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Home»Fan Fiction»Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 12
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Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 12

MarsBy MarsAugust 18, 201767 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! Thanks for your response on previous part.Sorry for the delay.

Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Part 12:
Recap: Swaffy left to Kolkata

Kolkata:
Gododia house:
Swaffy came inside with shekar. Swara is sad but she is not showing.
Swara: mom we came.
Shomi: how are u??
Swara(fake smile): fine.
Shomi: u change I will arrange dinner.
Swara: hmm
Shomi: and call baba and inform him that u reached safely.
Swara:okay.

Swara’s room:
Swara sit on bed and called rajesh but he was not receiving
Swara:daffy dadu is not receiving let’s call on landline.
She dialed and on other side, sanskar received it coincidentally.
Swara:hello dadu
Sanskar: hello
Both stopped for few mins as they realized who is on the other side. Tears fell from swara’s eyes. Sanskar felt like she is crying
Sanskar: swara
Swara:sorry wrong number.

She immediately cut the call.
Sanskar stare at the phone and cut it.
Sanskar(wipe his tears): she don’t even want to talk to me.
He sadly signed and went to his room.
Swara also went to washroom and cried for sometimes and when she felt light she came out.
Daffy was staring her.

Swara: what??
But daffy was still looking at her without blinking his eyes.
Swara:I was not crying.
She told him and lie on bed.

Kavita’s house:
Kavita got message and when she checked it was of sahil. She saw it and was shocked. It was
“Within ten mins come to temple otherwise I will come to your house”.
She know if sahil said then he will surely do. So after telling sujata (her mother) she went to temple.

Temple:
Sahil is already waiting for her.she angrily went to him.
Kavita: why u have called me at this time.
Sahil: kavita I can’t wait plzz tell me if you feel something for me.
Kavita(looking down): no

Sahil: u are standing in temple so don’t lie and tell this by looking in my eyes.
Kavita: then what u will do after knowing it I m going to marry Sanskar.
Sahil:kavita we will talk to sanskar plzz don’t do this.

Kavita (teary eyes): if he will not understand then it will hurt more.
Sahil: okay once we will talk to sanskar if he will not support us i myself will back off.
Kavita (hug him): I love you
Sahil(smiles): love u too. Tomorrow we with talk to Sanskar. Let’s go now.
Kavita: hmm.
They went to their respective houses feeling happy.

Next morning:
Rajesh’s house:
Kavita and sahil came to talk to Sanskar. Rajesh went out and only Sanskar was there.
Sanskar: kavita sahil u here in the early morning.
Sahil: yes we want to talk to you.

Sanskar: come and sit.
Trio sit in the hall. Kavita is nervous to talk so sahil started
Sahil: sanskar I want to ask u one simple question. Do u love kavita???
Sanskar: why are u asking this??
Sahil: plzx tell honestly whether u r marrying her out of love.
Sanskar: seriously I don’t love her now but thought we will adjust after marriage and I m marrying her as baba said.
Kavhil felt happy.

Sahil:it means u will not feel bad if kavita will break this relation.
Sanskar(confused): plzz tell clearly what u want to say.
Sahil: actually I love kavita
Sanskar: and kavita???
Kavita: I also love sahil I m sorry sanskar.
Sanskar: why are u saying sorry in fact its nice u told me earlier only.
Kavita: u are not angry?
Sanskar: not at all i m happy for you both and when we don’t love each other there is no use to marry.

Kavita: thanks sanskar but what about my parents and baba.
Sanskar:i will tell to Baba and he will talk to your parents.
Kavita: hope so they also agree for our relation.
Sahil: don’t worry they will i think we should leave now.
Kavita: bye Sanskar once again thanks.
Sanskar: its okay.
Sanskar went to his room.

Sanskar’ s room:
Sanskar is feeling very light now. The adorable smile never leave his lips. The only thought running in his mind is that now he can get back swara.
Sanskar (monologue): I m happy Swara now without any hesitation I will confess my love but will she trust me I had badly broken her heart. Okay she will accept me but daffy?Don’t worry I had hurt them now I will only pacify them. Let me call her will see whether she will receive or not.
He tried calling her but it was out of range.
Later he went to rajesh’s room.

Rajesh’s room:
Sanskar came inside and sit near him.
Sanskar: baba I want to talk something important.
Rajesh: say
Sanskar: actually kavita don’t want to marry me.
Rajesh(shocked): why??

Sanskar: sahil and kavita love each other so I think its not right if I marry her.
Rajesh: hmm then what about you.
Sanskar: I m okay with it as I don’t love kavita.
Rajesh: then I will talk to her parents.

Sanskar: baba plz make them understand that they should accept sahil and kavita. U know only Sahil is nice man.
Rajesh: u don’t worry I will talk.
Sanskar:thank you so much.

Next day:
Rajesh was feeling bad for sanskar.He thought that sanskar is not showing his sadness but he don’t know that Sanskar is dancing inside thinking about swara.Rajesh called shekar.
Shekar:hello baba
Rajesh: how are u shomi and shona?
Shekar: all are good here.
Rajesh: I want to tell that sanskar and kavita are not Willing to get married.
Shekar:why.
Rajesh told everything to him.

Shekar: baba If u don’t have any problem then I want to say something.
Rajesh: yes say
Shekar: actually I was thinking that sanskar will be good for shona. As he is intelligent and dedicated towards his work and now I want to take rest so sanskar and shona will handle the company.

Rajesh: Even I had called for same thing I m also thinking sanskar is perfect for swara as angel is little childish so sanskar is mature enough to handle her.
Shekhar:okay then u talk to sanskar that if he have any problem.
Rajesh:u don’t worry about Sanskar he will agree to me u make swara ready.

Shekhar: okay I will tell swara and call you back.
Rajesh:I will be waiting.
Shekhar cut the call and he discussed with shomi and even shomi like sanskar so she agreed.

Later, shekhar and shomi went to swara’s room. She is sitting with Daffy.
Shomi: swara actually we want to talk to you (uff all want to talk I don’t know how many times I repeated this line)
Swara: hmm
Shekhar: I had choosed one boy for you he is really nice.

Swara:but why to marry now??
Shekhar: swara now u will join the company and I want that u should be supported by someone. So that u both can handle the business together.plzz
Swara remembered when sanskar said that he don’t love her and she should move on.
Swara (teary eyes): okay I will marry with him.
Shomi; that’s like my shona.

Shekhar and shomi went from there.
Swara: daffy I will forget him now completely. What he think I can’t live without him(sniffs).

To be continued….

Precap: Sanskar in Kolkata.

Enough of emotional drama now story will come back to funny track.
Now let’s see how sanskar will pacify swara and bear her tantrums.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    67 Comments

    1. AnuAnn on August 18, 2017 2:10 pm

      interesting… next part soon

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon

    2. Parul on August 18, 2017 3:10 pm

      Awesome epi dr i m also jumping on my bed yay

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:42 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. reethu on August 18, 2017 3:26 pm

      awesome dear.give so many tantrums to sanskar and by my side too
      bye
      take care

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:43 pm

        thank you dear

    4. phoniex on August 18, 2017 3:39 pm

      nice he should get his punishment

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:45 pm

        Thank you dear

    5. Sus on August 18, 2017 3:40 pm

      ue kya tha yaar
      woww so sweet parents i mean they haven’t thought about poor and rich. They just how the family or boy is

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:45 pm

        Thank you dear

    6. Stg on August 18, 2017 4:25 pm

      superrrr Duperrr awesome ?????? pls post next part soooon….

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:47 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon

    7. vins on August 18, 2017 4:27 pm

      Nice episode

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:48 pm

        Thank you dear

    8. Simi on August 18, 2017 4:40 pm

      Awesome dear.. Finally everything is going to be fine.. Swara should irritate sanskar

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:49 pm

        Thank you dear

    9. anu on August 18, 2017 4:45 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:50 pm

        Thank you dear

    10. Neptune on August 18, 2017 4:56 pm

      yeyyyyyyy.. marsuuuu finally the sad track is getting over…

      am really excited with the precap…
      one request dear please show some swasan intense emotional moments too..
      like how they cannot live without each other….

      post soon dear.. will be waiting for the next part eagerly…

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:52 pm

        Thank you nepuuu will give emotional scenes and I will post soon

    11. Kumu on August 18, 2017 5:20 pm

      Amazing..tc..

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:53 pm

        Thank you dear

    12. SHAN on August 18, 2017 5:22 pm

      Wow awesome!!! I want u to post this story soon!! Pls!!

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:54 pm

        Thank you di will post soon

    13. independent on August 18, 2017 5:37 pm

      Awww what a play destiny is playing waiting for next dear

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:56 pm

        Thank you di will post soon

    14. swasan on August 18, 2017 5:38 pm

      Superb
      And swara and Daffy should ignore him and give him a slient treatment ?????

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:58 pm

        Thank you dear

    15. guna_ammu on August 18, 2017 6:08 pm

      Wow finally swasan back to their nokjhok mode

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:59 pm

        thank you dear

    16. Tamil on August 18, 2017 6:24 pm

      Amazing dear …….excited for next part ….

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:01 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon

    17. Febi on August 18, 2017 6:54 pm

      Excellent and awesome dear

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:12 pm

        Thank you dear

    18. Scooby on August 18, 2017 6:59 pm

      Awwwwww now me jumping?? happy dancing heart??
      Greatest shock for swara is waiting ahead… eager to knw hw sanskar will pacify swara and daffy?
      Loved it marsuuuu??

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    19. Rachna on August 18, 2017 7:45 pm

      Awsm Dr…. Update soon next part

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:28 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon

    20. vyshu10 on August 18, 2017 7:59 pm

      awesome…swasan r gonna get married??

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:30 pm

        Thank you dear

    21. Tani on August 18, 2017 8:11 pm

      Outstanding

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:31 pm

        thank you dear

    22. mica on August 18, 2017 8:42 pm

      waaaa.. waaa waaaa… happy happy happy.. huh! sanskaarrr!! wait and watch !!

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:32 pm

        Thank you dear

    23. Soujanya on August 18, 2017 8:47 pm

      Awesome….??

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:33 pm

        Thank you dear

    24. Prashasti7 on August 18, 2017 9:39 pm

      yayyyyyyy finally I can’t wait to proceed story

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:35 pm

        Thank you dear

    25. yamee on August 18, 2017 9:44 pm

      Awesome….and very excited for next part post soon.

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:37 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon

    26. sammykapoor on August 18, 2017 9:54 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:38 pm

        Thank you dear

    27. Pramudi on August 18, 2017 11:45 pm

      Awesome.. Bt swara should irritate sanskaar & should show tantrums for sometime. After that if you can give an intense heart to heart talk between swasan. ?? it’s a request dear.
      Waiting for the next part.

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:39 pm

        Thank you dear will give their intense talks and post soon

    28. Milestone on August 19, 2017 12:05 pm

      Nice….

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:41 pm

        Thanks dear

    29. Chaiti on August 19, 2017 6:15 pm

      Awesome now let’s see how sanskar pacifies his kiddo and daffy

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 1:43 pm

        Thank you dear

    30. Veena on August 20, 2017 9:15 am

      Amazing,waiting how sanskar will pacify swaffy

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thank you dear

    31. NDSG on August 20, 2017 10:51 pm

      Aww I’m soo late like this Sanskaar ????????? itna time kon lagata h?????

      Thanks to Kavita I’m happy she realised her love for Sahil.
      Now it’s time for my shona to show some nakhree not easily Shona. He hurt u too much.

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thank you depuu dear and ofcouse swaffy will show nakhre.

    32. rini on August 21, 2017 10:09 am

      superb shot

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thank you dear

    33. gayathri.visu on August 21, 2017 8:15 pm

      Enough of emotional drama…..lol Marsuu!
      Interesting yaar….as u said no more emotional drama dear!! Looking forward…

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 2:04 pm

        Thank you gayuuu dear

    34. Shifa96 on August 22, 2017 7:17 pm

      Awesome

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