hi guyzs iam back with my new ff . yes guyzs a new ff yes with a new one. thanks for your support for my previous ffthough it was one year ago.. ha.ha.. but i really loved your response thanks guyzs. . now i write an ff on shivika of isqbaaz . here is small intro.
a small house a girl sleeping peacefully. suddenly… baby utho..
baby utho…
girls _ ( covering her face with blanket) are kamki let me sleep .
kamki_ ( maid) no anika get up ( yes she is anika)
girl woke up . with a big smile and she was looking like a princess.
anika- kamki what yaar .
kamki _ didi aaj apka collage ka first day.
anika_ (excited) yes… yes… i remembered . i have to get ready .thaks kamki
she left to get ready…
after an hour…
anika calling someone.
anika _ hi gauri ( anika’s bestfriend) aaj collage ka first day excited hai ??
gauri_ anika its your first day of collage . because tu beech me join kar ri hai na.
( actually anika tiook transfer from anotgr collage of delhi to dehradun collage she live alone as she dont have any one in this world. except gauri.)
anika – yes .. i forgot. i dont know gauri . what wil happen here in dehradun .ihave lost every thing . but still iam scared about loosing someone .
gauri_ loosing someone ? but who?? .
anika_ i dont know yaar gauri.?
gauri_ annu i think you are scared becoz of all those incident and isi liye you are overthinking.
anika_ yes it may be becoz of those incidents
gauri- hmmm chal i will meet you in collage
anika – hmm bye
meanwhile
kamki- didi your breakfast is ready .come fast.
anika- ha.. comng
screen freezes on tensed face of anika
guyzs this is small intro of anika and gauri or i should say anika hope you all like it
precap_ gauri and anika in collage. entry of gauri,s frnd .
who is gauri’s frnd ? guess it and tell me through it comment . hope you like it . let me know your views via comment
17 Comments
loved it your writting skills are very good. and i love it . and as far as i thik gauri’s friend may be shivay or rudra or om. suspense is good
guyzs i you read this ff plz leave your valuable comment. iam desperate to know your views
It is nice one dear
thanks for reading and plzz continue reading.
nice . loved the intro of anika. eager to know the story ahead . suspense is killer . and ya frnd may be shivomru
hi kanika i loved your ff and carry on writting its very nice .
thanks mansi .continue reading
it is funny that you are praising your own ff. but it is very nice . and you are right suspense is too good
actually rakesh my roomy did that . she used my phone to read it and commented and as i was loged in so this happened and its really funny. thanks for reading
nice continue . and plzs reveal the suspense soon.
Awesome…
welcome back kanika . loved first part and looking forward for more intesting parts
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loved your ff plzz make it a bit longer
nice . waiting for next episode eagerly
suspense is great . good
Awesome update
Interesting. Waiting for the next