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Home»Fan Fiction»Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 9
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Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 9

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 18, 2017Updated:September 18, 201724 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam Ashnita. I hope u guys remembered me. Sorry guys for not replying because I am a busy girl .Again writing rushly in my break time. Iam again sorry because my mind and idea went to rest

So guys Robin will be Shantanu Maheshwari. Laksh is namish taneja and veer is Varun kapoor and kabirs dad is Mr Malhotra

Thank you for ur lovely comments it always make me smile when iam sad or in stress regarding my practical. Pliz keep loving me.

I WANT BETTER NAME FOR LAKSH ROBIN AND VEER

AND KABIR VEER LAKSH AND ROBIN

*************************************

Episode starts

Sanchi not getting sleep. She is lost in Kabirs thought and regarding his answer.
Bg plays
Dil kya kare jab kissi pyar ho jaye (from kaabil )

Kabir is thinking about sanchi condition and sadhu bhai return.

In the morning

Trio came in Kabirs room and saw Kabir sleeping peacefully after so many days.

Laksh -bhai is looking like a prince

Veer -I won’t force Kabir to marry sanchi. I love both. I can live without pragya but can’t live without Kabir bhai I can’t imagine my life without him. If I have to choose between Kabir and pragya. I choose my life.

Robin – it’s up to Kabir bhai.

Kabir woke up and saw them staring at him. He smiles at them just then his smiles vanished

Kabir pov – iam feeling some bad things will happen but wat.

In mishra mantion

Sanchi is getting ready wearing a blue dress. Bg plays
Sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye.

Sanchi -I’m waiting for ur answer kabir I’m cuming Mr Ganster

She left

Back to malhotra mantion

Kabir and trio is having breakfast. Guards cums running

Guard – Kabir bhai sanchi bhabhi came

Kabir -wat

Guard – yes bhai she said tell ur bhai that bhabhi came.

Kabir -call her

Sanchi came with pragya. Veer looks teary eyed to pragya. Pragya recalled veer telling her that he cannot live his bro. Kabir saw them.

Robin -bhabhi u came early it’s just 6am

Sanchi – woh kya robin I can’t wait .

Laksh sings – in the night no control Kya karun kuch to bol

Kanchi is shocked .

Sanchi -so my Ganster wats ur answer

Kabir was about to answer just then they here gunshot. Guards cums running and shouting Kabirbhai Shadu bhai came. Kabir takes out his gun.

Kabir – go to secret room. Take this sanchi too. Go

All – we r not going anywhere. We r with u

Kabir -go

All – jiyenga sath marege sath

Just then they here a voice

Voice – kaha bago ge Kabir tumara atit tumare samne.

Kabir is very furious he takes out his gun and point to him .sadhu bhai and his goons comes with Bg.

Shadhu – kabirrrr itne dinno baad

Kabir- yes shadhu.

Shadhu – helo iam Shadhu bhai nice to meet u guys. I came to destroy ur life again Kabir.

Laksh – oh just shut up

Sadhu – woah itna gusha I like it.

Robin -wat u want Shadu.

Shadhu -ur Kabir bhai live

Veer -oh just shutup

Sadhu -impressive Kabir wat u taught to them. They are fearless like u .

Kabir is angrily looking at him

Sadhu – wow wat a bros love good but I think they dnt know about u Kabir who r u and wat have u done. Should I tell them.

Kabir -shut up Sadhu or else I kill u (pointing gun at me )

Sadhu -oh Kabir iam scared. If you want to see ur body guards alive put the gun down.

Guards -no Kabir bhai we can sacrifice our life for u and ur family

Kabir puts down his gun.

Sadhu – wow wat a great love ur guards love you too.

Kabir -shut up

Sadhu -should I tell them truth.

Trio -which truth

Sadhu – wait u will know, u have to pay for this Kabir. It’s gonna interesting.

Kabir – shadhu stop it.

Trio – tell us the truth we want to know

Shadu – OK so listen

Kabir -I’m sorry u guys

Sadhu -u want to know

Trio -yes

Shadu went near Laksh and Robin

Sadhu to them – u two r Mr Malhotra illegitimate sons and step bro of veer.

He then went near veer

Shadu – veer u r Mr Malhotra first son.

And he went near Kabir ,Kabir is shattered tears fall from his eyes as well as others including sanchi

Shadhu – u want to know who is this guy Kabir Malhotra. This guy is ur enemy.

Trio -dnt make riddle tell us clearly

Shadu – he is not ur bro Mr -Malhotra adopted him. And he is ur gunegar

Trio -how

Sadhu -because he killed his dad and urs dad as well. Mr Malhotra adopted him and he killed ur dad. Its unfair na.jis tali me Kaya usi ko ched kardiya Kabir so sad.

Kabir is shattered he can’t face the truth and his brothers.

Shadhu – my aim was to destroy Kabir life again and I did it. U guys hate Kabir

Just kabir heard a noise chat ,chat and
chat he looked at and gets shocked .Trio slapped shadhu bhai one by one.

Veer – we know that truth

Laksh – we know that we r not Kabirs bros and we don’t regret it. How much he does nobody can do it even our real bro.

Robin – we know that Kabir bhai killed our father but we dnt want to know y

Veer -we know everything and our love will never change for him.

Kabirs gun fell he feels shateered he kneels down. His tears flows like a sea trio words echo in his mind.

Trio – ur plan flpped sadhu bhai get the hell out of here or else we will do something that nobody wil no where u went.

Sadhu – im going but remember I’ll be back soon.

And he left with his goons. Trio looked back and saw Kabir missing. They searched him everwhre but didn’t get him.

Precap :Kabir telling them y he killed his dad and flashback.

I hope u guys like it.
Just keep smiling guys
Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads

Regards
Ashnita

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    24 Comments

    1. Khamoshi on September 18, 2017 3:51 pm

      Fantastic Ashnita.. no words
      Such a good Story and still the suspense continues.. good job dear

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:47 am

        Awwww thank you sweetie

    2. Jessicca on September 18, 2017 5:34 pm

      Excellent…. Amazing..Super duper hot episode… Too much suspense… Eagerly waiting to read next upstate.. Plz update soon sweetie…

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:49 am

        OMG thank you sweetie yes too much suspense

    3. Malu on September 18, 2017 5:54 pm

      You are a good writer keep it up and post soon

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:50 am

        Thank you so much malu it means a lot

    4. Anuradha123 on September 18, 2017 6:16 pm

      Wonderful, Amazing… Kya baat. Kya baat. Kya baat…. ? ? n lots of kisses….

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:52 am

        OMG thank you sweetie and lots of kisses u too ?

    5. riyarocks on September 18, 2017 6:32 pm

      omg……..such a khidkitod episode dear……….u r simply amazing………..kya kahoon, tumhare tareef mein koi alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe hain……….tum ho hi itni kamaal ki………..I just luv u yaar………….

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:54 am

        OMG sweetie iam speechless itni tarif I will get a heart attack. Thank you so much and luv u loads ??

    6. parul on September 18, 2017 6:42 pm

      nice episode plz next episode updated soon

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:55 am

        Thank you so parul

    7. RuCh23 on September 18, 2017 6:43 pm

      Amazing update as always Ashu ??? I hope Kabir has a good reason to kill Malhothra ???

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:58 am

        Awwww thank you so much sweetie ????u made my day and u will get to know

    8. niyaaa on September 18, 2017 7:55 pm

      Amaz ashnita no word to praise u sweetie post nxt asap….

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 2:59 am

        OMG sweetie thank you so much it means a lot

    9. RANdomfANCreationz on September 18, 2017 8:33 pm

      Wow suspense but I love suspense so I don’t mind ??

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 3:00 am

        Thank you so much dear

    10. Abhilasha on September 18, 2017 8:48 pm

      Osssm sweety u never dissapoint us and I m deeply in love with it and really eager to know next!!

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 3:17 am

        OMG sweetie wat to say I’m speechless thank you so much

    11. Dhruti on September 18, 2017 10:23 pm

      fantastic dear super se bhi uper wala ff update next one soon………….

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 3:17 am

        Thank you sweetie

    12. Premamohan on September 18, 2017 10:59 pm

      Oh this is great…

      • NeonNinga on September 19, 2017 3:18 am

        Thank you sweetie

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