr u… Take care of little princess… I will miss u… My support will be always there fr u… And I will be the one who will show u a good things u r giving through ur writting… I’m waiting to do that… Take care of little princess, you and your family too… I’m gona miss u badly… Keep smiling…
Hey Sukeer…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…that’s so nice of you to write such amazing lines….i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Amazing creation indeed………. A fabulous ending……………
You played with the words very well??
The way you portrayed their union was, I felt, very symbolic………….. I just loved it
Finally an amazing?? journey has come to the end……….. Will definitely miss it every morning………. As it had become my habit
But I will be eagerly waiting for your next piece of work……..
Till then happy holidays…….. Enjoy with your family and have fun………… Take care and stay lively……. May God bless you and your family
Hey Pakhi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….thanks a lot for those wishes
You know what the worst part is ..it is the end? and the bestest part is it is happened…egarly waiting for ur next story…dilse l love u …
Hey Rasika…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Amazing.
Loved it.
Hey Bro…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole……loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
It’s was awesome ff.. mind blowing storyline and amazing ending.. No words to describe.. U are wonderful writer, and no one can connect the story so wel like u do.. I read so much was ff but urs always been perfect for me.. Hope u come back very soon wit ur new story line.. Sorry I missed to reply to ur previous episodes bcuz of busy schedule but I never missed to read it everyday.. As I always said ur ff is like drugs for me I need to read everyday.. All the best for u, stay healthy and happy.. A lot of love for u?? Take care urself ??
Hey Nisha…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Beautiful….this is the only word which i can say ryt now???…it became my routine to visit TU nd read ur story first everyday…this ff is one of them which m gonna remember fr a very long time…i’ll miss u a lot…come back soon with a khidkitod story….love u loads take care
Hey Aayushi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Lots of love Hari beautiful update
Take care come back soon
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Beautiful ending…. Our pleasure to read your ff.. Your ff was a wonderful journey… I did not even think that it is a true one… It was fabulous and wonderful ff… Hope to meet you soon.. Baye.. Take care….
Hey Aafiya…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Thanks a lot dii?? but I am gonna miss u??please come back early as possible . I really loved the concept and the whole friction I remember each and every incident of your ff , actually I was just addicted to your wonderful work . Please come back for more dosage of friction and be safe and keep prospering in your life . Ameen.
Hey Zaina …thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…i am gonna miss you too….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….thank you so much for the wishes
Super amazing nd awesome…
I’ll surely miss this ff…
Nd thanks for sharing the authors note..so u are too connected to the story…love to u di…
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole..i will miss our conversations in the opinion section……loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
The best FF till now
Hey …thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole……..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
I am one of your silent reader of this ff. I am sorry for not commenting on your ff but I waited every for this ff. I am sad that story is ended but at a good note. Thanku for this ff and make us realise that true love exist.
Love
Hey …First of all welcome….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…awee that’s so sweet of you….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole……loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
The best ff and the best writer and wish u would write new ff soon . Will miss an amazing writer . ,,,♡♥
Hey Mitali…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot..awee that’s s sweet of you to write such amazing words, will be missing you too a lot…..glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Very nice Epilogue ?..i hv read all yr previous FF.. they were really really nice..sorry for not writing any comments due to issues I had face previously. I will definitely comment in yr up coming FF post. Tc ?
Hey Jeeta…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Lovely Ending to an amazingly beautiful story ?
The last update was penned down beautifully, the most awaited Union of ‘Mr Ritchie Rich’ & ‘Me Surpanaka’ ?
This story was really amazing, brought back certain memories from my 1st yr of college life too!
Looking forward to read more of your works ?
Love ?
no words to say just awesome story, all the episodes r superb, God Bless You and Your Family, and come back soon with a new khidkitode story
Amazing The ff is beautifully written and loved it
thank u for the ff
Take care & Back soon
This is the best ff that i ever read. I loved it to the core.Thank you for such a wonderful ff.
Take care & come back soon with a darwasathod story
This is the best mind blowing ff that i ever read. I loved it to the core.Thank you for such a wonderful ff.
Take care & come back soon with a darwasathod story
Hey Aeibel…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hey di i was a salient reader of ur ff of previous once but today i got semester break and first task after taking a deep slumber i read this ff too from the beginning di it’s too fab and i can’t express ur talent in words but u deserve ???.
Soon come with new subject eagerly looking for it.
Hey Fairy…first of all welcome….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…and so sweet of you to write such amazing words….i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hi di i am ur silent reader of ur ff i loved
ur ff story a lot i miss ur story nw because i was always wait for ur next ff
I miss ur story di
Hey dear…First of all welcome….thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hi friend how are u very nice n super end u brought infront us that we had a very nice n good feel of pleasure that we deeply immensive with ur perfect end.seriously u maintained a perfect feel that is upto the mark n beyond the awesome levels that we enjoyed each n every situation of episode n they finally became one in terms of everything n stand for each other that’s the great.so Mr Ritcherich heart problem is also gone by coming close to his heart Ms surpanaka.sorrynow they are Mr n Mrs anikashivaaySinghoberoi.what a marvellous n fabulous FF that added to ur previous ones.keep continue n rock always.for now have a nice time in leisure. Miss u frnd once again take care.i patiently awaits for ur new creation.take care vhm n ur family too.
Hey Raji…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hi friend how are u very nice n super end u brought infront us that we had a very nice n good feel of pleasure that we deeply immensive with ur perfect end.seriously u maintained a perfect feel that is upto the mark n beyond the awesome levels that we enjoyed each n every situation of episode n they finally became one in terms of everything n stand for each other that’s the great.so Mr Ritcherich heart problem is also gone by coming close to his heart Ms surpanaka.sorrynow they are Mr n Mrs anikashivaaySinghoberoi.what a marvellous n fabulous FF that added to ur previous ones.keep continue n rock always.for now have a nice time in leisure. Miss u frnd once again take care.i patiently awaits for ur new creation.take care vhm n ur family too.
Thank you so much once again dear
Diiiiiii, this journey started with the flashback eventhough it was slow it never failed to keep me hooked and today with this beautiful epilogue we reached our MANZIL.. thank u soooo much for this wonderful journey.. will be waiting to start another wonderful journey with u…. till then keep smiling & stay happy…. God bless u…
Hey Ammu…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Hari di …… Tighttttttttt hug for you. And sending lots of kisses for you to Belgium.
I feel like crying di. Feel like I have lost my companion. Our friendship started with my fan girling . I’ll be your fan of writing forever. I’m soooooo sorry. I couldn’t comment regularly.
Surpanaka and Ritchie rich will always lies in my heart. ????????
Now promise that you’ll come back with a new khidhkitod ff soon….. Don’t forget to inform me di…
Lots of LOVE to you ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hey Kiki…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…ooo…don’t cry…that’s so sweet of you to write such amazing words…but Kiki you know na i am not at all comfortable with fan and all things…i am your dii and you are my sister this is the only truth i would love to believe……. glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Agree Hari di. Your sister who is a fan for your work . But yeah I’ll always be your sister ??
Beautiful epilogue
Hey Alekhika…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole……loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
Miss u I don’t no any words……
Am waiting for your next ff??????
Hey Megha…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…will miss you too….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
hi.
This is one of the best story which tempts me to read everyday..its so perfect ,beautiful..u have a great talent..just i want to say.. keep writing…i want to ask u something,is it completely ur imagination or somewhere related to u..
thank u again for ur regular updates..( so punctual yaa..tat continuity)
i like the anika character..superv ya..i can feel her..independent bold bindasss..
the story s very convincing..i loved it..i dont get words to say..
i startd liking the story not for anika or shivay..
only for ur style..urs s something diff ,fresh ya..it can reach me..make me to read everyday
finish s good..u didnt drag it.dont stop tis writing..again want to read ur story..keep experimenting…Thank u again for 47 days..
Hey Karti…first of all welcome …..thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…that’s so nice of you to write those amazing words….i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
It is beautiful and mind blowing update dii… It is amazing to know about your educational past….
It is just lovely…
AApologizes for appearing late as i am in a sad mood and more getting sad to see that ff is finished…
Want sequel….
Hey Nikki …thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…no worries take your time to read and post your opinion..i and this ff both can wait….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
hi akka
Tq for giving us such a beautiful story akka. This story was nt less than a fairy tale. Wr the whole life of the prince nd princess changes after the entry of each other intheir life. Wr this may b the end of the story bt beginning of thie new life. Tq for giving such a beautiful happy wala ending. Nd happy to know tht the friends was shown was really in ur life. Then i think u b the lucky person to hv such a gd friends circle. I wish even u hv a husband like Mr . Richice rich loving nd caring one. Nd tq for giving such a a superb story once again. Sad its endimg so soon.Nd will b waiting for ur next nw ff story. Till than small bye. Nd want to c u in pkj nd ur comments. With lots of of love to u nd ur cuty pi princess. Till than Take care.
“ADVANCE HAPPY PONGAL” TO U ND FAMILY. TQ AKKA
Hey Jeevi…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…will miss you too….that’s so sweet of you to write such beautiful words….and thanks a lot for the wishes….glad you liked the epilogue and this ff on a whole…i will for sure be back with something else whenever some new idea strikes my brain and will hope to see you back to support me whenever i am back…..loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care….
omg.. you are awesome writter. I read all your ff but this ff is best. ??? I just can’t wait to read your ff.?????
Hey Sadia…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to write such amazing words….i will come up with something new, whenever a new idea strikes my brain…loads of love and best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
A very happy ending and please enjoy your time off…It is well deserved. Blessings a thousand folds for you and your family! It’s good that some of your ideas came from experience and the rest from your gift for writing. Please stay blessed until we meet again! <3 <3 <3
Hey Yvonne..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for everything…hey sorry I forgot to answer your question on my wattpad story…i started in tu, so whatever i write wherever i write it will always be in tu….as tu is my root, and I cannot forget my root….will come back soon whenever a new idea strikes my brain…loads of love and best wishes to you… keep smiling and take care
hello akka..epilogue is awesome..and you wrote it so beautifully..super awesome to know about your college memories..soo my teacher cum akka nee student thana next class i mean next story kosam wait chesthu vuntundhi..you know after this epilogue until you come back i am not only going to miss you but also the profile pic of yours i mean your daughters pic who always reminds me of my niece..your daughter is soo cute..how old is she?? and how is she right now??
Hey Prabha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…havha ha teacher aa nena…lol….i am a very bad teacher chelli….seriously ….next ff rasthanu …kotta idea burra lo padinapudu….awee adi Akki chinnpati pic…ippudu peddadi ayyindi…love you loads chelli…keep smiling and take care
She is 4 years now…and she is doing good chelli
Did I it was just awesome how can someone be angry or hurt? Ur is just beautiful as all other ff’s u have written till date and I know u will be back with one more ff soon. Till then I will be waiting . Take care of yourself.
Hey MANU…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee that’s so sweet of you…i will be back soon whenever a new idea pops up in my little brain…love you loads and loads of best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Hi frnd how are u I hope u are enjoying Ur leisure take care n happy pongal in advance good nite n have a nice time in sleep n more healthy
Hey Raji…am fine dear….belated pongal wishes to you too….how are you ? keep posting messages Raji
please continue don’t end i love this
Hey Princy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…unfortunately this ff ended…will come up with something new…..loads of best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Akkkaaaaaaa chollyyyyyyyyy forgiveee me…..naku time assal dorakale i mailed u the reason ne ff super akka
Hey Mohitha….thank you so much chelli…thanks a lot….awee love you loads chelli…keep smiling and take care