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praveer a love story os

praneetha265By praneetha265September 17, 201713 Comments6 Mins Read
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PRAVEER A LOVE STORY
Hello guys this is my os on praveer hope you all like it
This story starts from exchange of partners which ram suggests
All girls take up different chits sanchi gets kabir, veer gets pragya and isha get aasish all start dancing with their partner
Veer(while dancing with pragya):abbe yaar,what is this I wanted to spend time with saanchi
Pragya: arey naalayak don’t worry any other time
Veer: hmm .are you preparing for elections well
Prag: yup well sanchi and isha are helping me
Veer: this dance is soo boring na lets do something unique
Prag: what

Veer says all to stop and suggest rope pulling competition as same in serial
Saanchi doesn’t go anyone side but isha says promise on jaya aunty you should come to our team saanchi joins kabir team kabir gets happy while veer is sad then suddenly pragya who was standing behind veer faints
veer: prag get up (he shakes her cheek vigorously)
he carry her in his arms and was crying .he don’t know why his heart pained to see her in this condition
later kabir checked and said that she have full fever and it should be reduced
all night veer was there with prag holding her hand .he don’t know why he felt to keep her in his arms forever
later in morning pragya get up and see veer who was still holding her hand and sleeping like kid
pragya in mind was thinking how innocently this nalaayak is sleeping and she finds him very cute
while lost in him she feels movements in veer and he got up
veer: you woke up .do you want something .how could I sleep .im sorry say want you are you feeling any pain .shall I cal..
pragya kept her hand on his mouth to stop his blabbering
pragya:how much you speak .i am fine.i don’t want anything I just woke up now
veer: ok and don’t you dare to work today you are going to take rest all day and about elections I will take care .
prag: really can you manage
veer: yaa ,don’t worry I will take care of all things
prag(smilingly): thank you mr.nalaayak. veer glares her
prag :but I too want to help you
veer: no means no
prag: how can u manage alone you have your elections too
veer: I m dropping elections
prag: but ,why no need bcz of me you will drop .what all will say that you fear for losing elections that is why u dropped in elections
veer:I don’t care what world will say about me I just care for you said looking straight in to her eyes
they shared a beautiful eyelock
their eyes were showing alots of love for eachother
after sometime they parted away veer and prag went to fresh up

Veer pov
How could I tell you pragya that I love you very much but u love satish I wanted to get close to you that’s why I made friendship with saanchi .i know you love u r friends the most and I wanted to win your heart that’s why I did all this I lnow u luv satish that why I acted like I love saachi .whatever it is I just want your happiness
Pragya pov
Why Veer what are u doing to me why this care for me.I LOVE YOU A LOT but u luv saachi its ok day by day it is becoming difficult for me .i accepted for satish just bcz for u .i just want your happiness either its with me or saachi
Later they came to hospital that time savitri devi came with lunch for veer
VEER: mom,u here what a surprise
Savitri: u have asked me to pack lunch for ur friends also na
Veer: waise ma meet my friends and when he turned he saw that every one r very busy in elections so he thought to take her into pragyas room and he came to pragyas ward
Pragya(who saw only veer not savitri):abbey nalayak did prepare posters for election asked in lady dabang tone
Savitri who listened to pragya said I don’t know my son I called as useless also smilingly
Pragya: sorry aunty I didnt mean it
Savitri:its okay beta
Pragya was about to get up to touch savitri devi feet but savitri stopped her and said you r like priya to me daughter should be near mothers heart and hugged her .pragya felt a motherly comfort in her embrace and hugged her tight even she doesn’t show it but she too miss her mom very much
After sometime savitri broke hug and feeded by her hands to veer and pragya
While passing of days praveer started to know more about eo and want confess their feelings but stopped due to misunderstanding
One fine day satish called pragya to pub alone but veer felt something odd and joined her even though pragya went with saachi, isha and kabir
Satish with friends in a totally changed look were discussing something we will hear it
Satish: I want pragya at any cost I will make her mine today .
Vicky(satish friend):will she accept yaar?
Satish : of course she is modern girlnin this days these are common
When satish asked about having one night stand for pragya.she slapped him hard shocking all
Satish: what happened what I asked wrong I am ur soon to be husband.
Pragya: chii I thought u r a good person and slapped him again for cheating all
Satish got angry nd he was about to slap pragya .veer came in middle and stopped
Veer: don’t u dare to touch her .you will se e worst of me
Satish: don’t come btw us .and what relation u both have always you come btw us.is she ur gf or mistress that was enough for veer he shouted yes bcz I love pragya .
All froze on spot kabir bet satish blue and black .he ran away from their .all went giving them privacy
Pragya: is it true what u said asked numbly trying to register if it was dream or reality
Veer: I am so sorry but it is true but pls don’t break our friendship…..he was blabbering something suddenly he felt movement of her soft lips on his rough ones he got his answer he pulled her close by waist and start responding to her .Later they broke kiss and joined their heads mumbled I love you
After 1 year they got married and blessed with a baby boy and their love was eternal which never changed

THE END

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    13 Comments

    1. niyaaa on September 17, 2017 9:52 am

      I love it a lot praneetha actually m chahungi seriel m bhi yahi ho dono ki bonding kamaal ki h nd acting level bhi equal h… Or jab pragya veer ko nalayak bulati h it look so cute and adorable … Awsome dear

    2. Abhilasha on September 17, 2017 10:25 am

      So amazing yr….. Praveer moments were so cute yr…. I loved it… Keep writing like this and u rocked it… Story was so fab and so Ur way of expressing!!

    3. Amyra on September 17, 2017 10:41 am

      This was so cute. I love this. Yah praveer can be a nice couple.

    4. Divya on September 17, 2017 12:32 pm

      Awesome cute couple wow amazing dear

    5. riyarocks on September 17, 2017 4:03 pm

      Neeta dear(I hope u don’t mind if I call u this)………….it was amaaaaaaaaazing……….I just loved this to the core of my heart………..I want u to write more & I’ll just luv to read more from u……………..luv u dear………..

    6. RuCh23 on September 17, 2017 4:35 pm

      It was awesome dear ??? totally loved it ??? hope to see Praveer together on serial, but don’t know ???

    7. Amnaa on September 17, 2017 4:57 pm

      It was so sweet

    8. Moonlight25 on September 17, 2017 6:29 pm

      Omg I loved this…i wished this happened the same in the serial….a superb one….you did a great job…i loved it a lot…keep writing more and more…love you loads…?

    9. Jessicca on September 17, 2017 10:54 pm

      Amazing dear… Fantastic… Loved it… Thank you for writing this.

    10. praneetha265 on September 17, 2017 10:58 pm

      GUYS THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT I HAVE UPLOADED OTHER PART OF THIS OS FOR FAST READINIG YOU CAN GO WATTPAD I HAVE UPLOADED IT IN WATTPAD ALSO MY WATTPAD USER NAME IS praneetha265

    11. praneetha265 on September 17, 2017 10:59 pm

      GUYS THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT I HAVE UPLOADED OTHER PART OF THIS OS FOR FAST READINIG YOU CAN GO WATTPAD I HAVE UPLOADED IT IN WATTPAD ALSO MY WATTPAD USER NAME IS praneetha265 . you can see both parts of os there

    12. Honey on September 23, 2017 4:51 pm

      My…..dear sister …this is awesome….I didn’t even think u will do this good in your first attempt…..All the very best for future writings..
      With love ur elder sister….HONEY

    13. Vyshistya on September 23, 2017 5:11 pm

      Praniii….. I did not think u will do this good on your first attempt yaaarrrr…
      I want a bada wala silk…. Or else I will punch ur nose….
      All the best…. Waiting for more…..
      Ur loving sister

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