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Home»Fan Fiction»Raaz Aur Daar Ka Blockbuster *HORROR* (kanchi ) EPISODE 10
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Raaz Aur Daar Ka Blockbuster *HORROR* (kanchi ) EPISODE 10

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 22, 201713 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam Ashnita. I hope u guys remembered me. Thank you for ur lovely comments it always make me smile .As I told you guys in my other ff that I will end my all ff and maybe i wont write any other ff because I couldn’t reply u guys I feel so bad when I read ur lovely comments but couldn’t reply and I couldn’t reach ur expactation and I always bored u guys .thank you guys for loving my ff. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads

And Pliz Silent Readers Do Comment. Sayad hamara sath yahi talak tha

Episode starts

Kabir coming home as how shaurya wears. His hair style is stylish, his eyes r Kanji as he wears lense. And he starts singing tume apna banane ki kasam kayi hai kayi hai. Everyone gets shocked including sanchi to see him in other getup.

Malhotra – kabir yeh kya hahal banaye.

Kabir – oh ganje apne kaam se kaam rakho.

Savitri – Kabir wat r saying he is ur dad. I didn’t taught u this.

Kabir – bhudi tume alag se invitation de

Veer – bhai wat happened to u

Kabir – oh maharaja shut up or else I will shut u in my style.

Kabir went to his room. Sanchi came behind him

Sanchi – kabirrrr

Kabir – Oh My Mata wat u want now

Sanchi – who r u

Kabir – iam ur husband

Sanchi – no u r not my Kabir. Who r u

Kabir grabbed sanchi neck and hang her in air.

Kabir – baut bolti ho tum ,u want to know me OK iam shaurya goenka

Sanchi gets shocked

Kabir – hahaha look at ur face u r like manjulika. I was kidding

Sanchi – next time dnt take his name infront of me.

Kabir -woah my jangli bili

Sanchi pov – y Kabir reminded me of shaurya he himself told me dnt take shaurya name infront of him. Kuch toh garbad hai daya oh I mean sanchi.

Kabir as shaurya- u have to stop watching cid.

Sanchi – y i like watching cid. (Wait I was talking in my mind how do Kabir knw. U have to find it sanchi. Inspector daya banjao

Kabir – OK

In the night

Sanchi is sleeping kabir is missing. Lets see where is Kabir. Oh i got it Kabir is in sdch in store room with dead bodies.

Shaurya is out of Kabirs body .All dead bodies doesn’t have head. Head is hanging in air with blood and mouth r talking or should I say singing song to entertain shaurya.

Kabir – shaurya can I ask something

Shaurya – no

Hahaha ask shaurya said

Kabir – wat r u doing with dead bodies

Shaurya – u will get ur answer when time will come.

He looked back and saw Kabir missing. He gets angry. Kabir runs but he came same place, again he runs again he comes in same place. Everytime he runs and cuming same place. Shaurya appears and singing
Naadan paridey ghar Aja.

Shaurya – kabirrrrrrrrrrrr wat r doing u can’t escape from here. I told u not to run. Now ur veer will suffer.

Kabir – no no iam sorry pliz dnt do anything with my family.

Shaurya – ok

Winds starts all burbs again burts out some (when all burbs and glass break it again joints always thats y every time glass and burbs break )others ghosts appears shaurya gets shocked.

Ghosts – shaurya ur power will be less for 2 days.

Shaurya – yes I know but wat will I do

Ghosts- u should think before

Shaurya – shaurya goenka never loose this time to he will be winner .

Ghosts – remember shaurya u have to take Kabir .

Shaurya – yes

They Disappeared.

Shaurya – kabirrrrrrrrrrrr look my all dead bodies r bored

Kabir – wat will I do

Shaurya – tell me ur story how u guys patch up

Kabir – I’m not interested talking with dead people.
(Showing dead heads) look at this. See this shaurya he has no eyes but he gives light; like seriously. Look at this one. He is dead but he is talking on phone; look at this one he is singing main hoon na song .wow wat a creative ideas of urs.

Shaurya – hahaha nice thought ok enough tell me.

Kabir lost

In fb

Sanchi crying and shouting kabir just then she heard a voice and turned back.

Y r u shouting said Kabir

Sanchi – how dare you y u still here go i came to see u off

Kabir – my flight got delayed and iam not interested to stay here.

Sanchi -ok

Kabir – sanchi meet my new gf

Sanchi – wat

Kabir – my gf Durga

A girl with long hair, wearing a pink Kameez with matching ornaments and with a small belly. (Durga played by sanjeeda sheikh from ek hasina thi )

Kabir – hey durga

Durga – kabirrrr i love u

Kabir – i love u too

Sanchi gets jealous seeing their closeness

Sanchi – kabirrrr but u love me na

Kabir – i loved u before not now because I have my durga

Durga – hi sanchi iam durga.

Sanchi – hi durga nice to meet u.

Durga -me to

Sanchi – u r pregnant right

Durga – yes

Kabir – it’s my baby sanchi

Sanchi – i dnt believe this

Kabir – OK

Sanchi – kabirrrr i want to

Kabir – want to tell wat

Sanchi – amm … u won’t believe it

Kabir – OK bye sanchi. Have a nice life .cum durga let’s go.

They r living just then they hear sanchi voice.

Sanchi – ladies and gentlemen attention pliz

Kabir – oh god

Sanchi – kabirrrr u kissed me when u saw me then u told me that u love me.

Kabir- yes Sanchi

Kabir gets leaving just then sanchi runs to him. Kabir gets shocked to see sanchi crying and her hand bleeding he saw it was written I LOVE U.

Sanchi – kabirrrr i love u will u marry me

Kabir – iam sorry sanchi but now I cant because I already committed to a girl and to her mother

Sanchi – ok Kabir

Kabir – sanchi

Sanchi -haa

Kabir – i will marry u but on 1 condition

Sanchi – wat

Kabir – nthing u go bye

Sanchi – tell me na I can do anything for u

Kabir – go and break that mirror

Sanchi – ok

Sanchi went the mirror and she gets shocked to see written I LOVE U Sanchiiiiiii
I WILL MARRY U with their pics all around. She quickly hugged Kabir.

Sanchi – u scared me

Kabir – actually when I board flight Iwas about to switch off my phone just then I saw a message from Jaya aunty.

Sanchi – message

Kabir – yes it was written sanchi is cuming to stop u

Sanchi – that means u lied to me I was hurt

Kabir – yeah that was ur punishment is suffered a lot i thought to play a prank

Sanchi – not fair btw itni jaldi eh sab kese

Kabir – credit goes to durga she managed everything with help of her friends.

Sanchi – who is durga

Kabir – durga is my childhood friend. I was in Paris when she married.

Durga recieved a call from her husband. She went to talk to him and sanchi followed her to thank her

End of fb

Shaurya become sad his eyes was tears but instead of tears his blood was flowing. Kabir gets shocked

Kabir – shaurya wat happened to u

Shaurya – durga she was my wife got damn it.

Kabir gets shocked

Kabir – wat

Shaurya – yes

Shaurya again entered Kabir body and takeover his body.

Tomorrow I will not have my power that means I can’t enter Kabir body tomorrow. I can’t imagine have to do something.

Precap : shaurya as Kabir kills miss Fernandez and landed in jail

Regards
Ashnita

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    Lovely girl a loving daughter loving sis and loving friend.Big fan of Shah Ruk khan. Favorite movie Main Hoon Na. And loves thriller, suspense and many more.

    13 Comments

    1. Amnaa on September 22, 2017 4:27 pm

      Amazing… Awesome… Update soon

    2. anu on September 22, 2017 5:09 pm

      Please ashu tum story likna continue rakho…….we are all miss u so much ……hum logo ka reply nahi chahiae…..tumara story par kar hum log reply pa jati hu……please yaar continue ff…….????

    3. Dhruti on September 22, 2017 5:12 pm

      super as usual but what next if will sanchi knows the truth of saurya that he was in the kabir’s body
      finger crossed what happen next i can’t wait more update soon………bye bye

    4. Priyanshi on September 22, 2017 5:26 pm

      Nhi sis tum Hume aise bich me chod kar nhi jaa sakti.
      I’m addicted to ur ffs why don’t you understand.
      I will not let u leave.
      Luv u so much sis

    5. RuCh23 on September 22, 2017 5:52 pm

      First of all today’s epi is as awesome as always Ashu ??? and secondly if you don’t have time to reply our comments it’s all right. But please don’t stop writing we love all your stories ???

    6. Abhilasha on September 22, 2017 6:12 pm

      Oh god it was soon much thrilling… Yr mazaa agya or an thik ho na ….jb se ek hi rat lagaye hui hui ho …kasam she yr hum tumhari ff se beintehhaa mohabbat krte h…..plzz dont do like that yr ab to pragya style me bi bol dia manjao na!!

    7. Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 7:00 pm

      Wow ashnita.. Thrilling episode…. OMG kabir will do a murder… Wonderful ashnita, fabulous…. I have a request please don’t stop writing ff…agar tum comment na kar payee toh koi baat nahi… Maine yaha ff ke madhyam se kitne sweet friends banaye… Now u want to leave us n go…. Please please please 1000 times please don’t stop writing… If I did any mistake then please forgive…

    8. Khamoshi on September 22, 2017 9:44 pm

      Ashnitaaaaaa… amzaing episode dear.. gave me goosebumps. Too good yaar.
      Btw . I thibk one serial is copying ur story plot…haha ..i saw SONY CHANNEL’S NEW SHOW TEASER TODAY… Ek Deewana Tha.. looks just like ur story..
      Superb one dear.. precap is so thrilling.. waiting for next.. and plz dont stop writing.. it will be ok if u dont get time to reply..but we want u to give time to ur ff dear.. plz dont do this

    9. riyarocks on September 22, 2017 10:19 pm

      hey Ashu dear, how dare u say its boring……….don’t u dare to say like this to one of my fav writers…………u r a writer for whom I always fall short of words to describe the incredible writing skill…….. so dear,ye saara fitoor apne dimaag se nikaalo & never think of stopping to write…………ur episodes bring a big smile on my face & kya tum mujhse ye khushi chhin na chahti ho??????if not then keep writing….luv u a lot dear……….

    10. Alia on September 23, 2017 7:38 am

      Amazing

    11. niyaaa on September 23, 2017 9:19 am

      Hey ashi sorry for late commnting dear actually i got fever thats why and thik hote hi tumne itna bada shock de diya really yaar plzzzzz ff continue karo itni jaldi nahi ek tum hi to ho jo thriller suspense horror comedy everything perfectly enjoy karvati ho seriously i missed ur ff dialogue comedy scene and best jab tum apne ff me apna naam use karti ho so sweet lovvvv u sweetie and agar reply nahi kar pati koi baat nahi 3 ff ko sath lekar chalna kitna time lagta h type karne me samaj skte h so don’t worry about that just chill ashu…post nxt asap

    12. Divya on September 23, 2017 2:22 pm

      1awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait

    13. Jessicca on September 23, 2017 2:38 pm

      Ashu dear plz don’t end your ff.. It was full of suspence, comedy, love, thriller and it’s extremely interesting… I love your ff a lot… And who told you it’s boring… It’s very interesting and amazing… And this episode was super duper jhakkaxx.. Plz plz plz continue your ff… And post next part of this ff soon.. Love you

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