Chinki riya avni were sitting and chatting-
Chinki- Wow avni u just rocked n when u entered the stage wearing the bright golden gown u were looking like an angel
Riya- Yes n u answered every question with such confident I am sure judges r impressed
Avni- C’mon guys u three r praising me from yesterday first let me go further. (Thinks what will I do I am not getting time only to see about Sarla maa’s matter)
Ali- U 3 r gossiping here n there that boy is impressing daya ji
Riya- Ali the reason behind this is u only
Chinki- Leave all this c’mon let’s go n see how riyas so called fiance looks like
Many people have gathered there, there r dayawanti n a boy taking blessings from her , avni chinki- ali were trying to see the face n after sometime that did see the face n both avni n chinki- were shocked the boy was non other then Neil
Avni- (shocked) This boy
Ali/riya-U know him?
Chinki- Of course he is the boy whom avni
Avni-Riya who is that person (points towards raj)
Riya- That person my so call father-in-law
Avni starts laughing like mad
Ali- What happened to avni
Chinki- I think she became mad seeing this boy as riyas fiance
Avni- No chinki I am not mad but this father-son jodi will surely be
Chinki- What do u mean
Avni-U remember he is the same man who took so much money from me for only a single scratch in his car’s headlight n that Master too pointed gun at me because of this person
Chinki- Yes So
Avni- So .. So I will now take my revenge first I had only one reason to break this marriage but now I have two
Ali- What r those two
Avni-No.1- for ali- riya to get married
No.2- He will loose a lots of money
Riya- OK so what first
A waiter was carrying curry but by mistake d curry fell all over avni’s dress
Avni- O god what d hell
Waiter-Sorry sorry ma’am I am really very sorry
Avni- What sorry
Waiter-Ma’am pls forgive me I did not do it intentionally
Avni- Its OK u leave… I will just change an come…
Kachara Bhai-U said that the girl is in Mumbai from so many days we r searching her but not getting only
Goonn1-Boss Mumbai is such a big city n u don’t know anything about her so it will surely take time
Kachara bhai-Shut up.. Searching her is not the problem staying in this hotel is problem what u said this hotel is cheap really u all find this hotel cheap cost of water also in this hotel is so high
Goon2-Sorry boss but we also sometimes feel to stay in good hotel n boss its OK we can go from here
Kachara bhai-No I won’t go n if it was only about me then it was OK but u fools not of any use only eating 24 hours because of u all so long bill is been made
He suddenly hits someone
Kachara-Sorry
Avni- What sorry all the people today they got me only or what someone throwing curry someone pushing
Kachara-(thinks-I think I know this girl)
Avni- (thinks-why I feel like I know him)
Kachara-This girl the fraud girl… Catch her idiots
Avni- Oh shit
Avni runs the goons follows her
Kachara-Wait wait u fraud I won’t spare u from the time people got to know a single girl fooled me my name in the market has drown .. I will kill u
Avni- Oh god! I don’t think he is in a mood to listen any explanations
She continue running n they chasing.. She suddenly sees an open door she goes inside the room but forgets to close d door
Avni- Oh god! chinki was right he reached Mumbai searching me
Kachara-Where is that girl.. I am damm sure she is in a room of this floor only
Goon3-Boss this door is open
Avni gets shocked she tries to get under the bed
Avni- Is this a bed no place only to get inside..
She then hides inside the cupboard…
Goon1-But boss I don’t think that the girl will go inside n leave the door open let’s search somewhere else
Suddenly a boy comes out of d washroom it was Neil he had worn clothes but in upper part he hadn’t… He opens the cupboard
Avni- Aaaahhhhhhhh!!
Neil- U .. What r u doing here .. U r d same hospital girl right.. What is ur problem miss
Avni- What my problem! just listen u Mr. dustbin I don’t have any interest coming here n what do u think of urself that u r very handsome, charming, big Bollywood celebrity, girls r made behind u that they will follow u specially me .. U think I will follow u .. keep dreaming Mr. dustbin
Neil- Really
Avni- (Avni nodded yes with attitude)
Neil- (Shouts)Then what r u doing in my room that too inside the cupboard..
Avni- Because of kachara…….Listen u Mr. Dustbin if I knew earlier that this room belong to u then I hadn’t even stepped in this room got it n…
Suddenly she slips n falls on the bed along with Neil.
Both share an eylock (Dil diyan gallan- TZH plays)
Shewta-Tillu r u ready many more guest r there whom u need to meet… (Shocked) What d hell is happening tillu what r u doing..
Avni-Tillu??
Neil-Mom … (Shouts at avni) Will u please get up
Avni- (thinks -This is a very good chance to break there marriage).. Why tilli before ur mother came u were so happy lying in d bed with me n now u r behaving this way why tilli
Neil-(confused…thinks-why I feel like again she will do some drama)
Shewta-Oye does he look like girl its tillu OK n only I call him with that name who r u
Avni- U call him tillu but not me for me its tilli .. Right jaanu (winks at Neil)
Neil starts coughing….
Shewta-Oye what drama is going on here tillu what u r coughing answer me what is she saying
Neil-Mom I don’t know from where she came n.. O miss what is ur problem miss why ur always behind me
Avni- I am behind u why r u lying tilli u were the one who proposed me n said on d marriage night I will escape with u
Shewta-What!!! Tillu what is she saying
Neil- Hello! When did I say all this to u
Avni- Baby u forgot try to recall that purnimaa night when snake bit u n I took out d poison then u promised me that u will marry only me n no one else .. Try to recall baby pls
Shewta-Tillu is she saying truth .. Why r u silent tillu say something..
Avni- Baby say no that u n I r lovers baby pls say
Shewta-Tillu say its all lie .. Tillu
Avni- Baby say its all true n u
Neil- (shouts) enough… He goes n brings his gun points towards avni
Avni gets shocked..
Avni- (frightened) Are.. Are u a don
Neil- ACP Neil Khanna
Avni- (frightened) What!! I mean Wow
Avni starts coughing..
Neil- What happen aren’t u happy
Avni- Why should I be happy
Neil- Whenever I meet u something or d other happens with me sometime coffee falls on my face other time someone comes n congratulates me on having a goddess wife etc etc n all this happens because of u
Avni- (think- why people say that overacting is dangerous for health I got to know today.. Earlier if I knew that he is ACP I would have thought of some other way) MUMMY
Shewta-Wow. From baby u went to mummy.. Impressive
Avni-No no .. I m not baby only I was just remembering the mummy.. Italy one..
Neil- So what were u saying
Ali- Avni
Precap-Avni goes to Sarla n gets shocked….
4 Comments
ossum. i loved it. i was literally laughing. oh god. u have a very good sense humour. i loved the avneil and sweta scenes. omg i can’t stop laughing. aditi u r truly an amazing writer. y don’t u start a new ff just like this if u have any new plot full of funny scenes. plz if u can update regularly but i really want to read the other chapters as soon as possible. love yah, update soon and all the best.
Thanks u so much..
How will I join wattpad n if I do will I have to right this ff from start in wattpad…
Today episode is full of avneil funny moments i totally enjoyed it.waiting for next episode.
I dont know ur name so,thank u for sharing ur feeling with me that day , sorry i am unable to reply right a way thats why i am writing here. Dont stress ur fingers that much i know it is difficult to type on keyboard. U dont need to write ur story every day if u want updates ur story once every two days maybe that can help u. I am concerned about u even if i dont know u (my meaning is, didnt really met face to face.dont take it in a wrong way) .
u want to know if hiyori is a girl or boy name right. It is a girl name. HIYORI meaning is weather.
Thank u so much…
Wow that’s amazing I asked u because I never heard this name before… Hi I am Aditi..