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Home»Fan Fiction»Just one chance! Kanchi OS
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Just one chance! Kanchi OS

Moonlight25By Moonlight25August 16, 201737 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hello lovely people! Thank you so much for commenting in my previous OS. Previous one was a happy one but this one will be sad. Enjoy  reading!
Sanchi’s POV

I was returning from my Isha’s birthday party, it was too late now. Darkness had surrounded the entire place and there was no one to be seen around, not even any vehicle. I could see the road only because of the street lights. And I was feeling very cold as I was wearing a cream saree with high heels, I was literally shivering. I was alone, all my friends had left. As I was walking down the street I noticed a few boys sitting on the footpath, and through their actions I could very well understand that they were drunk. I was tensed seeing them, I tried to avoid their glance and quickly pass through that patch. But unfortunately they saw me, they were three of them and I was alone, no one to save me. I tried walking away but they started passing their stupid comments and I ignored them. They were following me.

“Hey beautiful! Spend a night with us. You are so hot.” Said one of them.
I didn’t pay heed as I didn’t want to create any mess but then they took advantage of it. One of them held my right hand. I said “Leave my hand” trying to free my hand. I started crying and screamed “Help, please help me!
He pulled me towards himself and tried to get intimate but I managed to push him and luckily my hand was freed. I started running but again he held my hand and pulled my hair. I screamed in pain. He tried to kiss me but to my surprise someone not from their gang pulled him back and punched him! I was so relieved. That boy punched each of them, banged them on the car. Yes he had come in a car, I was quite impressed by him. He was tall, handsome and any girl would go flat on him. And I was one of them. He had worn a black coat over a light blue coloured shirt. Omg!! He is so hot! I had fallen for him. I was just engrossed in my thoughts that I forgot I was crying sometime before. He beat him hard and the three of them ran away. He came towards me and I thanked him. “Can’t you take care of yourself? Why do you walk on these streets at night time?” he replied. I was just standing shivering looking down in embarrassment. He noticed me shivering and offered me his coat, I denied saying “Its ok” but he.. He himself made me wear the coat. I shivered at his touch. But at the same time I thought how rude he was! He shouted at me!

He held my hand and took me towards the car, again his touch.. ahh.. He made me sit inside the car and went to the driving seat. He tried to start the car but it did not! “What a perfect timing!” He remarked. He got out of the car and tried to do something so that the car starts but unfortunately it didn’t work out! Actually fortunately for me, because I could now spend time with him. He tried calling the mechanic but there was no network, even I checked my phone and there was no network either. I stepped out of the car and we started thinking what could be done, we could not manage to get any help from anyone because the street was isolated. We started walking ahead just hoping to get help. But suddenly it started raining, i enjoyed dancing in rain since childhood and therefore I started dancing in rain like a small kid leaving all the worries aside. He gave an impossible look to me. I still smiled and continued. After a few minutes I saw him and he was looking at me smilingly. Omg!! He smiled! That smile was a ,million dollar one! We just kept looking at each other and shared an eye lock. I walked towards him but I slipped due to my heels. I closed my eyes in fear and when I opened I found myself in his arms. He was staring at me and I was also doing the same thing. We were drenched in rain and were in the same position for a while. I sneezed, uhhh.. which ruined the moment.

Actually every time I start sneezing after getting wet in the rain! We realised our positions and we stood back properly. It was really an awkward moment! We again started walking but now towards our car sorry his car! Look at myself I have started showing rights on his property! Silly me! He started running but I couldn’t so he stopped and walked with me. He moved his hands in his hair and water droplets fell on me. Finally we reached and we sat inside the car, our only shelter! All this while we had not even spoken a word. So I started a conversation, “Hey, I’m Sanchi Mishra!” “I’m Kabir  kapoor ” he replied with a dull look! He looks so hot even in that!You can sleep if you want to! We will have to wait here till morning, no other option!” He said bluntly. I smiled at his concern. Note that we were both sitting on the back seat now as it is more comfortable. He was looking out of the window and I was looking at him continuously, he looked at me and quickly I turned the other side. Sometime later I went off to sleep.

I opened my eyes and what I saw was really amazing! It was morning and I found myself sleeping in his lap. I didn’t even realise when this happened? But as we say, whatever happens is for good. I felt so comfortable in his laps. He was also sleeping leaning on the window. He slowly opened his eyes and I closed mine to avoid his glance. After few minutes I slowly opened my eyes and found him staring at me rather adoring me with a smile and his hand which was about to touch my cheek. I quickly got up and sat straight and he too took his hand back. “I’ll check if I get any mechanic or any lift from someone. You also come out.” I nodded. But before that I wanted to return him his coat but he had already stepped out. I took the jacket in my hand and kissed it. I really felt warm in his jacket. He knocked the window and I realised that he was waiting for me outside. I quickly got out of the car and we again started walking. Luckily a car was passing by and he waved his hand in front of it. The man stopped the car. He asked for a lift and the man agreed. We thanked him and sat in the car. The man was in 50’s and seemed to be quite good. He started chatting with us and asked about us. He really thought that we were married and when we got down from the car on the main road he said “May God bless you both and keep you both always happy together.” I let out a soft laugh and kabir was about to say something when I held his hand. I thanked that man and he went away.

I freed his hand. He managed to get a rickshaw and made me sit in it. I waved him and thanked him again. He just smiled and said “Bye.. Take care” and I left.
Why did the night get over I thought! Few days passed by and everyday each moment I used to think about him. His looks, his care towards me. I wanted to meet him once again and say that I love him!!

One day,
As I was walking, returning back from my college I saw him! I was blessed to see him again! I rushed towards him, he also saw me and with a smile came towards me but… a truck was coming towards him which hit him! In a second he laid down in a pool of blood! I ran towards him and started crying. I took his head in my lap and tried waking him up but he closed his eyes and stopped breathing! I cried loudly “Kabir!!” Why didn’t I get a chance? I just wanted to say him that I loved him so much!
                        !!!!!!THE END!!!!!!
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    37 Comments

    1. Ashnita on August 16, 2017 4:14 pm

      So heart touching os last few minutes u made me cry

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 4:54 pm

        Thank you..sorry for making you cry

    2. QVZRQE3M on August 16, 2017 4:31 pm

      It’s just ….. no words “one chance” absolutely true. Really awesome dear loved it a lot.

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 4:54 pm

        Thanks a lot

    3. Tisha on August 16, 2017 4:50 pm

      It is Nice one but i ve à request please don’ write sad OS of kaanchi…. We even don’ know whether We will get kaanchi pair in serial or not… and even in the fiction when i found them sepreated it really makes me sad and hurt… ?

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:18 pm

        Oh I am so sorry…from now on I won’t write any sad OS…thanks a lot

      • Nutts on August 16, 2017 5:18 pm

        Same here

    4. Anee on August 16, 2017 5:07 pm

      Kabirrr! no yaar please don’t do that.Can you write Second part in which kabir come back and it was just her assumptions actual not happened like that.

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:21 pm

        I am so sorry…but some stories do have sad ending.

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:23 pm

        Don’t worry my next OS will have a happy ending

      • Anee on August 17, 2017 9:18 pm

        It’s ok so sorry if my comment hurt you but i can’t see kabir and saanchi’s pain. But happy that you have another happy ending OS Please update soon.

    5. Divya on August 16, 2017 5:07 pm

      so heart touching really u made me cry but it was awesome

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:23 pm

        Sorry for making you cry..thanks

    6. RuCh23 on August 16, 2017 5:36 pm

      Even though it was sad the whole story was simply amazing ??? really loved it keep it up?

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:48 pm

        Thank you so much RuCh23?

    7. Neha7873 on August 16, 2017 5:37 pm

      Loved it Moon light !

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:46 pm

        Thank you Neha!

    8. riya on August 16, 2017 5:58 pm

      dear u literally made us cry with this os……..so, to make us happy u hv to write an os on kanchi, their post-married life & their children………haha…………just kidding………u r osm……….eagerly waiting for ur nxt one…………..

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 8:37 pm

        Thank you so much..sorry for making you cry..but I promise next OS will be a happy one

    9. hema69 on August 16, 2017 6:06 pm

      ts sad story
      but the love between them is sooooo amazing
      its fab
      at the end u made us cry
      but finally its gud
      but next time we wait for happy ending

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 8:38 pm

        Thank you..sorry for making you cry ..next time it will be a happy ending

    10. anu on August 16, 2017 6:43 pm

      Bhut sad hae akho me pani agae.but story is so nice

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 8:39 pm

        Sorry for making you cry..thank you

    11. alia on August 16, 2017 7:14 pm

      It’s amazing dear . But I can’t see kabir in pain

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 8:39 pm

        Thanks

    12. Abhilasha on August 16, 2017 7:31 pm

      The story was so nice……… it made me cry….. O god…….. But really it was superb b…… Love it so much!!!
      Perfect!!

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank you so much Abhilasha

    13. Richa1496 on August 16, 2017 10:08 pm

      It was truly amazing…. Though it was a sad ending….. But the way you portrayed sanchi’s each felling…. Was fabulous…… I liked it…. Eagerly wating for next one…..?…. And there is a request pls in next one don’t separate our beloved kanchi…..and don’t worry today’s os was also mindblowing….

    14. Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 12:21 am

      Thank you so much Richa…i will post next one soon and kanchi won’t be separated…thats my promise

    15. Swetatitli on August 17, 2017 6:51 am

      Awesome story yaar ???

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 1:58 pm

        Thanks

    16. AnahitaAnnie on August 17, 2017 10:50 am

      The story was really emotional and beautifully written. Some stories have sad endings and u portrayed it in an awesome way.. I also loved ur previous OS. It feels amazing to have a great writer like u on kaanchi.. Loved it!!!

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 1:59 pm

        Aww thank you so much Annie…you made my day..??

    17. sundari on August 17, 2017 2:28 pm

      really nice os and feeling sad at the end
      it was an emotional os
      sorry for last os that i think it was writtern by trishna…but it was so nice moonlight

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 2:49 pm

        Thank you so much Sundari…you don’t have to be sorry.Thanks a lot

    18. Janhavi wadbudhe on August 17, 2017 4:28 pm

      Its really nice

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 8:29 pm

        Thanks

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