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Home»Fan Fiction»Naughty Billo (SwaSan ff) Shot 40 by Marsuu
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Naughty Billo (SwaSan ff) Shot 40 by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 14, 2017Updated:September 14, 2017185 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!!! Thank you so much for your immense support and love towards the story. This story is really close to my heart bcoz of this I got so many friends here.well every journey has its end and this journey was really very very beautiful???????
Let’s begin:

NAUGHTY BILLO(SwaSan ff)
Shot 40(last part)
Recap: swasan blessed with baby girl.

After one week:
Finally swara is discharged from hospital and came back home with baby. Baby is in swara’s hands and Sanskar is supporting her.
Swasan room:
Swara’s mouth got opened in shock seeing the decoration of the room. Whole room is pink in colour.
Swara: wow sanskar its beautiful I m feeling like I came in pinkland.
Sanskar: yes I did this for my both babies.
Sanskar kiss swara’s cheeks.
Swara(smiles): thank you baby and mamma loved it.
Sanskar made swara sit on bed.
Baby is also awaken now and looking around.
Swara is playing with her sometimes poke her cheeks and take out her tongue and baby is giggling all the time.
Sanskar: swara let me take baby.
Swara: no plzz I want to hold her for some more time.
Sanskar: okay.
Swasan got busy in playing with the baby.

At Night:
Baby is lying on the bed and swara is tensed for something and sitting in front of the baby. Sanskar came out from washroom and saw her biting nails.
Sanskar: swara what happened.?
Swara(seriously): Sanskar there is big problem.
Sanskar: what??
Swara: I don’t know how to put babies diaper.
Then sanskar saw there is pampers packet on the bed.
Sanskar: u used to tie in hospital?
Swara: no mom used to do.what to do now?
Sanskar:hmm let me try.
Sanskar sit in front of baby.
After some times, Sanskar give helpless look to swara as he has already tored two diapers.
Swara: sanskar u will waste all let me call mom only.
Sanskar: okay
Swara went and bought sujata.
Sujata put the diaper and also taught swasan how to do.
Later they made baby asleep and then slept themselves also.

After two days:
Morning:
Swara wore pink suit and baby was in pink flock. Swara made sanskar also wear pink shirt. He was not willing earlier as its girlish colour but then swara wants them to be matching matching so he agreed.
They came downstairs. There are few people as its naming ceremony of the baby.
Swara got excited to see gododia family. She went to them and hugged shekar shomi and dadi.
Shomi: how are u shona??
Swara: I m fine mom do you want to see my baby she is so cute.
Then only sanskar came with baby in his arms and greeted gododia family.
Shomi: shona she is your copy same like you.
Swara: really??
Shekar: yes u are also cute like her.
Swara: thanks(blushes)
Dadi: what name u have decided?
Swara: that’s secret only sanskar and me know.
Sujata called them for the puja.
They sit near fire with baby in Sanskar’s lap and swara beside him.
After performing the rituals, pandit Ji asked for the name they want to keep.
Sanskar was about to say when swara
interpreted
Swara: plzz I will tell.
Sanskar(smiles): okay
Swara: Sanyara it’s sweet na??
Pandit Ji nodded.
Swara: u know how we decided this???
Pandit Ji shook his head in no.
Swara: okay I will explain
Sanskar: swara we will explain later.
Swara: no they should also know the meaning see “San” from Sanskar and “ara” from Swara. Nice na I had decided.
Panit Ji: very nice.
Sanskar mumble sorry to pandit Ji for all this bak bak of his wife.

After the ceremony all were sitting in the hall. Baby is in swara lap and swara is playing with her fingers.
Shomi: swara now u have to be good mother.
Swara: yes ma I will.
Dadi: do you know what all we should feed baby.
Swara: that is mom and sanskar’s duty mine is only to play with her.
She said binking her eyes.
Shomi(signed): u will not change.
Swara smiles sheepishly at them.
Then they had their lunch. Baby was with Sanskar and swara always beside him and baby.

Next afternoon:
Sanyara is sleeping in the centre of the bed and swara is beside her sitting by crossing her legs and her hand resting on her cheek. She is staring baby sadly.
Sanskar who was sitting beside swara chuckles seeing her.
Sanskar: Swara
Swara: she is not getting up I want to play with her.
She woke up once in the morning then after drinking milk again slept.
Sanskar (engulf Swara): but she is sleeping.
Swara(pout): she sleeps all the time.
Sanskar(kiss her pout): babies sleep more.
Swara:hmm
Then only sanyara make some moment and swara got excited.
Swara: she is waking Sanskar.
Sanskar: yes.
Sanyara got up and swara picked her.
Swara(kiss her cheek): I was missing you don’t sleep again plzz.
She keep on staring swara. Then only she saw Sanskar beside swara.
Swara(gesture him): she is seeing you Sanskar.
Sanskar took her from swara.
Sanskar: want to come to papa.
Soon sanskar felt wetness on his lap.
Sanskar(picked her up): so u came to do this here.
Swara started laughing and baby was also giggling.
Sanskar: stop laughing both of you.
Swara: why?? We will laugh right baby.
Again both started laughing and stopped after few mins.
Sanskar: over???
Swara: yes
Swara took sanyara and changed her clothes and Sanskar also went to washroom.

After one year:
Sanyara has turn one year old.Last month she spoke papa for the first time and swara started crying that she didn’t call her and the next moment she said mamma. Swasan were out of the world at that time.
Swasan room:
Swara shouted loudly
Swara: Sanskar plzzzz come out.
Sanskar who was in washroom came out in just towel around his waist listening her screams.
Sanskar:what???
Her eyes also widened to see sanyara standing on bed and she took her first step.
Swara:finally she walked I m soooo happy.
Swara hugged her and Sanskar hugged both of them.
Sanskar: me too
Baby also smiles seeing them happy.
Sanyara: maaa
Swara; yes my sweety.
She point to Sanskar and shouted
Sanyara: paaa
She started giggling.
Swara: she is also laughing that u r roaming naked here and there have some shame.
Sanskar (shocked): u only called me?
Swara: then now go.
Sanskar kissed swara’s cheek tightly
Sanskar: yeah going
Sanyara shouted. Sanskar smiles and kissed her cheeks and went to washroom.

Evening:
Sanskar is sleeping after coming from university. Swara and sanyara are sitting beside him and playing with dolls.
Swara: sanuuu we will play marriage marriage okay.
Sanyara was staring her trying to understand.
Swara; okay I will tell you. We will do your marriage with this Teddy okay.
Sanyara nodded her head as if she got it lol.
Swara: but there is problem. I will be from teddy’s side then who will be from your side.
Swara keep her finger on her chin and act like thinking. Sanuu also did same placing her finger on her chin copying swara.Sanyara look at sanskar who is sleeping.
Swara: yes sanskar will be from your side.let’s wake him.
Sanyara smiles.
Sanu lie on his chest and started waking him with his tiny hands.
Sanskar who was half slepy opened his eyes.
Sanskar(held her); yes baby.
Sanyara look at swara as if asking her to explain him.
Swara lie on his shoulder and sanu is on his chest.
Swara: we are playing and one member is less plzz u come.
Sanskar: what are u playing???
Swara: marriage marriage u will come with sanuu to fix her marriage with my Teddy.
Sanskar: I m not kid like you both to play this game.
Swara and sanyara look at each other.
Swara kiss sanskar’s cheek and pleaded
Swara: plzz sanskar request
Sanyara lean and kiss his chin like swara and shouted
Sanyara: paaa lllsss(plzz)
Sanskar smiles and said
Sanskar: okay
Swara(kiss his lips): I love you.
Sanuu didn’t understand what to say as she always copy swara but now she didn’t understood.
Sanskar sits taking sanuu in his lap and kiss her cheek.
Swara(pout): mine
Sanskar smiles and peck her lips.
Swara: okay u come to our house and act like knocking door.
Sanskar did as if he is pressing door bell. They are sitting on bed only.
Swara: plzz come inside and I will bring my Teddy.
Swara picked Teddy and sanuu hide her face in sanskar’s chest. He got confused
Sanskar: what is this??
Swara: sanuu is blushing I taught her.
Sanskar(signed): what all u teach her.
Swara: it’s fun
They trio starting playing marriage marriage hihihi.

Night:
Sanskar came out after changing but didn’t found swara and sanuu.
Sanskar (mumble); where they went?
Then he saw chit on bed and picked it and read
“Come to terrace there is surprise
—- your lovely babies”
Sanskar smiles and went to terrace.

Terrace:
Swara has set the soft and fluffy blanket on floor and both swara and sanuu is waiting for Sanskar.
Swara: why your papa is taking so much time?
Sanuu shook her head in noo.
Then only sanskar came and saw them as usual giggling.
Sanskar: so what my lovely babies are doing here??
Swara: Sanskar u came see today I had planned star gazing hows it??
Sanskar sit beside them and said
Sanskar: very beautiful.
Sanuu jumped in Sanskar’s lap.
They keep on talking and laughing.
Swara: let’s see stars now otherwise they will go.
Sanskar sit leaning to wall and swara sit between his legs her back touching his chest.
Sanuu jumped and lie on swara. Sanskar hands are wrapped around both of them.
Swara: okay let’s see who will count more stars.
Sanskar: okay
Sanuu: maaa paaaa
She shouted as she didn’t understand.
Swara: sanuu u also count.
Sanskar: she can’t swara.
Swara: why??
Sanskar: she don’t know counting.
Swara: ohh yes sanuu will become judge okay.
Swara started counting stars 1,2,3,4………100……350.
Later she asked
Swara: how many u counted Sanskar?
Sanskar: first u tell
Swara:350
Sanskar: I counted 360
Swara: what?? U r ahead wait let me count more.
She again started counting and Sanskar was just staring her as she is looking soo beautiful and cute in moonlight.
Swara felt his continuous gaze so asked
Swara(pout): u r not counting.
Sanskar: u can’t count them then why to waste time.
Swara: it means I m winner Sanuu
Swara looked at sanyara she is sleeping holding Sanskar’s hand which is on her stomach.
Swara: Sanskar sanuu slept
Sanskar: then we should also sleep.
Swara: then I m the winner.
Sanskar: okay
Sanskar kiss her lips.
Swara got up and made sanuu lie on blanket. She turn and hugged swara.
Sanskar also lie comfortably and back her swara. Trio are sleeping huggjng each other. Sanskar cover them with the comforter and slept.
SMALL AND PERFECT FAMILY.

Finally done with the last shot. How’s it?
Humble request to all the readers if u had ever read this story then plzz leave your comment one word is also enough. I want to know how many readers this story had.
So plzz don’t be silent today its last shot and a request.
And how many of you are interested in epilogue?? let me know.
Don’t forget to comment?????
Thank you
Bye
Lots of love
Take care

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    185 Comments

    1. phoniex on September 14, 2017 9:39 am

      amazing

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 10:10 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??

    2. parul on September 14, 2017 9:42 am

      awesome dr

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 10:11 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??

    3. Anshu on September 14, 2017 9:55 am

      So cute ??

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 10:12 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??

    4. Anjali on September 14, 2017 10:25 am

      awesome loved it, its my most favourite story nd now i m gonna miss it badly…………………… pls give
      an epilogue.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:09 am

        Thank you so much dear and will give epilogue soon???

    5. Noor khera on September 14, 2017 10:27 am

      This part is the bestest among all other parts….beautifully depicted….Mars..u hv superb writing skills…Especially marriage marriage part…sanyaya blushing seeing teddy…shona made her daughter just like her…naughty nd cuttie…. Thanku for giving this wonderful stories…waiting for part 2

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:11 am

        Awww that’s so sweet of you dear?? will come with season 2 soon Thank you so much dear tc????

    6. Mannu on September 14, 2017 10:31 am

      Awesome but pls post better half soon

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:13 am

        Thank you so much dear will give my better half also soon tc???

    7. Tamil on September 14, 2017 10:35 am

      Wow……it’s amazing dear…..one of my favorite story……this story is really very special to me bec I got friend like u from this story only…..it’s very very Beautiful lovely story…..swara’s childish act…..sanskar is handling his naughty swara with his love…….Swasan baby sanyara so cute and naughty like swara…..swara sanyara play marriage marriage and swara taught how to blush to his small daughter it’s so cute and fun……u conveyed everything beautifully…….loved it a lot dear…….and yes want epilogue…..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:15 am

        Awww that’s so sweet of you I m also blessed to get a friend like you???
        Thank you so much dear and will give epilogue soon???????

    8. Priya on September 14, 2017 10:36 am

      It’s awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:16 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    9. Praneetha on September 14, 2017 10:47 am

      Excellent ????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:17 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    10. japnaaz_gill on September 14, 2017 10:54 am

      Its amazing dear…loved the bonding of trio swara sanskar nd sanyara….waiting for the next season of naughty billo

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:18 am

        Thank you so much dear will come soon with season 2 tc????

    11. Anu Rathore on September 14, 2017 10:56 am

      Its awesome nd cute part…. Loved the swasan nd baby moments…. Nd i want epilogue

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:20 am

        Thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon tc???

    12. Aayesha on September 14, 2017 10:58 am

      Hi. Want epilogue.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:21 am

        Alright will give epilogue soon thank you so much dear tc???

    13. Divz on September 14, 2017 11:00 am

      Last chapter……ahhaaa…. why so soon….. Will miss naughty billo…..
      caring Sanskar…..please come with season 2

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:23 am

        Thank you so much dear and will come with season 2 soon tc???

    14. Vidhi on September 14, 2017 11:05 am

      Such a sweet n cute family…. Loved this.. ❤❤❤

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:24 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    15. sakshi on September 14, 2017 11:09 am

      Wonderful story

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:25 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    16. sakshi on September 14, 2017 11:10 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 11:27 am

        Thanks dear????

    17. BHUVANA on September 14, 2017 11:29 am

      niceeee

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:19 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    18. KAIRA on September 14, 2017 11:29 am

      WONDERFUL

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    19. Abhi on September 14, 2017 11:29 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:21 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    20. KAIRA on September 14, 2017 11:30 am

      WONDERFUL
      LOVE IT

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:22 pm

        Thanks dear???

    21. L Khan on September 14, 2017 11:38 am

      Loved it….crazy swara ?

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:23 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    22. Sus on September 14, 2017 11:40 am

      its really lovly

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:24 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    23. Teja on September 14, 2017 11:57 am

      U really awesome dear

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    24. Sara on September 14, 2017 12:10 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:26 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    25. tarasm on September 14, 2017 12:15 pm

      wow

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    26. sanjila on September 14, 2017 12:41 pm

      Awesome …..loved it

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:29 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    27. Halima on September 14, 2017 12:44 pm

      Marsu superb I will miss this story waiting for season ,2 but not now pls first complete ur other story

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:30 pm

        Thank you so much dear and will complete my other stories also soon tc???

    28. Rachna on September 14, 2017 1:26 pm

      Awesome Dr…. PLZ COME WITH SEASON 2

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:32 pm

        Thank you so much dear and yeah will come back with season 2 soon tc???

    29. Ahanna on September 14, 2017 1:30 pm

      One of the best story?
      Heyy i need a help. I am searching a swasan story in which swara behave like a kid and live with ragini and laksh. Ragini take of swara like a mother. Sanskar marries her for sake of laksh. This is story of how sanskar gradually falls in love with kiddo swara and take care of her.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 3:43 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I would refer “life partner” by pikachuu Its a wonderful story on swasan and it contain all the things u need. And swara is mentally unstable in it. May b u had already read if not then give a try it’s worth reading
        Thanks tc???

    30. Shriti12 on September 14, 2017 1:32 pm

      So cute

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 3:53 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    31. Bhargavi on September 14, 2017 1:34 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 3:55 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    32. hafsi on September 14, 2017 1:49 pm

      Cute family??

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:00 pm

        Yupppp???? thank you so much dear tc???

    33. NDSG on September 14, 2017 2:06 pm

      Khatam ho gaya kya???????????????????????????

      It’s too cute????????. It’s soo beautiful and cute. Shadi wala khel?????????????? I used to play this game. But I use to become groom mother????????? u reminded me my childhood.

      And from where u chose this name sanyara it’s totally suits SwaSan child combination of two.????????

      Finally it’s ended, loved it come soon with new season ????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 3:47 pm

        Yuppppp khatam ho gaya☺☺☺
        Deppuuuu dear same pinch I also used to play this shadi vali game?????
        Actually I was trying to join swasan name to give to their baby aur yeh ban gaya???????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 3:52 pm

        Thank you so much depuuu dear will come with season 2 soon bas tum cover pic bnane ke liye ready ho jayo season 2 ke kiye?????
        Take care?????????

      • NDSG on September 14, 2017 5:32 pm

        ????????? Apun ready h????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:50 pm

        ????????okay aajkal apun aur tumko rowdy sanskar ka fever chada huya hai?????????

    34. Chaitu on September 14, 2017 2:09 pm

      As usual awesome I loved junior swara blushing and last part was wind blowing perfect cutu sa chotu sa simple family and as a fan of urs mein epilogue magungi air tum denahi hoga ……luv u dear

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:03 pm

        Awww tumne manga aur mane nahi diya it’s not possible????? Will give epilogue soon???Thank you so much dear tc????????

    35. Bush1122 on September 14, 2017 2:12 pm

      Wow wow wow….
      Wordless to explain what i felt…
      Awesome n fabulous….
      Luvd this epiiiiiii to the core…
      Yeah need an epilogue

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:04 pm

        Awwww thank you so much dear??? glad u liked it tc???????

    36. mica on September 14, 2017 2:16 pm

      Marshuuu.. huh! what i can say is.. “the result of read your naughty Billo, my head have no shape now, 🙁 , too much banged on wall and coconut to see that silly, crazy, naughty Swara and her “kinda stupid” husband ” 😀 😀 😀 😀 ,,gimme epilogue naa..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:08 pm

        ????????????????? I m laughing thinking what u have written. Save your head still epilogue is left??????????
        Thank you so much for bearing this crazy and naughty family????
        Will give epilogue soon tc??????

    37. kanthi on September 14, 2017 2:21 pm

      awesome!!

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:09 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    38. riya on September 14, 2017 2:22 pm

      Fabulous

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    39. Kashu on September 14, 2017 2:24 pm

      Hey Mars.. U know what this was one of my fav ff so far… I really liked it a lot.. I will really miss this ff.. And I definitely want an epilogue.. And coming to this chapter.. Its was beautifully written.. Cant describe it in words..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:13 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear????glad u liked it I will give epilogue soon tc???????????

    40. Kaviya on September 14, 2017 2:30 pm

      Awesome story

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:14 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    41. Priya on September 14, 2017 2:56 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it too me also this story is close to my heart it’s so lovely I too want epilogue

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:16 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear???? glad u liked it will post epilogue soon tc???????

    42. Priya on September 14, 2017 3:01 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it me too it’s one of the story close to my heart it’s lovely i too want epilogue

    43. Anamika on September 14, 2017 3:01 pm

      It’s really amazing story.plz continue season 2.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear??? will come with season 2 soon tc?????

    44. Anamika on September 14, 2017 3:03 pm

      Also post he is dangerous i really love it

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:19 pm

        He is dangerous will give in one or two days sorry for the delay?? thanks???

    45. Saima on September 14, 2017 3:13 pm

      This was an amazing story throughout . I loved it and sorry but I m really lazy in commenting but I read every single part of the story . I did comment on some parts but was not a regular commenter . I will love to read the epilogue

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:21 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear??? no need of sorry its okay??? will give epilogue soon tc???????

    46. Ashwini on September 14, 2017 3:56 pm

      I’m crying my #SwaSan beautiful story ended ????? this is the most beautiful story of ur Mars ❤️❤️❤️??? I miss this story so much ?.. Plz post epilogue.. I wanna know what Swara do when sanyara growing & Sanskar handel both & SwaSan love ? ? ?

      • Kumu on September 14, 2017 4:40 pm

        Same..I also want to see it..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:43 pm

        Awwwww don’t cry plzz????? I will come with season 2??
        Thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon tc????????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:59 pm

        Heyyy kumu dear and ashwini dear I want to know means how old u want sanyara in epilogue plzzz tell me then it will helpful for me to fulfil your wish plzz tell????????

    47. nabamita on September 14, 2017 4:17 pm

      Awesome dear….

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    48. anu on September 14, 2017 4:23 pm

      awesome loved it this was an amazing story loved all characters here loved naughty swara and mature sanskaar here…. miss this ff come with season2 soon…

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:48 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear???? will come with season 2 soon tc???????

    49. rini on September 14, 2017 4:32 pm

      amazing ending…… its one of my favorite ff…..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:04 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear??? glad u liked it???? tc????

    50. Kumu on September 14, 2017 4:38 pm

      Awesome..loved it ❤❤
      Want to say many things but will tell u in the epilogue??
      Love you ??
      Tc??

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:06 pm

        Awwwww thank you so much kumu dear for your constant support??????? will give epilogue soon
        Love u toooo???????
        Take care?????

    51. Sammirza on September 14, 2017 4:38 pm

      Amzaing end …. lovely…

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:07 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    52. lipika on September 14, 2017 4:49 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:08 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    53. AnuAnn on September 14, 2017 4:55 pm

      no long comments… just….u make my day.. nd waiting for season2

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:27 pm

        Awwww thank you so much sister???? will come with season 2 soon tc?????????

    54. Stg on September 14, 2017 5:14 pm

      Super awesome ??

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???????

    55. Samaira_khan on September 14, 2017 5:21 pm

      Awesome im goint to miss this story very badly.. love it and ofcouse wants an epilouge

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:30 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon tc?????????

    56. vins on September 14, 2017 5:29 pm

      It’s one of the bestest story . U r really an awesome writer.i am reading many of ur ffs.all are super.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:31 pm

        Awwww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear keep reading tc?????????

    57. AbrahamEzra on September 14, 2017 5:32 pm

      Aww it was so cute. So this beautiful journey came to an end. I’m sad. Anyways everything has an end right?. And plss do give the epilouge

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:42 pm

        Yeah everything has an end?? don’t be sad will come with season 2. Thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon?????? take care??????

    58. Rp on September 14, 2017 5:37 pm

      Awesome dear will u give epilogue of it

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:43 pm

        Thank you so much dear and yeah will give epilogue soon tc?????

    59. Tweety_SwaSan on September 14, 2017 5:42 pm

      Hey Mars dear.. this is just awesome..SwaSan with their kid.. I loved it a lot..? Swara made Sanu as herself..like mother like daughter.. But Swara is one crazy antique piece.. This last part is very cute and funny.. ?? Enjoyed a lot.. I feel like crying.. ???? I am gonna miss it a lot.. ? Please post epilogue and do come with season 2 very soon.. Love you dear.. Tc..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 5:46 pm

        Yuppppp swara is a cutiepie that’s why I love her to the core??????
        Don’t be sad ??? will come with season 2 soon thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon???
        Love u too?????
        Take care???

    60. Prashasti7 on September 14, 2017 5:54 pm

      awsmmmmmmm marshuuuuu swara n baby sannuuu awww both r baby truly baby soooi cute n lovely end
      come back soon with season 2 love n DRL tc

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:29 pm

        Yuppppoo swara and sanuu both are babies that too sanskar’s babies????? thank you so much dear will come with season 2 very soon???
        Take care????????

    61. Febi on September 14, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome and excellent dear……. I really want you to write an epilogue please……..

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear??? will give epilogue soon tc??????

    62. Nithya on September 14, 2017 6:19 pm

      Super story please write an epilogue

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:36 pm

        Thank you so much dear will give epilogue soon tc??????

    63. Kanha on September 14, 2017 6:58 pm

      Awesome yaar. Swara bilkul bhi nahi badli. Same-to-same Naughty billo. Swara asking Sansku to be pregnant, Marriage marriage game and Sanu blushing were hilarious. A huge Thanks to you Mars. I will miss this story. Sorry for not commenting from long. Actually here Onam programmes and celebrations just finished last week. So Was busy. Best wishes dear siso. Loveee youuu. Wish to read epilogue too.

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:39 pm

        Awwwwww thank you so much sisssooo???? swara can’t change she is naughty and crazy???????
        Don’t be sorry sister I can understand?????
        Will give epilogue very sooonnnn???
        Love youuuu toooo??????
        Take care????

    64. Bella on September 14, 2017 7:16 pm

      Beyond awesome

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???????

    65. shilpi99 on September 14, 2017 7:21 pm

      Awesome story yaar this was a amazing story ??????????????its very special story and lovely story and yes I want an epilugue please ???????????????????????post season 2 soon

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 7:42 pm

        Awwww thank you so much dear??? will give epilogue soon?? and I will be back with season 2 soon tc???????

      • Sanu on September 14, 2017 8:45 pm

        Awesome dear…M regular reader of this STORY n irregular commenter….?n thank u fr accepting our requsts….will miss this story soooo much…. if u can plz ryt one teenage love story…..

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:19 am

        Thank you so much sanuu dear even I was thinking to write one tennage love story will try to give soon???tc???????

    66. yamee on September 14, 2017 8:01 pm

      Awww it was sooooo cute ending dear….. and will going to miss this cute family.plzzzz give a epilogue.

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:21 am

        Aww thank you so much dear??? will give epilogue soon tc????????

    67. seebu_s on September 14, 2017 8:12 pm

      loved it mars❤but will miss this naughty billo and caring hubby???come back soon with season2…and thank u so much for ignoring all negativity…got to know abt some cheap ppl are using ur name?but we trust u?and ur ffs are amazing…for us u will be amazing writer❤?thank u so much for writing so many stories in short span of time?waiting for other stories of urs..and also waiting for new stories..
      p s-i would love to read one mystery story on swasan..if u can and if u have time,pls try?❤

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:29 am

        Awww thank you so much seebu dear???will come with season 2 very soon.
        Yuppppp some stupid people don’t have any work. Thanks for trusting me???? and I thought rather than paying attention to them in that time I would have written os on swasan???? they are useless people and I will never stop writing bcoz of them. Instead I feel that if I will write more and good that will be a tight slap for the bashers????
        Will give my other stories also soon and many are in my mind but I m stopping them as I already have 10 stories??????????
        And will surely try to write something about mystery also????
        Thanks dear
        Take care???????????

    68. Sanskruthi on September 14, 2017 8:32 pm

      I’m angry on you since you end it
      If you promise that you will come up with season 2 then I will forgive you
      What’s say?

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:34 am

        ??????? don’t be angry yrrr I m coming with season 2 very very soon so be ready for it??????
        Thank you so much dear ?????
        Now dont get angry on this innocent soul???????????
        Take care???????

    69. Nagamanasa on September 14, 2017 8:55 pm

      Marsuuuu…Awesome ending…loved it….

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:36 am

        Aww that you so much dear???
        Take care????????

    70. Sanu on September 14, 2017 9:07 pm

      N I saw some comments about helly’s body shape….I dont no about others but I just like her smile n her eyes which reflects her pure soul…. body ka kya hai aaj mota tho kal pathla…. felt bad (pity) for their favs….if there body shape changes they’ll change their favorite too…

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:41 am

        Yeah some useless people always come to show their stupidity?????
        It shows that they didn’t care for their favourite’s talent or skills but just their body and seriously they will stop loving them if they will not be Beautiful???????
        Feeling pity on them????????
        Whatever people say my love for my hellu doll is increasing day by day??????????

    71. Sanu on September 14, 2017 9:22 pm

      Sorry for those comments….. n swasans daughter’s name is sanu….my God m flying…. Hey marsu plz in ur every story plz appeal for vote…tell everyone to vote for helly…plz…

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:44 am

        ??????? yupppp swasan’s daughter also sanuuuu?????
        And yes I will appeal for voting for hellu???????
        Thanks dear
        Take care??????????

    72. sammykapoor on September 14, 2017 9:49 pm

      awesome dear..come with season2

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:45 am

        Thank you so much dear??? will come with season 2 soon tc??????

    73. Neptune on September 15, 2017 7:00 am

      Marsuuuuuuuuu first of all really sorry for late comment but I was really busy past days do couldn’t comment …..

      Now coming to this part I really didn’t expected it to be the last one…

      It’s a really cute n heavenly love love story of our SWASAN which is so close to my heart…

      How much I wished to get at least one scene of swasan like this and you fulfilled my that wish …

      Please please please come soon with season 2 I will be waiting soooooooooooooooooooooo eagerly for it…..

      The ending was really cute… east or west SWASAN is the best….

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 8:38 am

        Awwww thank you so much nepuuuuu????? No need of sorry yrrr I can understand????? and well said east or west SWASAN is the BEST?????????????????????????????????
        Sorry for ending soon but don’t worry season 2 is coming very very soon ????
        Thanks dear
        Take care????????

    74. DA on September 15, 2017 7:10 am

      Nice

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 8:41 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    75. Rekha on September 15, 2017 10:28 am

      Awwwwww Soooo…… Cute……….??
      Awesome Story……….!!!
      Waiting for ur Epilogue & Season 2…..??

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 10:34 am

        Thank you so much dear??? will give epilogue soon and season 2 also coming soon tc??????

    76. kichu on September 15, 2017 4:50 pm

      I want epilogue plzzzz

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 5:56 pm

        Sure dear will give epilogue soon??? thank you so much dear tc????

    77. Anita gwalani on September 15, 2017 5:23 pm

      The journey of that ff its to much beautifull I love my season and sansara this is my favourite ff I miss that ff first you start with few shorts but you completed 40 parts congress I need epilogue love swara character also and sanskar the physics teacher also I really love naughty billo ff ???????????????I really miss that ff???? you write a beautiful ff welldone????

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 5:58 pm

        Awwww thank you so much dear???? with the support of all readers I was able to reach at 40th shot. Thanks for liking it dear will give epilogue soon????? tc????

    78. Anamika on September 15, 2017 7:02 pm

      Please post he is dangerous,uncontrolable feeling. I am missing it.otherwise l will beat you

      • Mars on September 15, 2017 7:16 pm

        Ohhhh don’t beat me????????? both stories I will post tomorrow morning???? then read and comment also??? wait for it????take care????

    79. Anamika on September 15, 2017 7:25 pm

      I am just kidding

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 7:10 am

        ????? I know????

    80. vyshu10 on September 15, 2017 8:02 pm

      Superb…swasanara r so adorable

      Had fun reading this ff…swara made us a lot with her craziness

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 7:11 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???????

    81. Soujanya on September 15, 2017 9:40 pm

      Awesome….loved it..?

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 7:13 am

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    82. hellyfan on September 16, 2017 1:02 am

      hiii diiiiiiiiii……..
      first of all i m sorry for not commenting regularly but what to do diii ye exams sir par h….

      kash like swara even i can get married to an accounts professor …
      just kidding

      this chapter was amazing or i should rather say this journey was amazing

      i can’t forget this lovely ff… because it was the first work of ur that i read
      actually from this ff only our friendship started right..

      and story is something which i never expected
      it is ur bestest work…
      and this kiddo love this work

      i love ur way of writing … ur way of explaining
      ur way of designing ur characters that while reading automatically a image comes in our mind….

      u and anniya diii are my inspirations
      thank u dii for making me a part of naughty billo’s lovely journey

      i love u diii
      take care bye

      and yaah dont forget to post epilogue as well as next part of my wished story…
      bye bye

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 7:17 am

        Hey don’t be sorry its okay studies first?? and chal tumhare liye b ek account professor dhundti hu????????
        Thank you so much dear for loving this story????????
        And I will post epilogue soon and next part of Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari also will give soon☺☺☺☺☺☺
        Take care??????????

    83. sneha on September 16, 2017 10:11 am

      Awesome ending dear. I will miss the ff a lot

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 10:19 am

        Thank you so much dear don’t worry will come with season 2 soon????
        Take care???

    84. Zoya on September 16, 2017 4:19 pm

      Heyy sorry Mars for this late comment…..actually I have shifted to hostel so don’t use my phone frequently…..coming to the story I am going to miss it soooo much….this Is my favourite story….i m feeling like crying….do Come with 2 season

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 4:54 pm

        Hey don’t be sorry dear it’s okay??? and don’t cry I will come soon with season 2
        ???
        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    85. Milestone on September 16, 2017 4:48 pm

      Awesome dear…….swara is too much ….1yr ki bachhi Ko blush kerna bhi sikha diya..
      ….??

      • Mars on September 16, 2017 5:28 pm

        Yuppppp she is unique piece???? thank you so much dear tc??????

    86. aaru on September 17, 2017 7:49 am

      your story is very good and lovely and am a silent reader

      • Mars on September 17, 2017 9:47 am

        Thank you so much dear for commenting and I m glad u liked it tc??????

    87. aaru on September 17, 2017 9:50 am

      your story is very good, adorable and lovely and am a silent reader. am very disappointed with end of this particular ff

      • Mars on September 17, 2017 11:22 am

        I m really sorry for ending it but don’t be disappointed will come with season 2 soon?????

    88. doly on September 19, 2017 6:48 pm

      nice and cute story

      • Mars on September 21, 2017 7:41 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    89. pinky on September 19, 2017 6:49 pm

      nice and cute story…good one

      • Mars on September 21, 2017 7:42 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    90. Nisha on September 21, 2017 9:30 pm

      Hiiiiii… sorry for not commenting earlier.. ???.. Was a little busy.. Buttt I loveddddd this cute part.. Swara and her naughty baby are just too cute and too adorable.. ???.. Couldn’t imagine her baby to be silent and serious.. Hehehehez… She had to be a copy of our naughty billo and m glad that she is.. ???.. The update was superrrrbbbb and awesome.. Loveddd every bit of it.. Swasan with their child and Swara still being a kid.. Hahahaha.. Who teaches their child to blush… ???.. That was the cutest part.. hahahahaha.. Everything was just mindblowing and can’t get over it.. Really… ???.. Lovedd this last update.. Thank you for this wonderful story… ????????.. Wish to see a season 2 of this.. ???

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