Hey Guys trisha here !! I really don’t know what all CVs are showing so that’s why keeping aside my ff I looked forward for an os ! Most probably a short one as planned but could for long !! Fingers crossed ??!
So let’s start !
But wait a second … welcome back abhilasha … we missed u sweetie !
Last but not least …. welcome ruhi to our Kanchi family !
Thanku all my readers who read and commented on my ff !!
So now without wasting any further time let’s persuade to the story !!!
*not every love story gets its meaning*
Her diary read :
“It was 8 October , 2017 …. we had a dandiya night organised and all staff members and interns were invited. Both of them also came both were looking handsome but love ? Woah !! It isn’t a pizza who could be shared ! I was confused first time in my life …. the very first time !!! One bought a ring for me nd other lilies, my favourite…. the whole crew looked at three of us ! One depicted his solved misunderstandings with me , his pranks who made us friends , actually best friends
And
Other one whom I didn’t knew much but he did yes I got to know later ! He knew me very well infact he was in love with me my all time supporter nd a friend dr Kabeer kapoor !!
Veer , top prankster …. he just forwarded the ring proposing me with the most cheesiest lines !!! His eyes showed anger nd competition to stand against him !
I still remembered …. Kabeer saw everything but didn’t wanted to embarrass me to asked for a dance performance giving me the bouquet !! I agreed at once while veer was still waiting …. he took my silence as my agreement ! We danced !! “Kanchi” yeah on few steps of my favourite song deeply connected through each other’s eyes but still shut through our mouths !! Inside somewhere my gut feeling was telling me something but what to do ? I preferred believing the reality ! Can you believe ? The person who came to propose me didn’t did that just bcz that I shouldn’t feel embarrass in front of so many people while he himself left !!
Two years passed he shifted abroad …. I …. I was….”
“Mam here are your medicines ” a nurse came and asked her .
“Thanku” Saachi muttered nd took the medicines ….
She looked at the diary on her lap !
Saachi-“oh I have to read this again from start uff” !
And once again she started from the page one nd by this she was never able to reach to the last page!
When a man in his 50s came nd at beside her !
Saachi – who are you ?
Kabeer- Kabeer ! Dr Kabeer kapoor yeah u don’t know me but I could help u telling this story !
She nodded nd he told her the whole story ….
Kabeer read further from the diary !
“Two years passed dr Kabeer was shifted to abroad nd returned by that time …. he came to meet me nd was badly shocked to know the whole situation ! After one week he left for abroad ending every contact with SDCH nd any other dr…. he never wanted to get hurt again ! He came to know as soon as he left in next two days there was a terrorist attack on the college …where I got shot ! Veer realised his mistake and married one bestie of mine! Hey but chill I got saved … we got married …. hey he’s calling me I have to go ”
After that all pages were blank in the diary .. few drops of his tears adorned the blank pages !!
Kabeer ended the story nd continued …(this wasn’t in the story)- “nd she never returned”
Till than Saachi got sleepy under the effect of dosage !
Two nurses saw this !
Let them name N1 nd N2 !
Kabeer took her in his arms and moved outside in bridal style ; his loose muscles were still sufficient to carry her !
N2- what is he doing ?
N1- what he does from last 26 years ! You are new that’s why you don’t know ! He carries her every day in same way , take 7 wedding rounds fills her hairline with vermilion nd makes her bck lie on the bed…!
N2- she’s an arthritis patient right ?
N1- yes ! Partner ho to indonp jesa !
(Life partner should be like these two)
The end !!
Hey please don’t use rotten thing or flying chappals for me I really didn’t meant that !! I actually myself don’t know why crap I wrote just things started coming into the mind nd I was penning them down ! At the starts I thought of a happy os but got this hehe ? sorry schii !!
Drop a comment down below with blue pen ; if u guys liked this !
Regards
Trisha
21 Comments
It was awesome
So so beautiful jodi
What is arthritis actually it was amazing but i dont know which disease was saanch suffering from i think u should write more dont take it wrong but this was awesome and it wass so cute that kabir maarriying saanchi every day cute one
Sorry Trisha I then realized that ur story is just perfect as ur title and it’s heart touching and cute and ur on going ff is just wonderful actually I mixed everything when I comment so thought to give my opinions .ore clearly and u can also write a second shot of it depends on u
Its so much touchy…almost I was tear-eyed… & Veer realised his mistake…seriously?? Awsm irony…loved it…
Wow!!! That was such a cute OS. I know Trish that I am not commenting in anyone’s work at all and I am so sorry!! I have my PSAT on 11th October and all my AP tests are killing me. Anyways I am totally loving it OS and ur new ff!!! Keep going and I am so excited to read more from you!!
Trishu dear, it was indeed a heart melting plot…….hats off to ur innovative ideas & concepts….. loved this to the core of my heart…..I would really like to read some more of it……a big teddy hug for u & luv u loads cutie pie……
Trisha/Yogita whichever u prefer ? WHY will we throw rotten tomatoes on u dear? If we got a chance to throw something on u then it will definately….a shower of rose petals dear..?
This OS is such a matured one dear..there was nothing much dramatic or fantasy..but a true love bond and understanding.. u r best and will always be Best..u r proving this in ur every post dear. Salute to u and a lot more respect to u.
??? so…. Touchy…. ??? beautiful……???
Superb dear. Kabir’s love for saanchi ??I just loved it. Agli baar happy ending wali os likhna. TC sweetie
Hey awsome, one more mindblowing os by u trishu i understood kabir’s disease but sanchi which disese was suffering from may be from bullet shot bcoz of terrorist attack i lill bit confused but it touchy at the time kabir marry her daily awww so sweet nd new idea.. Hey but one more question sanchi did’t recognized kabir is she lost her memory or something else… Btw totally i loved it u always doing a fab job lovvv u cutie pie post nxt asap
Hey awsome, one more mindblowing os by u trishu i understood kabir’s disease but sanchi which disese was suffering from may be from bullet shot bcoz of terrorist attack i lill bit confused but it touchy at the time kabir marry her daily awww so sweet nd new idea.. Hey but one more question sanchi did’t recognized kabir is she lost her memory or something else … Btw totally i loved it u always doing a fab job lovvv u cutie pie post nxt asap
Wowww amazing trishu …..loved it……really ur story depicted kabir’s selfless love truly ……u naile it!!
Oh this is superb Trishu di. This is what l like about u. Every single writing of urs touch my heart. This inspires me to write. Lovely Os.
Amazing
Amazing.. u rocked it and how can u call this a crap???? Tumhata test kharab hai …just kidding. This is not crap at all. Most beatiful os till the date..
Did sanchi have Alzheimer????
wowww Trishu…great work yaarrr…really loved it…sorry for being late…luv uh dear.
It’s awesome,emotinal and hear touching . Seriously you nailed it .update soon
Beautiful
Was so heart touching… Amazing… Outstanding… Superb… Loved it ❤