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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 6
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 6

nupurboseBy nupurboseJuly 28, 201730 Comments4 Mins Read
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Sorry for d late update guys… Soo… Let’s get started…

The episode starts wid… Avni not able to sleep n recalling Neil’s words…

flashback- Neil coming closer n saying I missed u a lot… I lost my heart to u d day I saw u… Ain’t I d one who is made fr u??

And she smiles a bit… n den realize something…n den…

Avni- (to herself)…Dayamm!!What r u thinking Avni… God… I have gotta forget all of it… It was just his prank… He doesn’t mean anything dat he said…. Or does he( and she gets thoughtful….)

Siddhi- Avni, sleep… u will get to see ur prince charming tomorrow ….. dun worry?

Avni throws a pillow at her…n she hugs her…
And finally dey both sleep…

(At Neil’s house)

Neil is seen stealthily entering his house through d window.. trying not to make any sound so as not to wake anyone up…
Suddenly all the lights get turned ON…

Neeraj-(Neil’s dad)- Where were u, Neil???

Neil without even caring tries … avoiding him…n looks d odr way…

Neeraj-Neil, I asked u something…

Neil- I dun think it necessary enuf to ans u… And yes, how does dat even matter to u???

Neil- Behave urself Neil…. m ur dad…

Neil-Ohh.. I see… Whom r u trynna prove dat Mr.Khanna?? Me or urself?Jus coz of ur blo*dy EGO… U… And I blo*dy.. Ughh.. jus
…. Frget it… n walks away

Neeraj- Stop Neil… I say Stop right der..

Neil enters his room and slams d door wid a loud thud…

Neil’s Step mom Neelima enters…

Neeraj- Y is he like dis?? y can’t he bhv well wid me …respct me..??When will he understand whatever happened was not my fault…

Neelima- Neeraj ji… leave it… he z too young to understand… He will understand u someday…
(Neelima..thinking…Until m here… I won’t ever let dt happen…. Neeraj ji…Nothing will be right ever between u both…Neil might be d legal heir of ur property…but I won’t let him enjoy his share…)

Neeraj- I think u’re right… !!

Next morning at Avni’s college……

Miss Malini- Class… R u ready wid ur presentation??

Whole class nods in unison…

Neil- Miss Nakchadi is sooo excited.. she’s least aware about what’s coming her way…

Daksh- Bhai . . … Y u always target her?? Such a sweetheart she is…?
Neil- LOL… R u not in ur senses? Sweet n she?? …. Lame joke… Anyways… Jus sit n watch d fun?…

One by one Everyone show der presentation… Neil n Avni r yet to show…Neil’s presentation was highly appreciated…
now it was Avni’s group’s turn…
Avni comes forward n inserts d CD n starts her presentation…
Whole class bursts out laughing…. Neil laughs harder…
And Avni, Ali n Siddhi turns back…n face d horror of der life…
D presentation showed some cartoon chracters…mimicing Miss Malini..n added to dat a video showing miss Malini singing- Crazy kiya re… Tara ra ra…

Some guy shouts….
Mam… Kisne crazy Kar dia Aapko??

Miss Malini was red wid anger… She was embarrassed as well..

Malini- Avnii.. … What d hell is dis???Is dis d way u respect ur teachers ..U r getting an F grade dis tym… U let me down totally… I need u to report at Principal’s office now!!

Avnii- But mam, I didn’t do dis… trust me…
(She glares at Neil wid anger..but Neil is busy laughing)

Siddhi- Yes mam, she z right…

Ali- Yes mam… u Kno her ..na

Malini- Oh u guys stop… I don’t want ur crappy explanations…Jus do as I say…

Avnii- Ohk mam..

Ali n Siddhi consoles Avni…but to no avail…
Ali sees Neil laughing..n goes n holding his collar says …

Ali- It’s all coz of u…. I can’t see a single tear in Avni’s eyes… n tries to punch him..but Neil holds his fist..

Avni n Siddhi stops Ali..n asks him to accompany her to Principal room…

Precap-Prof Rajat declares about d college picnic..(camping)…In d picnic bus Ali hugs Avniii… Neil gets bit jealous… He is unable to understand y???

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Sooo… Neil n his father shared a strained relation!! Reason??
Will Avni n Neil ever realize d feelings dey posses fr each odr? Will love ever blossom into der lives??Only time will tell….

Keep reading n supporting ppl… Ur response is highly needed to keep me continuing dis… Love u ?

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    30 Comments

    1. Ramzy on July 28, 2017 7:39 am

      Nyc work ya I remember navya sserial on reading this ff all the best

    2. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 9:03 am

      Ramzy…thank u dear ? …

    3. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 9:08 am

      I dun Kno about Navya… but I saw dis concept in Ra-one..?

    4. Mehak on July 28, 2017 9:15 am

      Nice

    5. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 9:40 am

      Thanks Mehak?

    6. guna cotton on July 28, 2017 10:43 am

      Really superb..plz update daily..

    7. Shreya on July 28, 2017 10:50 am

      Loved it…. Plz update soon… Want to see neil jealous

    8. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 1:56 pm

      Ohk Guna cotton… ? thanks fr commentng

    9. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 1:58 pm

      Thank u Shreya… surely I will update asap?

    10. Archisha on July 28, 2017 2:22 pm

      Awesome

    11. Ananya on July 28, 2017 3:59 pm

      Nice..please make neil and his father relation good soon.all papa’s are very nice.I JUST LOVE AVNEIL SO I WILL NOT MISS YOUR ANY PART OF THIS FF

    12. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 4:35 pm

      Thanks Archisha… ???

    13. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 4:37 pm

      Yup Ananya… Everything will be fine at d end!!?

    14. variga on July 28, 2017 4:49 pm

      i have been reading too many ff but the one u right is damn good…..somethin that really connects the youth with today’s time…..good job…KEEP IT UP….just loved it 🙂 :*

    15. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 5:43 pm

      Thanks Variga….Means a lot??

    16. Sweetgirl7 on July 28, 2017 7:18 pm

      Good work dear . And thanks for appreciating my work again

    17. alia on July 28, 2017 8:12 pm

      Nice

    18. Ovb on July 28, 2017 8:23 pm

      Awesome. Update soon.

    19. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 9:36 pm

      Thanks Sweetgirl7… u deserve it dear… u write amazing… keep writing more… I love ur ff..?

    20. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 9:37 pm

      Thanks Alia…n Ovb.. ? Next update will b tomorrow… ?

    21. Kash on July 28, 2017 10:19 pm

      Again an awesome update… luved it..
      ur a grt writer… continue fast.. cnt wait fr d picnic scene ?

    22. nupurbose on July 28, 2017 10:26 pm

      Thanks kash… D next update will be updated tomorrow… ?

    23. variga on July 29, 2017 7:47 pm

      when will the part 7 be updated???? m eagerly waiting for it 🙂 😀

    24. nupurbose on July 29, 2017 11:38 pm

      Dear …. I hv already posted it… I dun Kno y it’s taking dis long… I think by 12 am today .. it will be posted

    25. Ankita Sahoo on July 30, 2017 1:48 pm

      Amazing re..
      I am just loving it..?

    26. Shibani Behera on July 30, 2017 3:28 pm

      Speechless!!!!
      U r a terrific writer?

    27. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:43 pm

      Ankita…. Thanks ?

    28. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 8:42 pm

      Thanks Shibani ?

    29. Suchismita on August 1, 2017 11:49 pm

      Wow
      Nyc.. ….??

    30. nupurbose on August 2, 2017 1:57 am

      Thanks Suchismita..m glad u liked it…?

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