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Home»Fan Fiction»ETERNAL LOVE (EP-2)
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ETERNAL LOVE (EP-2)

Suma123By Suma123September 23, 201714 Comments8 Mins Read
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hey guys iam back with new episode….guys read it throgh watty also @suma_0795…

hope u will like it…

lucky – bhai are u there ?
no one responds !!!!
bhai …and again he knocked the door…

door opens..

a girl in towel….
lucky shocked to see her in his brothers washroom…
(As he know that sanky is very well behaved guy and he loves one girl deeply …and he thought she is the one…)

girl – hey handsome….
(he turns back and see whether she called anyone behind him and sees no one there and turns to her…”oh its me….so she is not Bhabhi ” )

lucky- tu…tu….tu….

girl- what?? tu…. tu… tu…

lucky – tum kaun ?

girl – what ????

lucky – sry who are you ??? where is my bro?? is he inside ???(nervously)

girl – yea come in lets see…

lucky – ha…. no.. no ..no …. no lets…i go…u stay here itself…and goes in to see and suddnly girl comes in..

girl – hey handsome ..by saying that she grabs him into her hands and hold through his waist..

lucky got tensed as he is not aware of girls…and asked pls leave me…pls ….pls….i beg u…..iam getting tensed…

girl – shutup u waste fellow…

both cameout and he asks where is his bhai… she said dont know…and left the place…

@midnight
lucky is calling sanky and he is not attending the calls….he got tensed very much…

after some time door bell rangs and lucky goes down fast and opens the door …

he is shocked to see his brother (our cutie pie sanskar)….

lucky – bhai ye kya hai ….koon….bhai….

sanky – didnt respond to him and left to his room…(actually lost in thoughts)

lucky – bhai what happened what is this blood on ur shirt ???… are u hurt any where????…
(till sanky didnt realise lucky came to londn)

sanky – goes to washroom and clean his shirt and collaps in bathroom as he was druk….

lucky – came to his room and went to washroom,
he find him there and tried to woke him up but no use..
he lift him to his bed and made him to drink some milk and left the place…

lucky came to his room

lucky – what hapnd to u bhai ? why is he like this ??

flashback (In India )

lucky – bhai i got a gift for u..

.
sanky – seriously … u kiddooo… what gift??

lucky -arey bhai open na….

sanky – eyyyyyyy…..its guitar which i have seen there in mall….loved it… thanks lucky

lucky – no thank u …

sanky – then ?

lucky – i just want one game bhai….basketball…

sanky – ok chill..will play …though u will loose …i too want some time to get rid of that business thing…

come lets play …
came to basketball court(imagine any court dear )

after playing for some time…
both fell on ground having some bro-talk…

lucky – wat hpnd ur proposal bhai…

sanky – still on progress…dad is thinking about it…

lucky – bhai dont forget me ..after going to london..
(its a business propsal that he asked his bade papa(dp) he will look after their business in london branch)

sanky – no lucky ur my buddy bro how can i dude….

flashback ends …

lucky thinking all these…and dozedoff….

@morning

lucky wokeup and getting ready to go to clg beacuse he has to submit his documents tody….

lucky – bhai did u made any breakfast ????

sanky – what ???? who r u ???(in sleepy mode)

lucky -seriusly !!!!!! what the heck??? did he asked me “who r u”???

fastly goes to sanky room and sees him sleeping and asked to woke up..

slowly sanky opens eyes and rubbed his eyes to see….he shocked to see lucky…

sanky – lucky tum???????kab???? i mean wen did u came ??? sry i forgot to receive u….dont mind….

lucky – ha bhai …mein…get up…

sanky – hmmmmm………..

lucky – bhai what hpnd to u yest… bhai who is d girl in ur room yest???

sanky – wohhhh.(blood)…..wohhhh(girl)…… chodo…lets not talk about it now…u getting late for clg na…
eat ur bf in canteen for now …will meet u later….

lucky – ok bhai ..hugs him and left…….

after 3 days all set for lucky in college and sanky is not trying to meet lucky
(when lucky came home he goes somewhere and will comng after he slept..)

@morning
lucky wokes up and getting ready to clg….

after bf he left for clg…

while going to his class he collide with a girl who is coming to class from other side(dont ask how pls imagine guys) ,

he holds her through waist…and got locked in her beauty(its none other dan our angel RAGINI aka TEJU)

they have an eye-lock…he is mesmerised by her beauty and keeps staring her…

one person is watching both of them and got fumed in jealous and left d place…

and after some time they both got into senses….and both goes to class room…

she sits in parallel bench (lucky front & ragini back)

lucky – “o god pls make me sit beside her..but there is no place …wat to do …
how can i see her…i cant wait to see her…

lucky POV:
“can i turn back to see her”… “No lucky beta be calm and have patience..”
“no i cant able to stop to see her ” “man she is such a damn cute ”
pov ends.

ragini’s POV
who is he ? is he new to this cls? wow he is looking cute??? wanna talk to him ? but how???
but he is not even looking to me? am i not beautiful?
he not even looking at me after that incident…..
pov ends…

after class all went out.

aftersometime..lucky is searching for ragini…
and there ragini is also looking for him…

both searching & came opposite to each other…

lucky – arey lucky beta that girl is cuming towards u…chalo talk to her…ask her number?or name?….anything….

ragini – awwww my cutie… cuming to me… will he talk to me……cmmon…yippie…

lucky – ey…ey… ey… she is cuming near u…dont miss this chance …talk to her…
(fully tensed because he never spoke to any girl)

ragini – oh my cutie are u preparing how to talk to me…

soon after both crossed each other..but none speaks..
.

lucky – what d fish …i havent dare to talk to her…awww shit…

ragini – she got frustrated and shouted him “hey”…

he turns back and asked like nothing going to happen…(cooll baba cool….lucky pls talk…dont go back)

lucky – yeah what can i do for u??

ragini – bring some laddos….

lucky – what????

ragini – then … how could u ask like that…

lucky – oh sry …iam laksh maheshwari…u can call me lucky…

ragini – oh lucky…awww how lucky iam …

lucky – what ??

ragini – nothing iam just saying that lucky iam ragini..u can call meeeeee….. no call me ragini…

lucky – what is that bandage on ur head & hand too ?

ragini – its nothing…some wound…its fine now…

lucky – oh ok…then wat is ur plan to night ?

ragini – nothing going to pub…will u join with me…

lucky with out even thinking – yeah sure…

ragini – then chalooo

lucky – what now…

ragini – no baba..lets go for canteen…

lucky – ok tell me about u…

ragini – ahaaa…everytime ladies first..na na… now gents first…tell me about urself?

lucky – completed my degree bla bla…..now in london…

ragini – oh …den about herself (bla bla bla….)

@eve

ragini is waiting for lucky in pub

but he not yet came….

there she listened a song from pub and goes inside….

A soulful voice(sanky)….singing wid deep heart broken….which stoles everyone’s attention there…..
he plays guitar while singing….

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa… yaara!

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

Everyone clapped there…she got into senses..

she totally fell for his voice…and deeply in thoughts…she was seraching for d voice but it too crowd around…
(after song completion sanky left d place)…

ragini – aww this much crowd …hell wid this ppl …move a side…
she reached the stage but no one found..she asked there about him ..but no one said who he was..

ragini – shit I MISSED HIM…really his voice….awww totally in love wid him…

By then lucky came there listened the last words “totally loved him”…….

He blushes by listening those words…….

PRECAP – First kiss happened here btwn Raglak….

to be continued…….
sorry guys i know its boring…but pls bear me….thanks a lot for ur comments….overwhlmed by ur response….love u guys…..

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    crazy fan of teja and ragsan/tevar like temish watty - @suma007

    14 Comments

    1. vini on September 23, 2017 4:25 pm

      awesome. please make it Ragsan

    2. sug on September 23, 2017 4:39 pm

      Noooooooooooooooooo. Want ragsan only

    3. RAGSANIAN on September 23, 2017 4:49 pm

      Amazingggg please pls make this one on ragsan

    4. PriyaS on September 23, 2017 6:02 pm

      Nice

    5. mk on September 23, 2017 6:27 pm

      Amazing dr

    6. IQRA222 on September 23, 2017 6:29 pm

      awesome!!!!!!!!

    7. aditi on September 23, 2017 6:31 pm

      Awesome

    8. nive on September 23, 2017 7:06 pm

      Awesome sissy. Waiting for ragsan scenes.

    9. shalini on September 23, 2017 7:54 pm

      Awesome

    10. vani on September 23, 2017 8:37 pm

      Ragsan na

    11. geet on September 23, 2017 10:59 pm

      Superb

    12. keerthi on September 24, 2017 8:48 am

      Awesome

    13. Polly on September 24, 2017 11:09 am

      oh wow so it’s a lovey dovey wala triangle b/w RagSanLak , yipeeeeeeeeee i alws love triangles and that too b/w my cuties , dunno who is the end game , but i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeed it , update soon dear , can’t wait more now

    14. Tani on September 24, 2017 11:40 pm

      Nice

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