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Home»Fan Fiction»I love you… kanchi OS
Fan Fiction Savitri Devi

I love you… kanchi OS

Moonlight25By Moonlight25August 16, 201739 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hello lovely people!
Happy Independence Day!
Kabir was scolded by Kusum  for letting Sanchi  eat icecream and dance in rain…Sanchi was silently smiling seeing Kabir’s puppy face…kabir was silently observing his princess acts.

Kabir’s pov….
Sanchi u r smiling na…smile smile…see u r going to pay for all these.he let out a smirk

Kusum notices this….

Ku – aree Kabir   i am scolding u but u….i didn’t think that my son will be shameless this much….

Kab– mom…woo

Ku – no nothing is left to speak…go take her to room…doctor is on the way…..

Kabir makes faces and takes Sanchi  to their room….

In kanchi  room…

Kabir made her lay on the bed carefully…he stares her naughtily…Sanchi guesses something….

San– kabir..nooo…dont do that plzzz….

But before she could complete…Kabir goes and closes the door…kabir jumps on the bed and starts to tickle her….sanchi was laughing like hell…kabir was enjoying this…he was not going to stop….

Sw – hahaaaaa ka…biii.rrr plzzzz….stop…….plz….i….cant….kk….aabb….iirr plzzzzzz…..

Kab– no bcz of u mom scold me….u need to suffer for making me get scolded….

San – haahaaaaa..ok..ka..bii..rr…sryyyy…plzzzz…..stop…..

Kabir – ok then u have to do what i say…. u agree…..

San – haahaaaa….ok….i…i….agreee…..

Kabir  leaves her….Sanchi immediately gets up and sits properly…she was laughing now also…while laughing kabir also sits beside her…Sanchi  rests her head in Kabir’s shoulder….

San – Kabir ….i m disturbing u na….( became sad ) i m sry Kabir ….bcz of me only mom scold u….

Kabir cups her face….

Kab– Sanchi dekho now again ur mood swing starts….

Sanchi starts to cry….

Kabir  – ohh my crying princess…this all are usual in pregnency…now dont worry…waise sanchi u agree with my condition na…

Sanchi  blushes…kabir looks into her eyes….she closes her eyes….kabir smiles and leans closer to her he was about to kiss her….but before that they hear a knock in the door….Kabir  irritadedly went & opens the door…there doctor rabia was standing….*-)

Kab – oh doc…come in….

Dr.rabia nods and goes to sanchi and sits beside her….she checks her….

Rab – mr.kapoor  what is this u know na she is pregnent then how can u let her dance in rain….

Again doc also starts to scold him but this time Sanchi  was feeling bad for Kabir ….

Rab – acha thik hai…Sanchi  now how u feeling….

San – perfectly fine my kabir is with me na….

Rab – thats better…Kabir  take care of her…and here is the medicens…give her on time….i m leaving….

Kabir– yeah doc…come i ll help u….

Saying so he takes his bag and they leave from there Sanchi was feeling bad…

In the corridor….

Rab – Kabir i can understand u did all this bcz of her wish…but u have to understand she is already weak…do complete her wishes but do which dont spoil her health….ok anyways congrats again mr.kapoor for ur baby…

Kabir– thanks doc….

Then rabia leaves from there…kabir leaves to his room…he entered the room and closes the door….he goes to her…and notices that she was sobbing….he worridely cups her face…

Kab– Sanchi what happened again…again u crying….

San – Kabir bcz of me everyone is scolding u…i m sorry….i m sry ….

Saying so she starts to cry loudly….kabir hugs her tightly….

Kab– teary eyed..sanchi if u cried again na…then i ll go frm here…i ll leave to US…

San- looks up at him…she wipes her tears….

San – no i wont cry again….ok tum jao i need to sleep….

Kab– oiii aise kaise…u agreed for my condition…now u have to cmplet my wish….( said naughtily )

San – Kabir…..no….

Move backwards in the sitting position….kabir kneels  down down in the bed he moves forward while Sanchi  moving backwards….she hits the headboards….Kabir came close to her and locks her way…

Kabir  – now where will u go mrs.kapoor….

San– kabir have some shame…now our baby is also with us….

Kab– ohhh baby….

Saying so he keep his head on her lap….and turns his head towards her tummy….

Kabir – my baby…. u hearing na see baby…ur mamma is not allowing me to do romance with her….

He suddenly hears a loud laughter….

Kab– baby are u laughing…

Sanchi  hits his head….
San– kabir  are u mad…now its 2 months only how can our baby able to hear u….

Kab – oh yes then how can our baby sense our romance….

Swara was now shut her mouth she knew  what will be her hubby’s next intension…she is correct….Kabir pulls her towards him….he captures her lips it was a sweet one….they continue their love making….after an hour both came downstairs…Veer and kusum are sitting in the dining table to have lunch….

Veer– i think doc left an hour before….but where u both till now….

Kabir– in room only….

Veer – oh this much time alone in room…ohoooo…

San – veer ….

Kusum– acha thik hai beta…sanchi now how u feeling….

San– better ma…

Kusum – thik hai come have ur lunch….

Kanchi   sits on their restpective chairs and are  having their lunch….suddenly Sanchi  stops  eating…

Kabir – kya hua Sanchi ….

Kusum– what happen beta…didn’t  u like the  food….

San – maa nahi…nahi…i m feeling like eating paneer…

Kusum smiles – awwww…mera baccha wait for sometime i ll make it for u….

Saying so Kusum was about to getup but….

San – maa wo…i want to eat wo wali…that Kabir used to make for me in US….

All smile…Kabir  getsup  but swara again held his wrist…..

San – i m bothering u na….

Kabir  cups her face….

Kabir – anything for u my love wait i ll make it in 15 minutes…

Then Kabir  went to kitchen and made Sanchi ’s paneer….he came to Sanchi & gave it  to her…veer & Sanchi  fight for the paneer like kids…Kabir  admires his princess….

At night…
Kanchi  room….

Sanchi was reading a magazine while Kabir  was working on his laptop…

San( shouts ) – kabbiir…

Kabir’s s laptop  fell on the floor….he rushes to Sanchi…

Kabir( concerned ) – Sanchi hua…tum thik ho na….

San – kabir i wanna see comedy thriller movie….

Kabir – in this time…Sanchi  if u see it now…then u will get scared….plz we ll see it in morning ok…now sleep….

San – no i wanna see it now….

Kabir without any option goes to tv and plays the movie…”KANCHANA 2″…first Sanchi  was laughing by seeing the comedy in the movie….then when a ghost enters she starts to scream….kabir  offs  the tv….

Kabir – Sanchi  i said na…see now u got  scared…

San – kabir…

Kabir – not a word sleep now….

He was about to go but Sanchi  held his wrist…

San – Kabir  i wanna sleep in ur lap….

He  smiles and makes  her sleep in his lap…he sleeps in the halflying position itself….

IN MORNING

Kabir wakesup first and sees his cute wife sleeping in his lap…he getsup without disturbing her and places her head in pillow….

He goes downstairs after getting freshnup…

 – beta where is swara…

San – maa she is sleeping…

Kusum – ok beta listen tonight is a party at our home….for enjoying our new comers news…so get ready….

Kabir  – ok maa…..

Then at night whole kapoor mansion is fully decorated for the party….all guests are arrived….all are waiting for kanchi  there comes our heavenly couple…both are dresses in sky blue colour dress…they are  looking stunning….all are enjoying the party…they asked kanchi to dance both agree …the song starts….

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan Ek pal vich sau baar karaan Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon Ye tu kabhi soch na sake(x2)

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana h

kahaan
Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein Ki chehre se teri na hatein Neendon mein meri bas tere Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon Ye tu kabhi soch na sake Tere liye duniya chhod di hai Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Song finishes all gave aplouse to them….then both came to senses….all enjoys the party….
7 months passes like this kanchi  enjoying their life happily with sanchi’s mood swing….one day they went for shopping…Sanchi  purchashing something in a shop Kabir  goes out and talking in a call…suddenly someone patted Sanchi’s shoulder she  turns and gets tensed….

San– judge mam…aap yahan…

Ju – haan what happen…n how are u….where is ur husband…i think u r now happy with ur second marriage right…!!!

San – mam wo….

Ju – ok where is ur husband….

Kabir – mam i m here….

Kabir enters frm outside….

Kabir – mam i m her husband…

Ju – but u both r divorced na…

San – no mam we didnt seperate….

Then only judge notices Sanchi’s baby bump…

Ju – aree what is this mr.kabir  u only said na…u cant bcm a father than what is this….

Kabir– mam….vo….

Ju – ok ok i can understand u lied to me right ….!!!

Kanchi bcm embaressed

Ju – ok now u both r together na i m happy……

She leaves frm there kanchi also leave….
Then suddenly Kabir gets a call…he needed  to go to US for important work …kusum tells him to leave alone bcz its Sanchi’s last month…but Kabir was not ready to leave alone…he insited them so all agree to send Sanchi  with him…kanchi  leave to US….

After two days it was sunday  kanchi  were  sitting in a couch suddenly Sanchi  feels labour pain….kabir  panics and takes her to hospital…there in USA husband is supposed to be in ot while wife’s delivery…but Kabir  couldn’t tolerate her screaming…he cried more than Sanchi after two hours…Sanchi  gave birth to a baby boy…but again she starts to scream…after 8 minutes she again gave birth to a baby girl….kabir was overwhelmed…he was carrying both his babies in his arms….he hugs them with tears….they named them Ruby  & Rosy ….now their family is completed it was a cute and small family with their babies….screen frezees in happy faces of kanchi with their babies!

****THE END****
That was it! I know it was boring but thanks for reading! I know the names were weird but that’s what came into my mind! Here they didn’t work in Savitri devi college and hospital..they were normal husband and wife..here Sanchi was bubbly type of girl not like in the serial.. Bye..all negative and positive comments are welcomed.??

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    39 Comments

    1. Riya on August 16, 2017 12:34 am

      Thanks a lot dear for posting ur update ??& yaar kabir kitna caring hai…awww..so cute ???loved kanchi moments to the core of my heart ???keep writing dear &…eagerly waiting for ur next update asap ☺☺☺

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:46 pm

        Aww thank you so much…you made my day!

    2. Neera on August 16, 2017 12:53 am

      So cute story

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:46 pm

        Thanks

    3. Premamohan on August 16, 2017 1:21 am

      So cute and awesome is little bit of twist and shock it was great..

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thanks a lot

    4. Ashnita on August 16, 2017 2:26 am

      Seriously this is not boring it’s just amazing superb

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thank you so much

    5. Divya on August 16, 2017 5:25 am

      Not at all boring it was awesome

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thank you

    6. Arpita on August 16, 2017 7:04 am

      Same story I read in swaragini os…….. but the way this is good

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:49 pm

        I don’t know about Swaragini..but maybe it does have the same story anyway thanks for reading

    7. Anee on August 16, 2017 7:11 am

      so cute story.

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thank you !

    8. Trisha139 on August 16, 2017 8:17 am

      Woooooewww jusstt perfect
      Superb ??

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thank you Trisha. I am so glad to receive a comment from the famous writer in Reply updates

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:50 pm

        Telly*

    9. alia on August 16, 2017 8:23 am

      Very cute story

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thanks Alia dear

    10. Neha7873 on August 16, 2017 10:04 am

      It was simply perfect. It has cute blend of nokjhok and love . Maybe I can get some idea from it for my ff. Update soon

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thank you! Yes I will update another soon

    11. hema69 on August 16, 2017 10:21 am

      its gud

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thanks dear

    12. QVZRQE3M on August 16, 2017 2:08 pm

      It is so good really fab loved it a lot.

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 3:25 pm

        Thanks

    13. Abhilasha on August 16, 2017 2:56 pm

      It was a simple sweet adorable story… Loved it… Kanchi were really cute!

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 3:26 pm

        Thanks a lot Abhilasha

    14. sundari on August 16, 2017 3:50 pm

      trishna i have no words to appreciate you..becoz every time you giving super os…so i have no word
      simply awesome and outstanding “queen of os”

    15. Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 4:08 pm

      I am sorry but it’s not Trisha..anyway Thanks!

    16. Swetatitli on August 16, 2017 4:47 pm

      Fantastic episode yaar ❤❤

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 5:18 pm

        Thank you

    17. Nutts on August 16, 2017 6:02 pm

      Superb n perfect

      • Moonlight25 on August 16, 2017 9:25 pm

        Thanks nutts

    18. Vrushti on August 16, 2017 11:45 pm

      Princess?? I was seeming it would be queen.l am really very sorry for my doubts.but the whole os was mindblowing.l loved kabeer caring for Sanchi.the os was really osm.

    19. Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 12:22 am

      Thanks a lot Vrusti

    20. anu on August 17, 2017 1:06 am

      So so so so nice yaar.keep it up yaar???????

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thanks Anu

    21. RuCh23 on August 17, 2017 8:26 am

      Amazing yaar totally loved it ??

      • Moonlight25 on August 17, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thanks a lot RuCh23

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