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Home»Fan Fiction»Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 4 by #Trisha
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Beintehaa #kanchi fs #shot 4 by #Trisha

Trisha139By Trisha139September 3, 201739 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys … Trisha here with next shot of “Beintehaa”….
Thanku guys for liking my story ….Nd with ur support I am continuing with my next part ….
let’s see what’s further….!
But before that I want to clear some of the confusing things !

Note- like u might have listened to name “advay singh Raizada ” in the same way I have changed kabeers name a little bit just to add a little bit more “tadi” (attitude)… to ” Kabeer kapoor Khurana ”
Nd as I read some of you guys find the previous episode short then I wanna tell u guys that was just bcz of my health but now as I am perfectly fine so the episodes will be sufficient longer

……………….SHOT 4………………..

The first day of new interns went all with introductions of staff , board members and different areas of the hospital then afterward lunch nd at last setting up their luggage …! In short no classes were there just few interviews …!

*Day second for new interns*

@in the class all students were present except saachi nd Kabeer…!

Pragya- abeo she said she’ll be here in 5 mint ; its 7 minutes if she didn’t came even now then I won’t help her from kapoors krodh (anger) on the very first day…!

Isha- haha ? madam ur dad is MLA not you so stop acting like u can help her blah blah blah blah….!

Pragya- btaen ab kya tumko kon h ham..!?

Isha – yes yes tell me …!

Veer- deviyon pls fight little shower else bcz of u kapoor will fire all of us !

Pragya – r u dumb ?

Veer- no !

Pragya- blind ?

Veer- no

Isha – to batsman see their he’s not in the room !

Veer- huh ! Not so funny u don’t know when he’ll be on ur heads !

Kabeer-(standing directly in front of all of them)- did anyone remembered me ….?

Veer Isha pragya shocked nd sat straight keeping finger on their lips ..!

Garv- we never remember u sir …! That’s ok u May enjoy we will call u if needed …!

Kabeer gave him a glare nd instantly he got patted by veer on forehead ..!

Veer(whispering)- ullu ke patthe chup reh…!

Garv just made a puppy face nd stayed quiet !

Kabeer- anyways good morning stu…. !

Before Kabeer could complete his good morning a shivering nd loud voice gathered all of their attention…”oouuuccchhh”

There was a chubby girl on the door of the class….with her loose hairs , jeans nd long kurti with a long modern pendant ….her eyes reflected her inner spark …her purse fell nd she was collecting that bent on the door ….while class looked in shock nd Kabeer was just lost in her gestures ….how beautiful simple adorable nd chulbuli she looked…after few seconds she got up collecting his purse nd Kabeer too suddenly got out of his thoughts…!
Saachi- oops sorry sir …chocolate ?

She said the line but Kabeer didn’t said a word !

Saachi- oh no ! Yes yaad aya…good morning sir !
(She bites her tongue )

Kabeer- wow the great dr Saachi wished me good morning ; should I bring something in ur highness ?
(he acted with a sarcastic tone)

Saachi- ahm one cappuccino…!or may be a dairy milk ?

As soon as she said this …she found everyone else from the class standing at their seats nd looking at her with so much shocking expression..she looked at their faces nd realised what she did…!

Saachi(looking towards kbeer) I ….I didn’t mean that ….sorry ….!

Veer- Kabeer sir is allergic from sorry ! Say something like give me less punishment…..or ….

He turned up to find kabeer glaring at him….
Veer-(making puppy faces) ohk ohk !

Kabeer- and dr Saachi for violating few rules nd coming late to the class I am giving you a punishment….for next 6 hours in record room..!

Saachi- oh not an issue sir I will manage!

Kabeer- nd come early morning for next 6 days !

Saachi got irritated a lot nd shouted ….-bag chahie then say straight to my face…don’t play hide and seek !

All class said together – bag ?

Kbeer – nothing nd sit down including dr Sachi nd after this class continue to ur punishment !

Saachi(in mind)- fine beta give me a much punishments as u can ; but the next part of the coin will be in my favour …dadi ji ki naani Na yaad dilai to me tumhari student nhi…huh ? !

Few hours passed like this nd at that time all were working as per their allotted duties except dr sachi she was tasting her veg special pizza with three cans of coke….in the record room !

Kabeer(came from behind)- look who’s working or I say doing stomach exercise !

Saachi – (in mind -Amrish puri yhan) sir ap ?

Kbeer just coughed at this-“ap”

Saachi- oh not a problem u might not have a habit of being called “sir” after all all call u with few lovely names like hitler khduus etc etc etc….!

Kabeer- stop ur nonsense nd tell me what abt the work I gave u for record room!

Saachi- pls check the pc ur work is done sir….!

Kabeer checked nd found all the work done …

Pc was placed beside the table Saachi was standing by ….she just stepped forward nd slips…with her eyes closed …she felt as that’s going to hit hard but before that two strong pairs of arms holded her from her waist nd jerked towards him….!
In no seconds ; she was lying in His arms ….both got lost in each other’s eyes they shared an eye lock…..both had a little amount of hatred for each other in each other’s mind yet something was brewing more than hatred….crossing the boundaries of restrictions …to some other world ❤️

Backgrnd played-

“Na na…

Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re

Na na…”

After few seconds with knock knock on the door by isha Pragya they came bck in their senses.

Isha – sorry sir vo sachi…

Kabeer- yes u guys may talk to her nd yes dr Sachi ur punishment is over !

Kabeer left the room…!

Isha- oho

Pragya- kya gajab raasleela thi right Isha !

Saachi- shut up u both !

Pragya- by the way where is pizza ?

Saachi looked shocked !

Isha- haawww now don’t tell me u finished a full size Pizza urself ! Hey bhagwan uthalo mujhe..!

Pragya- Saachi ki bchii
Aj nhi chodege hm tumko
(I will not leave u today)

Saachi made a little puppy face !

Precap- a party by veer nd entry of some goons !

So this was it guys hope u enjoyed this part too pls pls give ur lovely comments my readers even silent readers too !
Regards
Trisha

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    39 Comments

    1. Dhruti on September 3, 2017 5:26 pm

      it is superb ff and please take care your health and update next one soon…

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thanku dhruti and sure

    2. Ashnita on September 3, 2017 5:40 pm

      superb

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thankyou

    3. Tumpa on September 3, 2017 5:42 pm

      Wow,nice episde…#

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thankyou so much tumpa

    4. Ashnita on September 3, 2017 5:49 pm

      OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww outstandinggggggggggggggggg amazingggggggggggggggggggg awesomenessssssssssssssßssss historic lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy unlimited package damekedar khidki tod kya bat fantasticccccccccccccccccccccc grand grand grand salute to u trishu u again again again nailed it dear u always killed it u always and again stole my every every words kuch to daya kardo sweetheart OMG iam again again again speechless can’t describe because it’s beyond everything iam so excited again u made my day it’s nice take care of yourself baby lots lots lots of huggs and kisses to u and sorry if I bored u from my boring comment wat to do u always stole my words and luv u so so so so so so so so so so so so much

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:53 pm

        Omg ashnita I was on the ninth cloud while reading ur comment ; awwwwww thankyou so so sonmuch sweetie for liking my story ! Lots of hugs nd kisses to u love u too nd sure I’ll post next soon

    5. riya on September 3, 2017 5:50 pm

      love u a lot for such amazing updates my cutie pie………..kahaan se laati ho aise khidkitod ideas??????? hum toh aapke writings ke fan banchuke hain…………aur kya bataye, bolti band kar deti ho tum hum sabki……………… luv u a lot dear………..

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:54 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much riya that means a lot to me luv u too sweetie

    6. Divya on September 3, 2017 6:06 pm

      Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazingggggggggggggggg superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ur awesome Trishu episode was lovely yaar not a word this mind blowing fantastic episode Trishu now I can’t wait plsss update soon yaar love u take care

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:55 pm

        Omg thanku thanku so much divya for this lovely comment u seriously made me have a wide smile
        Love u too

    7. SIYA on September 3, 2017 6:16 pm

      OH GOD…………….CAN’T IMAGINE THEM BOTH TOGETHER AFTER SO MUCH FIGHTING…………STILL IT WAS REALLY A VERY CUTE EPISODE………….BOTH PF THEM WERE ADORABLE………..HOPE TO SEE FOR OF THEM…………..CANT GET ENOUGH OF THEM…………POST AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

      UR SILENT READER
      SIYA

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:55 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much siya for this beautiful comment
        Luv u sweetie

    8. QVZRQE3M on September 3, 2017 6:17 pm

      Trisha Trisha Trisha u r soooo soooo soooooooooooo amazing I mean this is just soo good.
      And sanchi she was just looking so cute nd when she entered in the class that cappuccino nd Cadbury omg other was so funny…… after that record room’s scene ufff Trisha u nailed it dear sanchi in kabeer’s arms ohhh it was just so breathtaking.
      U r awesome, amazing, fantastic, mind blowing, ….. nd don’t know what else to say dear u always just make me feel so proud that I know “U” such an amazing writer I m in love with u
      U know my day starts with reading ur ff I already told u that ur my morning sun nd night moon I just love u so much ????????? I always wait for ur ff u r just awesome plzzz plzzz keep writing dear plzzzzzzzzzzzzz I m so happy that I know u. Tight teddy hugs nd lots of kisses for u dear.

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:57 pm

        Omg omg omg omg i am fainting super Happy super excited seeing your comment dear !
        You seriously made my day
        Omg dude thanku so so very much for this beautiful comment u can’t imagine the widest smile on my face sweetie
        Love u so so so much

    9. Moonlight25 on September 3, 2017 6:36 pm

      Sweetie, from where do you get these amazing ideas, loved the episode……..??? now what should I say you know the answer that your epi was excellent…so don’t need to say….love you ??

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:58 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much tania thts so sweet of you
        Love you too

    10. Abhilasha on September 3, 2017 6:47 pm

      Oh god what a brilliant episode yr… Can’t resist to laugh at those cupid hilarious moments and their eye lock…. Oh god… Haye mai mar java!

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 1:59 pm

        Thanku so much abhilasha that means so much to me

    11. niyaaa on September 3, 2017 8:04 pm

      Trisha m speechless… Dil garden garden ho gaya…. Dhamakedaar… Khidki tod nhi darwaja (door) tod epi.. U nailed it ur ff mak my day take care ur health nd post nxt soon

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:01 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much niyaa for the lovely comment
        Tht really means sp so much to me

    12. niyaaa on September 3, 2017 8:05 pm

      Trisha m speechless… Dil garden garden ho gaya…. Dhamakedaar… Khidki tod nhi darwaja (door) tod epi.. Lov kanchi tashan nd silly but cute antics of sanchi lv a loads….U nailed it ur ff mak my day take care ur health nd post nxt soon

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thankyou sweetie and sure

    13. Palak.Sharma on September 3, 2017 8:25 pm

      Omg this was AMAZING!!! I couldn’t stop laughing when Sanchi came in, cappuccino or Cadbury?

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thankyou I am glad you liked it

    14. Anee on September 3, 2017 8:29 pm

      Omg Trishu you making me crazy dear with your ff dear you describe sanchi jhalli style was osm dear.no words for you I must say you should have to write sdch show.??????

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:04 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much anee
        I am so glad u liked it

    15. RuCh23 on September 3, 2017 8:31 pm

      Wwooww Trisha dear ??? soo ahmazing ??? their arguemets are so cute ???

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:04 pm

        Thankyou ruwani

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:05 pm

        Glad you liked it

    16. Sajnana900 on September 3, 2017 9:34 pm

      So nyc trisha
      How the dialogue came to ur mind the little nokjhoke btwn kanchi I can’t control my laugh and ya dear keep writting

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:05 pm

        Thankyou so much Sanjana; that really means so much to me

    17. kanchi on September 3, 2017 9:39 pm

      Fantastic trisha just love it specailly the cappuccino one and dadiji ki nani
      LOVELY

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:06 pm

        Thankyou so much kanchi

    18. Vasundhara on September 4, 2017 1:03 am

      Veryyyyyyyyy nice:-)

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thankyou

    19. Rajnandini on September 4, 2017 3:00 pm

      It was soooo lovely yaar and their nokjhok was toooooo osmmmm……it made me laugh whole heartedly dear…..u r sooooo amazing…..cant express in words…and sorry I m again late for commenting my fav. Writter with the same reason work and studies….please forgive me…kan pakad ke sorry….hope u will forgive me…and eagerly waiting for next part…

      • Trisha139 on September 4, 2017 3:24 pm

        Thanku vrushti glad u like it
        Love u

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