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Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Marsuu Shot 6

MarsBy MarsSeptember 5, 201767 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! Here comes next shot. Thank you for your response.

Shattered Soul(swasan ten shots)
Shot 6:
Recap: swasan marriage fixed.

Bose House:
Swara and shomi came from maheshwari house. Adarsh and pari are sitting in hall.
Adarsh: where u went??
Shomi: swara’s wedding is after two days with sanskar.
Adarsh: what??? How can you fix without telling me.
Swara: we don’t want to tell someone like you. Why you care?? your planned failed to separate me and sanskar. Now I will be beside sanskar always and you won’t be able to do anything.
Pari: what is this way of talking to your bhai, swara.
Swara: he is not bhai who use his sister like toy.
Shomi: if you want can come in marriage otherwise no need I m there for my shona.
Swara and shomi left leaving adarsh and pari shocked.

Maheshwari house:
Ap came to dp and said
Ap: how can u accept swara? U know what she did.
Dp: our reputation is already spoiled as Sanskar marriage one time broke now I want him to get married so no one will question us.
Ap: but why swara??
Dp: I know sanskar can never accept anyone else so when swara herself want to marry then why don’t do it.
Ap: okay.
Ap went from there.

After two days:
Today is swasan marriage. They didn’t talked with each other in these days. Sanskar is giving maximum time to office as he want to prove adarsh that no one can compete him while swara was busy with shopping.Sujata and uttara are not at all happy with this marriage.
Sanskar is standing in front of mirror getting ready when uttara came.
Uttara: bhai why are u marrying swara. What if again she betray you?
Sanskar: she will never do that again I know.
Uttara: still you trust her.
Sanskar: she is innocent. She don’t know what is right and wrong.
Uttara: you still love her?
Sanskar: I will love her till my last breathe.
Uttara signed and helped him.

Sanskar is sitting in mandap when swara came with shomi and ap. She is wearing simple bridal dress not so heavy and looking beautiful. Adarsh and pari didn’t came.
Shomi made swara sit beside Sanskar. She is very nervous. Pandit Ji started rituals and swasan did everything as they were guided. Soon both got married. They took everyone’s blessings.
Swara hugged shomi and cried.
Shomi: sanskar plz take care of her.
Sanskar nodded in assurance.
Ap took her to Sanskar’s room.

Night:
Swasan’s room:
Sanskar enter inside and saw swara sitting on bed. He has stern look on his face.
He went near bed and took pillow and put it on couch. Swara got confused but sanskar without saying anything went to washroom.
Swara also removed her jewellery and place on dressing table. Sanskar came out after changing.
Swara: sanskar
Sanskar stops but didn’t said anything.
Swara: why u kept pillow on couch?
Sanskar: I will sleep there.
Swara: why??
Sanskar: bcoz I don’t want to sleep with you infact I don’t want you near to me.
He said loudly. Swara’s eyes got filled with tears.
Swara: I m sorry
Sanskar: keep it with you I don’t need your sorry and I already told you don’t expect any kindness from me.
Swara looked down. Sanskar went to couch and turn his face.
Swara slowly opened her bag and take out her night dress and went to washroom.
Later, she came out and lie at the edge of bed showing her back to Sanskar.
Tears made their way through her cheeks as she thinks sanskar hate her now. She has seen only his love till now but now its hurting her to see his rude behavior.
Sanskar listened swara sniffing.
Sanskar (think): she is crying?? Should I see. No wait.
Later, swara’s snobs vanish as sleep took over her.
Sanskar got up and went near her. He removed her tears and kiss her forehead. Again went to couch and slept.

Next morning
Swara got up firstly and saw sanskar sleeping on couch. She slightly smile seeing him.She got up and went to get ready.
Later sanskar got up and saw swara wearing red saree combing her hairs. He admire her how she is handling them. Indeed she is looking cute and beautiful in saree. Feeling his gaze swara turn and said
Swara(smiles): good morning Sanskar
Sanskar: hmm
Her smile vanished seeing his negligence.
Sanskar went to washroom to get ready.

Hall:
Swara came down. Everything is new to her and she don’t know how she is going to manage. Then only Ap came near her and said
Ap: swara u have to make something sweet today I think you must be knowing about the ritual.
Swara nodded and went to kitchen.

Kitchen:
Swara entered inside and saw sujata. Swara smile at her and went near.
Swara: wo Aunty Ji I m thinking to make kheer.
Sujata( rudely): then make
Swara’s eyes got wet but she has to be strong.
Swara: I want ingredients for that.
Sujata: I will tell servant to give.
Swara nodded while sujata left making faces.
Swara wipe her tears and got busy in making kheer.

Dining Table:
All are sitting except sanskar. Swara is waiting for him. She served kheer to ap dp uttara while sujata refused to take.
Dp blessed her even ap praised it. Uttara silently had it.
Sanskar came down. Swara felt happy that he finally came.
Sujata: sanskar have your breakfast.
Sanskar: no mom I m getting late.
Ap: at least taste swara’s kheer.
Sanskar look at her and said
Sanskar: no badi ma I m not feeling to have.
He went to office.
Swara felt bad but she can’t do anything. She never faced so much hatred till now. She composed and went to her room.

Swasan room:
Swara is sitting on bed. Today she is free but from tomorrow she will go to college as shomi had already told dp that she should complete her graduation and they accepted.
Swara: ohh I have to complete notes also as I didn’t went to college from many days. I should get from uttara.
But she went to college now will take in evening.
Then only her phone rings.she smiles as its of shomi
Swara: hello ma
Shomi: hello Swara how are you??
Swara: I m fine ma
Shomi: all are okay i mean they are behaving nicely.
Swara’s eyes got filled but still she don’t want to make shomi worried so lied
Swara: yes all are behaving nicely. All are very good.
Shomi: that’s nice. You act strongly everything will be soon fine.
Swara: hmm
Shomi: take care of yourself.
Swara: u too
Shomi: bye
Swara: bye
Swara cut the call and wipe her tears.
To be continued….

Precap: Swara facing tough time in managing everything.

So how’s it. Don’t forget to tell.
Sorry for short one.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    67 Comments

    1. Shreny on September 5, 2017 4:49 pm

      Awesome….plz post next part soon

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:58 pm

        Thank you so much dear I will post next part soon tc

    2. sus on September 5, 2017 4:55 pm

      nyc dear

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:58 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    3. rini on September 5, 2017 5:25 pm

      nice part

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    4. Stg on September 5, 2017 5:26 pm

      Awesome ??pls post next part soon..

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:19 pm

        Thank you so much dear I will post next part soon tc

    5. Fariha on September 5, 2017 5:34 pm

      wowww outstanding

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:20 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    6. Kumu on September 5, 2017 5:35 pm

      Nice one..tc..

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:20 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    7. NDSG on September 5, 2017 5:45 pm

      ???????????????????????????????????? Sanskaar itna bhi ma rulao Shona ko. I know she did wrong but, this rude behavior is hurting her. I know u r acting but still she is in pain. Give one more chance to her.

      I’m happy adrash nahi aya shadi mai… ??????????? mean fellow.

      Soon makes everything good for SWARA and don’t forget to punish This adarsh and her evil wife pari….?????

      And sujju bhi man jaye bus

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:23 pm

        Yuppp I m also feeling bad for shona baby but don’t worry Sanskar haina fir kyun tension. Sujuuu b man jayegi
        Adarsh aur pari ko tho Sanskar nahi chodega.
        Thank you so much depuuu dear tc

    8. anu on September 5, 2017 5:55 pm

      awesome update next part soon

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:23 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc

    9. Rachna on September 5, 2017 6:17 pm

      Awsm Dr…. Upload soon next part

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:26 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    10. phoniex on September 5, 2017 6:21 pm

      Hehe I liked it.

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:27 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    11. sneha on September 5, 2017 6:37 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:28 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    12. Chaitu on September 5, 2017 7:11 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:30 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    13. Samaira_khan on September 5, 2017 7:49 pm

      mars it was awsm but just has one request just in uncountrollable feelings sanskar was getting hurt not having tht much mistake then swara should also suffer i know it was in infuence but still.. sorry if i hurt u

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:32 am

        Well swara will suffer as she did wrong. Thank you so much dear tc

    14. Divz on September 5, 2017 7:50 pm

      all this happen coz of that Kali pari and her hubby……

      idiots….

      feeling bad for Swara…. but she did wrong…. knowingly or unknowingly so she has to bear…. it… Now

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:35 am

        Yeah agree to your point well don’t worry swara will act strongly. Thank you so much dear tc

    15. Rosey on September 5, 2017 8:03 pm

      Ohhh finally you posted…
      I loved it….but it’s short…* want next sooner plzzzzzzz post soon and make Swara strong so she could Handel all the situations

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:37 am

        Thank you so much dear very sorry for short one will give next one soon tc

    16. veena on September 5, 2017 8:47 pm

      loved it so much

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:38 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    17. Anu Rathore on September 5, 2017 8:49 pm

      Awesome part feeling sad for swara.. .

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:39 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    18. Seebu_s on September 5, 2017 9:28 pm

      nice dear..and pls do spread this msg
      #NoUseOfBadWordsByHellyholics This is the hastag of new trend. No bashing no abusing.Sometimes ignorance is BLISS.Bring it on guyz! Spread and use it as much asyou can. This is a very small step towards a huge change. Because we do know a small step can lead to huge change.Much much love to all.

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:50 am

        Thank you so much dear and I also request all to follow this and ignore the bashers and avoid the unwanted mess tc

    19. Tamil on September 5, 2017 10:42 pm

      Amazing dear……my poor swara…..feeling bad for her….

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:51 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    20. Prashasti7 on September 5, 2017 10:44 pm

      nyc dear

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:52 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    21. sanjila on September 5, 2017 11:06 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:54 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    22. AnuAnn on September 5, 2017 11:14 pm

      Poor swara anyway loved it

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:55 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    23. Shiksha on September 5, 2017 11:49 pm

      Good one..

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:56 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    24. Vidhi on September 6, 2017 12:02 am

      Superb dear ❤❤❤
      Feeling bad for swara ???????
      Update soon

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:57 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next one soon tc

    25. Febi on September 6, 2017 1:49 am

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:58 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    26. Liza on September 6, 2017 2:21 am

      Nice. ..swara hurted sanskar badly..so she should get its punishment. .eagerly waiting for your next epi..post soon

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 6:59 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next one soon tc

    27. Soujanya on September 6, 2017 9:06 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 10:56 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    28. Anjali on September 6, 2017 9:46 am

      Superb

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 10:57 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    29. Rekha on September 6, 2017 11:35 am

      Awesome…….. Emotional too………??

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 11:49 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    30. yamee on September 6, 2017 12:10 pm

      Too good epi dear…. Waiting for next part post soon.

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 1:30 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    31. Milestone on September 6, 2017 1:53 pm

      Nice…..

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 2:18 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    32. vyshu10 on September 7, 2017 8:39 am

      superb

      • Mars on September 7, 2017 9:53 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    33. gayathri.visu on September 8, 2017 6:31 pm

      Excellent part Marsuuu….This time Swara have to prove her love to Sanskaar!!

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 8:12 pm

        Thank you so much dear yeah swara has to prove herself tc

    34. Tani on September 13, 2017 12:14 am

      Nice

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