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Home»Fan Fiction»Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Mars Shot 1
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Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Mars Shot 1

MarsBy MarsJuly 26, 201787 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hlo guys!! This is Mars with a new story requested by Samaira_khan. Hey dear I had started it as u wanted I will give it in Sanskar’s favour. Hope so u will like it.
And to all my readers, u all can ask me to write story of your choice if u wish to. I will try to fulfil your expections. So here comes first shot and it will have ten shots like sufferings.
**Fingers crossed**
Let’s begin:

Shattered Soul(swasan ten shots)
Shot 1:
Characters:
Sanskar Maheshwari:26 years old. Hot and handsome to dangerous level(girls beware ### me too but he is Swara’s)
He is running his company Karma industries. He is kind hearted and humble person. Loves swara to the core. She is his everything and he can’t imagine his life without her.Respects his elders.

Swara Bose: 22 years sweet pretty girl. She is innocent and is not that mature to differentiate between right and wrong. She is doing her graduation. She loves her bhai and bhabi alot and they are adarsh and pari. Her mother shomi is her everything.She is in relation with sanskar from 1 years but according to her she don’t love him. She accepted to fake her love bcoz her brother said.

Adarsh and pari Bose:Swara’s bhai and bhabi. They are selfish and cunning. They oftenly use swara for their benefits. Adarsh is owner of Bose company and do business with Sanskar so he is sanskar’s business friend.

Shomi: swara’s mother love her children alot.

Ram and Sujata Maheshwari: sanskar’s parents. They are proud of their son as he had opened his own company and took her to the top.Love him a lot.

Dp and Ap Maheshwari: Sanskar’s bade papa and badi ma. They are little irked from Sanskar as he took his company to top leaving behind their ancestors company “Maheahwari industries “. But the never show him. They take major decision and sanskar agree with them.

Uttara: Daughter of ap and dp. Studies with swara.she is also 22 years old and very sweet and bubly. She love his Bhai sanskar the most. Swara and uttara are friends and she knew about swasan being in relation.

Story starts:
Kolkata:
Maheshwari Industries:
The whole mansion is decorated like a beautiful bride and it can be observed that there is some occasion. A man in his room is getting ready unwillingly. He is our hero sanskar maheshwari.

Sanskar’s POV:
Today is my engagement with my childhood friend kavita but I m not happy bcoz she is just my friend. I can never think any other girl as my wife except my swara. She is my love, my life. How can I live without her when she is my breathe. But I m helpless as bade papa wants me to marry kavita and I don’t love her. Even kavita knew that I love swara and she understands me but she also can’t do anything. I m trying swara’s no. but she is not receiving it. I can never give Swara’s place to anyone.NEVERRR
Sanskar’s POV ends.

Hall:
Then sanskar came down and sujata took him to stage where kavita was sitting. His heart was beating like anything. His eyes are filled with unsheded tears remembering his swara.
He stood beside kavita and give her fake smile. She also smile sadly as she knows he is not happy.
Ap: I think we should start the ceremony.
Kaveri(kavita’s mother): sure
Kaveri give ring to kavita and sujata give to Sanskar. Sanskar’s hands are shivering.
Sujata:sanskar put ring in kavita’s finger.
Sanskar raised his hand but then he reminisced Swara. Her words are ringing in his mind
(Swara :I love you sanskar
Sanskar:I love u so much swara. U r my heart beat.
Swara kisses his cheeks.)
His thoughts broke when ap said
Ap:where u r lost Sanskar do it fast.
Then reality hit sanskar hardly.
He looked at kavita who was looking at him confusedly.
Sanskar’s heart scream No no no never he can never think of leaving swara. He can’t do this engagement. Its only Swara’s right to make him wear ring.
He gained a lot of courage bcoz first time he is going against his elders.
Sanskar: I can’t do this engagement.
All got shocked.
Dp: what are u saying sanskar have you gone mad.
Sanskar: I m sorry bade papa but I love Swara. I can never live happily with kavita.
Ram:but sanskar u should have told earlier.
Sanskar:I was scared to see your reaction.
Dp(sternly): now nothing could be done u have to do this engagement.
Sanskar: no bade papa plz don’t force me.
Dp:then u have two choices either do this engagement or leave the house.
All were shocked again.
Sujata:what are u saying bhaisa?
Dp: my decision is final bcoz of him my reputation is spoiled.
Sanskar (smiles sadly): okay bade papa i will leave this house.
Sujata:sanskar how can u do this?
Sanskar: anything for my swara mom.
Sanskar met sujata ram ap. Sujata is crying. Dp turn his face when sanskar came.then he went to kavita
Sanskar:I m so sorry kavita.
Kavita(smiles): don’t say sorry I m happy u took right decision at last moment.
Sanskar:thanks for understanding.
Sanskar left the house apologizing to all.
To be continued…

Precap: Sanskar: I love u swara and I left my everything for u.
Swara: I don’t love u Sanskar. It was all fake.
Sanskar’s world collapsed.

I know it’s short ,sorry for that. Will give next one long.
Basically it is sanskar’s story. His soul will be shattered after knowing his love’s reality.
So tell me whether u liked it or not.
Today I won’t say that whether I should continue or not bcoz I will definitely continue it as it’s request.
Thank you.

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    87 Comments

    1. NDSG on July 26, 2017 10:25 am

      Mars ?????????? I’m loving this story…. I always love the ff, which shows Sanskar’s unconditional love

      And one more thing I love evil DP✌✌✌?.

      Mera Sanku??????? Shona how could u… Do this I’m ready to die for him and u r saying u don’t love him….. Bad girl…????? now u have to suffer ??? joking I know Sanskaar can’t let u suffer at any condition…

      ???? love h Mars u always brings something new + good

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:57 am

        Aww thank you so much depuu dear and dp evil hi acha lagta hai and love you

    2. Anu Rathore on July 26, 2017 10:28 am

      Awesome….

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:58 am

        Thank you so much dear

    3. Rp on July 26, 2017 10:29 am

      Awesome ??

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:58 am

        Thank you so much dear

    4. Anjali on July 26, 2017 10:30 am

      superb nd interesting pls continue…………

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:59 am

        Thank you so much dear will continue soon

    5. Tani on July 26, 2017 10:38 am

      Go ahead

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:00 am

        Thank you so much dear

    6. Sus on July 26, 2017 11:15 am

      its nyc dear

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you so much dear

    7. Rosey on July 26, 2017 11:37 am

      Omg now wjats this new drama…
      Cheap adarsh Pari manuplate Swara and now my Sanskaar is gonna suffer…
      Please post next sooner…

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:03 am

        Thank you so much dear I will post soon

    8. Samaira_khan on July 26, 2017 11:46 am

      Thanks a lot Mars it was just awsm but it isn’t swara s mistake her Bhai and Bhabhi made her do that but still feeling bad for both love u a lot…… Ur just awsm thanks for an awesome story!!

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:05 am

        Thank you so much dear glad u like it
        No need of thanks its all my pleasure

    9. ankita Gaude on July 26, 2017 12:25 pm

      awsome dear next part soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:06 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    10. Ashwini on July 26, 2017 12:34 pm

      i love the concept but swara sanskar se pyar na kare aisa ho nhi sakta ….plz post next part soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:09 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    11. Kumu on July 26, 2017 12:43 pm

      Loved the first epi..continue soon..
      I’m really happy that u r giving us so many swasan stories..tc..

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:10 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon and even I fell happy to write on swasan

    12. kat on July 26, 2017 12:51 pm

      loved it

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:11 am

        Thank you so much dear

    13. Rockleon on July 26, 2017 1:20 pm

      Awweeeesssssooommmmmeeee
      Mars u r truly amazing and talented!!!

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you so much dear

    14. independent on July 26, 2017 1:26 pm

      Awesome dear u always manage to come with new concepts welldone

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you so much dear

    15. Rachna on July 26, 2017 1:48 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:13 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    16. saki on July 26, 2017 1:49 pm

      awesome dear.very nice concept.post soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:14 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    17. ankita Gaude on July 26, 2017 2:08 pm

      Frankly speaking maine band hi kiya tha telly update par aana…. yaha pehle ek din aayi nahi toh kitni sari story ek sath padni padti thi…. but now…..forget it…..i come here because of you

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:18 am

        Thank you so much dear and that’s so sweet of you

    18. ricky on July 26, 2017 2:10 pm

      Amazing story please continue soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:19 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    19. Kashu on July 26, 2017 3:28 pm

      It is so nice concept yaar.. I m loving it
      I would actually love to see heart broken Sanskar… Totally different concept..
      Please post next part soon..
      Waiting for it…

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:20 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    20. SHAN on July 26, 2017 4:18 pm

      Awesome Loved it!!! Continue soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:20 am

        Thank you so much Shan di will continue soon

    21. seebu_s on July 26, 2017 4:25 pm

      so interesting dear

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:24 am

        Thank you so much dear

    22. anu on July 26, 2017 5:11 pm

      nice continue

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:25 am

        Thank you so much dear will continue soon

    23. S on July 26, 2017 5:29 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 4:26 am

        Thank you so much dear

    24. Simin on July 26, 2017 5:34 pm

      Superb dear
      Awww my baby is the target this time

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:37 am

        Thank you so much dear

    25. Shibil on July 26, 2017 5:49 pm

      Mars …..Awesome story line …..heart breaking precap……

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:38 am

        Thank you so much dear

    26. anu on July 26, 2017 6:08 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:39 am

        Thank you so much dear

    27. Tamil on July 26, 2017 6:15 pm

      Amazing dear…..my poor sanskar…..

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:42 am

        Thank you so much dear

    28. gennie on July 26, 2017 6:22 pm

      suprb

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:43 am

        Thank you so much dear

    29. veena on July 26, 2017 6:35 pm

      one more ff!so interesting…waiting for this one☺

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:45 am

        Thank you so much dear wil post next part soon

    30. Soujanya on July 26, 2017 6:46 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:45 am

        Thank you so much dear

    31. Kanha on July 26, 2017 7:44 pm

      Awesome awesome siso. New story. Wow!!!! How do you manage to write soooo many stories at once, Mars? You are really fantastic. I became a big fan of yours once again??????? Loveeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuu lotzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:47 am

        Thank you so much sisoo loveee u too I can manage as I m smart hihi.

    32. Stg on July 26, 2017 8:26 pm

      awesome ???

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:52 am

        Thank you so much dear

    33. lizza on July 26, 2017 8:33 pm

      very gud dear….continue next part soon

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 5:53 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    34. SNY on July 26, 2017 9:26 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 6:00 am

        Thank you so much dear

    35. AnuAnn on July 26, 2017 11:04 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 6:01 am

        Thank you so much dear

    36. Pramudi on July 26, 2017 11:21 pm

      Interesting dear.

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 6:02 am

        Thank you so much dear

    37. Jenny on July 27, 2017 12:56 am

      Interesting story ????Love u??!!
      SWasanian??

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 6:03 am

        Thank you so much dear

    38. shweta on July 27, 2017 2:35 pm

      interesting n at the same time very amazing story…..all d best yrr

      • Mars on July 27, 2017 3:44 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    39. gayathri.visu on July 27, 2017 6:36 pm

      First time u r writting the Sanskaar’s story….hai na Marssuu?!! Excellent story line!! I always loves ff, which shows Sanskaar’s unconditional love for Swara!! Precap….heart breaking for Sanskaar. Looking forward dear…..

      • Mars on July 28, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank you so much gayuuu dear actually its swasan story only just in this u will see sanskar’s pain.
        Till now I had shown swara’s suffering here u will see sanskar’s.will post next part soon

    40. Adishu on July 28, 2017 12:33 am

      I m very scared… very much… now what will happen….

      • Mars on July 28, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    41. Simi on July 28, 2017 10:05 am

      Cheap AdRi… They manipulated Swara.. ???
      Sanskar ?? he left everything for Swara.. Good start

      • Mars on July 28, 2017 1:38 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    42. pnap on July 28, 2017 9:12 pm

      lovely part

      • Mars on July 29, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you so much dear

    43. vyshu10 on July 29, 2017 2:45 pm

      interesting

      • Mars on July 30, 2017 3:55 am

        Thank you so much dear

    44. mica on July 31, 2017 12:47 pm

      aahhhh my heart shattered already :'(

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