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Home»Fan Fiction»Adoore Khwaab — Ragsan & Avneil (Part 1)
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Adoore Khwaab — Ragsan & Avneil (Part 1)

DrashtiBy DrashtiNovember 28, 2017Updated:November 28, 201723 Comments6 Mins Read
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Avni – Uncle….good morning! [She runs and hugs Ashish]

Ashish – Arey Avni ..how come ur up so early? It’s usually Ragini who comes to me every morning!

Avni – oh! ..I thought I was the second one as usual. Why? ..Am I first to hug you today?..where’s di ?

Ashish- I don’t know. Is she not there in your room?

Avni – Nahi na uncle…

Ashish – strange ….Ragini…beta Ragini ..[ashish calls out aloud]

Meanwhile someone walks in the terrace ..Dressed in blue colored salwar-suit ..with bangles in hand & anklets in the legs ..The wind blows heavily ,she moves the string of hair which falls on her eyes & then feels her fingers are wet with her own tears .She goes & leans against a wall & slowly brings her hand forward & looks at the pic & says :-

Ragini – Happy birthday papa..[ her tears fall on his picture] ..

Meanwhile …she hears the voice of her sister & uncle calling out for her..

Ragini – Gosh…they’re coming here…main kya karoon …is tasveer ko kahan chupaon? . [She tries to quickly hide the picture behind her but…before she cud]

Ashish – Ragini you’re here!…thank God..& what is that in your hand??

Ragini -Nothing uncle…nothing at all..

Avni- Di!…don’t hide. Show us na..

Avni pulls the picture & sees it & becomes still…Then Ashish takes it and sees ..

Ashish- Oh.. Shekhar’s picture….

Ragini – Nahi uncle…I was just…

Ashish – You don’t have to give me explanations beta..I know its Shekhar’s birthday today….

Avni – Oh yes!…main papa ki birthday kaise bhool sakthi !

Ragini – Uncle…I’m sorry main is tarah terrace main aakar…I’m very sorry. I don’t know what u must be thinking about me..

Ashish – Its ok Ragini. there is nothing wrong in you remembering Shekhar, because even if I try to fill your dad’s absence …I still cannot give you what his presence can. right?
Ragini wipes her tears & hugs him…

Avni – Now will you both please stop with your emotional talks. Before my ears burst!

Ragini – Avni.. .[Pari calls in a stilled manner] shut up!. .[and they all laugh]

Ashsih – Ok..now let’s go down…I think its going to rain.

Ashish, Ragini and Avni walk down meanwhile it starts raining heavily…

RATHOD HOUSE

Neil – Ah!…I love rains! [says Neil with his hands outside the window] ..what about you bhai??

There is silence..

Neil – Bhai I’m talking to you! Its raining..& its lovely isn’t it?

Silence again….

Neil ;- Bhai are you dead…or something???

Sanskar – Not so early Neil

Neil – ah..I wish you were..

Shweta – Neil! what are you blabbering? and pulled his ears

Neil – Ahh,. Sorry Ma.. I was just kidding…he takes all my girlfriends away. So what do u expect me to say ?

Sanskar – I never take them from you. They come to me on their own [Says Sanskar lying on his bed with a novel in his hands]

Neil – Nothing there to feel so proud of bhai! …. mera din bhi aayega

Shweta – ah!. .you both will never change! [says Shweta & walks out of the room]

Neil – bhai you seriously don’t like rains?

Sanskar – nah..

Neil – why?

Sanskar -They bring nothing other than slush in the roads.

Neil – Gosh!. You are that typical. …forget it!…rains should be admired. You know what they call rainy season as??….they call it as “Pyaar ka Mausam”. ..&
Sanskar- and also as Slush ka mausam
Neil- Bhia ..how can u? I mean how someone could don’t like rains.
Sanskar:- Shut up Neil ..before I start beating you

Neil – ok ok…I will not start with my love stories ..but you tell me.. you seriously don’t believe in love?

meanwhile …

Ragini – No Avni..I don’t ..Love cannot be described. It’s a feeling. It should be felt.

Avni – kya di.. how do you know it’s just a feeling? unless you’ve felt it ..how can you be so sure??

Ragini -why?…have you felt it…

Avni – Nahi di I haven’t..

Ragini – Then shut up..

Anvi – but…

Ragini – shut up Avni and help me with cooking

In the evening…

Ragini – Avni … I’m going to the DVD library…do you want to come along?

Avni – No di…

Ragini went walking all alone on the road ,a set of drunken men rode past her in a jeep & took reverse & stopped by her side..& started teasing her for a ride. Ragini began to feel uncomfortable…. she didn’t know where to move… meanwhile a Toyota corolla sped the road & stopped past her. Ragini saw a very well-dressed man getting out & walking towards her. he came in front of her and said

Stranger – Diya.. where were you??…

Ragini is confused & asks him softly ..

Ragini -Diya??

Then he comes to hug her… she moves aside he catches her tightly & whispers into her ears..

Stranger – Act smart & save yourself from them..

Ragini understands his intentions & says

Ragini – Oh Sanskar!…I’m sorry I’m late…

Stranger – Shall we leave?..

Ragini- She nods uncertainly & gets into his car..

The gang of drunken men look at them & then depart…She sees behind & says..

Ragini- Thank you thank you very much..

Stranger -Its ok…

Ragini – Many I know your name?

Stranger – Sanskar

Ragini laughs & says.. Oh no.. I mean ur real name…

Sanskar laughs in return… my name is Sanskar, Sanskar Singh Rathod

Ragini looks a little amazed & then says..

Ragini- oh…I’m Ragini, Ragini Mehra

Sanskar- Hi Ragini.. where do I drop you ?..

Ragini – Oh no… I’ll manage..

Sanskar- please.. no formalities..

Ragini- ok….Movie buzz DVD library..

Sanskar – I was heading there too!

Ragini felt strange about such a co-incidence. She thinks “How can his name be Sanskar ..whereas I just imagined b’coz I had to.. or maybe a real co-incidence…then how can he too be heading to the same library to which I was” …is he trying to …before she finished thinking. The car stopped all of a sudden & the road was quite deserted…

Sanskar- Oh no…the tire is punctured!

Ragini gives a shocked look! …

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    23 Comments

    1. Julie on November 28, 2017 3:25 pm

      Awesome loved it

    2. manu on November 28, 2017 4:13 pm

      Nyc

    3. vini on November 28, 2017 4:17 pm

      awesome. Update ur old ragsan ffs

    4. vani on November 28, 2017 4:42 pm

      Superb dear. Ragsan scenes are fab

    5. geet on November 28, 2017 4:57 pm

      Superb

    6. sug on November 28, 2017 5:13 pm

      Ossommmmmm

    7. Mk on November 28, 2017 5:22 pm

      Amazing dr. Post Ms perfect and Mr imperfect☺☺

    8. nive on November 28, 2017 5:33 pm

      Awesome sissy ❤❤❤❤. Waiting for ragsan love

    9. areena on November 28, 2017 5:47 pm

      can anyone tell me other websides where i found avneil fan fictions if anyone know plzzzzz tell me plzzz or drashti your fanfiction is amazing update soon plz if you know that webside then tell me wattpad or india forum ko chod ke

      • lillianalieben on November 29, 2017 1:05 pm

        try india forums or wattpad

      • lillianalieben on November 29, 2017 1:06 pm

        areena i don’t think u will get somewhere else try in wattpad. there r such lovely stories on avneil and regular updates also

    10. maha on November 28, 2017 5:55 pm

      Wonderful sanskar neil convo ??

    11. RAGSANIAN on November 28, 2017 6:23 pm

      Amazinggggg like it

    12. bhuvanachandrika on November 28, 2017 6:44 pm

      All your works are copied works. Do you never even repent? I’m going to complain on you to TU. Every and every os you wrote are from fanfiction.web and you don’t have a shame little. Your friend raglakholic used to copy all the works too. Shameless people..!! You take someone’s credits.!!

    13. moni on November 28, 2017 7:04 pm

      Superb….

    14. Keerthi on November 28, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awesomeee

    15. Aleeza on November 28, 2017 7:42 pm

      Awesome

    16. aditi on November 28, 2017 8:22 pm

      Awesome

    17. shalini on November 28, 2017 9:08 pm

      Nice

    18. Rikashini on November 28, 2017 10:15 pm

      Awesome

    19. Rehna on November 29, 2017 6:54 pm

      Awesome dear

    20. tanisha_shekhar on November 30, 2017 1:54 am

      nic

    21. tanisha_shekhar on November 30, 2017 1:55 am

      nice one

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