Dd’s sense of humor ? was more than what could you expect. He never used to miss a chance of fighting with Shweta for grammar. Shweta had her own English dialect. And when she started opening her special english speakings, dd used to correct it. To everyone, it was a free entertainment and favourite timepass. Watching their english fights,they all would burst out in fits of laughter. Well Neil was well versed with that and so was Avni. They both recommended that everyone should know about Dd just for a hearty laugh which was unstoppable.
Today as Shweta came , she looked for Avni . She had been embracing her as Mrs Tillu and would leave no chance to call her that. And avni would try to avoid that teasing. And she had went to Neil for some imp work (don’t know actually ). And she was fearing that she had told bebe not to tell shweta that she is going to meet her beloved jelly bean for some reason. But bebe is bebe na. She had begun telling the incident and Shweta began her special english speakings. She said : Mrs tillu mr tillu ko kabhi nahi chodti hai na. Waits Mrs tillu! Watch out! Your moms is comings wheres u are! Bebe said : Bas tu todhi english thik karle! Teri tedi medhi english. Shweta was with fury but ignored the silly pleas of bebe and dashed out of the house. Meanwhile Avni was just going inside then suddenly she noticd something fishy outside his jelly bean’s second home thatis his police station. He couldn’t risk his home as he never did in the past. Something which is more close to him than anything . She couldn’t ignore and smelled something which was something like ashes and fire…..
Till that time Neil and dd and all other officers were coming out. Shweta called Avni and increased the danger of the situation distracting her. She answered Shweta in a minute ans cancelled the call. She was sensing some great danger. Oh it was like she was sensing that if Neil was falling from a cliff or dd or any other police officer being murdered. What could it be? Avni’s super sharp mind sharper than his hubby’s couldn’t figure out the first time a mystery. She was going through a deep shiver . She sensed that some of Neil’s enemies must have planned something . But what could be related to fire and ash and Neil’s enemies. She tried to fix these clues like a detective. She had very less time to figure it out and stop before it does any harm. She informed Neil that he should not go to his office for a few days. He asked why? She told him what she sensed and he understood. But what was the plan even his supercop brain could not understand. Fire ans ash are related to burns . And burns are related to enemies in some or the other way. They both discussed this with dd and knew that there was something very big around all this.
But what could be the mysterious thing. They kept thinking and discussing things solving like a puzzle to figure out what it was with clues they had.
Neil also gave leave to everyone in office and Avneil decided with dd to shift to Neil’s studio apartment till they implemented their plan to stop the big danger.
Hi lovelies. I know it is short but my studies are going on and i want to increase the suspense of my chapters. Now my chapters would have sweetness plus suspense that is Sweet Suspense . And now my chapters wouldn’t be like my old ones where i briefed down the story. Now my chapters would get extended.
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After a long time you deliver your episode. It’s a very nice thing to come back with some new strategy. The way you describe all the situation is absolutely superb. It’s really good to read your update. Please keep writing at least 3 episode in a week. Otherwise readers are not showing any interest about your story. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Dear , it is good to know that u love my story. But since my exams are going on. And they are of 100 marks. They are ongoing and would be till 4-5 weeks. So as per that , i am a senior student and study level is very high. So u can understand my situation
I don’t think you will mind writing a precap of the story till now as I’m feeling I’m going slightly of track.
Actually I am a silent reader but after reading your ff I really fell to comment. Ur ffs are really fantabulous amazing and wat not. I just luv ur ffs. Keep writing cause I luv them.
Dear as per the track , the precap is will avni and neil save each other from the diaster. Or the diaster would overcome the. Sorry i can’t remember to upload precap sometimes. Also my tudies are very high and the days are critical. I have 100 marks paper and a very tough exam is gonna be there. Also it would be till 5 werks. So don’t have time . That to i am senior so much studies. And science i was a topper in my pt 1 as i got full marks. And ,y class teacher had made the paper. She said that the paper she had made only 5 students can pass at one time. So i was one of them. This time marks are 4 times pf what was the last paper. And my teacher had passed masters in chemistry paper. So she is an expert in chemistry. And in our exam , a major portion of chemistry is there. So very much load havi g. I would try to give u next update and precap after 6 weeks or 4 weeks, as per possible
Yaaar this chapter is a flashback right????
No dear this isn’t a flashback. Wherever i would mention flashback only that chap would be.
well i couldnt relate the last and this epi…could u plz clear my dilemma?
Hey dear i already mentioned that wherever i mentioned flashback inthe topic, the whole chap is a incident from the past. The last 3 chaps were a fflashback. This was back to the present