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Intimidating Eyes (SwaSan fs) Shot 3 by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsOctober 31, 2017Updated:October 31, 201764 Comments10 Mins Read
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Intimidating Eyes ( SwaSan fs)
Shot 3:
Recap: sanskar’s possessiveness towards swara.

(Kindly imagine Albert and Ammy as Edward and Bella from twilight)

Swara and Albert are sitting together on the first bench when sanskar enter inside the class as its biology lecture.
All girls were shamelessly staring Sanskar, its not their fault when Sanskar is looking handsome to dangerous level. Sanskar shoot daggers at swara when he saw Albert holding swara’s hand. Some what swara got to know about the reason why sanskar look raged but she acted as if nothing happened.
Sanskar introduced himself as their new biology professor as he has deeply studied biology being a vampire so clear the test and was selected as the professor.
” so today we will start with cell” he said turning towards the board.
Some listened to what he was saying while girls were just staring him.
He turn towards the class when he saw Albert whisper something in swara’s ear and she giggles.
Sanskar closed his fist tightly. He has enough powers to smash the head of albert but he don’t want to reveal his identity of being vampire.
Swara felt his heated gaze on her and she sit silently.

After the college was over, swara came out with Albert when suddenly sanskar came in front of them.
” hey” sanskar said
” oh hi Sir” Albert wished while swara signed seeing him again.
“Swara let’s go for a coffee” sanskar said gaining her attention.
” not today we three will go tomorrow” swara said normally
” who is third one??” Sanskar asked with irritation.
” u me and Albert” she blink her eyes innocently and then smirk which Sanskar noticed.
This little girl don’t know she is messing with the danger.
” alright” sanskar said smirking at swara.She got confused that why he agreed suddenly.
” okay it will be fun” Albert was more excited
” at 11 in the morning” sanskar said.
Swara and Albert nodded. Sanskar left not before giving a last look to swara.

Vampire Palace:
Sanskar enter inside hurriedly with his vampire speed and directly went to a room. Inside that a girl is half laying on the bed listening to music. She is having glass in her hand and she is drinking red juice no no its blood.
She is Ammy, Sanskar’ s sister and also a cool sweet vampire.
Sanskar enter inside without knocking at the door.
“Ammy” he said coming near to her.
” yuppp brops” she said keeping glass on the table.
” I need your help” he said
” huh!! I was knowing otherwise u never notice me” she said making faces.
” now don’t show your drama I already have one drama queen” he said thinking about swara’s antics.
” speak but what I will get??” Ammy raised her eyebrow.
” a big blood filled chocolate'” sanskar know what she wanted.
” alright I’m ready what I have to do?” She asked
” Actually I’m in love” Sanskar started
” ohho so you had finally fallen for kavita” ammy teased him
” its not kavita but swara” sanskar said
” she came new in vampire area??” She asked
” she is not vampire but human” sanskar said looking down.
” What!!!!! You love human girl. They are our prey not the things to be loved” ammy almost shouted.
” I know but I truely love her and only want her” sanskar confessed.
” then you want me as cupid or villain of your story”? Ammy questioned.
” you have to come with me tomorrow to swara’s city” he said
” why” she narrowed her eyes.
” I’m taking swara for a coffee but there her boyfriend is also coming so I want you to come with me and keep her bf busy so I and swara can get the privacy” sanskar explained
” I can’t handle humans” ammy turn her face
” plzz sister its just matter of few hours his name is Albert and you have to keep him busy” sanskar almost pleaded.
“Hmm but if I sucked his blood then don’t blame me” ammy said carelessly.
” I won’t mind even if you kill him” sanskar already don’t like him as he is always sticking to swara.
” okay done will come with you” ammy finally agreed.
” thank you sister” sanskar hugged her.
“Brops but as per papa’s order kavita should be your mate” ammy said getting little tensed.
” I never get the feeling that kavita is my mate but its swara” sanskar said.
” alright” ammy smile at him.

Next day, Sanskar and ammy came outside the cafe and saw swara standing alone at one side.
” there she is” Sanskar pointed
” she is beautiful” ammy admire swara who was wearing simple shirt jeans with over jackat as its quite cold.
” indeed” Sanskar was smiling sheepishly.
They started moving towards swara when ammy stopped being little away from her. Swara didn’t notice them as she was busy in her mobile.
” what happened??” Sanskar asked turning to ammy.
” she is virgin” ammy was intensely staring swara.
” yeah but don’t you dare to touch her” sanskar warned as he know virgin’s blood is something which vampire can’t leave.
” you go near her and don’t suck how do you control???” Ammy asked getting shocked.
” she is my love and i will not harm her. Moreover you know I don’t suck blood from any body” Sanskar said
” I know” ammy make faces.

“Hey Swara” sanskar said side hugging her.
“Hello” swara smile and give confuse look to ammy.
” she is ammy my sister, actually she was so stubborn to come with me” Sanskar pointed towards her while she give “ohh seriously” look.
” hi dear” swara greeted.
” hey” ammy take out her hand to shake.
At the time, Albert came who just went to attend the call.
Ammy look at him with open mouth. Albert is looking so handsome. He came and stand near swara holding her hand. Both ammy and sanskar got jealous.
” he is also Virgin” ammy lean towards Sanskar whisper as she can smell them.
” yes” sanskar chuckles.
” I thought humans are shameless but here they are hell tempting virgins” ammy gulp her saliva.
” control your senses” Sanskar warned ammy before she started behaving as vampire.
” did you called us to stand here only” swara asked as no one is ready to go inside.
” sure will go but I want to say swara who are looking freaking hot” Sanskar said staring her.
” I’m not any coffee to be called hot so call be cute” swara roll her eyes.
Ammy started laughing.
” perfect choice brops” she teased him.
They enter inside the cafe.

Swara and ammy sit facing each other. Sanskar instantly sit beside swara so Albert left with no other option sit beside ammy.
” order plz” waiter asked standing near the table.
They all ordered the coffee for themselves.
” so where do you live??” Albert asked ammy and sanskar
” Vampi… ” ammy was all set to blurt when sanskar cut her
” in New York , simple street” Sanskar said not even knowing whether this place exist or not.
” ohhk” Albert shrug his shoulder as he don’t care much.
Ammy was staring at albert from the corner of her eye.
Sanskar smirk and held swara’s hand under the table which was on her.
” leave my hand” Swara whisper.
Sanskar innocently shook his head.
” so what are your future plans swara” ammy said as no one is speaking and she is hell talkative like swara. Swara’s is already breathing heavily due to Sanskar’s proximity.
“I want to complete my studies first then will think” she said giving a light smile.
Sanskar started talking to swara slowly as ammy and Albert got busy with each other. Within very less time they become Frank.
” you still didn’t break up with Albert?” Sanskar narrowed his eyes at swara.
” I won’t do that” she replied sternly.
” consequences will not be good” he warned her.
” I don’t care” she look other side.
Sanskar took deep breathe as he know Swara is not an easy nut to be cracked but he also love challenges.
Later, swara and albert left.
” brops I’m telling you don’t even do the mistake of bringing swara to vampire place” ammy said pitifully.
” why??” sanskaar got confused
” u know vampires are blood thirsty mainly Virgin” ammy said
” hmm yeah ,will not bring her” sanskar said
” I believe that you truely love her like seriously sitting beside her you didn’t get tempted it was becoming difficult for me to control” ammy pat his shoulder in appreciation.
” my love over power my vampire” Sanskar laugh.
They also left to their place.

At night, swara is sitting and eating big dairy milk silk and watching TV.Her lips are all smudged in chocolate along with her hands. Listening to the door bell, she unwillingly got up and open the door.Her eyes widen to see sanskar leaning at the door.
“You here” swara asked
Her chocolatey lips, wide eyes were enhancing her cuteness.
” came to meet you” he said entering inside. Swara close the door and went after him.
Sanskar look at the TV screen and she is watching twilight.
” vampire’s movie??” Sanskar sit on the sofa.
” yes you know I love to watch vampire” she said excitedly
” why??” Sanskar asked
” it is fascinating when they change their eyes colour, run at jet speed, their chill cold body, its soo interesting” swara showed how much she is interested in vampires.
” if you meet real vampire then??” Sanskar asked raising his brow.
” hmm I will be happy if he is good vampire” swara said being choosy
” good vampire??” Sanskar asked getting confused.
” yes there are two types of vampires good and bad” swara explained.
” really” being a vampire he don’t know they have categories.
” what if I say I’m vampire” sanskar lean on her.
” don’t crack jokes” Swara laugh
Sanskar smirk and trace his fingers on her arm. Swara Shivered as they were chilled cold. He changed her eyes colour from dark brown to black then sea green eventually bright red.
” you…are vamp…ire???” swara tried to ask coming out of the shock. Fear engulf her heart.
” yes” sanskar huskily said licking the chocolate from the corner of her lips.
To be Continued….

Those who are waiting for uncontrollable feelings I’m extremely sorry for the delay???
I had written half part from last two days but don’t know why I’m not completing it???
Sometimes I really behave weird??
I will post tomorrow pakka??
Thank you.

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    64 Comments

    1. ArpitaArohi on October 31, 2017 3:36 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 4:53 pm

        Thank you dear tc??

    2. Priya on October 31, 2017 3:54 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 4:55 pm

        Thank you dear tc??

    3. Rekha on October 31, 2017 4:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 4:56 pm

        Thank you dear tc??

    4. mumpi on October 31, 2017 4:53 pm

      Wow wow wow.

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:02 pm

        Thank you dear tc??

    5. AbrahamEzra on October 31, 2017 5:03 pm

      Omg its awesome dear. Waiting to know how they will unite. And plss pair Albert and ammy I love them.

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:42 pm

        Thank you dear and yuppp ammy and Albert will be paired??? tc???

    6. NDSG on October 31, 2017 5:19 pm

      Uff, esa lover to aj tk nahi dekha????????. Totally mad in love???????☺. Loving Swara’s cute antics ????????????????. Bikhare bal with lips merged in chocolate. I loved everything about her….

      कभी चुलबुली, तो कभी नकचढ़ी है तू
      प्यार की एक फुलझड़ी है तू
      तो कभी नटखट परी है तू
      जैसी भी है, बस मेरी है तू…………………………

      Ammy and Edward are nice together, bus isko Swara se dur rakho?????.
      At last Swara came to know truth don’t know what will happen???. But Sanskar is in the category of good vampire na… Yup he should

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:49 pm

        Omgggg depuuu turn shayar but these lines are just wow???? perfect that Sanskar should say to swara
        Sanskar has become love sick puppy in shona’s love??????
        Let’s see how swara will react after knowing that he is vampire???
        Of course he will be good one only?????
        Thank you so much depuuu dear for your awesome vala comment and specially those lines just loved it tc?????????

      • NDSG on October 31, 2017 6:51 pm

        Lakh English padh lo, but asli maza to Hindi shyari mai h???????????. I was reading this shyari and perfectly fit for this ff???

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:07 pm

        Bilkul sahiii Jo mazza Hindi mai hai wo English mai kaha??? and these lines are just perfect for swasan❤❤❤

    7. Bush1122 on October 31, 2017 5:20 pm

      Superb epi…!!
      Finally Sanskar told Swara that he is vampire…!!!
      Story becomes so interesting…!!!
      Loved it

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc????

    8. Samaira_khan on October 31, 2017 5:26 pm

      Hey marsuuuu if this has become one of my favorites seriously rocked it.. Hihi enjoyed a lottt.. And Albert army.. What r they like from a movie.. I really don’t know.. Tham so I imagined them as raglak.. I love it when ragini is sanskar sisi?? hmm uff swara is Crack piece.. Between sanskar s intro at start❤️❤️❤️?my dream boy!! Omgg ending scene was uff.. Really waiting for tommorow d epi

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:53 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad to know you like it and you can imagine anyone and indeed ragini Ji is sanskar’s sister forever?????? will post next part soon tc?????

    9. Kumu on October 31, 2017 5:40 pm

      Superb dear..tc..

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    10. Rachna on October 31, 2017 5:47 pm

      Nice….

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    11. Stg on October 31, 2017 5:48 pm

      Awesome ???

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    12. Rakiba on October 31, 2017 5:48 pm

      Omg.. Ye sanskar bohot jald jealous ho jata hey …. Awww Swasan moment….waiting for nxt part….. Edward nd bella both r my fav ….. Thank u soooo muchhhh…. Tumari liye Tu pe ati hu…warna aj kal to Swasan ffs jadha milta nei…. Thank u once again ..Tc.. Plz also post NB s2 ….

      • Mars on October 31, 2017 5:59 pm

        Aww so sweet of you and yeah there are less swasan updates I will try my best to give more thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc????
        Will post naughty billo and ss2 also soon tc????

      • Adishu on October 31, 2017 6:09 pm

        I agree aaj kal swasan FFS jaldi nahi milte 🙁 ….
        n yes Edward n Bella r my favorites toooo….

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:10 pm

        Yes swasan stories are less dear many are not posting here bcoz of unwanted irritation here u know what I mean.
        Well I always try to give more updates??

    13. gayathri.visu on October 31, 2017 6:08 pm

      Thank god…..Sanskaar told his truth to Swara. Hope this isn’t any dream! Don’t make it dream Marsuuuu! Superb part….especially Sanskaar n Ammy convo is funny one yaar…and what was that blood filled chocolate……chiiiiiiiiiiii yuckkkkkkkkk!!

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:13 pm

        No it’s not dream gayuuu dear he really told her.let’s see how she will react.
        Blood filled chocolate if you want I will send it for you???????
        Thank you so much dear tc??????

      • gayathri.visu on November 1, 2017 10:51 pm

        Areeee….no no…no thanks yaar. I m happy with my regular chocolates….better to give it Ammy….hehehe!

      • Mars on November 3, 2017 11:50 am

        Hahahaha okay will not send???

    14. Adishu on October 31, 2017 6:08 pm

      it was soo niceee… vampires r really so interesting…. n why did u raise the topic of twilight u know it again made me mad…
      u know what I haven’t watched twilight earlier as I never felt to… but then last week I watched all the five movie n finished it in three days only… two movies per day…. n it really really made me mad…
      I too wish vampires exist but they should be like Edward of twilight n sanskar of this story….
      but sad that it won’t be true…
      anyways I loved it n post next part sooooooonnnnn…..

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:16 pm

        Lol craze for twilight????????
        Really it will be so interesting if vampires exist????
        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it will post next part soon tc????

    15. Tamil on October 31, 2017 6:19 pm

      Awesome dear……loved it…..

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    16. Tweety_SwaSan on October 31, 2017 6:40 pm

      Hey Mars, awesome dear.. so along with SwaSan we get to see Ammy and Albert.. I hope Albert won’t create a problem for SwaSan.. Ammy, though vampire but she is cute just like SwaSan.. Jealous Sanskaar is so adorable.. So Sanskaar said about his identity being vampire to Swara..is it really or its a dream.?? If it’s real then what would be Swara’s reaction..?? Answer lies with you so eagerly waiting.. Thank you.. Tc.. ??????❤❤❤???

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:20 pm

        Soon I will give all the answers??? and Albert won’t create problem he is positive character????
        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc?????

    17. Anamika on October 31, 2017 6:46 pm

      It is awesome and amazing.

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:21 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    18. edhiu on October 31, 2017 7:23 pm

      Awesome Plzzz post next part soon

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:22 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    19. anu on October 31, 2017 7:29 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:23 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    20. nabamita on October 31, 2017 8:09 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    21. Tani on October 31, 2017 8:30 pm

      Super awesome

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:26 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    22. rini on October 31, 2017 8:41 pm

      superb shot love it……..

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:28 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    23. Neptune on October 31, 2017 9:11 pm

      Awesome part marsuuuuuuuuu.. sorry no time for long comment today..
      Tu khud hi samajh ja mere dil ki baat…

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:30 pm

        Ha samj gayi mai tumhare dil ki baat nepuuu??? thank you so much dear tc?????

    24. Rp on October 31, 2017 9:51 pm

      Superb dearr waiting for nxt

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:32 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc????

    25. Sonia chang on November 1, 2017 12:22 am

      Awesome blossom amazing ep loved it ???????? swasan scenes were awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:33 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc????

    26. milestone on November 1, 2017 12:40 am

      Awesome dear…… sanskar n ammy jalkukaru……

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 3:35 pm

        Yeah right???? thank you so much dear tc????

    27. harneet on November 1, 2017 4:17 pm

      nice ……………….. twilight … lovely …

      • Mars on November 1, 2017 4:24 pm

        Thank you dear tc??

    28. sneha on November 1, 2017 6:27 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on November 3, 2017 12:05 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    29. Soujanya on November 3, 2017 10:34 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on November 3, 2017 12:08 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

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