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Home»Fan Fiction»!!! BEAUTIFUL ENOUGH!!! -KANCHI OS
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!!! BEAUTIFUL ENOUGH!!! -KANCHI OS

shivaniiiiBy shivaniiiiNovember 8, 201733 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hii guys, thanx for response frnds.. This is a stupid OS . So read at ur own risk… Dont throw chappals in me fir.
!!! *Beautiful enough*!!!
Sanchi entered sbch canteen in lunchtime. She was actually ? tired ?!! Tired of his taunts and insults, tired of his ignorance, tired of running behind him! The khadoos kabor kapoor.
Yes, he was in relation with her, but a secrete one!
He didnt wanted to make it public, that was ok for her! But he used to taunt in for small small thing in front of her friends and others. He even dont want to go out with her.
“Did, he actually loved me??? ” her mind questioned, bur somehow her ? heart was hoping for ❤️ love..
“Hiii, guys!!! ” she greeted her frnds.
But none of them answered, actually how they will answer?? They were busy in their own world.
Sanchi sat on the seat ? adjacent to isha, but our supermodel ishu was busy in her mobile chatting with her bf Veer.
Even pragya was busy gawking at her love, sanchi rolled her eyes in disappointment ? ?.
Sanchi wished she could express her love like this,but may be her luck wasnt on her side ?. She munched the cookies in disappointed mood.

“Hey, look pragya, my pic on Veer’s whatsapp DP. ” isha said holding her exitement..
“Abe Yaar, kya lag rahe ho tum log ek saath!!! Bilkul made for each others. ” this was pragya’s reply.
Sanchi felt ba. It was not like she wa Jaleous of her friends, she was happy for them.
But she though cant he express his love in front of peoples ? Even his mom liked her alot, then whats the problem!?? Is he ashamed of me?? Or i m not beautiful enough to be his partner??
Ok, she accepted that she ws nt beautiful and image consious like isha, pragya!! But she loved herself, her ways, her principles of life!! And she cant change them for anyone!!
“I m not worlds most beautiful lady, but is that my fault? “She asked herself.
So, she decided not to run benind him onwards. Iy is difficult to ignore him, but she has to do this for her self respect..

Sanchi left canteen, as she has to go back to her duty. She passed the corridor and enters the general ward.
She goes inside the ward, as soon as she entered, nurse came running toward her.
“Dr. Sanchi thank god, u came on time! Xyz patient is having adverse effect of medicines. Pls do something! ” nurse explained.
Sanchi quickly ran toward the patient and she treated the patient wasting no time!! After sometime patients condition was stable.
Sometime passed,
Kabir called sanchi and others into his cabin.
Everybody was standing infront of him with innocent faces.
But kabir only blamed sanchi, he thought it was sanchi’s patient and thats why he blamed her for not taking care of patients. Her eyes filled with tears ?.
Then veer cleared his misunderstanding and before kabir could say anything she ran out of their holding her tears back.
“Are ye to bhaag gayi!! Kabir ab teri kher nahi” he thought to himself.

Obviously sanchi ignored him for full day, she even didnt looked at him once.
Soon, the sun goes to small vacation and moon decorated the entire galaxy.
Kabir tried calling sanchi, but she didnt responded his calls.
———————————–
Sanchi had dinner with her friends. Her head was heavy due to all incidents. Ishagya asked her to go have some golgappa, but she was not in mood to eat golgappa, so she stayed back.
She opened the door of her room and entered the room. She latched the door behind her and switched power button only to get shock of her life!!!!
There he was sitting on her bed folding his arms as if waiting for her since long time.
She was about to shout when he quickly ran toward her and sealed her mouth with his palm.
“Shhhhh, chillao mat” he commanded.
“What are u doing here! And why u came here! Kisine dekh lia toh kya hoga!! “She panicked.
“Shhh, kisine nahi dekha!! ” he grinned.

“But tum aaye kaise?? Aur mere room me Kaise Aaye!! ” she again
.
“Papa CID the kya tumhare? ” he asked.
”
Huhhh? ” came her confused reply.

“Itne questions q kar rahi ho tum? ” he said looking straight into her eyes and thus making her more uncomfortable .
“I dont want to talk to u. So just go from here ” she said sternly.
” I M sorry ” he hold his ears.
“Just go kabir, and find someone who will suit uh! I know i not beautiful enough! I knew it! And important nahi hai ki tum mujhe bar bar ye realise karwao!! ” she said controlling disaster in her eyes.
“What is this shit yaar?? ? Asked confused kabir.
“Yes, u feel actually same, thats why u alwys hurt me! Just like today! ” she let out her furstration on him.
“What the!!! “He exclaimed., but she pushed him hard thus cauzing him to fall on bed.
She tried to unlatch the door, but he quickly pulled her toward him.
“Ek to main khidki se kud k aaya kitni mushkil se!! And here tum bakwas kar rahu ho” he tightly hol her by shoulders. “And stupid tum ground floor pe nahi reh sakti??? ” he continued.
“So jaha se aaye ho wahi jao, i dont wanna talk to u ¡” she was stern.
“Idiot, i yelled at u infront of peoples bcoz i didnt wanted them to misunderstand our rwlation. Thats it. And kis idiots ne kaha tum beautiful nahi???
Actually U R BEAUTIFUL enough to invade my dreams all the nights.
U R BEAUTIFUL enough to inraod my concentration and focus every damn moment”
He stepped toward her, thus almost mixing his breath with her’s.
“U R Beautiful enough to make the moon envious ” he continued withr husky voice.
Sanchi felt like thousand of butterflies running in her stomoch.
He leaned again towards her.
“U know, u r beautiful enough to occuoy my soul. Beautiful enough to toss my sense into air.
U R beautiful enough to throw my attitude into garbage. ”
He completed his sentence and leamed toward her.
“Gussa gaya!!??? ” kabir asked her slowly.
She slowly pushed him and ran from there, but this time she was successful.
“Are, fir dhakka deke bhaag gayi, ye sport day pe paida hui thi kya ?? He asked himself.
——————————-
She was walking in corridor. She openef her hair band and let her hairs open and twirled in air happily.
“Beautiful enough ” she smiled………….

Ufff, ho gaya!! Pehle hi bola tha read at ur own risk.. Ab mujhe mat marna. Bye bye bye ? ?. Kindly avoid spelling mistakes

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    33 Comments

    1. swethaa on November 8, 2017 9:41 am

      sach mein
      beautiful enough put a smile on face
      while reading
      amazing dear

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 4:01 pm

        Thanx swetha dear. I m happy i made u smile. Keep smiling always.

    2. shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 10:19 am

      Pls avoid spelling mistakes, actually typed in mobile phone

      • Ashnita456 on November 8, 2017 11:05 am

        Amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 4:03 pm

        Thank u dear ashu . Even i m really big fan of u. I have read most of ur stories.

    3. Anee on November 8, 2017 11:06 am

      amazing shivaanii…lovedit

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 4:04 pm

        Thanx anee. Glad u liked it

    4. RuCh23 on November 8, 2017 11:45 am

      Shivaniii dear I have no words to praise you ??? it was that much fantastic. So I’ll just say it was “beautiful enough” to make my whole day wonderful ??? luv u

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 4:05 pm

        Thank u ruwani. I m so happy reading ur comment. Luv u too dear.

    5. niyaaa on November 8, 2017 12:18 pm

      Hey shivanii.. this is beautiful enough jiske liye hum ye risk udhane k liye tyaar han???.. loved it kaash kabir sabke samne sanchi ko accept kar leta per koi nahi happy ending toh hui.. loved it.. post new one bye tc..Lovvv u ???

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank u so much dear. Ur comment made my mood Good.

    6. riyarocks on November 8, 2017 12:36 pm

      Shivaniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………..yaar kya os tha……….mann kar raha tha bas padhte jaoon padhte jaoon & kabhi khatam na ho………but yaar, main gussa hoon……..itni jaldi kyun end kardia…….mujhe aur padhna tha……….bechara kabir, itni mushkil se khidki se kudkar sanchi se milne aaya, itniiiiiiiiii tareef ki uski, but at the end, sanchi ne usse kya dia……..thenga………baba ji ka thullu………haha………ek choti si kissy kabir ke cheeks pe atleast de toh sakti thi naa……….not done sanchi……haha……..luv u Shona…….aisi hi hatke OS likhti raho……….but haan agli baar, bada waala……….samjhi………..haha………..bye………..tc………..

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:05 pm

        Awww,sorry sweetie .next time bada walk post pakka. U know what ur words means to me like cherry on cake. Love u bye

    7. anu on November 8, 2017 1:00 pm

      Awesome and fantastic story yaar……kabir sanchi ko haise mana ae it’s superb……..kas muje vi ase mana ne bala milta…….I love it so so much yaar……….yaar please write part 2………..love u dear……..

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:07 pm

        Thank any dear for such nice comment. I didn’t thought of 2nd part, but an main sochungi. Bye gn

    8. Dhruti on November 8, 2017 1:36 pm

      superb story and beautiful enough i took risk to read your story………………
      beautiful enough make me smile and refreshing me……………….
      wow kash ye sab kuch show me hota!!!!uff chhodo kya kar sakte he hum……………………
      post next one story soon……………….love you…………………..chalo bye……….and mountain due pine wale risk lena jante he……………ha………ha…………ha……………….

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:09 pm

        ? :-D:-D true. Mountain due pine wale Kisise nai darte. Thank for sweet so comment. Love u. gn and SD

    9. Kajal on November 8, 2017 3:17 pm

      OMG its so pious article. U just steal my heart

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:11 pm

        Ohh thank u so much kajal. Glad u liked it

    10. Aafiya on November 8, 2017 5:35 pm

      Beautiful and awesome.

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:12 pm

        Thank u aafiya. 🙂

    11. Amnaa on November 8, 2017 6:57 pm

      Beautiful….. Amazing

      • shivaniiii on November 8, 2017 9:12 pm

        Thank amnaa dear. Gn

    12. pravina on November 8, 2017 8:56 pm

      Beautiful story it is. Kaash koi mujhe aise praise karta, main to life time ke liye latto ho jaati.

      • shivaniiii on November 9, 2017 9:07 am

        Thanx pravina, dont worry tume bhi mil hi jayega koi ???????

    13. Tumpamoni on November 8, 2017 9:16 pm

      Really,,jst beautiful os it is nd plz one more shot plz plz..

      • shivaniiii on November 9, 2017 9:08 am

        Thanx sweetheart. Happy u liked it.

    14. Dhruvi on November 8, 2017 9:31 pm

      Yrr…its awsmmm….”sun goes to small vacation and moon decorated the entire galaxy”- i just loved this line…..

      • shivaniiii on November 9, 2017 9:10 am

        Thanx dhruvi dear. Wo meri bhi fav line hai. Luv u. Gm

    15. Abhilasha on November 8, 2017 10:36 pm

      Wowwwwwww??????????????????????????????????????????? I gave my heart to u dear!!!! Yr it was so lovely and magical!!! So beautiful!!!! I loved it from the bottom of my heart!!!! And a little request- plz if u could make an epiloigue actually i was expecting its ending when ishpra see them together on each other ……something like that would have been so funny!!! Anyways i request u if u could make an epilougue!!! Love u!!

      • shivaniiii on November 9, 2017 9:14 am

        Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkk u so much dear. U made my day. I will write another part of it soon,. Luv u toooo dear. Gm

    16. Maisarah on November 9, 2017 6:07 pm

      Hey there ,
      Shivani ❤❤❤❤ loved it to the core …. Glad to have you? keep nailing like that???? big hug

      • shivaniiii on November 10, 2017 5:53 am

        Oh thank u so much dear. Ur words means a lot to me

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