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Home»Fan Fiction»Every Breath I Take (RagLak) – Shot 1
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Every Breath I Take (RagLak) – Shot 1

soundariBy soundariSeptember 22, 201751 Comments4 Mins Read
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hi guys this is soundari.. surprised? yeah even i am.. i thought to never come back but what to do our charming raglak spelled their blagic magic on me that i could never ever leave them. hehehe… just kidding.. k in short i’m back to irritate you with my new ss. hope you support it as much as my other works.. k enough of my bak bak.. let’s move on to the story

It starts from the time when ragini breaks raglak engagement for swara
Laksh PO.V: (in mind)

“did it just happen? Did ragini really reject me? Me? Laksh maheswari? I can’t believe it.. k I accept …I do don’t have any interest on her.. but how dare she reject me? It should have been me who should have rejected her? Lucky will never marry a girl who is so traditional and naïve and especially my father’s choice.. but here this girl rejected me believing her so called sister.. no I can’t let this happen… “ I looked warily at the entwined hands of swaragini sisters who looked proud about each other. “well I don’t give a damn about her over smart jasoosi elder sister . she just want to prove everyone that she is the best. Even though she is modern she is not my type. Leave her. But this girl who I thought is no way equal to me is now getting on my nerves. Wait.. I won’t let this happen.. she should NOT reject me. “ I looked challengingly at her big brown eyes while she too stares at me with the same intensity for a second and immediately resumes her bashan about sisterhood. “well who cares? I don’t care about your soul sister story and all. Now my only target is you.. you Ms. Ragini Gadodiya. I’ll show you what I can do..you made a very big mistake by rejecting me. If you have waited for a few more days, i myself would have cancelled the marriage but now you are trapped with me.. just wait and watch.. I will make you come begging to me for my love so that I could reject you..” I challenged to myself.

Ragini P.O.V. (in mind)
“uff atlast the maheswari’s have left. We the swaragini sisters have showed them how important we are for one another and how their good for nothing son doesn’t mean anything to me. I know dadi is angry with me for speaking rudely with elders but I have to as I don’t have a choice as it’s my life and I can’t risk it . But what’s wrong with that idiot? Why does he keep looking at me as if I said to his family member that he was a gay . no no I think I’m over exagratting. I know very well that he doesn’t like naïve and traditional girls and will only be happy for my decision. But why do I feel that he was sort of challenging me? Whatever it is anyways hereafter I’m not even gonna meet him. Laksh maheswari is already a closed chapter in my life. I better stop thinking about him. Uho.. it’s time.. I have to leave for my classes” I took my bag and sitar and left baadi waving bye to baba, dadi, sumi and swara.
As I stepped out my house I felt someone presence around me and I looked around but couldn’t find anyone. K I think it’s my imagination. Nowadays I’m overthinking a lot . first that laksh.. o comeon ragini.. how many times I have to say that stop thinking about him? I reprimanded myself and started walking ignoring my inner conscious.

Laksh P.O.V :
I came out of my hiding after making sure that she was at a safe distance as I can follow her without her knowledge. God this girl is very sharp. How did she came to know that someone is following in less than a minute. I have to be careful. First I should know everything about her before hitting on her. Well what interesting things I can know about this stupid girl. She is a very boring type. Knows only classes, pooja, household work, respect etc.. etc.. etc.. . well on the whole a very sanskari bahu which my parents are in hunt of. K whatever I’ll follow her for sometime and if I get too bored I’ll leave and come back tomorrow.

Thinking so laksh started following his ragini. From there started the journey of a imperfectly perfect couple RAGLAK

So guys that’s the introduction part. Hope I didn’t bore you much with this very slow start.

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    51 Comments

    1. Sherin on September 22, 2017 6:45 pm

      Awesome dear

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:49 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    2. Aleeza on September 22, 2017 7:06 pm

      Nice

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:50 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    3. Elizabethlovely on September 22, 2017 7:52 pm

      Awesome

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:50 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    4. Polly on September 22, 2017 8:15 pm

      awesome dear , continue soon

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:50 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    5. CRAZY_RAGLAK on September 22, 2017 8:22 pm

      egoistic laksh and cute,innocent ragini. its going to awesome .

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:51 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    6. Vennila on September 22, 2017 8:42 pm

      Awesome episode

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:51 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    7. YamiSaggurthi on September 22, 2017 9:34 pm

      Like it

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:52 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    8. Monisha on September 22, 2017 9:45 pm

      Superbbbbbbb

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:52 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    9. IQRA222 on September 22, 2017 9:46 pm

      soundari didu you are back!!!!!!!!!! so happy to see you and your mind blowing ss back!!
      didu i am already in love with it!!!
      lucky’s character hmmmm really interesting and ragu is as usual interesting
      anyways waiting for the next part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      love you!!

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:53 pm

        iqu dear.. i missed you and your comments a lot. thanks a ton for your wonderful comment and love you a lot too dear 🙂

    10. Thara on September 22, 2017 10:12 pm

      Interesting………… Pls post next shot soon

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:53 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    11. Arjuna on September 23, 2017 6:57 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:54 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    12. Thahseem on September 23, 2017 11:55 am

      Nice

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:54 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    13. Soumya on September 23, 2017 12:27 pm

      Superb di and plz continue

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:55 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    14. Ammu on September 23, 2017 1:25 pm

      Welcome back dear and thanks a lot for another Raglak story. They are a heavenly couple. It’s interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Love u dear and take care

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:55 pm

        thank you so much dear for your beautiful comment. love u a lot too 🙂

    15. _Hxl1m4_ on September 23, 2017 2:33 pm

      Seems interesting, looking forward to read more. I think it’s going to get shocking for Lakshya in the upcoming journey. You see where I’m coming from ?

      Upload the next part soon.
      Take care and keep writing ✨

      ~ Halima ?

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:56 pm

        hahaha.. yep laksh gonna experience a lot more. thanks a lot for your wonderful comment dear 🙂

    16. Aamy on September 23, 2017 2:50 pm

      Awesome

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:57 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    17. Monu on September 23, 2017 3:31 pm

      Interesting dear

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:57 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    18. Laashya on September 23, 2017 4:33 pm

      Lovely story and do continue

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:57 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    19. Ashly on September 23, 2017 7:15 pm

      Awesome superb

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:58 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    20. Pearly on September 23, 2017 8:02 pm

      Nice

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:58 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    21. Malu on September 23, 2017 8:42 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:58 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    22. Raglak_fan on September 23, 2017 8:57 pm

      Fantastic dear

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:59 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    23. Jiyani on September 23, 2017 9:43 pm

      Amazing dear…plz continue

      • soundari on September 25, 2017 11:59 pm

        thanks dear 🙂

    24. Vini on September 24, 2017 8:23 am

      Loved it, keep going

      • soundari on September 26, 2017 12:00 am

        thanks dear 🙂

    25. Anju on September 24, 2017 8:47 am

      Superb episode

      • soundari on September 26, 2017 12:00 am

        thanks dear 🙂

    26. teitokUn1718 on October 3, 2017 1:06 am

      Amazing…
      Welcome back dear…

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