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Home»Fan Fiction»Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 1
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Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaungi (kanchi ) Episode 1

NeonNingaBy NeonNingaSeptember 7, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys iam Ashnita as u know iam back with a bang episode thank you for reading and commenting and sorry for not replying u guys

Fb starts

A bank is robbed by a gang

Leader – give all the cash or I’ll kill everyone

Staff – take all the money but u won’t be spared

Leader to gang – this is impressive all r scared of me

A little boy to leader – oh hello can I call my dad. He took his phone and called someone.

A big mention is shown OMG all guards r standing. A phone is ringing tring tring Laksh picked the phone hello OK wait iam going to give it. He is going somewhere so let’s follow him. A big room is shown .
Bhai ur call said Laksh.

A hand is taken the phone hello wat iam Cumming said the man. Robin Laksh takeout the car we r going somewhere

So now let’s go to the bank

Leader – hey we r robbers and u people r scared hahaha.

Little boy -oh taklu uncle who said we r scared of u but we scared wat will happen to u somebody is comming to play tabla on ur takle head.

Leader – yeh kya horaha hai.

Outside of the bank 15 cars comes and stopped near the bank. Two guards came besides a car and opened the door

A tall man wearing a black suit gets down
Bg songs plays Zara dekh lo Kon aagya zamane me woh chahagya He walks inside

Leader – koi bataiga kya ho raha hai

Suddenly he gets tap on his shoulder .

Leader – kiski himat hui mujhe hath lagane ke liye.
Tere baap aur hamara bagwan Said little boy.

All other goons saw him and they ran away.
Leader slowly turned back and saw a man taking out his glass. And that’s our Kabir

Mujhe Ko pechan lo me hu Kon Bg plays .

Robin – Laksh bring chair for Kabir bhai
Laksh brought chair Kabir sat down.

Leader -Kon hai tu tum mujhe nhi jante me sadhu bhai ka admi hu.

Laksh hum ice cream cone hai aur tum humara aurat and slaps him.

Kabir took a knife and threw in his direction.
I put two options kill urself or I will kill u into pieces and pieces so choice is yours.

Leader -I’m not a coward I’ll fight
OK as u wish said Kabir
When he looked back there was no one he Disappeared and went to terace running but Kabir was going slowly and slowly Bg song plays me hu don.

Leader – where to hide.
Koi jaga mila said Kabir.

Cum let’s fight one to one Kabir said.

They engage in fighting but suddenly leader
was falling down but luckily Kabir was holding his hands

Mujhe chod do Kabir said leader.

Kabir was pulling his hands but he heard a voice calling Kabir bhai kill him he killed my husband pliz kill him.

Tum chup raho warna I kill u . Mujhe chod do Kabir leader said

Ja chod diya and he left his hands. Leader fell down and died.

Thank you Kabir bhai tum ne insaf kiya lady said.
Yeh mere faraz tha Kabir replied.

Kabir, Laksh, Robin was going . Bhai ek baat puchu Laksh asked and Kabir nodded.

Bhai I dnt understand y when someone is falling from terace and someoneholding his Hands. Y falling person ask mujhe chod do mujhe chod do areh pagal hai kaha jab koi bacha raha hai mujhe chod do mujhe chod do like seriously bhai ycan’t they say mujhe bachalo ya mujhe upar kichlo mujhe chod do aur jo bachne wale bhi chod dete ki ja jile apni zindagi. Bhai batao na .

Kabir glared at him

OK sorry bhai with puppy face. Laksh said
Q ki unke pas hamare jese dimak nhi hai Kabir replied

Bhai iam hungry can we eat something let’s go to daba said Robin.
Gud idea said Kabir let’s go

In daba

Kabir bhai came bring a special chair for him owner said to the waiter

Kabir was discussing something when his eyes went towards a girl
A girl is shown wearinga black dress with curly hair with simple ear ring that’s sanchi.

Pragya – di I’m not hungry.

Sanchi -me to .
Sanchi to waiter bhaiya pliz bring 5 plates pawbaji 5 plates golgappa , dal makni, one large pizza that’s all
Pragya – di u said u r not hungry.
Yes I am not hungry replied sanchi.

Just then pragya received a call yes iam coming. Di I’m going to hospital
OK sanchi replied.

Kabir was looking at sanchi he couldn’t take off his eyes from her . Bukad said Kabir.
Sanchi – did you said something .
No Kabir Kabir replied.

Precap : sanchi in Kabirs room in Malhotra Mention

Thanks u guys
Take care
Keep smiling

Regards
Ashnita

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NeonNinga

    Lovely girl a loving daughter loving sis and loving friend.Big fan of Shah Ruk khan. Favorite movie Main Hoon Na. And loves thriller, suspense and many more.

    23 Comments

    1. Trisha139 on September 7, 2017 4:00 pm

      Wow typical thriller this was amazing ashnita I loved this to the core of my heart u nailed this one yaar…pls show some strong fights btw Kanchi like typical gangster live story and then him falling for her hehe ? sorry for this it totally depends on u what u want sweetie
      Luv uh

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:11 am

        Awwww thank you very much sweetie and yes I will try

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 5:38 am

        Luv u loads ?

    2. Moonlight25 on September 7, 2017 5:00 pm

      This epi was a big wowwww…..loved it to the core of my heart……i just love thriller movies and this is exactly what I like…cant wait to read further of the story…amazimg Ashnita…..plz post as soon as possible…love you loads ?

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:12 am

        Awwww thank you very much sweetie and yes I will try and luv u to ?

    3. Priyanshi on September 7, 2017 5:32 pm

      This was truly amazing……………………episode.
      Loved it so much.
      Pls try to update next one asap.
      ? ? ? ?

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:13 am

        Awwww thank you very much

    4. riyarocks on September 7, 2017 5:49 pm

      Ashnita dear, today’s part was just osm……..omg, the way the leader said, mujhe chod do, while kabir held his hand……..so hilarious………u know what, I prefer to watch action thriller movies instead of romantic ones & I’m really glad to get a writer who’s taste matches with mine………. eagerly waiting for another enthralling from u……….. tc & luv u dear………

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:15 am

        OMG OMG OMG thank you very much sweetie and yeah I luv watching trill and suspense movie and luv u loads ?

    5. Alia on September 7, 2017 6:03 pm

      Amazing can’t wait for another chapter

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:16 am

        Aww thank you alia

    6. Amnaa on September 7, 2017 6:13 pm

      Nice episode update soon

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:17 am

        Aww thank you amnaa

    7. Abhilasha on September 7, 2017 6:20 pm

      Oh god it was like that I was watching a blockbuster hit and really was imagining it…. You described every scene perfectly…. Loved it!!

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:18 am

        Awwww thank you very much abhi it means a lot

    8. Jessicca on September 7, 2017 7:40 pm

      You seriously nailed it … I felt like i am watching a movie… perfect start …keep writing .. Loved it

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:19 am

        Aww thank you Jessica

    9. niyaaa on September 7, 2017 9:34 pm

      Ohhhhhhh ashnita dear u r just fab yaar sach me tum to janleva writter ho i love it a lottttttttttttt seriously or haan laksh ne jo question pucha mere dimag m bhi same yhi rhta h ki pagal hmesha ye kyun kehte h mujhe chod do hehehe post nxt asap dear or wait nhi ho rha

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:20 am

        Awwww thank you so much it means a lot

    10. anu on September 7, 2017 11:34 pm

      Nice story……..

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 1:21 am

        Thank you

    11. Divya on September 8, 2017 6:20 am

      Rocking plot lovely amazing and sorry for the late reply

      • NeonNinga on September 8, 2017 11:30 am

        Thank you Divya and it’s okay

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