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Home»Fan Fiction»WILL U MAKE ME – SHOT 1
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WILL U MAKE ME – SHOT 1

HaripriyaBy HaripriyaDecember 2, 201721 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii friends……..hari is back with a new shorts…hope u all like this…and I m going to write a romantic os…for the 1st time…if u don’t like plz say it….i will not try again…plzzz…need ur suggestion…Im not good in this track but I just going to try….

It starts ….

Sumi: beta get ready soon the grooms family must be coming…
Girl: but ma I am not interest to marry now…
S:I said u to get ready …not ur opinion…
G:but ma…..
S:ragini….
G:srry ma…
Ragini gets ready…in pink orange comination…..sareee….

After some time….
S:ragini come down….
R:yes ma coming…
Ragini came down…and stood bending her head…without lefting…
Ap:how beautiful my bahu is….and kissed her forehead..
Ragini slightly lift her head and saw the boys foot…
He was wearing…sandal pant.,.
Then made herself confident to see him…
She saw his black shirt…
But……all went in vein…
S:beta do u want to talk with her…
b:yes ma..
S:ragini take him to ur room…
Ragini took him too her room…she entered first…he came back…

She turned due to the sound of locking the door…and saw him…
R:laksh tum…
L:ahhhaan hum …so..
R:how dare u to …..come to my home…
L:do u wnt to see…
R:what …but her got widen her eyes…..and realized…a rough lips on her…
She tried to push him..but he was strong…
Her heart beat started batting fast……
He was kissing her has there is no tomorrow…
She closed her eyes…when she felt a hand on her waist….
After some time…both parted away due to lack of oxygen…
R:laksh…
L:say it again…I love it went u saw it….
R:what r u doing here… ….
L:to make u mine…
R:for beinging ur I will…
But before she complete her words….he kissed her…
But this time … he was kissing her to express his angry…because..he know what was she about to say
She started responding…without her knowledge…his angry was replaced by intense liplock…
After some time…
L:never try to say ….that..
Ragining was looking him…
L:I will die…but never…say this…
She nodded her head…mm
L:r u interested to marry..
R:I cant cross my mothers words…
L:if it is me…
But got disturbed when sumi called them….
S:beta both come down…
L:ahhhh ma coming…
Why does it happen for me alone..said slowly….
L:u first anwer me
…..s:beta….
R:what ever u do …I hate u…she said seriously and went out….leaving him alone..

After some time…
Ap:laksh..come down….
He came down…and was shocked seeing..what was happing..

To be continued….
Plz say ur suggestion guys..

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    21 Comments

    1. Rehna on December 3, 2017 7:33 am

      Interesting, Ragu hate laksh

    2. Malu on December 3, 2017 8:47 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    3. lovely7 on December 3, 2017 2:41 pm

      Nice

    4. harneet on December 3, 2017 3:06 pm

      nice …. for the firat time m reading a raglak ss ..??

    5. Anju on December 3, 2017 7:34 pm

      Superb episode

    6. Elizabethlovely on December 3, 2017 8:35 pm

      Awesome

    7. Raglak_fan on December 3, 2017 9:33 pm

      Amazing dear

    8. Aamy on December 3, 2017 9:53 pm

      Awesome

    9. Soumya on December 4, 2017 2:27 pm

      Superb di

    10. Pearly on December 4, 2017 3:32 pm

      Nice

    11. Arjuna on December 4, 2017 3:58 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    12. Sherin on December 4, 2017 4:13 pm

      Superb dear

    13. Laashya on December 4, 2017 7:43 pm

      Lovely episode didu

    14. Vennila on December 4, 2017 8:37 pm

      Awesome episode

    15. Thahseem on December 4, 2017 9:44 pm

      Nice

    16. Monisha on December 5, 2017 5:05 pm

      Superb

    17. Vini on December 5, 2017 7:55 pm

      Loved it

    18. Monu on December 5, 2017 9:59 pm

      Interesting

    19. Jiyani on December 8, 2017 5:22 pm

      Fantastic dear

    20. Ammu on December 8, 2017 5:47 pm

      I’m really very sorry for the late comment. It’s interesting episode dear and loved Raglak scenes. Love you dear and take care

    21. Tani on December 15, 2017 7:55 am

      Awesome

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