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Adhura pyar os by Ashnita

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 23, 201721 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam ur Ashnita. Iam writing first os of kanchi. I hope u guys will like it. Fingers crossed.

U can throw watever u want i will catch it in my style.

A dharamsala is shown a girl with simple hairtyle light make up wearing a white sari crying

A small girl maybe 4 yrs girl calling her. Mom. Lady looked back and saw a angel looking at her with lovely eyes.

Lady – beta aashi kya hua

Aashi – mom where is dad

Lady – i told u before my princess when will u feel like u r in the air flying and ur heart beats faster than ever. That means ur father is cuming.

Aashi – really mom love you

Lady – yes beta love you too and now go and play outside but remember dnt go too far.

Aashi – ok mamma papa pliz jaldi aajao I’m waiting for u.

A old women tapped lady shoulder.it’s kusum.

Kusum – sanchi beta kab talak

Sanchi – patani maa I can’t tell truth to her.

Kusum – i think u should tell her truth

Sanchi disagreed and went to search for aashi. Sanchi searching aashi but aashi is not there. Sanchi asking everyone did you saw aashi only received rejection

Sanchi – aashi where r u pliz come back

Let’s see where is aashi. So Aashi is at bus stop. Waiting for someone.

A black car came infront of her.Aashi was holding many balloons that’s y she flied away.

Aashi shouting help help just then a handsome tall hot boy comes running and he shoots balloon with gun just then aashi cums down and she quickly hugged him.

Her heart was beating faster just then

Man asked princess r u ok aashi nodded.

Man – can I ask something princess

Aashi – yes Kabir uncle

Man is none other than Kabir.

Kabir – wat r u doing here

Aashi – iam waiting for my papa.

Kabir was teary eyed and asked her to go home. Aashi was was going home but she remembered sanchi words u will fly on air. Ur heartbeats faster than ever. She remembered when Kabir cars came she flied away and her hearts beats.

Kabir was going just then she heard aashi voice calling him papa. Kabir quickly hugged her. Kabir asking aashi once again call him aashi says papa.

Kabir took aashi home and gets shocked to see sanchi and kusum .they gets shocked to see him.

Sanchi cums running and hugged him. Kabir pushes her and asking who r u. Sanchi than get concious.

Kusum – how’s this possible how can Kabir be alive.

Kabir – iam Kabir but I dnt know u guys. Wait a second he recalls something.

Kabir – sanchi, maa
Sanchi – how u know me

Kabir – i dnt know but everytime in my dreams I always saw u guys. I just wanted to say I want to marry u.

Sanchi – wat do you know wat r u saying iam widower.

Kabir – so iam Kabir kappor

Aashi – maa pliz marry papa

Sanchi – shut up aashi ur papa is dead he is not ur papa.

Sanchi goes inside brings Kabir aasti in kalash.

Sanchi – ur papa is dead since 3 yrs he met with a accident.

Aashi – wat maa papa died how

Sanchi – we were happily married but that person came in our life.ur papa was a doctor he was cuming home when he met his old friend who was a drunkard he forced ur dad that he wants to drive. Ur papa said ok. That person was driving and he couldnt control and smatched car with a petrol truck. Ur papa was alive when I went to meet him.

Ur papa donated his heart to his friend q ki eshan utarna tha. Apke papa ke friend ne apke papa ko ek success full doctor banaya.

Aur mera pyar adhura ho gaya. Kabir gets shocked he remembered something.

Aashi – iam sorry maa but mujhe papa chaiye apko Kabir papa se shadi karni ho gi. Until then I won’t eat food.

Kabir – aashi beta zid nhi karte

Aashi – iam counting to 3

She starts counting sanchi shouted ok I will marry fine happy.

After that kanchi got married. They dnt love eachother but always pretended to be happy for aaashi. Many days passed and many months passed. Kanchi fell in love with eachother but couldn’t confess due to
Their hear break they were scared if other person will not love back maybe they loose eachother.

But they were happy with eachother and with their princess. Lekin kehte hai na ache din baar baar nhi ate. .

Aashi was playing just then she breathes heavily and fell does. Kanchi took her to hospital. They gets shocked to hear that aashi immediately needs heart transplant if not they can’t save her. Kanchi was shattered. Kabir asked doctor to operate her we will find a donor.

They couldn’t find any donor. Sanchi was crying. Kabir told sanchi that dnt worry aashi will be okay if won’t let her die. I’m going sanchi pliz take care of mom my princess and take care of urselves.

After sometime Sanchi gets Kabir message that he got a donor and his friend is sick I have to go to him. Dnt wait for me until he recovers I can’t come.

Dr asked sanchi to signed the papers. They r done with transplant aashi was safe. Sanchi was asking dr who was the donor but they didn’t told her

Many months passed many days passed Kabir didn’t came. All were waiting for him. Sanchi was waiting to confes her love for Kabir. Just then door bells rings sanchi quicky ran and opened the door. Kabir friend was there. He was asking about Kabir. Sanchi told kabir went to meet him. Friend said Kabir didn’t came to meet him. Since 3yrs we haven’t meet. Sanchi gets shocked she doubted something. She immediately calls in hospital. She asked all details about who donated heart. Receptionist tells we dnt know the name but we got a message from him and after that he met with accident and he donated heart to Aashi.

Sanchi was crying he asked his friends where do Kabir live. He gave Kabir house keys. Sanchi went inside. She gets shocked to see first Kabir and other person pics. Sanchi sits down crying just then she mistakely touches remote which projector itself on. She saw second Kabir recording

Kabir – sanchiiiiiii I want to tell truth to u when u will see this I’ll won’t be here. I want to conffess. Sanchi ur first Kabir was my best friends he got kill because of me. I was that drunkard person. U hate that person is me. Ur Kabirs heart was on me. When we met an accident some people took us to hospital. First Kabir was his heart was good but dr told that he can’t leave many days and me my whole body was burned out and my heart was not gud but I was alive. So first ka told me he donated his heart to me. Infect our name was same Kabir. When first Kabir died doctors gave me ur Kabirs face. I was in coma for 3 yrs when I regained consious I was looking for u guys then I met aashi there when she called me papa I was touched. When u told us about Kabir i know that I was ur culprit I wanted to tell you same time. I couldn’t dnt know y. Tume, maa aur aashi ke gunegar hu iss liye tumse shadi kar ke me apne pastawa kar rahe tha. When I wanted to say truth u guys thought always cums to my mind I cannot live without you guys

I wen I knw that aashi needs heart I gave her father’s heart whom that heart belongs. I lived my life now my aashi has to live. Tell aashi to pliz forgive her papa and tell her that iam always with her .

But last not least I luv u sanchi. Pliz forgive me. Take care of urselves and my princess. Acha chal ta hu dua me yaad rakna. Aur ho sakhe mujhe maaf kardena.

Sanchi sits shattered and crying i love u Kabir. I always loved u.

Humari Adhuri kahani Bg plays

Sanchi questionly herself.

Q fir se q mera pyar adhura rehgaya. Adhura pyar q hamesa mere kismat hai.

After 15 yrs

A girl is telling stories about her father and theiron adhura pyar. She cries while talking. She quickly ran to her room and hugged his papa pics. I love u papa I miss you.

Two old women’s tapped her shoulders she turned back huggs them. Maa ,dadi I miss papa.

Women’s – Aashi rote nhi dekho papa ne kya kaha ta .meri princess ka kayal rakna. Papa will feel bad.

Aashi – maa aap papa ko miss krti ho.

Sanchi – ya beta har roz.

Aashi touching her heart papa u gave me a great gift but my gift was u.

Suddenly she saw Kabir standing. She quickly hugged him. I love you papa .They all hugged eachother. Kabir telling princess iam always with u guys. Just close ur u can saw me. He huggs everyone and vanishes.

Sanchi – meri adhura pyar bas adhura pyar. Kash me tume bata pati me tumse Kitna pyar karti hu. Lekin uske sath bitya har pal mere sath hai. Bale mere pyar adhura rehgaya lekin woh abhi mere sath hai.

The End

(This story about second Kabir they miss second Kabir )

I hope u guys like it and sorry for long
Pliz do comment and tell me how was it

Take care
Keep smiling

Regards
Ashnita

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    Lovely girl a loving daughter loving sis and loving friend.Big fan of Shah Ruk khan. Favorite movie Main Hoon Na. And loves thriller, suspense and many more.

    21 Comments

    1. swetha on September 23, 2017 6:47 pm

      what happen yaar
      all are making us cry
      soo emotional
      other ffs also sad parts
      but heart touching guys

    2. Mrunmayi on September 23, 2017 7:01 pm

      Awesome as usual ashnita really touching story loved it to the core.

    3. anu on September 23, 2017 7:07 pm

      This os is so heart touching yaar…….ae os sob os sae alaghae …….. thanks a lot yaar…..iss os par kar mera ankh mae ashu agae……but os is so beautiful……

    4. riyarocks on September 23, 2017 7:27 pm

      Ashu dear………..tussi toh bade kamaal ke writer ho…………tussi toh chha gaye…………..loved this to the core of my heart…………..luv u a lot sweetie & a big teddy hug for u…………..

    5. Abhilasha on September 23, 2017 7:36 pm

      It was really heart touching dear…ashi u stupendous… Means yr rula dia …..love uh…loved this!!

    6. Trisha139 on September 23, 2017 7:42 pm

      U almost made me cry ashnita this was so emotional !
      U did a great job… keep going sweetie
      Love you

    7. Prachi goel on September 23, 2017 7:53 pm

      Really ashita I feel like crying

    8. Anonymousaa on September 23, 2017 7:55 pm

      So sad. Sanchi’s pyaar remained adhura. Don’t worry Sanchi Ashnita will kill u and u can take rebirth again to meet ur Kabir.
      So what do u say Ashu? Come up with new OS okay about reincarnation.

    9. Alia on September 23, 2017 9:00 pm

      Amazing fabulous story

    10. Sanjukta on September 23, 2017 9:03 pm

      God….sooooo much painful OS…Almost crying yr…bt amazing one…nw thoughts… just loved it…

    11. RuCh23 on September 23, 2017 9:07 pm

      ??? that’s so heart touching yaar!!! Awesome one dear totally loved it ???

    12. yaashi on September 23, 2017 9:29 pm

      So much heart touching yaar…. i m crying right now. I am very sensitive person yaar. Rules Dina tune to mumbo.

    13. Khamoshi on September 23, 2017 9:36 pm

      Ashnita… no words yaar.. it was heart touching story.. i felt connected to it.. u r amazing writer dear.. this story literally moist my eyes dear ..for the first tym it ever happened to me. Lots of love to u dear

    14. Dhruti on September 23, 2017 10:40 pm

      heart touching os i have no word to say how i felt when i read this os but i wanna told u one thing that u r superb writer because the way u made all situation , the all lines are superb i love you for that a big hug for u please accept it.
      keep writing ………………….
      bye bye

    15. Anee on September 23, 2017 10:41 pm

      wow ashu dear first trail is jusssssssssssssssssssssssssssssstttt mindblowing ek dam new concept……….loved it….luv u sweettie….

    16. Anuradha123 on September 23, 2017 11:16 pm

      Itna rulaya mat karo, waise bhi Assam mein baarish ka silsila ruk hi nahi raha.. Upar se tum rulaogi toh mera ghar doob jayega.. (just kidding yaar)… Very nice story ashnita… Love u yaar…

    17. Premamohan on September 23, 2017 11:30 pm

      What a thought yaar my mind was stopped after screening this os in my imagine how sad BT great job….

    18. niyaaa on September 23, 2017 11:39 pm

      Hey amaz but heart touching ashi but no fear wneb ashi is here and sanchi tumhara pyaar adhura nahi rahega ashnita h naa wo kuch bhi kar sakti h wo kabir ko phir zinda kar sakti yaa tumhe hi uske pass pahuncha degi hehehe…lovvv it but bas kar pagli or kitna rulayegi… Ab hasane ki jimmedaari bhi apki…post nxt one

    19. Amnaa on September 24, 2017 12:04 am

      Its si nice and heart touching

    20. Moonlight25 on September 24, 2017 2:19 am

      Omg great job Asnita…you made me cry…i just loved it ………keep going sweetie……

    21. Jessicca on September 26, 2017 5:27 pm

      I was literally crying after reading this… It was so heart touching… Superb… Keep it up

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