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Unknown love for u (Part 2)

NegisanyuktaBy NegisanyuktaSeptember 21, 201754 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hello everyone, i hope you all r fine .i am soo glad by ur feedback in previous episode . Each and every comment really means a lot to me. Even i did’t expected half of the given comment . Comments r like power booster for a author when some one appreciates their work ?
So guys , please comment down.critics and suggestions are most welcome . Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

A big mansion is seen which is fully decorated like a palace .Guests are comming with gifts and bouquets. A women with to guards is standing in the main entrance and welcoming the guests.

In Hall ,
Each and every part of hall is decorated with red and white combination of ballons. Hall is halfly filled with guests. But there is a girl looking different from everyone because of her simplicity. She wears white colour gowwn. She looks like a picture of winter landscape in the mountains. She is talking with her friends .

A lady(Kusum) comes to that girl. She dressed oin a red saree with black border and also wears some designer jewellery.
Ku:Aysel, everyone is waiting for you.plz come. with me and cut ur birthday cake.
Ay:okk maa ,But let him come first .
Ku(fake anger): ohh god! Plzz some one save me from this brother -sister duo.

A boy is seen coming downstairs.He is wearing a red shervani. He is looking like a prince charming of every girl’s dream.
Boy: Aysel , am i looking weird today?
Ayl: No kabir bhaiya, but what happened??
Kab:Every girl is starring at me . I think i am looking like a red tamoto in this red shervani. I told you na that i will look bad in this shervani but you forced me to wear this and see your brother become a centre of attraction as a joker.
Ayl( in a tising way): Bhayia, you know i never lie. But really you are looking like a tomato.
Kab(tensed): I think i must change my dress .
He moves forward but Aysel stop him by holding his waist.
Ayl(smilimg): Bhayia, i was just joking. U r looking so handsome that every girl is starring you and wants to talk to you.
Kab(smiling): U will never change na
Ayl: Never
Both share a cute hug.

After cake cutting ,on stage.
Kab: May i have your attention please.
( guest gathered around the stage )
Kab: i want to speak a few lins on the birthday girl

“I met u as ur elder brother.Now i have u as a best friend.I hope we meet in our next walk of life where our nok jhok never end.
I may not be the most important person in ur life.I just hope that when u hear my name u just smile and say:
That’s my bhaiya!!! “.Thank u.

Eyeryone claps for speech given by Kabir.Aysel has tears in her eyes.
Screen freezes on Kabir’s smiling face.

“Human life is short-lived and comes to an end with the passage of time.So,enjoy each and every moment of life bcoz i(love) live in everyon’s heart in the form of mischiefs of childhood “.

Precap:-Saanchi’s intro.

Sorry guys,if u feel bored.
Happy Navratris.????

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    54 Comments

    1. Alia on September 21, 2017 11:52 am

      Amazing it was short but fabulous

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thank u Alia for being the first commenter.
        It is my first ff,so it quite shorter.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    2. Gagan on September 21, 2017 12:45 pm

      Happy Navaratri and ur story is ?

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 12:49 pm

        Thank u

    3. Gagan on September 21, 2017 12:46 pm

      Happy Navaratri nd ur story is ?

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 12:49 pm

        And happy navratri u to.

    4. Moonlight25 on September 21, 2017 12:51 pm

      Dear, it was amazing…i loved it….you are great…keep up the good work ….love you loads ???

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 1:40 pm

        Thank u soo much dear.Keep reading and commenting dear.

    5. niyaaa on September 21, 2017 1:22 pm

      Short but sweet dear amaz dear and aysel and kabir bonding is awsome love it a loads post nxt asap

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 1:41 pm

        Thank u soo much.Keep reading and commenting dear.

    6. Khamoshi on September 21, 2017 1:35 pm

      Happy navratri dear.. your article was too cute.. bro and sis bond is shown in lovely way.

      I liked this lines very much dear.
      “Human life is short-lived and comes to an end with the passage of time.So,enjoy each and every moment of life bcoz i(love) live in everyon’s heart in the form of mischiefs of childhood “.

      Good day

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thank u soo much Khamoshi.????
        It really means a lot to me.Love u loads.???
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    7. Sajnana900 on September 21, 2017 1:49 pm

      Wish u the same dear
      ( A VERY VERY HAPPY NAVRATRI )
      and the epi was superb
      Keep writting dear

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 2:24 pm

        Thank u dear.

    8. Ashnita on September 21, 2017 2:12 pm

      wowwww sweetie it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more waiting for next part And sorry for late comment .I hope u won’t mind if I call you sweetie. and happy navratri love you dear keep rocking

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 2:26 pm

        Thank u sooo much.U can call me Sweetie,it is such a cute name.
        Keep commenting dear.

    9. Abhilasha on September 21, 2017 2:20 pm

      So sweet yr…loved it..and ur lines are really beautiful!!

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 2:48 pm

        Thank u.Keep reading dear.

    10. anu on September 21, 2017 2:42 pm

      So so beautiful …… happy navarati

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank u and u to.Keep commenting dear.

    11. Shayra on September 21, 2017 4:54 pm

      Awesome,Fabulous,Superrrrrrr.U just nailed it.
      ?????
      Loved to read cute bond of Kabir with Aysel.
      But it was too short.So,can i expect a long episode next time.?????
      And ya Sanyu,all the best for urPE exam.??
      Keep writing dear.

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank u Shayra.It really means a lot to me.
        I’ll try to give longer episode next time.
        Keep reading dear.Love u loads.?????

    12. Shraddha on September 21, 2017 5:20 pm

      Osm??story

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thank u Shraddha .U r my best friend .
        Love u loads.Keep reading dear.

    13. Trisha139 on September 21, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awww that was so sweet nd cute nd u know at first I thought aysel to be kabeers brother but secondly the misunderstandings cleared ! This was amazing ! Keep going

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank u soo much Trishu dear.Keep reading and commenting dear.???

    14. Dhruti on September 21, 2017 7:07 pm

      superb dear specially bro sis bond i just love this ff love you………………………….

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thank u.Keep reading and commenting dear.

    15. Anuradha123 on September 21, 2017 7:45 pm

      Wow it’s so nicely written that I m in love with your ff…. Marvellous, wonderful, excellent, wonderful, fantastic, fantabulous etc n etc. No more words left in my vocabulary now… Lots of hugs for u…

      • Negisanyukta on September 21, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank u soo much.After reading ur comment a big smile came on my face.???
        Keep reading and commenting dear.
        A teddy hug from my side to.???

    16. Anuradha123 on September 21, 2017 8:06 pm

      Yes dear definitely… Aapka hukum sarakho par

    17. riyarocks on September 21, 2017 8:23 pm

      Sanyu dear, it was simply amazing………I’m enjoying each & every part of this……….luv u dear & a happy Navratri to u too……..

      • Negisanyukta on September 22, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thank u dear. I m glad that u liked it. Keep reading and commenting dear.

    18. Divya on September 21, 2017 8:32 pm

      Happy Navratri my dear friend and episode was awesome super mind blowing fantastic update soon can’t wait yaar please please

      • Negisanyukta on September 22, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thank u so much Divya. I’ll try to post next part as soon as possible. My exams r going on. So, this week not possible.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    19. SohanR on September 22, 2017 1:43 pm

      I don’t have words to describe it. It is simply fabulous. Firstly, i decided not to comment here bcoz of u i have to wait for a long time to read this. it
      Keep writing dear. Love u loads.

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:39 pm

        Thank u soo much bhaiya. But u have to wait for third part too. Im sorry for this.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    20. Negi on September 22, 2017 3:34 pm

      Fabulous. U just nailed it dear.
      Loved Kaysel bonding. Keep writing dear.
      Eagerly waiting for next part.

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:40 pm

        Aman thank u for commenting.
        Keep reading nd commenting dear. All the best for ur exam.

    21. vimlesh on September 22, 2017 3:48 pm

      Nyc this episode is very better and keep writing owsm

    22. vimlesh on September 22, 2017 3:49 pm

      Nyc this episode is very better and keep writing owsm

    23. vimlesh on September 22, 2017 3:50 pm

      Nyc your story is best and keep writing

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:43 pm

        Thank u Vimlesh for commenting. It really means a lot to me.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    24. Jessicca on September 22, 2017 4:01 pm

      Wow…. Awesome dear… Tomato part was the best… Sis-bro comvo was amazing… Loved it .. Eagerly waiting to read further…

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:50 pm

        Thank u dii for commenting.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    25. Jessicca on September 22, 2017 4:02 pm

      Wow…. Awesome dear… Tomato part was the best… Sis-bro convo was amazing… Loved it .. Eagerly waiting to read further…

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:51 pm

        Thank u

    26. priyankajakhmola on September 22, 2017 8:21 pm

      Hiiii. Negisanukta Fabulous. Fantastic… n I have no words for your writing style Good Job n keep it up. ………..

    27. priyankajakhmola on September 22, 2017 8:27 pm

      Hiiii. …negisanukta Fantastic, Fabulous n I have no words how l can describe it…..Good Job n keep it up. ………

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:48 pm

        Thank u pJ for commenting. U can call me only Sanyu.
        Keep reading and commenting dear.

    28. Logesh.M on September 24, 2017 8:08 pm

      Sanyukta loved this episode to the core..very sorry for the late comment….Kabir is the one in profile pic of this episode???The boy in the profile of this episode is soooooo cute….???????Simply superb…Loved kabirs speech…loved the way you described aysel…??????keep rocking….

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:46 pm

        Thank u soo much bhaiya. It really means a lot to get such appreciation from a fabulous author like u.
        And yes, Kabir is the one in profile pic and in first part profile pic was of Veer.
        Keep reading and commenting.

    29. Karan on September 24, 2017 9:17 pm

      Wow, great u r writing wonderful.

      • Negisanyukta on September 26, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thank u veer ji. Keep reading and commenting.

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