Hello guys it’s Trisha here !
This is the last episode of “Beintehaa” as I already told this will be an FS so here’s it !
Pls pls drop a comment guys if you like this !
And as u guys asked for ; I will surely come up with an ff ; nd its just a matter of a week or two !
I couldn’t make this one much longer so pardon me nd enjoy till then !
***********SHOT 13***********
(LAST SHOT)
So a guy named “karan” was coming to meet Saachi !
Let’s fast forward to the cafe where few seats were booked separately !
Karan Saachi arrived ! Saachi had her Bluetooth wd her !
Remaining guys were secretly watching them !
Karan- so dr Saachi right ?
Saachi- yeah maa told me abt you !
Karan- hmm you look beautiful !
Someone was burning in jealousy !
He mimicked karan’s words still during the Bluetooth connectivity of all persons !
Saachi- thankyou ! Actually I wanted to say I am not….!
Karan- now an issue if u don’t wanna eat now !
Both gave their normal intro !
Karan- ahm if u don’t mind would do come wd me for a dance ?
When Kabeer entered the scene. !
Kabeer- yes sweetheart ! You may go with me !
Saachi was shocked at his gesture including all the gang !
Karan- who are you now ?
Kabeer- oh lemme introduce me first ! It’s dr Kabeer ; saachi’s bf !
He was saying this casually while Saachi was eyeing him continuously nd remaining hand members were giggling !
Karan- oh good to know ! Bte I am her fiancé so pls leave !
Saachi- excuse me ! Who said yes for marriage !
Karan- then what you will definitely say !
Kabeer – never !
He holds her by waist nd drags towards him ! She felt a constant shiver in her body with his touch !
Karan- whatever lemme leave !
He left the place nd gang reached there while Kabeer was still holding her close to him !
Krish- ahm ahm (loudly)
Kabeer realised what he was doing nd both parted !
Veer- anyways good job dr Kabeer ! Let’s leave !
Kabeer- ahm you guys may go I’ll come later !
Isha- ok come Saachi !
Kabeer- I will drop her myself !
Veer – siiirr !
Kabeer gives him deadly glare all stepped towards outside ! While Kabeer took her to the top of the cafe ; which was fully decorated with flowers everywhere ; at first she was surprised later when she turned just to ding him on his knees !
Kabeer- Saachi… I ….
Veer krish ish Pragya garv !
All stood up from the corner of stairs from where they were watching them secretly !
Veer- sir pls let us see !
Krish- pls
Kabeer – fine !
Kabeer – I … I wanted to say….ahm…that u know dr awasthi !
All patted their foreheads !
Krish – not an issue try again !
Kabeer gives him glares !
Kabeer- ahm I …I lo…u knw mis lalwani !
Saachi- (irritatingly) tumhar matha khrab !
She turned to go but he holded her from wrist in time nd dragged towards him ; again bent on his knees ! Took out of small diamond ring nd said ”
She said in one go
“I love you dr Saachi !
I get tachycardia when I’m around you…!
You raise my oxytocin levels !
You might have done a cardiectomy on me !
Who needs the drugs that increase dopamin transmission when being with you simply means the trick !
I came down with sudden case of dyspnea when I first met you !”
Will you marry me ?
She uttered “yes” with a smiling face ! He made her wear the ring ! He leaned onto her a little when both looked at the hand wd deadly glares !
Veer- ok ok going (wd puppy faces) !
They all left !
Kanchi had a passionate kiss ! Both reached their places smiling and blushing to themselves in late evening !
LEAP of 3.5 years !
Kanchi in Shimla !
“Sssh Kabeer leave me ; I had lots of work” Saachi tried getting out of his touch … but he wasn’t ready to leave her so soon ! She was lying on the top of him on the bed ! She looked breathtaking in a light blue mini strip sareee with wet hairs ; while Kabeer looked like just awaken most probably by her wet hairs.
Kabeer- really ? I didn’t asked you to look so hot !
Saachi- Kabeer….Kabeer maa will come leave me !
Kabeer- what would maa be doing here on our honeymoon ! Don’t trick me !
Saachi- mr khduus if u remember we have to leave for Paris tomorrow so wake up !
Before she could say much; he turned her nd himself came on top…
She was shivering bcz of his touch…he kissed her cheeks ….earlobes…finally letting their lips to meet for next few minutes ; they parted for some air but soon got involved in another passionate kiss when in between he kept kissing the space btw her face nd shoulders ! The kiss soon turned into a hot make out session !
After some time they finally woke up !
Saachi- when would u mind to go for a bath ?
Kabeer- soon if u cooperate !
He winks at her !
While she pushes him inside giving an irritating look !
LEAP of 5.5 years !
@in hospital !
@in dr saachi’s cabin !
Kabeer- pls take care I told u not to lift weights in this condition !
Saachi-(acting as crying) achha literally ! Didn’t u thought this imp to tell me I would be this fat being a mother nd specially these irritating patients their crazy behaviour nd I swear if u got fat after delivery u r gone understood.
Kabeer- hmm
Saachi- wow just hmmm don’t worry let this baby come then I will see u who’s dr schi Mishra !
Atleast chocolate shake is better than that last dish …
He couldn’t help just gave her another dish as she demanded.
The end !
So this was it guys pls pls drop a comment if u like this guys nd this was the end !
Take care lovely readers
Love you all guys
Regards
Trisha
43 Comments
it was amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing and I will miss u sweetie and luv u loads
Thanku so much ashnita
Luv uh too
So so amazing and awesome story yaar…….
Thanku anu
so cute we miss u so much …plz come back soon
SURe tarsam just few more days
O meri jaan
Me tujh pe qurban
Me hu teri jamin
Tu mera aasman
Me tere fs pe fidaa
Phir bhi tu. ho rahi hai judaa
Par kabhi naa kehna hame alvidaa
Naye story jaldi lekar aana yaar
Hame rahega aapka besabri se intazar….
Omg haaaye so cute vrushti ! Nd guess what my frst exam got rocking so I am here u guys will shortly receive something new ! Luv uh
Trishu I loved it sooo muchhh and really u rocked it and proposal omg…. Just a personal thing yr…. U know what after reading this I have decided that if someone proposes me like this then only I will marry…… Dont laugh….. Really I m not interested but story was jhakkkaaasssss…. And come back soon!!
Thanku abhilasha ! Hehe ? not an issue dear even I think so sometimes whatever abt this , nd sure dear
Sweetie, your epi was awesome, excellent, splendid, amazing…………..the story was Such a sweet ending…..i loved it…i will miss you so much ????………..and about your exams…….i wish you good luck for that………..you will rock the exams……………BEST OF LUCK…….love you dear………a big teddy bear hug to you
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Thanku Tanya nd for ur wishes too dear
Hugs nd kisses to u
Luv uh sweetie
Brilliant Trisha.. it was amazing article.
No words for your writing.
U r such a romantic writer..
Good luck again for your exams which will definately going to be Superb like ur Writing marks..
10/10.
Thanku khamoshi ! as u r dying this one romantic I could guess u haven’t read my few os ; U might have cried ur heart out ! Anyways thanku for the wishes too dear !
Sorry dear but i don’t really remember everything.. i keeps forgetting but i surely can’t forget u for sure.
And yes dear i loved this one.. and every articles for your on which i have commented that for sure ??
Have a nice day yaar
Not an issue as u r new here mitali
Luv uh sweetie
Awesome deal…..
Especially the proposal part fabulous…????
Thanku aditee glad u like it
Trisha it was mind blowing dear super doper hit loved it a lot … You gave such a cute n beautiful happy ending.. Keep it up and continue to write after getting free from exams … And yeah Best of luck for your exams .. May you clear with good grades… Love you
Thanku so much jessica ; luv uh too sissy
Its amazing dear. All the best for your exams . Gonna miss u
Thanku alia; will miss you too
It is veryyyyyy nice……I loved it……u r a awesome writer…..plz come come with ur new writing very soon……all the best for ur exams
thanku vasundhara and sure
Awesome dear I will miss you so much take care
Thanku divya ; will miss u too
Take care
Amaz epi cutie pie mindblowing gajabbbb u nailed it and finish one more ff with happy ending… nd isse dkh kar lag rha tha ki tum express pe sawar thi itna fast forward i can understand but u managed very well sweetie … Ye koi or nhi kar skta ….lovvv u a lot … Prepare hard for exam.. All the best … I know jis tarah writting m best ho exam me bhi best dogi..gud luck take care…and don’t forget us hehehe just kidding
Thanku niyaa hehe ? I know yr sorry for fast forwarding nd ofcourse I could never forget you guys nd bcz of ur wishes first exam got really well !
Luv uh loads
Trisha dear……….khoob bhaalo……….just loved this to the core of my heart……just do well in ur exams….mehnu punjabi samajh nehi ahndi…..this one’s just an attempt for u(galti hojaye toh mainu maaf karo)…..phir milaan ge asap……..main tainu pyar kardi haan………..hehe………tc & luv u a lot my cutie pie……
Omg thanku riya so cute of u ; u know I know punjabi in writings even in speaking but I rarely speak bcz my little sis says I look so different or may be weird saying that ! Your try was osm ! Luv uh too chocopie
awww trishu this was amazing ending as always. but literally I don’t understand your bio love confession but it was Felt really amzing…come back with dhamakedaar entry…luv you dear.
THanku anee nd that really doesn’t matter feelings should be u derstood not words hehe ? I am usually not so poetic nd sure sweetoe
Luv uh
superb
Thanku dhruti
Amazing!!!! Your ff always brings a smile on my face!! Can’t wait to read more!! Good luck on exams (im guessing u have exams cuz literally every other writer does)
Thanku palak ; nd yeah I do have them thanks for that too
It was super duper ending kanchi scenes was amazingly described….
Thanku prema
You are awesome writer*****!!!
I really enjoy reading your articles
Stay healthy always♡
keep writing Trishu…..
Thanku so much limlim nd for commenting too
Sure dear
Trisha I want to say one thing…. Oxytocin is released in high amount in female at the time of parturition…. So how can Oxytocin level increase in kabir…. Seriously…..
In the male mammal, the small peptide hormone oxytocin is produced in similar quantities within the hypothalamo-pituitary magnocellular system !
It is called love hormone !
Seriously…….Where u read it…… U should check it on Wikipedia……. Because Oxytocin is not a love hormone……. Seriously yaar kuch to soch k likha karo….. Don’t make fun of medical……