Mistake turned beautiful an os on shivika .. by geetika

Hii everyone im writing a ff for the first time so plss ignore if I make any stupid mistake but do tell my mistake to me so I know where im wrong .. and I have read many of the ffs and im telling that all the writers here are amazing, fantastic, fabulous and what not I just enjoy reading it and getting inspired by you all I tried to write an os ( basically on bagad billa’s pov) .. Last but not the least because I love talking so do comment and tell me how was it
so the story starts from Anika’s confession to Shivaay

Anika :- shi..vaay. I …LOVE… YOU.. ( kisses shivaay on his cheeks.)
Shivaay ( mix emotions ) ( pov) :- OMG!! Anika loves me , oh wow this is not a dream she really loves me . I’m the worlds happiest person and she KISSED me !! that fleeing of her soft lips on my cheeks soo heavenly , that shiver which ran down my spine when she confessed and kissed me, I just want the time to stop here right now cause I’ve never felt like this.. I want to tell her that im so madly in love with her but I don’t know what happens to me when im in front of her bolti hi band hojati hai .

Shivaay was taken out of his own happy world by anika
Anika ( annoyed ):- Shivaay aapko kuch bolna nhi hai kya??
Shivaay :- uhhh Thank You..
Anika( shocked) :- huh! Kya thank you thank you bolna hai sirf apko aur kuch nhi (pov of anika :- kya inssan hai bhai yeh meri jaan kha gaye isliye ki mei I luv u bolu aura b jab bola itni mehnat karke toh kya mila mhujhe thank you inhe toh sabak shikhana padega….)
Shivaay ( pov) :- yeh kya bola mene confess karna tha aur thank you boldiya ab kya karu mei sorry boldeta hu .

As shivaay turns a jug full of water is thrown at him he is drenched ( looking hot) and gets tensed seeing anika storming out of the room.
Shivaay‘s pov :- oh shit hogayi gaad baad I wanted to make her feel happy and now I have ruined everything im worlds biggest idiot what should I do now to make it up to her aree haan ill do this…)
Around 5 pm Anika gets a message and she goes inside her room. There she finds a beautifully wrapped gift and her name written on it . She opens it and finds a beautiful red and black bordered sari and a note too and in the note it was written that get ready and met me outside the house by 6 pm.

Anika gets ready she was looking jaw dropping hot and goes out to meet shivaay and her keens get weak when she sees shivaay who was looking too handsome and s*xy in his black attire . He came near anika as she was gaping at him and winked at her and then suddenly she came to earth when shivaay blind folded her
Anika:- Shivaay… yeh aap kya kar rahe hai ?
Shivvay:- sshh anika it’s a surprise.

Then they drove to their destination….
Anika:- Shivaay ek toh aapne meri aankhe band kar kar rahi hai n dusra aap mhujhe bata bhi nahi rahe ho kaha jaa rahe hai itni der se baithe hai gadi mei
Shivaay:- lo anika ab hum pohach gaye hai , ( stops the car and goes to the passenger seat to help anika come out of the car) aram se bahar aao anika .
Opens her blind fold

Anika ( totally dumbstruck ):- sh.. shi.. shi.vaay yeh kaha leke agay aap mujhe asi koi jagh toh Mumbai mei hai hi nahi.. ( it was a place away from mumbai full of trees a lake and beautiful scenery as the sun was setting and it made the lake appear orange and their table was just set at the perfect place and the walking path was covered with rose petals. With the table arranged properly.) and she was stopped when shivaay turned her towards him
Shivaay:- Anika im sorry for what happened in the morning and just saying thank you to you . you know how a big idiot im (shivaay stops when anika keeps her index finger on his lips. Then he holds her hand bends on his keens) Anika you are the best thing that has ever happened to me in my life. I have been rude to you done many mistakes but you have always forgiven me thank for everything and the wish I wish everyday is that you always be there by my side .

( anika stars crying ) anika don’t cry let me complete ya I wanted to say that I have fallen so hard in love with you that I can never imagine my life without you( It was a perfect scene with a sunset background behind and stars in the sky just imagine ) would you plss be with me all my life ..(shivaay stays in the same position for some time) anika answer fast my keens are hurting..
Anika comes out of her trance and kneels down and answers him by nodding her head. Then shivaay caresses her face and brings down his head heading towards her lips but anika gets nervous and moves her neck so shivaay unfortunately kisses her cheeks but then (bagad bile ka mood baan gaya tah ase thodi chodega) shivaay trails down kisses on her neck then on her face and finally he kisses her lips anika gets stunnded but reciprocates to it they first go slow full of love but the kiss slowly becomes more intense , passionate and wild not ready to break but they do so as they were out of breath. Their foreheads were touching lips inches apart trying to bring back their normal breath . After that they both enjoyed their perfect date and had many more love dovey moments..

THE END

Do tell me how was it ? was it too long or was it fine plss do comment.