Hello everyone! I m back with more surprises n romance… Thanks everyone for liking my story.. I hope main aap sabki aashao par khari utar pau…some of my friends requested me to post longer episodes… OK let’s start..
Note:sanchi is savitri n anand’s daughter… Jaya is savitri’s cousin…rahul is stepbrother of sanchi in my story…
Today’s part
In malhotra mansion, celebrations are on full swing.. But Anand is tensed n gayatri is busy in her makeup… (I mean to say full make up ki Dukan lag rahi hai)
After some time, gayatri noticed tensed anand n asked, r u okay? Main kab se dekh rahi hu u r constantly looking at the watch?
Anand :OH nothing serious my dear…
Fb starts
Anand was ready in his room.. Suddenly phone rang.. He was shocked…
Anonymous : hello Mr malhotra!! Pehchana toh hoga tumne…
Anand was very tensed n sweating…he replied, ha mujhe yaad hai… Kya chahiye tumhe?
Anonymous : I want to meet u right now..
Anand: but I can’t come now… Party is there… How can I leave the party in between? Please understand..
Anonymous : thik hai.. Purani factory mein aa jaana thik 9pm
Anand: OK… He cuts the call..
Fb ends
In his mind, abhi toh maine sab sambhal liya par usse kaise peecha chudau??
Gayatri in excitement : anand!! Yeh necklace mujh par thik toh lag raha hai na??
Anand not looking at her : ha tumne pehna hai toh accha hi hoga..
Gayatri: aap ek baar dekhiye toh mujhe..
Anand looking at her: gorgeous, stunning…bohut sundar lag rahi ho… Chalo humein jaana hai… All r waiting for us in the party…
Next scene
In the party, many famous and big personalities including our kabir kapoor…
Kabir in his mind : I will not leave that cheater…but at the same time, he was waiting for someone.. Kabir, tu itna mat soch uske baare mein… Woh yaha nahi aayegi… When he was thinking about sanchi, at the same moment.. Sanchi n ishagya were welcomed by malhotras…
Kabir was mesmerized to see her and thought ” itni khubsoorat lag rahi hai ki chand bhi dekhega toh sharma jayega ”
Anand : hello sanchi, isha n pragya
Sanchi n ishagya : hello sir!! I m glad to meet u..
Anand: me too… Please meet my wife n my son..
Trio met gayatri n wished “happy marriage anniversary ”
Sanchi’s eyes were searching for kabir.. Both looked at each other n they had an intense eyelock..
Scene shifts to guestroom
Ajay waiting outside veer’s room n asking veer to come out otherwise we’ll be late for the party… All the guests had arrived…
Veer’s reply: aa raha hu mere bhai.. Thik se kapde toh pehen loon…aakhir ijjat ka sawaal hai yaar…
Ajay : kaun sa Teri baraat aayee hai jo tu dulhe ki Tarah saj raha hai… Jaldi chal please..
Suddenly, veer comes out wearing black ? with white ?… Main tayyar hoo.. Let’s go..
In the party,
Malhotra addressing the guests : attention ladies n gentleman.. Today, I would like to introduce two talented people.. Please welcome famous industrialist kabir kapoor n brilliant singer sanchi mishra… A big round of applause for them… All clapped for two…
Gayatri to sanchi :anand told me u sings very nicely… Please sing a song for us..
Everyone in the party cheered for sanchi to sing..
Sanchi holding a mike n started singing…
Note: in between the song sanchi n kabir both r imagining each other..
The song starts
Tere bin, tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin
Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin..
Tere bin, tere bin..
pa pa pa….
Bawre piya laage na jiya
Dekho mera mann jalta diya
Jalta diya bujhe na piya
Bujhe na piya jalta diya
Hmm mm..
Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin
pa pa pa..
Bawre piya laage na jiya
Dekho mera mann jalta diya
Jalta diya bujhe na piya
Bujhe na piya jalta diya
Hmm mm..
Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin..
Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin..
pa pa pa..
The song ends
Everyone clapped for sanchi except veer n kabir bcoz both were lost in Sanchi’s eyes..
Veer(in mind) : mil hi gaye meri sapno ki Rani… Mujhe toh pehli nazar mein pyaar, ishq aur mohabbat sab ho gaya hai… Ab toh isse apna Banana padega…
Rahul holding a Mike, now it’s time to dance with their respective partners..
Kabir Who was standing at a distance was observing only sanchi…
Isha : Sir!! U r standing alone here.. It’s not fair.. Ek Dance toh banta hai… Please
Kabir nodded in yes
Here, veer approached sanchi for the dance… And
Ajay approached pragya for the dance..
Lights r dimmed…
The song plays
Isha n kabir, veer n sanchi, Ajay n pragya, anand n gayatri..
Kabir was jealous to see veer holding sanchi…
Janam janam janam saath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahin
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho judaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida
Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida
Aha ha ha o
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida
Partners changed.. Kanchi, isha n ajay, veeragya
Kabir holding sanchi by her waist n pulled her close.. Sanchi blushes n her heart beats very fast.. Both were lost in each other…
Teri baahon mein hai mere dono jahaan
Tu rahe jidhar meri jannat wahin
Jal rahi agan hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bujhe kabhi meri mannat yahi
Tu meri aarzu, main teri aashiqui
Tu meri shayari, main teri mausiqi
Talab talab talab bas teri hai mujhe
Nason mein tu nasha banke ghulna yunhi
Now
Meri mohabbat ka karna tu haq ye adaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida
Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho, tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida
Aa alvida
O na na
The song ends… People clapped for all… Everyone dispersed but our kanchi were lost in each other..
Isha: sanchi, Dance is over
Pragya : abeo aur kitna Dance karegi.. Tere liye kya doosra gaana bajaye…
Sanchi : shut up u two..
Kabir : u sings very well… Kya socha tumne? Mere saath kaam karogi…
Sanchi : I need some time to think… Hope u don’t mind
Kabir : it’s OK…
Mr malhotra eloped from the party n reached old factory..
He shouted : come outside.. I m here.. What do you want from me?
A veiled woman is shown.. She picks up her veil..
Anand : Jaya
Jaya : ha Jaya!! Woh Jaya jiska tumne sab kuch cheen liya… Bata meri behen kaha hai?? Isi jagah meri behen mujhse dur ho gayee thi…
Anand : I don’t know! Main bhi usey saalo se dhoond raha hu… Jaya, meri bacchi kaha hai?? woh tumhare paas hai na??
Jaya angrily : don’t utter a word Mr malhotra ..pehle mujhe apne bete se milao kaha hai woh!!
Tumhari wajah se maine apna beta khoya tha… Tumne hi us raat bacche badle the… Mere godh mein tumne maara huwa baccha daala tha.. Mujhe mera beta chahiye anand malohtra… She cries …
Note: Rahul is the son of Jaya n sunil…
Precap: veer n sanchi’s friendship n kabir jealous.. Kusum reaches india to meet savitri
OK friends, this much for today.. Tomorrow more twists r waiting to be revealed… Please drop your comments if u liked this part… Kuch bhool ho toh please forgive me..
With love
Anu
30 Comments
Anuradha dear… it was fantastic episode yaar.. seeing kabir jealous..always entertains me.. he looks so cute with that expressions.. btw i am really waiting for tge precap part..plz post next one asap
Thanks sweetie for such lovely comments…
Kabir will know very soon that he really loves sanchi… Uska asar toh Dance k beech mein dikh hi raha hai….
Aww, it’s too cute episode. Loved it from bottom of the heart. Amazing Fabulous episode. Update soon.Waiting for next one.
Thanks niyu my dear… I m on cloud 9…can’t express how happy I m to see your lovely comments…
OMG ye kese hua yaar
Rahul Janil’s son and Sanchi Savnand’s daughter !!!!
Hope Kabir confesses his true love soon.
I think there is going to be love triangle here If I am not wrong.
Plz post next epi asap.
Thanks anonymousaa… I m so so So happy that u liked it… I will try to update fast…
anu wat to say iam speechless sweetie it’s beyond everything and Kabir jealously track wat a idea waiting for next part And luv u loads
Thanks ashnita… I m out of the world… Getting an appreciation from u is a great honor… U r an amazing writer my dear… Yaah kabir jealous hoga tabhi pyaar ki aag bhadkegi…
Awesome dear.
U rocked it.
Pls update soon.
???Luv u tc
Thank you priyanshi for loving it… Once more thanks for your love n support dear… ? ? ? u too my sweetheart…
Lovvvv ita lot but again love triangle btw veer sanchi nd kabir actually m pak chuki hun is track se sorry actually seriel ne itna paka diya h ki bardasat se bahar ho gaya h…. Kabir looks cute in jealous avataar…post nxt asap dear
No worries niyaa!! Kuch time ka jealousy track hai baad mein happy ending…kanchi is the lead pair not sanveer…. Sanchi aur veer ish story mein acche dost hi banenge… Thanks for your comments Niyaa…
Dear u r splendid ……mind blowing…..mtlb sach me kya story hai……air twist pe twist ….ab to mujpe wait ni hora age padhne ko …….jldi post krna!!
Thank u abhilasha.. So sweet of u… Bina twist K Love story ka majaa hi nahi aayega… Ha jaldi post karne ki koshish karungi actually ek software ka coding likhna hai… Upar se navratri ka tyohar… Main ek os bhi likh rahi hu agar waqt mile toh jarur padhna…. Take care n love u sweetie
Amazing
Thanks Alia for your lovely comment…
Many twists to unfold… Update soon
Yes amna… I ll try to update fast..
Anu dear, pehle ye bataao, tum kya khaati ho………..yaar, itna achha koi kaise likh sakta hai………..how could u manage to leave me spellbound in ur every update……………too good yaar……..just too good……..luv u dheeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr saara…………….hehe..
Omg look who is praising me?? Someone please pinch me…. Yaar riya,,tum khud itna accha likhti ho . Mujhe sharminda mat Karo ya yeh kahu ki chaane ke jhaar par mat chadao… Waha se agar gir gayee toh kaun sambhalega mujhe…. Waise hi tumhari stories ne mujhe crazy bana diya hai… Jab bhi tumhari ff padhti hu, khushi k maare apne aap ko sambhal nahi paati…. Tumhe meri taraf se dherrr saare kisses n teddies……….
Awesome abhilasha this was fabulous I just can’t wait to read the next part ! You rocked dear nailed it totally ! Excited for Kanchi ??
Thanks Trisha, I m anuradha or you can call me tiya.. A big smile appears when I see your comments… Getting appreciated by such an amazing writer is really a very big thing for me…. Keep commenting dear n lots of love n ? ? to u…
superb anu i just love this ff specially kanchi’s dance it was awesome , mind blowing……..
i’ll waiting for next part update soon next one………
Thanks dhruti for such sweet sweet comments.. I will try to update soon…
awww that so sweet and cute one Anu dear u are an amzing writer as well as ur writings…keep writing sear.
Thank u very much anee dear… I reached out of the world after seeing your beautiful comments… Lots of love to u my sweetie…
Anu…… Oh my mata yaar!!! What a twist!!! So awesome…… I’m so fortunate to read such a beautiful story ??? and jealous Kabir is just ???? can’t wait to read the next part but update when you’re free dear ??? and sorry for the late comment ???
Thanks ruwani… N please no need to say sorry… Dosti mein no sorry no thanks… My dear, u r my inspiration n by reading your ff only, today I got courage to write… Your love n support is very very important to me…
???? never I’m my life I thought I’ll be someone’s inspiration through WRITING!!! Thank you so much for this complement Anu I’m so happy ??? love you dear ???
Sorry for commenting late as Evans are on… Coming to the episode, it was kind blowing… Amazing… Loved the jealous Kabir… Kaanchi dance part was superb.. Keep going??