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Home»Fan Fiction»Namkaran- AvNeil (just enjoy it) Chapter-12
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Namkaran- AvNeil (just enjoy it) Chapter-12

fanofsomeoneBy fanofsomeoneDecember 17, 20172 Comments5 Mins Read
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Ali- Avni. What d hell is happening who d hell r u to point gun at avni

Shewta-Oh hello who d hell r u that u r taking this girl’s side

Ali- Excuse me aunty who d hell r u to ask me like this

Avni- What d hell is happening .. Hello! How r u mera naam hai jolly Happy everybody got there respective introduction… Who d hell r u my foot…

Ali- No but what is this like this only u can’t point gun at anyone .. Who r u

Avni- ACP Neil Khanna

Ali- What

Avni nods yes..

Ali- What have u done.. (Whispers) Don’t tell me u tried to sell him d ring

Avni- (Whispers) Are u mad to buy that ring people first have to take appointment don’t u know

Ali- Aarre this girl.. Wait what proof do u have that u r police I mean nowadays everybody have guns like criminals

Avni-(pushes ali)Yaa right.. Why I didn’t thought about it

Ali- To think people needs the thing called brain

Avni- What do u mean I don’t have brain

Ali- Show proof Mr.

Avni- Ya show proof first or else I will

Neil shows ID…

Avni- Or else I will do nothing… (Whispers) Ali he is real officer what will we do now

Ali- What did u said him BTW

Avni whispers n tells everything to ali..

Neil- What u two r murmuring I will put both of u in jail now n

Ali- Baby ! Baby where were u I searched for u the entire hotel n u r here

Avni- (avni was confused but acts along with ali)Baby I was also searching u only n I came here

Ali- Oh baby .. Sorry actually she have amnesia that’s why she thought u r her husband that’s why at hospital also she called u husband

Shewta-Really amnesia what kind of amnesia is this now she is calling u baby sometimes she calls neil baby n what r u two doing in hotel

Ali- Its a different kind of amnesia when .. Where people forget one person n there respective husband but thinks someone else as her husband but remembers after sometime n actually we came Mumbai for her treatment

Neil- Really but she was inside d cupboard n was fighting with me

Avni- Aahhh .. My head its paining .. Baby pls take me to room

Ali- Yaa baby we r going only …Sorry

Shewta-Aarre wait .. Hello u two where r u two running…What all this nonsense…

While neil stands there dazed…..

They leave…

Avni- What d hell didn’t u had some good reason..

Ali- What I would have done nothing was coming in my mind n tell me one thing what were u doing in his room that too inside cupboard

Avni-Aarre I was escaping from kachara

Ali- But I can’t see any garbage here its a clean hotel avni

Avni- Stupid I am talking about kachara bhai

Ali- He is here

Avni explains everything…

Ali- Oh god avni now u will have to stay a little carefully..

Avni- Ya right listen I am very tired I will go n take some rest…

Avni goes in her room..

Avni- Oh god it was so tiring… Wait now I think I can see that photo..

After sometime avni joins d pieces of d photo

Avni- What its just me n Sarla maa why was she hiding this .. I will have to talk to her..

After sometime she reaches NGO-

Avni- What d hell no one is here n why is Sarla maa’s room so scattered..
She receives a call-

Avni- Hello. What! No I am coming

She reaches hospital-

Person-Are u avni

Avni- Yes.. U only phoned me right where is Sarla maa is she OK

Person-Don’t worry she is absolutely fine its just that she was having problem while breathing that’s why I bought her here n she was taking ur name n asked to call u so I called u

Avni- Where is she

They reached d room-

Avni- Sarla maa r u OK

Sarla-I am fine avni but don’t know what had happened if she was not there

Avni- Thank u so much.. What’s ur name n how did u know about Sarla maa n Sarla maa where r other people

Neha-Nice to meet u I am neha purohit actually I went to d NGO to buy flowers as one of d lady staying there does plantation right..

Avni- Ya.. I too sometimes buy flowers from rekha masi she loves gardening n sells them

Neha-Yaa that time only as I saw no one I went inside and saw her she had problem breathing so I bought her here

Avni- Thank u so much for ur help..
But Sarla maa where r other people

Sarla-Actually they all went out today .. I was not feeling like going so I didn’t go..

Nurse-She is now OK u can take her home..

At NGO-

Sarla-Avni n neha how long will u both stay everyone have returned now u both can go

Neha-Ok then I will leave..

Avni- Neha.. Ah. Should I call u neha ji

Neha-Maa call me neha maa

Avni- OK neha maa once again thank u for ur help .. Can we have coffee like u really helped us a lot so

Neha-OK. Let’s have coffee in hotel star shine

Avni- Hotel star shine why?

Neha-Actually that is where I am staying

Avni- Really that’s amazing I too stay in d same hotel

Neha-Oo .. Wow that means we both can now meet everyday

Avni- Yaa.. Right let’s go.. Sarla maa u take care OK n if u need any help then call me..

Sarla-Ok

Avni- Sarla maa r u sure I should leave I mean

Sarla-Avni

Avni-OK OK

As they leave Sarla n neha smile at each other Sarla sighing thumbs Up…

Precap-Avni searches her pendant……..

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    2 Comments

    1. Hiyori on December 17, 2017 7:02 pm

      Starting part is funny though and remaining what happened to sarla maa plz clear the confusion asap plz and i am getting a doubt that, will this story will transform in to a luv story. Seeing upto today episode ,i am thinking this story is turning into dont know what. Avni has a boyfriend nd she loves him,neil is marrying riya but i am sure avni will try to stop him i dont know how, this story is 1000million km far from becoming a love story. I am sorry to say this .i didnt mean to hurt your feelings .saying this becoz maybe u can get a new point of view about the story.

    2. lillianalieben on December 17, 2017 7:56 pm

      loved it. an ossum update. but when will avneil love story bloom. plz do it fast aditi. all the best, love yah and update soon….

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