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Home»Fan Fiction»How They Become Kaanchi? Episode 20
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How They Become Kaanchi? Episode 20

AneeBy AneeSeptember 5, 201733 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hi guys how are you Hope you will be fine. Thank you so much for your love and support that’s really meaningful for me.
Hey Ashnita dear today is your Birthday sweetie so this is dedicated to you.
Accept as my gift dear.
…………………………………………………………Episode 20…………………………………………………………

After sangeet ceremony they left their rooms.

It is night Kabir is going to sleep while Saanchi is gets changes now she is keeping down her ornaments but she is in deep thoughts Kabir notices it, he comes near to Saanchi, Saanchi’s hands on her earrings

Kabir: Saanchi, are you alright?

Saanchi not answering him

Kabir again asking the same question

Saanchi didn’t reply.

Kabir jerks her Saanchi she comes in senses she stands and hugs him tightly. Kabir is mesmerizes to see her. Saanchi closes her eyes.

Saanchi: Sir, don’t leave me alone. I’m no… (She quiet)

Kabir’s heart beat is going to fast he is feeling of amazement and admiration, caused by something beautiful, remarkable, or unfamiliar. He is raising his hands and puts down on her back. Slowly air touches them.

BG Tenu itna main pyaar karaan
Ek pal vich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan
Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin
Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein
Ki chehre se teri na hatein
Neendon mein meri bas tere
Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Kabir puts hands on Saanchi’s shoulders tries to calm down her.

Kabir: what Saanchi what was happen to you?

Kabir and Saanchi keep away to each other

Kabir: Saanchi now tell me are you ok?

Saanchi: nods Hmm.

Kabir: ok now good night

Saanchi: ok sir good night.

They both left for sleep

Night passed
Next morning

Saanchi is ready for Mehandi ceremony she wears green color lehanga with yellow color blouse over silver embroidery back open with orange net dupatta she also wears long multicolor earrings. She is looking dammm gorgeous in this outfit. Kabir was stunned at looking her.

Kabir is also wearing Desi outfit he is wearing off white Dhoti with white shirt over blue coat. But Kabir knot knows how to wears Dhoti Saanchi comes here Kabir sees her instantly he goes behind the bed. And saying with finger point “Stop you can’t come here”.

Saanchi takes one step and says why sir? What is there?

Kabir: No.no Just stop there don’t take one more step.

Saanchi takes another step and says Sir why are stands behind the bed?

Kabir gets worried and saying it’s my order I say you can’t come here.

Saanchi takes one more step and says Sir why I cannot come here what are you hiding from me?

Kabir looking down and also saying to Saanchi please go from there. But Saanchi don’t understand anything she come near to Kabir then gets slip and falling on Kabir. Kabir also falling down Saanchi lying on Kabir both trying to stands but they are unable for stands then they are seeing each other’s eyes and have a deeply eye lock. Soft music playing in BG just then Vivak comes in Kabir’s room to finding Kabir.

He sees no anyone here.

Vivak: kabirrrrr (says to himself) Arrey yahan toh koi nahi hai.

Then he feels some noise behind the bed he goes there and coughs loudly ahm ahm ahm.

Kabir and Saanchi come in their senses then quickly stand. Saanchi sees Kabir in this condition then she couldn’t control over laughing.

Vivak: (looking shocked) Arrey Yeh kiya hai bhai?

Kabir is feeling embarrassment he saying to Vivak Yaar hass mat yeh Dhotti kese bhante hain bataa. Don’t laughs now tell how to wear this Dhoti?

Vivak is also laughing to see Kabir now he saying to him. Dekh bhai Dhoti toh aj tak mujhy bhi badhani nahi aayi. Toh teri kiya bandhonga main.

Kabir: Are you serious? You really don’t know? Now What I’m doing?

Saanchi: Sir… If you don’t mind I know how to tie Dhoti coz in college I has Rajasthani friend I was learned from her that How to tie Dhoti for our College Competition, Sir If you grant me. May I help you sir?

Vivak: Wow cool you know isse kehte hain Ek khareedo duja free (Buy one get one free). Now Saanchi ji best of luck He left from there.

Kabir give anger glare to him

Kabir: Now Saanchi start your work.

Saanchi start to tying dhoti where Kabir is saying to Saanchi “you don’t know how to tie seat belt but you know how to tie Dhoti sometimes you makes me really wondered when I start to understand you then you comes in front of me with new amazement. You are so different”

Saanchi is smiling and saying “Sir you also makes me wondered with your Song that really amazing”

Saanchi completes her work she ties Dhoti as very well. Kabir gets happy to see that.

Time skip

All girls are sitting on their places beautician is making beauty full Mehandi designs on their hands all boys are standing together and enjoying the Function some other girls dancing in the Center then Dadi saa telling to beauticians that writes girls husbands names on their hands.

Dadi saa: Ohh chhoriun Bedniun ke haath per un ke bend ka naam likho.

Neha is saying Vivak’ V

Sriti is saying Sahil’S

Avni is saying Aditiya’s A

Saanchi is silent Kabir is looking at her.

Dadi saa: Chhori janu hun tu apne bend ka naam na le se. par yahn toh le sake hai na.

Saanchi is still quiet

Dadi saa: thane thaare bend ka naam na aave se?

Saanchi: No dadi saa I know

Dadi saa: Toh batati kiun nahi chhori.

Saanchi looking towards Kabir dadi saa notices that and saying

Dadi saa: acha toh yeh bat se ah charra athe aa.

Kabir: me??

Dadi saa: Na chhorra main apne aap ne bularahi hun

Kabir comes here

Dadi saa: now give permission to her that he writes your name in her hand.

Kabir: yes Saanchi writes it.

After that dadi saa again calling to all boys and saying to them now find your name from her palm.

All are interestingly start to find their names while Kabir is feeling hesitate to doing this.

Dadi saa: ke hua chore jis tarah apni bedni ki maang bahri thi wese hi fatfat naam dhund le.

Kabir takes Saanchi’s hand in his hand and start finding is name. Luckily Kabir is first he found his name all are clapping for them.

Dadi saa gives them blessings. Tum donon ka saath humesha aise hi bana rahe.

Kaanchi is looking to each other after then gives little smile.

Time skip

Mehandi ritual is went successful

At the palace’s one terrace all friends are gathered coz this is last night tomorrow the wedding will end all will going there ways. So this night they all are want to enjoy their life’s good time to gather.

Vivak: guys now let’s play truth and dare kaya pata phir milen na milen.

All are ready for the game while Kabir is talking on phone.

Sahil: yaar please call Kabir without him the game isn’t interesting.

Adititya: but yaar tujhey kiya lagta hai yeh ab bhi game khelta hoga? Dude do you think he would still play game?

Vivak: why not he was champion in this game U don’t know guys.

Roshni: But guys he was always chosen truth. He was never choose dare that’s why he was won all the time.

Vivak: hold on guys I have a plan.

Avni: Plan??

Vivak: Yes Guys plaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan. (He smirks)

Just then Saanchi comes on terrace Vivak calls Saanchi to come here join us we are going to play the game.

Saanchi: Smiling and saying game?

Sahil: ji Saanchi ji game but you need to convince Kabir for that.

Saanchi: Me??

Vivak: Ji Devi Ji Ajkal janab AP ki baat ziada maante hain?

Saanchi is shying just then all are insists her to go and convinced him for play the game with them.

Saanchi: ok I’ll try but not sure he will agree or not.

Saanchi comes near to Kabir and saying to him

Saanchi: hesitantly Sir woh… yeh log………..aaa

All are spying them.

Kabir looking at her he takes down phone from his ears and saying “what Saanchi”

Saanchi: Actually all are wanted to play game with you; do you play game with us? (She is saying this in one breathe)

Kabir is glaring at her then says but I leave to play game so earlier.

Saanchi: Very sweetly for us? Please sir.

Now this is Kabir’s weakness he cannot refuse to Saanchi.

Kabir: ok I’ll play the game

All are happy and cheers.

Vivak: Ok guys but there are some changes in the game we will playing only dares. No truth here.

Kabir in shock he open his mouth a saying what is this yaar I’m not playing this game. He tries to stands

Vivak holds Kabir’s hand and sit him down and says “look bro you are playing this game ok.

Kabir: no

Vivak: Chup…and one more thing there is not truth here is only dare but but but ladies and gentlemen’s here is only love dares.

Kabir and Saanchi are shocked.

Vivak smirks

Sahil elbows Sriti for looking them

Aditity and avni also giggles

Vivak spin the bottle, bottle stops on sahil, Vivak gives him dares to dance with roshni sriti gets jealous but guys this is dare then he did this.

Vivak again spin the bottle this time the bottle is stops on Avni now roshni give him dare to kiss vivak’s hand

Vivak: Ohh pagal meri hone wali biwi hai yahan mar wayegi kiya?

Kabir: Dude phass gaya na ab chal complete kar dare. Give him evil smile.

Vivak: Thik hai thik hai lekin dekh lena har kisi ki baari aayegi tab dekhunga main. he challengs.then he completes his dare.

Bottle again spines by Vivak and this time bottle stops on Kabir

All are hooting

Kabir what is dare guys

Vivak now Kabir your dare is just propose to Saanchi

Kabir and Saanchi are dumbstruck on it they are trying to deny but this is their plan to make them close all are cheering them do it do it.

Kabir comes in front of Saanchi they are looking to each other Kabir start to say something to her

Kabir: Saanchi when I was saw you first time I wasn’t thought that you will be my life when I saw you first time I wasn’t thought that days will come when I cannot imagine my life without you. When I was saw you first time I wasn’t thought that I that days will come when I will never live without you.

Kabir is saying Saanchi is just hearing to him. They completely lost from the world.

Just then rain is happens all are standing there is going in their rooms but they Two Love birds is just admiring to each other. After thunderbolt is happen Saanchi hugs to Kabir tightly. Kabir puts hands on Saanchi’s back after few minutes they realize that they are close then parted but not completely they are still looking in each other’s eyes. Kanchi’s faces are very close Kabir is going to kiss her Saanchi close her eyes, Kabir is going kissing on her lips then thunderbolt is happen Saanchi opens eyes then runs away from there.

After Saanchi left Kabir remains here he flying his hand in air and enjoying in rain now he feels really happy he is in Love He is excited he is jumping into excitement.

Precap: Kaanchi Flight get Late……………………………..Saanchi saying to Kabir. I LOVE YOU………………………Stay tuned guys for further updates.

Ok guys for today are enough now guys tell me how was that?
Are you Enjoying “Nivak” Wadding please tell me through your lovely comments
I’m eagerly waiting for your comments.

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Anee

    Lovely daughter of Mummy and Papa (parents)!!! Crazy fan of "Vikram sakhalkar" and "Harshad Chopra" ❤❤ ❤ Loves reading,writing and painting.

    33 Comments

    1. Palak.Sharma on September 5, 2017 8:28 am

      How are you such an amazing writer?!?! The romantic scenes were to die for!! Keep it up!!

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 8:38 pm

        thankuu palak

    2. Ashnita on September 5, 2017 8:47 am

      OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG it’s amazing outstanding very nice superb mindblowing ravishing lovely historic unlimited package khidki tod iam speechless because it’s beyond everything dear and sweetie this is my best gift ever thank you very much lots and lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u so so so so much

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:24 pm

        Thank you Ashnita Glad that you liked it as your best gift. Luv you tooooooooooooooo dear accept lots of huggs and kisses from my side dear.luv you sooo much.

    3. Dhruti on September 5, 2017 9:07 am

      yuppie i m 1st person to comment today
      anee today’s ff is just perfect superb mind blowing specially truth and dare wala part
      good job.

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:26 pm

        Hi Dhruti Thanku So much Dear Really Feeling Glad that you liked it Dear.

    4. Priyanshi on September 5, 2017 9:37 am

      I’m speechless dear .it was jst perfect episode. Now I really can’t wait for next episode. Loved it dear.
      Ur silent reader
      Priyanshi ??

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:27 pm

        Hi Priyanshi Thankuuu So much for commentdear Glad that you liked it dear.

    5. niyaaa on September 5, 2017 9:54 am

      U r amaz fab dear the dare game is mindblowing eagerly waitting for nxt post nxt asap

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:29 pm

        Thankuuu Niyaaa For a lovely Comment Your comments is really means a lot for me, I always waits for your comments. Now I’m really happy that you liked it.

    6. Khamoshi on September 5, 2017 10:15 am

      Anee you are just so amazinggggggg.. kash yeh real main serial main dikhate. This will be so gr8 if v get to see Kanchi as a couple.
      Good Job

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:32 pm

        Thankuu so much Khamoshi for a lovely comment You don’t know that how much I feel happy to see ur comment dear.and yes I also wish that is the serial we will see kaanchi as a couple.So jst pray for it.

    7. QVZRQE3M on September 5, 2017 12:23 pm

      U know anee u always leave me in surprise…..
      It is just soooooooooooo goooooooood
      Plzzz post the nxt one asap dear….
      Awesome nd keep it up dear.

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thankuu Mrunmayi for a sweet+great comment ever. Glad that you liked it dear.

    8. Sajnana900 on September 5, 2017 1:06 pm

      So nyyycc anneee dear plz keep writing and ya the nivak’s wedding function were perfect but now wedding is left cant wait for further

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:37 pm

        Hi Sanjana Good to see you back on my ff dear I really miss you comments. now Really Feeling Glad that you liked it and happy to know that you were enjoyed all nivak wedding functions that’s really meaningfull for me. again thankuu so much.

      • Sajnana900 on September 5, 2017 11:16 pm

        Sorry anee for not comenting i read all of ur ff but short of time make me not cmnt sry again

    9. Amna on September 5, 2017 1:15 pm

      Nice

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:37 pm

        thanku amna

    10. Divya on September 5, 2017 1:28 pm

      Anee ur amazing yaar can’t wait for next episode update soon

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:38 pm

        Thankuu Divya for amazing comment and yaa I’ll try to post soon dear.

    11. Moonlight25 on September 5, 2017 1:31 pm

      Anee, your episode rocked…it was too good…loved it…..the best epi till now…..amazing….am so excited for the next epi please post soon …..loved you loads

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:40 pm

        Hey Tanu dear Feeling really Glad that you liked it your comment make my day dear…..and yaa i’ll try to post soon…….luvvvvvvvv you tooooooooooo dear.

    12. SIYA on September 5, 2017 1:34 pm

      IT WAS REALLY AN AMAZING UPDATE………I JUST LOVED IT………….KEEP WRITING………….CANT GET ENOUGH OF THEM……….I LOVED THE RAIN WALA ROMANCE…………
      PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON

      UR SILENT READER
      SIYA

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 2:43 pm

        Hi My Sweet silent Reader Siya Thank You for Sweet+lovely+amazing+great comment dear. I’m really feeling glad that you liked it dear Also happy to know that you Rain wala romance…And yes i’ll try to post soon.

    13. Sana on September 5, 2017 2:56 pm

      It’s just mind-blowing

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thankuu sana

    14. riyarocks on September 5, 2017 5:05 pm

      khamma-ghani Anee baaisa……….haha……..got carried out with ur plot like previous time…….now I feel like wishing u in this way henceforth till this plot continues…….hope u don’t mind dear…………..u r such a great writer………as far as episode is concerned, kanchi scenes day-by-day its becoming more & more interesting to watch(reading I must say)………….just luv u a lot for this dear………..

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 8:43 pm

        hahahah Riya you are such an amazing personality dear i don’t mind in anyway you want to talk with me……………..thankuu for sweet+amazing+great+hilarious comment dear I really enjoying your comments…and you comments late…….Don’t mind…………….I’m waiting for your sucha sweet comments….Luv U too dear.

    15. Trisha139 on September 5, 2017 5:21 pm

      Awesome fantastic ?????????????????

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 9:02 pm

        thankuu trishu

    16. Abhilasha on September 5, 2017 5:42 pm

      Oh god it was like that a beautiful Romantic movie is going on… I was lost in it and it was fantastic and proposal was uff!!

      • Anee on September 5, 2017 9:09 pm

        Thankuu abhi dear I’m really feeling glad that you liked and enjoyed it.

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