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Home»Fan Fiction»Lo Maan Liya Pyar Nahi Tumko *Teaser *
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Lo Maan Liya Pyar Nahi Tumko *Teaser *

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 25, 201714 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam Ashnita. I hope u guys remembered me.

So Very soon Ae dil hai muskhil will be end in episode 20. I hope u guys will like this too. Only in weekends I post this

Actually I know how to write thiller stories. So I thought to write different story. Iam not gud in writing different one sorry in advance

Teaser

Scene 1.

In Temple

A girl crying

Girl – pliz god give me some hint to choose whom I love or who loves me.

Man – ma’am sirrr met an accident

Girl runs

Girl – thank you god for giving me hint

Scene 2

Boy – let’s go home

Girl – i can’t

Boy – u belive them not ur husband.

Girl – it’s not like that

Boy – cum back to me

Girl – i dnt love u neither I hate u

Boy – ur decision is final

Girl – yes

Boy – OK

He wipes vermillion and breaks her nuptial chain. Girl cries.

Boy – Go u r free now. Ur happiness is mine. But remember I loved u and always. Lo Maan Liya Pyar Nhi Tumko.

Boy left and girl picks broken pearls of nuptial chain.

Girl – iam sorry but I have to do for u.

Please do comment and tell me should I continue this.

Regards
Ashnita

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    Lovely girl a loving daughter loving sis and loving friend.Big fan of Shah Ruk khan. Favorite movie Main Hoon Na. And loves thriller, suspense and many more.

    14 Comments

    1. Khamoshi on September 25, 2017 1:45 pm

      Ashnita dear…definately u should go ahead with it… awsm promo (teaser) till now i ever read.. amazingggggggg Fabulousssss Good luck

    2. anu on September 25, 2017 1:52 pm

      Nice

    3. niyaaa on September 25, 2017 2:17 pm

      Hey ashi awsome plot dear nd absolutely u should continue it a big yessssssssssssss from myside for a new beautiful ff by u…lovvv u sissy start soon as u can

    4. Trisha139 on September 25, 2017 4:49 pm

      Omg dhamakedar entry
      Continue soon dear u did very well !

    5. RuCh23 on September 25, 2017 5:24 pm

      ??? awesome promo ??? do continue dear

    6. Anonymousaa on September 25, 2017 5:56 pm

      Tussi to chaa gaye in Ri’s style.???
      Please continue it Ashu. I suppose the pair is Kanchi right????
      Plz plz plz upload epi asap.

    7. Abhilasha on September 25, 2017 6:24 pm

      So dhamakedar so kanchi are married but no guesses soon and wish that its kanchi in end !!

    8. Amnaa on September 25, 2017 6:35 pm

      Amazing promo… Loved it

    9. Alia on September 25, 2017 7:17 pm

      Amazing

    10. anu on September 25, 2017 7:21 pm

      Nice episode

    11. riyarocks on September 25, 2017 7:44 pm

      Ashu dear………..kya yaar……itna achhe ideas kahaan se laati ho yaar……….I think in the 2nd part, the girl is Sanchi & boy is Kabir……..is it?????? btw dear, eagerly waiting for ur nxt update & luv u loads……..

    12. Dhruti on September 25, 2017 11:23 pm

      superb ashu nice ff and i think girl is sanchi and boy is may be kabir i don’t know i’m just guessing update next one soon…a big hug for u….bye bye good night ashu and all my friends…

    13. Moonlight25 on September 25, 2017 11:47 pm

      Wow it was a great promo please continue soon ..

    14. Jessicca on October 1, 2017 12:05 am

      Nice story.. Seems interesting… Keep Hong sweetie.. Love you❤

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